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高考：
应用文中的记叙文写作突破
应用文侧重考查考生表达意义、传递信息、再现生活经历的能力；
重点考查考生写作的实际效果，
兼顾写作的流利性、准确性和得体性。
《高中英语课程标准》对高中学生的英语表达性技能有着明确的要求
(共11条截取其中4条):
以口头或书面形式描述、概括经历和事实；
以口头或书面形式传递信息、论证观点、表达情感;
......
运用语篇衔接手段，提高表达的连贯性;
根据表达意图和受众特点，有意识地选择和运用语言；
根据表达的需要，设计合理的语篇结构;
......
命题解读
思路梳理：要点分析
记叙文是以叙述人物的经历或事情的发展变化的过程为主的一种文体。
在高考写作部分命题中，多以提纲式考查，主要分为以下两类：
1. 写人类：对人物的经历、活动或者性格特点进行叙述；
2. 叙事类：以叙述事情的发生、发展、经过和结果为重点进行叙述。
思路梳理：要点分析
人物叙述
确定人称、时态及叙述顺序
要素全面，谋篇布局
把控文章完整性
塑造人物
一般写他人事迹，人称为第三人称；时态多为一般过去式，具体需要灵活掌握；
确定好写作内容，围绕六要素（when、where、 who、 what、 why、 how）开始谋篇布局
整篇文章要完整，包括开头，主体和结尾，可结合记叙文的结构类型：顺叙、倒叙、夹叙夹议进行叙述，注意结尾个人的感悟总结
结合要求，选择自己较为熟悉的人物展开叙述；
在细节上用细致的动作、生动的语言刻画人物性格；
注意动词使用的连贯性
围绕人物事迹
对你的影响
【2023年全国甲卷】
你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 人物简介及事迹；2. 意义或启示。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
适用地区：适用地区：四川、贵州、广西、西藏（4省市）
试题分析
The Historical Figure in China
体裁： 记叙文（短文投稿）
主题语境： 人与社会
人称： 第三人称
时态： 一般过去时为主，一般现在时为辅
写作要点： 以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇投稿
段落安排 Para.1 开篇点题要写的人物
Para.2：人物生平事迹及影响
Para.3 对自己的启示
tip：一定选择自己所熟悉的人物下笔，以此避免一些细节信息的不准确。
Para. 1：
There were many great famous historical figures in ancient China, but what comes to my mind is my favourite poet named Li Bai in Tang Dynasty.
组织语言
开门见山，引出人物
Para. 2: 人物生平事迹 逻辑清晰，层层递进
Li Bai, regarded as the “Poet Immortal”, was born in 701 AD in Longxi and traveled in Chengdu,Chang’an and other places, writing poems. He was best known for his vivid imagination and romantic imagery in his poetry as well as for his great love for wine. Many of his poems has remained today, having a significant impact on our Chinese culture and society. What I appreciate most are his landscape poems, which are clear and natural in words with comprehensive and far-reaching messages, and conveys his strong love for nature, friends and the people.
后置定语
伴随状语
伴随状语
主语从句
定语从句
Para.3 意义或启示
As is known to all, Li Bai is one of the greatest poets in the Tang Dynasty. Nowadays, his poets has become a classic in the history of Chinese literature and is still widely read and loved today.
The Historical Figure in China
In the long span of the Chinese history, the existence of the outstanding Confucius is like a shining pearl.
Living in the late Spring and Autumn period, Confucius was very knowledgeable when in his twenties. In order to spread his thought, he travelled from one state to another and suffered a lot. But he never gave up and founded the first private school in history. His major sayings were recorded in Lun Yu, which still has a significant influence on Chinese people today.
I sincerely hope that through more understanding f Confucius and his Confucianism, we can make the world filled with more love, justice and peace.
佳作共赏
思路梳理：要点分析
叙事
确定人称、时态及叙述顺序
要素全面，谋篇布局
把控文章完整性
在展开情节上下功夫
凡是“参与者”都从第一人称入手；
报道回顾他人事件，从“旁观者”都是以第三人称入手
确定好写作内容，围绕六要素（when、where、 who、 what、 why、 how）开始谋篇布局
整篇文章要完整，包括开头，主体和结尾，可结合记叙文的结构类型：顺叙、倒叙、插叙进行叙述，注意结尾个人的感悟总结
情节的展开一要考虑事件的开端、发展、高潮和结局，突出精彩的瞬间；
在内容的书写上在仔细推敲句式短语的选择；
尤为注意动词使用的连贯性
常见话题：比赛（演讲、诗歌朗诵、书法、绘画）户外活动（爬山、野营）、慈善义工、展览展出等事件的回顾与报道，日记与游记等。
江苏省海安高级中学2023-2024学年高三下学期开学考试 第一节 (满分 15 分)
假如你是李华，请你给校英文报写一篇报道，分享你和你的家人过了一个有年味的春 节的经历，内容包括：
1. 春节的活动； 2. 年味的意义； 3. 你的感受。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；
2. 请按如下格式写字答题卡的相应位置作答；
3. 参考词汇：年味 the atmosphere of the Spring Festival
试题分析
Enjoy the atmosphere of the Spring Festival
体裁： 记叙文（报道）
主题语境： 人与社会
人称： 第一人称
时态： 一般过去时为主，一般现在时为辅
写作要点： 以自己跟家人度过有年味的春节经历为题写一篇报道
段落安排 Para.1 开篇点题，总述事件
Para.2：春节的活动，年味的意义
Para.3 你的感受
Para. 1：
As the Chinese New Year clock struck, all my family members were immersed in the merry atmosphere of the Spring Festival.
组织语言
开门见山，总述事件
Para. 2: 春节的经历以年味的意义 逻辑清晰，层层递进
We engaged in various activities, such as decorating our home with red lanterns and couplets, cooking delicious dinner, and watching the Spring Festival Gala together. Besides, we paid visits to relatives and friends, giving best wishes to each other. The essence of Chinese Spring Festival lies in its rich cultural traditions and warm family reunions.
动名词并列短语
Para.3 个人感受
I cherished every moment spent with my family and the Spring Festival was a memorable experience that filled me with joy and warmth.
Enjoy the atmosphere of the spring Festival
Last month witnessed an unforgettable experience in which my family and I felt the wonderful atmosphere of the Spring Festival.
As it known to us all, the spring Festival enjoy a high reputation at home and abroad. This year, not only did my family make dumplings but also hang the lantern in front of the door. Immersing in delight and bliss, the whole family members engaged in it. It was a time that the family got together and shared love. What's more, this is the meaning of the atmosphere of the Spring Festival.
Participating in the whole process, I was surrounded by thrill and love. No words are strong enough to convey my excitement. There was no chance that Chinese people no longer celebrate spring Festival.
学生佳作
开篇点题，开门见山
过春节经历描述细腻，耐人寻味，表达流畅自然，句式丰富
最后回扣标题，突显个人情感
Enjoy the atmosphere of the Spring Festival
Last week, I experienced an unforgettable Spring Festival, which is one of the most significant traditional festival in my country.
To celebrate Spring Festival, my family and I purchased food as much as possible, preparing for the family dinner which is time to share happiness of reunion. Not only did I have dumplings and put up the couplets, but also gave my house cleaning and stayed up late on New Year's Eve. It aimed at expressing our best wishes for the new year as well as feeling the charm of Spring Festival. Besides, I also received lucky money from my family!
It is no exaggeration to utter that the meaningful Spring Festival is like an everlasting flower , blooming in the river of my memories.
学生佳作
开篇直接叙事点题
个人情感表达，突显春节的意义
过春节经历描述准确，表达流畅简洁
重庆拔尖强基联盟2023-2024学年高三下学期2月联合考试英语
第四部分 写作 (共两节，满分40分)
第一节 应用文写作(满分 15分)
学校英语报刊组织同学们分享自己在假期中参与的社会实践活动，请你以此为主题写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括：
1. 介绍实践内容；2. 描述体验感受。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
试题分析
体裁： 记叙文（投稿）
主题语境： 人与社会
人称： 第一人称
时态： 一般过去时为主，一般现在时为辅
写作要点： 以分享自己假期参与的社会实践活动为题写一篇短文投稿
段落安排 Para.1 开篇点题，总述事件
Para.2：实践活动的具体内容
Para.3 你的感受
Para. 1：
This winter break, I had the privilege of participating in a unique social practice initiative that aimed to bridge the generation gap in our community.
组织语言
开门见山，总述事件
Para. 2: 实践活动的具体内容 逻辑清晰，层层递进
Alongside local seniors, we organized inter-generational activities, fostering meaningful connections between the elderly and younger volunteers. From sharing life stories to collaborating on creative projects, the experience highlighted the wealth of wisdom that comes with age and the importance of inheriting and promoting the traditional Chinese virtue of caring for the elderly.
Para.3 个人感受
From my perspective, the project not only enriched the lives of the elderly but also emphasized the power of unity in creating a more vibrant and harmonious community.
The Beauty of Labour
Last vacation witnessed a meaningful activity which I volunteered to get involved in. Here are some details about it.
With spring approaching, the activity was organized by a teenager team-concerning about planting trees. Hardly had we arrived at the field when we were assigned into different groups to complete different tasks. Exhausted but joyful, we dug holes, placed the trees in them and filled the with soil. With time going by, the sky was dim. However, our enthusiasm never faded away. Despite the injures and fatigue we experienced, a wave of joy swept through my heart when I beheld the trees with the fruits of our labour.
There is the saying that goes "Labour is the most glorious thing. Through this experience, not only did I grasp the beauty of the labour, but also hardened my determination to devote into volunteering activities.
学生佳作
开篇点题，开门见山
种树过程描述细腻，耐人寻味，句式多样准确
最后回扣标题，突显个人情感
A Social activity I Participated
When it comes to the social activity I participated , the first that comes to my mind is about caring the old.
With the age rising , more and more old people feel lonely and bored. Last year, I volunteered to join in the activity organized by my community to provide company and love to the old. We requested to help them clean houses, wash clothes and talk to them to reduce the feeling of loneliness. What's more, through the activity, we taught them how to use the smartphone, which could foster communication and connection. Participating in the activity not only enrich my holiday life, but also broaden my horizons to the old.
All in all, the social activity is absolutely impressive on me, witnessing my growth and making life more colorful and enjoyable.
学生佳作2
开篇直接叙事点题
个人情感表达，突显活动深远意义
叙述了关爱老人的活动经历，表达流畅简介，词汇可以优化
潍坊市高三一模英语试题
第三部分写作（共两节，满分40分）
第一节（满分15分）
你校将举办以“讲故事，话家风”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请以“My family tradition” 为题写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括：
1. 一件家风小事；
2. 对你的影响。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
试题分析
My family tradition
It's an honor to talk about my family tradition.
体裁： 记叙文（讲演稿）
主题语境： 人与自我
人称： 第一人称
时态： 一般过去时为主，一般现在时为辅
写作要点： 以分享自己家风故事为题，写一篇演讲稿参赛
段落安排 Para.1 开篇点题，总述故事
Para.2：突显家风的具体一个故事
Para.3 对你的影响
My family tradition
It's an honor to talk about my family tradition. I can clearly remember the bright Saturday afternoon 10 years ago, when I accidentally knocked over a neighbor's flowerpot. Out of fear, I took flight immediately, rushed home and poured the whole thing to my parents. They praised me for my honesty and encouraged me to take responsibility for my fault bravely. Much touched, I went to apologize to my neighbor sincerely.
Surprisingly, instead of blaming me, he gave me a thumbs-up for my honesty, which brought me a great sense of relief and joy. It was at that moment that I realized the power of the family tradition. Actually, honesty and responsibility have been running in our family.
My family tradition has shaped me into a better version of myself and will lead me further. Thanks for your listening.
佳作共赏
My family tradition
It's an honor to talk about my family tradition. When it comes to my family tradition, it occurs to my mind is kindness.
Nothing can be compared with kindness, which plays a vital significance in my family. What impressed me most is a tiny matter. When I was six, my mother went shopping with me. Holding a delicious cake, I even smelt how charming the cake is. However, seeing a poor beggar was sitting besides the road, my mother put the cake in the broken bowl without hesitation.
Small as the behavior is, it left a seed which is called kindness . Making me know that kindness is expression. As the saying puts it, it can be seen that no act of kindness, no matter how small , is ever wasted. That's all about my family tradition. Thanks for your listening.
学生佳作
开篇点题，开门见山
描述事情经过，生动细腻句式多样准确
最后回扣标题，强调家风善良对自己的影响
My family tradition
It's an honor to talk about my family tradition. It is those family traditions that have lit up my life, guiding me forward. What reminds me most is a small thing about helping.
That was a cool fall when I was about to go home from school with my mother. Suddenly , our attention was fixed on the scene that an old woman dragged toughly towards her car, carrying a basket stuffed with fruit. Without words and hesitation, she rushed forward and applied her hands. I was led to by my mother 's action and the basket was passed to my hand.
Ultimately, not only did I receive an orange, but also witnessed a balmy smile.The sweet impression casted into my heart. Family tradition - helping others in need is anchored in mind, nurturing me to a kind person. My speech is over. Thanks for your listening !
学生佳作2
开篇直接叙事点题
个人情感表达，突显家风对其深远的影响
叙述了助人为乐的过程，表达流畅简洁流畅
青岛市2024年高三年级第一次适应性检测
第一节（满分15分）
假定你是李华，你校今年开设了蔬菜栽培、传统工艺（handcraft）等实践课程。请你给外国好友John写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．你的参与情况；
2．你的体会。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
试题分析
Dear John,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
体裁： 记叙文（邮件）
主题语境： 人与自我
人称： 第一人称
时态： 一般过去时为主，一般现在时为辅
写作要点： 将你在校参与实践课程的情况与体会通过邮件跟好友John交流
段落安排 Para.1 开篇点题，总述故事
Para.2：实践课程具体参与情况
Para.3 你的体会
Dear John,
To enhance students' labor skills and cultivate imagination, our school launched assorted practical courses, involving handcraft, vegetable farming and so on.
What I engaged in actively was planting diverse vegetables and cooperate with partners , which extremely gave me a new insight. During the period of our practical class, I was lead to our overwhelming garden, choosing appropriate seeds, digging several holes with the assistance of my industrious partners. The work went on smoothly and we deliberately put them into proper positions and watered them patiently. Having accomplished the activity, we stretched and yawned lazily, appreciating our labor result. It was no exaggeration to utter that this course exceedingly prioritized both my physical and mental well-being.
The practical course added luster and color to my ordinary school lives and I would be engraved in my heart permanently.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
佳作共赏
Dear John,
Much to my delight, our school developed practical courses consist of vegetable planting and handcraft this year. I'm writing to express my sense towards it.
So interested am I that I attended almost each lecture. Among them, it's vegetable planting that most attracts me. During growing vegetables, I am required to dig a hole, place seeds into it and cover it with soil, which can please me. I engaged in handcraft activity as well.
Not only did I attain several skills, but also realized the adversity during practical activities. Through participating in the practical courses, I learned to be patient and persistent.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
学生佳作
开篇点题，开门见山
描述参与课程的具体情况，表达准确简洁
最后回扣标题，个人收获体会
小结：
记叙类文体写作建议：
1.应用文部分记叙类文体的设题主要突出结合学生生活阅历，如校园生活，旅游，交通，社交等话题，平时要注意积累相关词汇和短语。
2.记叙文的设题也可能与传统文化息息相关，这部分主要时体现“讲好中国故事，传播好中国声音” 所以与之相关的话题内容，也是备考的重点之一。

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