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四川省眉山中学校
读后续写微技能训练
--虚拟语气在续写中的应用
Lead-in
All the students in our school like the month October most. Can you guess the
reason
Because in October we not only have a seven-day National Day,
but also hold school sports meeting.
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If I had been more careful when passing the baton, I wouldn't have dropped it.
3.如果我交接棒时更小心一点，我就不会掉棒了。(baton n.接力棒)
1.要是没有同学们的鼓励和支持，我无法赢得这场比赛。
Without surport and encouragemengt from my classmates, I
couldn’t have won this race.
2.如果Cathy 没有指导我们跳长绳，我们不可能获得比赛第二名。
If Cathy hadn’t coached us for rope skipping competition, we
couldn’t have gained the second prize.
Compare & find the difference
If I had three days to see, I would look long into my dear friends’ face.
In fact, she can’t.
If you fail the dictation,
you’ll have to redo it till you pass.
unreality
fact
TIME Predicate verb in if-clauses Predicate verb
in the main clauses
present
past
future
did (were)
had done
would/could/should/might +do
would/could/should/might+
have done
1.did(were)
2. should+ do
3. were to do
would/could/should/might +do
The subjunctive mood in if-clauses
Review
这对双胞胎转动着眼球，心想：要是他们再小心一些，事情就不会变得如此不可控。
The twins turned their eyes up and thought that if they ________________________ (be) more careful, things _____________________ ( not be) so out of control.
if they had been
would not haven been
Application
1. Without Yuan Longping, all the people in China ___________ themselves well nowadays.
A. can’t feed
B. doesn’t feed
C. couldn’t feed
2. But for the leadership of Xi Jinping, the new strategy The Belt and Road ___________ in 2015.
A. wouldn’t have been initiated
B. won’t be initiated
C. wouldn’t be initiated
without ≈ but for
特殊的虚拟语气:Without/but for/otherwise/or类虚拟语气，没有从句部分，主句用法参考if.
as if /though + Clause
现在：
过去：
did
had done
1.童年的一切涌入我的脑海，彷佛一切刚刚发生似的。
Everything in my childhood crowded upon my mind as if/though _____________________________
2.我的心脏狂跳，好像要跳出来了。
My heart is banging against my ribs, as if ___________________________________.
they had just happened.
it were about to pop out of my chest
You say:“ If only….”
3. Look at the terrible situation I am in! If only I ___ your advice.
A. follow B. had followed
C. would follow D. have followed
现在:
过去:
未来:
did
could/would… + do
had done
“要是我听了妈妈的话该多好，”小女孩低声对自己说。
“If only I ________________________my mother’s advice” the little girl whispered to herself.
I had listened to
Continuation Writing :Lost in the Forest
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away.
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snow capped mountaintop. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom!” she cried. “Help!”
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Jane rose at the break of day,hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling(滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes.She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream andhope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard ahelicopter. Is that for me Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later,another helicopterflew overhead. Jane took off heryellow blouse,thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again._______________________________________________________It was daybreak when Jane woke up.______________________________________________________Continuation Writing :Lost in the Forestcontent who
when
where
what
Why
Jane was lost
they quarreled
Jane, Tom
one weekend in July
in the forest
main idea
On weekend in July, Jane was lost in the forest because she had quarreled with Tom.
Read for background
Read for the plots
confused，tired
hungry/thirsty joyable stronger
Read for the conflict and solution
conflict
solution
Jane was lost in the forest and she didn’t find the way out.
Her husband reported the accident to the police and the helicopter finally found her.
Read for theme
1. The experience taught her a lesson: never act alone and tolerance, mutual understanding can resolve conflicts.
2.It was bravery and calmness that can conquer whatever difficulties came in the way.
Analyze the beginning sentences.
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
Jane had to lay down for rest
Jane continued to search for assistance
What did Jane feel in the darkness
regret and scared
1. “If I _________________(not quarrel) with Tom and gone into the forest, I ___________(not be) trapped in the awful place now!” Jane was filled with regret and anxiety and gradually fell asleep with tears in her eyes.
2. If only I ________________ (bring) my cellphone with me, I could have made a call to Tom.
3. Weak as she was, she struggled to her feet but found her leg sore as if_______________________ (break).
读后续写微技能训练
hadn’t quarreled
wouldn’t be
had brought
it had been broken
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
Jane had to lay down for rest
Jane continued to search for assistance
What did Jane feel in the darkness
regret and scared
Write the first paragrah
You are supposed to use subjunctive mood in your fist paragraph
Evaluating (1 Chart)
Completeness Logic Consistency
Paragraph Passage Order of events Common sense Character traits Foreshadowing Total


Basic level:★ Secondary level:★★ Superior level:★★★
One possible version
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest. Exhausted and scared, Jane lay down near a stone， missing her family at a distance.All the fantastic memory crowded in and she couldn’t help crying, “Hadn’t I quarreled with Tom, walked away and climbed to the high place, I wouldn’t be trapped in this awful place, confronted with the danger of dying.” She regretted with endless anxiety, and then became asleep with shining tears in her eyes.
It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Weak as she was, she struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance. To her great joy, she found a big open area and a helicopter was flying overhead again and again. Eager and excited, she flagged her yellow blouse and spared no effort to yell so as to attract others’ attention. Fortunately, she was eventually noticed and brought into the helicopter. There, she saw her husband, a man staring at her, wearing an expression of relief. As tightly as possible, she hugged him and was too thrilled to say anything. Besides, they agreed never to quarrel again, determining to live the life to the fullest.
Assignment
1. Finish paragraph 2.
2. Polish your story.

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