2026届高考英语二轮复习:读后续写讲评——妈妈的大红裙 课件(共17张PPT)

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2026届高考英语二轮复习:读后续写讲评——妈妈的大红裙 课件(共17张PPT)

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1 The first time we set eyes on "Big Red," father, mother and I were trudging through the freshly fallen snow on Main Street in Huntsville, Ontario. As we passed the Eaton's Department store's window, we stopped as usual to gaze, and do our bit of dreaming.
2 Mother's eyes were glued to the massive flare of red shinning dress. "My goodness," she managed to say in wonder. "Would you just look at that dress!" Then, totally out of character, mother made a spin of a waltz华尔兹on the slippery sidewalk. Beneath the heavy, wooden-buttoned, grey wool coat she had worn every winter for as long as I could remember, mother lost her balance and tumbled. Father quickly caught her. Her cheeks redder than usual, "What a silly dress to be hung up there in the window of Eaton's!" she shook her head in disgust. "Who on earth would want such a dress " As we continued down the street, mother turned back for one more look. "My goodness! You'd think they'd display something a person could use!"
3 Christmas was nearing and the red dress was soon forgotten. Mother, of all people, was not one to wish for, or spend money on, items that were not practical. "There are things we need more than this," she'd always say, or, "There are things we need more than that." Father, on the other hand, liked to indulge whenever the budget allowed. Of course, he'd get a scolding for his occasional splurging摆阔, but it was all done with the best intention.
4 Mom was forever doing chores - washing laundry by hand, tending the pigs, or working in our huge garden - so she always wore mended, cotton-print housedresses and an apron to protect the front.
5 That Christmas I bought Dad a handful of fishing tools. But choosing something for Mother was much harder. Before Christmas, we were driving up Main Street when mother suddenly raised her voice in surprise, "That big red dress is gone!" She pointed excitedly as Dad drove past Eaton’s. “ Who’d be fool enough to buy such a silly dress ” she questioned in disbelief.
1 The first time we set eyes on "Big Red," father, mother and I were trudging through the freshly fallen snow on Main Street in Huntsville, Ontario. As we passed the Eaton's Department store's window, we stopped as usual to gaze, and do our bit of dreaming.
2 Mother's eyes were glued to the massive flare of red shinning dress. "My goodness," she managed to say in wonder. "Would you just look at that dress!" Then, totally out of character, mother made a spin of a waltz华尔兹on the slippery sidewalk. Beneath the heavy, wooden-buttoned, grey wool coat she had worn every winter for as long as I could remember, mother lost her balance and tumbled. Father quickly caught her. Her cheeks redder than usual, "What a silly dress to be hung up there in the window of Eaton's!" she shook her head in disgust. "Who on earth would want such a dress " As we continued down the street, mother turned back for one more look. "My goodness! You'd think they'd display something a person could use!"
3 Christmas was nearing and the red dress was soon forgotten. Mother, of all people, was not one to wish for, or spend money on, items that were not practical. "There are things we need more than this," she'd always say, or, "There are things we need more than that." Father, on the other hand, liked to indulge whenever the budget allowed. Of course, he'd get a scolding for his occasional splurging摆阔, but it was all done with the best intention.
4 Mom was forever doing chores - washing laundry by hand, tending the pigs, or working in our huge garden - so she always wore mended, cotton-print housedresses and an apron to protect the front.
5 That Christmas I bought Dad a handful of fishing tools. But choosing something for Mother was much harder. Before Christmas, we were driving up Main Street when mother suddenly raised her voice in surprise, "That big red dress is gone!" She pointed excitedly as Dad drove past Eaton’s. “ Who’d be fool enough to buy such a silly dress ” she questioned in disbelief.
The first time Mother set eyes on Big Red , she loved it deeply. Since she cared a lot about household duties and always spent money on some practical items, she pretended no interest she did feel. By contrast, Dad preferred to buy as he pleased. Before Christmas, we drove up the department store, only to find Big Red was gone...
1.跋涉
2.百货商店
3.凝视
4.做白日梦
5.眼睛盯着
6.巨大的光芒
7.惊奇地
8.一反常态
9.跳着华尔兹舞步转了个圈
10.湿滑的人行道
11.厌恶地
12.回头再看一眼
1.trudge
2.Department store
3.gaze
4.do our bit of dreaming
5.eyes were glued to
6.massive flare
7.in wonder
8.out of character
9.made a spin of waltz
10.slippery sidewalk
11.in disgust
12.turn back for one more look
1.商品
2.随意
3.因为某事而受到责骂
4.出于好意
5. 做家务
6. 洗衣服
7.补过的印花棉家居服
8.保护前襟的围裙
9.不相信地问道
1.items
2.at will
3.get a scolding for
4.with the best intention
5. do chores
6. wash laundry
7.mended, cotton-print housedresses
8.an apron to protect the front
9.question in disbelief
Design the plot:
Para 1: I quickly stole a glance at Dad. ____________________________
Para 2: With trembling hands she touched the elegant material of Big Red. —
Design the plot:
Para 1: I quickly stole a glance at Dad. ____________________________
Para 2: With trembling hands she touched the elegant material of Big Red. —
逆推法
Q1:How did Mother feel What did Mother do when she got Big Red
Q2: How can you design the ending more appealing and meaningful
Q2:How did mother feel when she saw the dress was gone
Dad bought Big Red for Mother and then presented it to her.
Q1:What was Dad’s reaction and how did Dad explain to mother
从句:主语从句、宾语从句、定语从句(that/which/介词+which/when…)、同位语从句、状语从句
倒装:部分倒装(no sooner…than…, hardly…when…, so…that)、完全倒装
It作形式主语
非谓语:非谓语作状语/后置定语…、With复合结构、独立主格
介词短语: at the sight/sound/thought of、without…
强调句型
无灵主语
句式多样性
I quickly stole a glance at Dad.
His blue eyes were twinkling as he nudged me with his elbow.
Mother craned her neck for another glimpse out the rear window as we rode up the street. “It’s gone...”, she whispered.
I was almost certain that I detected a trace of sorry in her voice.
I would never forget that Christmas morning.
I watched as Mother peeled the tissue paper off a large box.
Dad was sitting in his rocker, a huge grin on his face. “Only a fool wouldn’t give a priceless wife like mine exactly what she wants for Christmas,” he laughed. “Go ahead, open it up.”
Dad winked at me, confirming his secret, and my heart was filled with more love for my father than I thought it could hold!
Mother opened the box only to find a flare of red shimmering dress.
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I quickly stole a glance at Dad.
His blue eyes were twinkling as he nudged me with his elbow.
Mother craned her neck for another glimpse out the rear window as we rode up the street. “It’s gone...”, she whispered.
I was almost certain that I detected a trace of sorry in her voice.
As we rode up the street, she strained her neck for a fleeting(短暂的)second glance out the rear window and kept murmuring something, from which a trace of sorry and disappointment could be easily detected.
I would never forget that Christmas morning.
That Christmas morning would forever etch in my memory.
I watched as Mother peeled the tissue paper off a large box. Dad was sitting in his rocker, a huge grin on his face. “Only a fool wouldn’t give a priceless wife like mine exactly what she wants for Christmas,” he laughed. “Go ahead, open it up.” Dad winked at me, confirming his secret, and my heart was filled with more love for my father than I thought it could hold!
Hardly had mother peeled the tissue paper off a large box than dad, who was sitting in his rocker, chuckled with a wide grin beaming on his face.
“Only a fool wouldn’t give a priceless wife like mine exactly what she wants for Christmas.” Dad winked at me, confirming his secret.
My heart overflowed with more love for my father than I thought it could hold! With a sense of anticipation, Mother opened the box only to find a flare of red shimmering dress.
With trembling hands she touched the elegant material of Big Red.
“Oh, my goodness!” she managed to utter, her eyes filled with tears.
“Oh,Frank...” Her face was as bright as the star that twinkles on our Christmas tree in the corner of the small room.
“You shouldn’t have...”, came her faint attempt at scolding.
“Oh now, never mind that!” Dad said.
“Let’s see if it fits,” he laughed, helped her slip the marvelous dress over her shoulders.
As the shimmering red satin fell around her, it gracefully hid the patched and faded house-dress underneath.
I watched, my mouth wide open, attracted by a radiance in my parents I had never noticed before.
As they waltzed around the room, Big Red swirled its magic deep into my heart.
“You look beautiful,” my dad whispered to my mom, and she surely did!
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With trembling hands she touched the elegant material of Big Red.
“Oh, my goodness!” she managed to utter, her eyes filled with tears. “Oh,Frank...” Her face was as bright as the star that twinkles on our Christmas tree in the corner of the small room.
Eyes filling with tears, her face was as bright as the star that twinkles on our Christmas tree in the corner of the small room.
“You shouldn’t have...”, came her faint attempt at scolding. “Oh now, never mind that!” Dad said. “Let’s see if it fits,” he laughed, helped her slip the marvelous dress over her shoulders.
Despite her faint attempt at scolding, Dad dismissed her concerns and laughed, assisting her in slipping the marvelous dress over her shoulders.
As the shimmering red satin fell around her, it gracefully hid the patched and faded house-dress underneath.
I watched, my mouth wide open, attracted by a radiance in my parents I had never noticed before.
My mouth wide open, I observed, fascinated by a radiance in my parents I had never perceived before.
As they waltzed around the room, Big Red swirled its magic deep into my heart. “You look beautiful,” my dad whispered to my mom, and she surely did!
I quickly stole a glance at Dad. His blue eyes twinkling, he nudged me with his elbow. While we rode up the street, she strained her neck for a fleeting(短暂的)second glance out the rear window and kept murmuring something, from which a trace of sorry and disappointment could be easily detected. That Christmas morning would forever etch in my memory. Hardly had mother peeled the tissue paper off a large box than dad, who was sitting in his rocker, chuckled with a wide grin beaming on his face. “Only a fool wouldn’t give a priceless wife like mine exactly what she wants for Christmas.” Dad winked at me, confirming his secret. My heart overflowed with more love for my father than I thought it could hold! With a sense of anticipation, Mother opened the box only to find a flare of red shimmering dress.
With trembling hands she touched the elegant material of Big Red. Eyes filling with tears, her face was as bright as the star that twinkles on our Christmas tree in the corner of the small room. Despite her faint attempt at scolding, Dad dismissed her concerns and laughed, assisting her in slipping the marvelous dress over her shoulders. As the shimmering red satin fell around her, it gracefully hid the patched and faded house-dress underneath. My mouth wide open, I observed, fascinated by a radiance in my parents I had never perceived before. The moment they waltzed around the room, Big Red swirled its magic deep into my heart. “You look beautiful,” my dad whispered to my mom, and she surely did!
Craning her neck for another glimpse out the rear window as we rode up the street, Mother signed, “It’s gone…”
Sensing a trace of sorry, I was almost certain that she liked the dress so much.
It is that Christmas morning that I would never forget.
However, the Christmas morning transformed the sorrow into excitement.
Never would I forget that Christmas morning.
Soon came the Christmas, which I wouldn’t forget forever.
So moved was I that my heart was filled with more love for my father than I thought it could hold.
What astonished me most was that it was the exact red shimmering dress which she has been longing for.
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