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句
式
润
色
——如何对句子进行润色
How to polish sentences
Doraemon
越来越多的人开始骑自行车。
中译英：
中译英：
学沫版
学渣版
伪学霸
学霸版
More and more people begin to ride bikes.
An increasing number of people begin to cycle.
Cycling attracts more and more people.
Cycling is now adding its appeal for many citizens.
越来越多的人开始骑自行车。
学神版
Cycling gains its popularity.
假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter正计划举行中国电影赏析会（Chinese Film Night），希望你推荐一部适合他了解中国发展的电影，并对赏析会提出建议。请你根据以下内容，给他回复邮件。
推荐电影：《厉害了，我的国》 Amazing China
建议：1、应该做好充分准备，买好活动中所需物资
2、安排好举行的地点和时间
3、看完电影应该安排一些学生交流观后感想
注意：1、词数100左右
2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
3、结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数
correcting
假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter正计划举行中国电影赏析会（Chinese Film Night），希望你推荐一部适合他了解中国发展的电影，并对赏析会提出建议。请你根据以下内容，给他回复邮件。
推荐电影：《厉害了，我的国》 Amazing China
建议：1、应该做好充分准备，买好活动中所需物资
2、安排好举行的地点和时间
3、看完电影应该安排一些学生交流观后感想
注意：1、词数100左右
2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
3、结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数
correcting
arrange sb. to do sth.
arrange for sb. to do sth.
be supposed to do sth. 应该做某事
hold-held-held 举行
named
the
you
contents
How to polish sentences in writing
句式不能单一
可以用什么方法让句式丰富？
Contents
01
02
Use formal subject in the sentence
使用形式主语
Use passive voice in the sentence
使用被动语态
03
Use inversion (not only...but also...)
使用not only...but also... 的倒装句式
1、形式主语
It is wise for you to buy goods which
you need in this activity.
（1）用形式主语it更改句式，利用好it is + adj.+for sb. to do sth 结构
牛刀小试
It is ______________ for you to learn English every day.
1.用it作形式主语
a. You should learn English every day.
b. You can walk or ride bikes instead of riding in cars or school buses.
important
wise
It is ________ for you to walk or ride bikes instead of riding in cars or school buses.
1、形式主语
It is wise for you to make students talk with each other...
牛刀小试
_________________________________ to stop the air pollution.
2.使用被动语态
a. We should take measures to stop the air pollution.
Measures should be taken
b. You gave ten roses to the beautiful girl yesterday.
The beautiful girl _________________________ by you yesterday.
was given ten roses
2、被动语态
The best preparations should be made for
this activity.
牛刀小试
__________________________________, she has also done no work.
a. She has been late three times. She has done no work.
b. He can speak English. he can also write a passage in English.
Not only has she been late
Not only can he speak English
____________________________________, ___________________ write a passage in English.
but also he can
3.使用not only... but also
not only放句首连接两个并列成分，遵循前倒后不倒原则
1、形式主语
3、not only…but also…
Not only can it make students learn more knowledge, but also it can make students relaxed.
Summary
句式润色
1. it形式主语
2. 被动语态
3. not only...but also..
Dear Peter,
How nice to hear from you. Knowing that you plan to hold a great activity named Chinese Film Night, I’m more than pleased.
The movie Amazing China is a good choice. It’s great for non-Chinese speakers who are interested in learning the development of china. There is no doubt that to hold such an activity is not an easy thing, so I have some advice for you.
First of all, not only should full preparations be made in advance, but also you are supposed to purchase everything needed in the activity. Secondly, arranging the place and time appropriately can be of great help. What’s more, some students are expected to share their feelings and opinions on it after enjoying the movie. I sincerely hope my suggestions will work.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Homework
谢
谢
聆
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