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情绪 情绪形容词 情绪名词 开心 joyful delighted happy joy delight happiness
激动 excited thrilled excitement thrill
难过 sorrowful sad grieved sorrow sadness grief
惊讶 amazed astonished surprised amazement astonishment surprise
紧张 anxious nervous tense anxiety nervousness tension
害怕 frightened scared panicked fright/horror scare panic
尴尬 embarrassed awkward ashamed embarrassment shame
后悔 guilty regretful guilt regret
愤怒 angry annoyed anger annoyance rage
感激 grateful thankful appreciative gratitude thankfulness appreciation
失望 disappointed frustrated depressed disappointment frustration depression
情绪类必背词汇
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读后续写之情绪描写技巧
Ways of Describing Emotions
By the end of the class, you will be able to:
Grasp(掌握) some words and phrases about emotions
Describe one’s feeling specifically(具体地) and vividly(生动地) by technique “show, don’t tell”
Apply 3 key sentence patterns to further polish(润色) your writing
Lead-in：
Enjoy a video clip to describe the girl’s feelings.
confident
determined
delighted
excited
surprised
shocked
sad
regretful
How did the girl’s feelings change
She was confident.
She was excited.
She was shocked.
She was sad.
……
Too simple !
Too general !
Rely too much on telling !!!
过度依赖陈述
1
1
2
3
内层
直抒胸臆
表层
眉目传情
外层
寄情于景
direct description
voice
facial expression
body language
Show, don’t tell !
environment
How can we make our emotional expressions in writing more specific
Face + Body + Voice + Environment
Environment: Give it a setting(背景)
老师让我们挨个上去做英文自我介绍
The teacher asked us to give an English self-introduction one by one.
Voice: Make some noise.
“什么？”他发出(let out)一声紧张/惊恐的尖叫(scream)。
“What !” He let out a scream of nervousness/fear/panic.
Face: Draw his face
害怕让他毛发直竖(make one’s hair stand on end)
The fear made his hair stand on end.
他惊恐地瞪大了(wide)双眼。
He opened his eyes wide in panic
他脸色变得苍白(pale)。
His face turned pale.
Body: Make your body move
他感到双腿发软
He felt his legs turned to jelly(果冻).
他全身止不住的颤抖
He shook/trembled uncontrollably.
他的掌心冒汗
His palms were sweating.
Face
Body
Voice
Environment
Show the picture !
make his hair stand on end
/open his eyes wide/face turned pale
His legs turned to jelly.
/He trembled uncontrollably.
His palms were sweating.
let out a scream of horror/panic
The teacher asked us to give an English self-introduction one by one.
hands trembled
wave his fist
heart is broken
burst with laughter
tears blurred(模糊) one’s eyes
palms sweat
eyebrows drew together(眉头紧皱)
face burned red
a smile shone like a diamond
delighted
sorrowful
scared
annoyed
Practice 1：Match the proper emotions with different expressions.
He was so nervous that his palms were sweating.
他紧张得手心冒汗。
Sentence pattern 1: so...that...句型
“sb. was so + 情绪adj. + that 从句"
某人如此....以至于....
倒装: So+情绪adj.+was+sb.+that 从句
So nervous was he that his palms were sweating.
let out a scream of panic
他太害怕了以至于发出了惊恐的尖叫声。
He was so panicked that he let out a scream of horror.
trembled uncontrollably
他太害怕了以至于止不住地颤抖。
He was so frightened that he trembled uncontrollably.
Practice 2：Translate sentences with “so ...that...” structure.
= So panicked was he that he let out....
= So frightened was he that he trembled...
他发出了惊恐的尖叫声。
He let out a scream of panic.
感到紧张和害怕的，他发出了惊恐的尖叫声。
____________________, he let out a scream of panic.
感到紧张和害怕, 他发出了惊恐的尖叫声, 不受控制地颤抖着.
Nervous and scared, he let out a scream of panic, ______________________. (Voice+Body)
前加情绪形容词
后加非谓语
Nervous and scared
trembling uncontrollably
形容词、分词作状语：
“情绪adj①+情绪adj②, sb did sth, doing sth"
(感到)...和...，某人做某事1，并做某事2
Sentence pattern 2: 形容词作状语
Practice 3: Complete sentences with proper adjectives and verbs.
1. ______________________(感到坚定和被鼓舞的), David raised his head, ____________________________(感激地看着我). (22全国1卷)
2.____________________(感到激动和快乐), David waved at me immediately after crossing the finish line, _____________________ ______________. (表达他的开心和感激) (22全国1卷)
3. _________________(既震惊又骄傲), their mother said in a sweet whisper, ___________________(紧紧地抱住了他们). (21全国1卷)
4. 感到放松和宽慰的, 我坚持请求要他的电话号码, 向他承诺
我一回到Vienna就给他打电话付钱。（24全国1卷）
___________________, I __________ requesting his phone number, _________ to call him for the payment as soon as I returned to Vienna.
Determined and inspired
Thrilled and delighted
looking at me gratefully/with gratitude.
conveying his joy
hugging them tightly
Relaxed and relieved
insisted on
promising
and gratitude
Astonished and proud
Scared and nervous, he let out a scream of terror, with his eyes wide open.
with his heart beating wildly. (心砰砰直跳)
with his eyebrows knotting together. (眉头紧锁)
......
Sentence pattern 3: with的复合结构
with的复合结构：
with+宾语+doing/done/to do/adj./adv./介短
某人做了某事，伴随着... sb. did sth, with...
Face:
make his hair stand on end
face turned pale.
Body:
his legs turned to jelly
he trembled uncontrollably
1) 感到紧张和恐惧，他不受控制的颤抖着，汗毛直立。(Body+Face)
Scared and nervous, he trembled uncontrollably with his hair standing on end.
Practice 4：Translate sentences with “with composite structure”.
2) 他的脸变得惨白，全身止不住的颤抖，感觉双腿发软。(Face+Body)
With his face turning pale, he trembled uncontrollably and felt his legs turning to jelly.
with face lighting up with delight 脸上洋溢着快乐,...
with eyes glittering with joy 眼里闪着喜悦,...
with eyes filled with regretful tears 眼里充满后悔的泪水...
with eyes widening in disbelief/surprise/fear,
眼睛因难以置信/惊讶/恐惧而睁大,...
with heart beating/pounding wildly 心砰砰直跳,...
with arms/legs/muscles aching and knees shaking
胳膊/腿/肌肉酸痛,膝盖发抖,...
Word bank
“What ” He let out a scream of panic when we were asked give an English self-introduction one by one. With his face turning pale,
he was so scared that he trembled uncontrollably and felt his legs turning to jelly. Anxious and helpless, I dropped my head on purpose, avoiding any eye contact with the teacher.
Yes √
No
He felt nervous /scared/panicked...
Face
Body
Voice
Environment
Skill 1
Skill 2
Skill 3
Structure
so+情绪adj. + was sb. +that...
情绪adj①+情绪adj②, sb did sth, doing sth.
sb. did sth + with的复合结构
Meaning
某人如此...以至于...
(感到.)...和..., 某人做某事1, 并做某事2
某人做了某事，伴随着...
Summary: How to show feelings vividly and specifically
FACE
BODY
VOICE
ENVIRONMENT
Use what we have learned today to polish the underlined sentences according to the given sentence patterns.
Application 1
The race began. The girl was excited and confident. She ran to the pole, and wanted to jump over it. The girl thought she had made it. Then she danced with joy and her face was full of joy. When told that she didn’t succeed, the girl was shocked and she couldn't say a word. Though she was sad, she wanted to try again next year. On the way back to the classroom, her face turned red with shame.
Skill 2: Excited and confident, the girl ran to the pole, wanting to jump over it.
Skill 3: Then she danced with joy, with her face shining with delight.
Skill 1: So shocked was the girl that she couldn't say/utter a word.
Scene Description: Continue the following text with no less than 50 words based on the given expressions and the skills we have learnt today.
FACE
BODY
VOICE
ENVIRONMENT
Application 2
Face
cheek--light up 亮起来
eyes--twinkle/shine with joy
mouth--grin from ear to ear 咧嘴笑
Voice
let out a cry of joy
Body
jump to one’s feet 跳起来clap one’s hands
When the teacher announced that we would have an 8-day National Day holiday(enviroment), she/her _______________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________
_______________________________________________
So surprised and thrilled was she that she jumped to her feet the instant the words left the teacher's mouth, with her face lighting up and her eyes twinkling with pure joy. Overwhelmed with delight and unable to contain her excitement, she let out a cry of joy, clapping her hands enthusiastically while a wide grin spread from ear to ear. The previously quiet classroom was instantly filled with cheers and plans for the long vacation.
Face
Body
Voice
Environment
When the teacher announced that we would have an 8-day National Day holiday(enviroment), she/her _______________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________
_______________________________________________
her face instantly lit up with her eyes twinkling with excitement (face). So amazed and thrilled was she that she jumped to her feet, clapping her hands enthusiastically (body). “Yeah!!!” She let out a cry of joy that echoed(回响) through the classroom (voice). Delighted and expectant, she could hardly wait to list her plans, imagining all the pleasure she would have during the long holiday.
Children’day is coming. Tom’s parents said that they would take him to the zoo .Hearing this, Tom jumped up with excitement. His face lit up and his eyes shone.
The next morning, they set out early. Tom was delighted all the way with the birds singing songs for him. When they got to the zoo, Tom saw many toys on sales(出售)at the gate of the zoo. He wanted to buy a car toy. His father wouldn’t buy it for him. Tom cried and rolled(翻滚)on the ground.
Paragraph1 _________________________（他父亲又气又恼，怒视着他，想揍他一顿。)_______________________________________看到这一切，他母亲虽然不情愿，但也没办法，只好给他买了一个。) ___________________________他非常开心，一直在动物园里玩这辆车。)There were many lovely animals and people in the zoo. He was attracted by the lions. Suddenly, he couldn’t see his parents.
Paragraph2 ________________(他吓得脸都变白了。)_____________(沮丧和无助,他泪如泉涌,不知道下一步该怎么办);Fortunately, with the help of a kind person, he found his parents. After a day’s play, _____________________.（汤姆太累了，很快就睡着了。）
Children’day is coming. Tom’s parents said that they would take him to the zoo .Hearing this, Tom jumped up with excitement.His face lit up and his eyes shone.
The next morning, they set out early. Tom was delighted all the way with the birds singing songs for him. When they got to the zoo, Tom saw many toys on sales(出售)at the gate of the zoo. He wanted to buy a car toy. His father wouldn’t buy it for him. Tom cried and rolled(翻滚)on the ground. Angry and annoyed, his father glared at him,wanting to beat him.Seeing this, unwilling though his mother was, she had nothing to do but bought one for him. He was so delighted that he kept playing the car in the zoo.
There were many lovely animals and people in the zoo. He was attracted by the lions. Suddenly, he couldn't see his parents.He was so scared that his face turned pale. Depressed and helpless, he was in floods of tears, wondering what to do next; Fortunately, with the help of a kind person, he found his parents. After a day’s play, Tom was so tired that he fell asleep quickly.
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