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Instructions for continuation writing
Watch the video and answer the question
What are the advantages of living in
a city or the countryside
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The eight-year-old Carol lived with her father David, Mother May and elder brother Rob. The little family happily lived in a beautiful village surrounded with beautiful nature. The village was at the foot of a mountain, with beautiful views of the snowy mountain. The family survived on growing seasonal plants and trees. Their life was totally surrounded by nature and beauty.
While they lived a very happy life, Carol did not love the beautiful atmosphere of the village. She really wanted to move into the city and enjoy the city life. She wanted to shop, move around the city, watch movies, and eat in fantastic restaurants and cafes, etc.
Grandmother understood the desire of Carol, but still wanted to convince her that the peaceful village life was better than the city life.
She told Carol, “Baby, you cannot have access to fresh fruits and vegetables from plants as you have at your home. You cannot breathe fresh air. You cannot play with animals. You can hardly find any trees. You will not find peace as you see here! Do you still want to go to the city ”
Without hearing the concerns, Carol asked her grandmother to grant the wish. Grandmother granted her wish, but with a condition. Carol was told that she would only have 6 hours to spend in the city. Later, she would return to the village. Carol agreed.
注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Carol then found herself in the city with her friends.________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________
Carol’s brother Rob was calling her for lunch and Carol woke up._____________________________________
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Who
When
Where
Main elements
Read the passage quickly and fill in the following blanks(5W and 1H)
Carol, David, May, Rob, her late grandmother
during the early noon
in the village
What
Why
How
Carol had a strange dream. She saw her grandmother as a fairy, who granted her a wish.
Carol really wanted to move into the city and enjoy the city life
Her grandmother granted her wish that she would only have 6 hours to spend in the city.
Main elements
Plot a dream—peaceful village life
Opening The little family happily lived in a beautiful village surrounded with beautiful nature. Carol was eager to move in to the city.
Build-up Carol had a dream, where she saw her late grandmother. Her deceased grandmother as a fairy granted her a wish to enjoy the city life.
Climax Carol then found herself in the city with her friends._____________ _______________________________________________________________
Ending Carol’s brother Rob was calling her for lunch and Carol woke up.
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Read the paragraphs carefully to learn about the plot.
Para.1: Carol then found herself in the city with her friends.
What did Carol want to do
She really wanted to move into the city and enjoy the city life. She wanted to shop, watch movies, and eat in fantastic restaurants and cafes, etc.
（此处体现Carol对大城市的渴望。）
Para.2: Carol’s brother Rob was calling her for lunch and Carol woke up.
1. Was the city life as beautiful as she wished
She realized that her life in the village with her family was far more wonderful than the city life.
（续写故事要体现积极的人生观和价值观, 所以要珍惜眼前的美好。）
Make predictions
2. What did Carol do after she woke up
She shared her dream with her family while enjoying the fresh fruits and vegetables, and they laughed together.
（依据所给材料, Carol对比她现有的生活, 发现了乡村生活的安宁, 她和家人在乡村更快乐。）
3. How did she live her life then
Carol also developed love for plants, animals and beautiful nature.
（结尾要体现出Carol对大自然的美好的热爱。）
Carol then found herself in the city with her friends.______________________________
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Carol’s brother Rob was calling her for lunch and Carol woke up. ___________________
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Groupwork:writing and sharing
Writing Sammple
Carol then found herself in the city with her friends. Carol and her friends went to watch movies. After that they ate delicious food in a restaurant and shopped in a huge mall. Carol was happy that she had the chance to experience the life in the city. Yet at the same time, she understood that everything told by her grandmother was true in the city. There was no peace and no silence; the city life was fast and busy. The air quality was not satisfying.
Carol’s brother Rob was calling her for lunch and Carol woke up. She recalled what happened just now in her dream and realized that her life in the village with her family was far more wonderful than the city life. Carol understood that she was having a more joyful life. She shared her dream with her family while enjoying the fresh fruits and vegetables, and they laughed together. Carol also developed love for plants, animals and beautiful nature.
1. Understand the general meaning of the article, grasp the central theme and the development of the plot.
2.Note the logical relationship between the continuation prompts and sentences, and reasonably predict the development of the article.
3.Accurately grasp the tense.
4.Grasp the style and characteristics of the article and choose the words and expressions reasonably.
5.Reasonable allocation of writing time and content, pay attention to writing and neatness of the writing.
Summary:Tips for Continuation Writing
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