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How to write a good composition
Learning aims
After this class, we will be able to:
1.master some strategies of writing a good composition
2 learn to use these strategies properly in our writing.
第一步:仔细审题。（审体裁，审人称，审时态）
第二步:理清要点。
第三步:译写单句。
第四步:连句成篇。
第五步:检查润色。
第六步:定稿誊写。
写作六步法
技巧一
技巧二
技巧三
技巧四
精准选词
句式丰富
增加细节
巧用衔接
假定你是李华,你所在的学校将举办一个中国传统节日—腊八节的讲座。请你给朋友Lee写封电子邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:
1.讲座时间、地点;
2.简要介绍腊八节的相关知识。
注意:
1.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
实战训练
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第一步:仔细审题。
（体裁，人称，时态）
一般现在时和一般将来时
1.审体裁：
2.审人称：
3.审时态：
应运文（邀请信）
第一、第二人称
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第二步:理清要点
1.讲座的名称、时间和地点（自己定）
2.腊八节的相关知识点
3.邀请你的朋友参加活动的好处
相关知识点：农历腊月初八是腊八节。在这天,人们有喝腊八粥的习俗。除了腊八粥之外,在中国北方还有腌腊八蒜的风俗。腊八最重要的意义在于它标志着人们开始为春节做准备。
好处：不仅可以拓展你的眼界，而且对你更好地了解中国文化有好处。
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第三步:译写单句
1.我将邀请你参加我们学校将举办一个中国传统节日—-腊八节的讲座
2.讲座将于下周周五下午两点到五点在学校礼堂举办
3.农历腊月初八是腊八节,在那天，人们喝腊八粥.
6.可以拓展你的眼界, 让你更好地了解中国文化.
5.腊八的意义在于它标志着人们开始为春节做准备.
4.在中国北方还有腌腊八蒜的风俗.
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第三步:译写单句
1.我将邀请你参加我们学校将举办一个中国传统节日—-腊八节的讲座
I will invite you to take part in the lecture about the Laba Festival
2.讲座将于下周周五下午两点到五点在学校礼堂举办
The lecture will be held from 2 to 5 on Friday afternoon in the school lecture hall
3.农历腊月初八是腊八节,在那天，人们喝腊八粥.
The Laba Festival is on the eighth day of the twelfth month in the lunar calendar. On that day, people eat Laba porridge.
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第三步:译写单句
6.可以拓展你的眼界, 让你更好地了解中国文化.
It can open your eyes and let you know more about traditional Chinese culture.
5.腊八的意义在于它标志着人们开始为春节做准备.
It means people will prepare for the Spring Festival
4.在中国北方还有腌腊八蒜的风俗.
People make Laba garlic in North China.
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第四步:连句成篇。
1+2合起来构成第一段。
3+4+5+6合起来构成第二段。
第三段套用邀请信的段尾常用句式结构We would be looking forward to your coming with great pleasure.注意使用合适的连词。
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第五步:检查润色
1.注意两个动词的表达：“喝”与“腌制”
“喝”与“腌制”的表达为eat和make.
2.加入自我介绍
我是李华，你在中国的一位朋友（使用同位语加双重所有格）
I’m LiHua, a friend of yours in China
同位语加双重所有格
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第五步:检查润色
3.把第一句和第二句用定语从句/非谓语动词做后置定语加同位语组合成一句
I will invite you to take part in the lecture about the Laba Festival，a Chinese traditional festival, which will be held/to be held from 2 to 5 on Friday afternoon in the school lecture hall
同位语
定语从句/非谓语动词做后置定语
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第五步:检查润色
4.在那天，人们喝腊八粥可以用it作形式主语
It is a custom for people to eat Laba porridge on that day.
it作形式主语
5.使用there be结构改写第四句
There are also traditions of making Laba garlic in North China.
there be结构
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第五步:检查润色
6.使用一个表语从句The meaning of… is that…和mark the beginning of修改第五句为
The most important meaning of Laba is that it marks the beginning of preparing for the Spring Festival.
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第五步:检查润色
7.使用not only…but also或者as well as和高级短语结构broaden one’s horizon和be of+名词的结构修改第六句为
It can broaden your horizon as well as let you know more about traditional Chinese culture.或者Not only can it broaden your horizon but also is of great benefit to knowing traditional Chinese culture
be of+名词
第六步:定稿誊写
Dear Lee,
I’m LiHua, a friend of yours in China .What is well-known is that you have keen interest in traditional Chinese culture. So I am writing to invite you to take part in the lecture about the Laba Festival，a Chinese traditional festival to be held from 2 to 5 on Friday afternoon in the school lecture hall.
第六步:定稿誊写
During the lecture, our teacher will introduce some information about the Laba Festival. First and foremost, The Laba Festival is on the eighth day of the twelfth month in the lunar calendar. It is a custom for people to eat Laba porridge on that day. Besides, there are also traditions of making Laba garlic in North China. Last but not least, the meaning of Laba is that it marks the beginning of preparing for the Spring Festival.
第六步:定稿誊写
By this lecture, Not only can it broaden your horizon but also is of great benefit to knowing traditional Chinese culture
I would be looking forward to your coming with great pleasure.
　　 Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

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