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(共25张PPT)
Micro-skill of continuation writing
Inanimate Subjects
Taylor
My father made breakfast with me in the kitchen
1天前
刘亦菲 王俊凯
Nice！
肖战：
羡慕
lily：
My father made breakfast for me in the kitchen.
In the afternoon, my father accompanied me to run in the park .
In the evening, he helped me with my homework at the desk.
moments caption
Lead in
Selena
The sunny kitchen witnessed my father and me making breakfast together.
hometown
1天前
鹿晗 宋雨琦
Give a like to dad
陈立农：
王一博：
The sunny kitchen witnessed my father making breakfast for me.
The park heard the sound of my father encouraging me to run.
The desk told of countless nights when my father accompanied me in my studies.
moments caption
Lead in
1. My father made breakfast for me in the kitchen.
2. My father accompanied me to run in the park.
3. My father helped me with my homework at the desk.
The sunny kitchen witnessed my father and me making breakfast for me.
The park heard the sound of my father encouraging me to run.
The desk told of countless nights when my father accompanied me in my studies.
A
B
Compare the following two groups of sentences.
What is the difference between the subjects in Group A and Group B
My father
My father
My father
The sunny kitchen
The park
The desk
Compare the following two groups of sentences.
Which group do you think is more vivid Why
1. My father made breakfast for me in the kitchen
2. In the afternoon, my father accompanied me to run in the park.
3.In the evening, he helped me with my homework at the desk.
The sunny kitchen witnessed my father and me making breakfast for me
The park heard the sound of my father encouraging me to run.
The desk told of countless nights when my father accompanied me in my studies.
A
B
Analyze inanimate subject sentences
1.The sunny kitchen witnessed my father making breakfast for me.
2.The park heard the sound of my father encouraging me to run .
3.The desk told of countless nights when my father accompanied me in my studies.
谓语
主语
观察下列句子主谓语的特点
lifeless nouns: kitchen park desk
animate verbs:witness-人见证；hear-人听见；tell of-人诉说
Inanimate subject sentences
概念：
结构：
功能：
用无生命的事物（如时间、地点、自然现象、抽象概念等）作主语，而谓语动词为通常用于描述人类行为或情感的动词。简单理解就是把没有生命力的东西，赋予有生命力的动作。这类句子往往带有personifiction(拟人化)的修辞色彩。
无灵主语(kitchen park desk)……+有灵动词(witness hear tell of……)
生动、客观、地道。
Inanimate subject sentences
词汇 释义 词汇 释义
whisper 低语/诉说着 bring 带来了
greet 迎接/映入眼帘 escape 不由自主地发出/遗忘
deny 拒绝了/无缘 emerge/appear 浮现出/显现出
tell/speak of 诉说着/表明 silence 使……沉默/安静
see/witness 见证了 occur to/strike 突然想到/掠过心头
高频有灵动词
His smile told me that I had his full support.
他的微笑告诉我，我拥有他全力的支持。
2. This playground has witnessed our happiest laughter.
这个操场见证过我们最快乐的欢笑。
3. A great idea struck me while I was taking a shower.
我洗澡时，突然想到一个绝妙的主意。
4. His organized notes speak of a careful and diligent student.
他条理清晰的笔记反映出他是一个认真勤奋的学生。
Inanimate subject sentences
佳句赏析
Have a try: Rewrite the sentences with inanimate subjects
I felt very nervous when the final exam came. （提示词：bring）
→ The final exam brought me great nervousness.
例
1. I suddenly got a good idea. （提示词：occur to /strike）
2. I couldn't remember his name. （提示词：escape）
3. Great changes have taken place on the street .（提示词：see/witness）
A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea struck me.
His name escaped me.
This old street has seen great changes.
用场景中所给的事物写无灵主语句，描绘“我的父亲”。
his silver hair
the open diary
his wrinkled hands
the old lamp
the old radio
the posters on the wall
the old camera
his weathered face
the old pen
有灵动词
whisper tell/speak of
greet see/witness
无灵主语
the poster on the wall
the dusty desk
the old lamp
the old radio
his silver hair
the open diary
his weathered face
his wrinkled hands
the old pen
Examples
The old lamp spoke of countless hours of study.
The posters on the wall told a story of young dream.
The old pen whispered stories of long hours spent in study.
3.墙上的海报讲述着一个年轻的梦想(tell)。
1.这是老钢笔低声诉说着经年累月伏案学习的故事(whisper)
2.那盏旧台灯，诉说着无数个学习的夜晚(speak of)
常用公式
无灵主语+有灵动词+
the story/lifetime of …（+后置定语/状语）
that…
Have a try: Father's Story(父亲“物”语）
father’s items
the poster on the wall
the dusty desk
the old lamp
the old radio
his silver hair
the open diary
his weathered face
his wrinkled hands
the old pen
Emotions
看到妈妈饱经风霜的手，我感到一阵伤心。
V1. When I saw my mom’s weathered hands, I felt sad.
情绪描写无灵主语句公式：
(A wave of +) 情绪名词 + swept/came over sb+when sb saw/heard…….
某人感到一阵……/……笼罩/席卷了某人,当某人看到/听到……。
V2. When I saw my mom’s weathered hands, a wave of sadness swept over me.
Inanimate subject sentences
词汇 释义 词汇 释义
joy/delight 高兴 anger 生气
fear/panic/terror/horror 害怕 surprise/shock 惊讶
anxiety/nervousness 焦虑/紧张 gratitude 感谢
guilt 内疚 tiredness 疲惫
sadness/sorrow 悲伤 warmth 温暖
高频情绪名称
Have a try
1. 当她听到这个好消息时，一阵巨大的喜悦涌上心头(swept over)
→ A wave of great joy swept over her when she heard the good news.
2. 看到那只大狗时，一阵恐惧(fear）向我袭来(came over)。
→ A wave of fear came over me when I saw the big dog.
3. 当她找不到妈妈时，一阵恐慌（panic)席卷了她(swept over)。
→ A wave of panic swept over her when she couldn't find her mother.
4. 读完那封信后，一阵深深的悲伤（sadness)笼罩了他(came over)。
→ A wave of deep sadness came over him when he read the letter.
More formulas
1. One’s eyes were full of + 情绪名词
2. One’s eyes＋sparkled with + 积极情绪名词
3. Tears streamed down one’s face/cheeks
One’s heart pounded/ thumped/ raced with + 情绪名词
（excitement/ nervousness/ fear/ terror/ horror）
情绪名词 + choked one’s words. ……使得某人说不出话来。
1.当听到这个悲伤的消息，她的眼里充满了悲伤(one’s eyes were full of + 情绪名词)。
2.当看到书桌上的礼物时，小男孩的眼里闪烁着兴奋(one’s eyes＋sparkled with +情绪名词)
3.她想道歉，但内疚使她哽咽得说不出话来(情绪名词 + choked one’s words)。
4.走上舞台时，她的心因紧张而狂跳（One’s heart pounded/ thumped/ raced with + 情绪名词）
Have a try:Translate the following sentences with inanimate subject.
→When she heard the sad news, her eyes were full of sorrow.
→When he saw the presents on the desk, the little boy's eyes sparkled with excitement.
→She wanted to apologize, but guilt choked her words.
When she walked onto the stage, her heart raced with nervousness.
e.g. When I saw my mother making breakfast at the kitchen door, my eyes sparkled with happiness……
Character: I; mom
Peer-editing
Have a good handwriting.
The animate verbs used were accurate and vivid.
3. Use at least 2 different formulas.
4. Convey feelings in a subtle and natural way
standards
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Yes □ No □
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Yes □ No □
Life's little details witnessed silent parental love
父母无声的爱藏在生活的细微之处

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