Unit4-Unit6 期末作文专题精讲(写作技巧 范文) 2025-2026学年外研版英语七年级上册

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Unit4-Unit6 期末作文专题精讲(写作技巧 范文) 2025-2026学年外研版英语七年级上册

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新外研七上期末写作技巧+话题范文复习
一、作文写作步骤
一审-审题
读题目,审体裁;人称;时态;要点
二列-列提纲
根据要点按照总分总三段式列框架
三连-添要点
给框架内容添枝加叶,丰富要点
四替-加入连词
恰当运用连接词,使文章层次清晰
五美-检查
通读全文,检查复核
六写-眷写
将检查后的作文整洁抄写在横线上
二、写作步骤解析
十年后,你的生活会是什么样的呢 假如本期学校英语报的征文题目是“My Life in Ten Years”,请你根据下面的要点及要求,发挥想象,写一篇英语短文投稿。
要点:1.你十年后会从事什么职业; 2.你十年后的生活会是什么样子; 3.为了过上想要的生活,你现在该怎么做。
要求:1.文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名; 2.词数 80 左右。
1. 审 Search
审体裁:记叙文
审时态:一般将来时
审人称:第一人称
审要点:
十年后的职业
十年后的生活状态
现在为实现梦想的做法
2. 列 Outline
总:开头:点明主题,总述十年后的生活状态;
My life in ten years will be full of hope and challenges.
分:中间:描述自己十年后的职业和生活
be a teacher
travel to different countries
spend time with family
总:结尾:介绍自己为实现梦想的做法
study hard and improve my skills
my dream will come true
3. 添 Add
be a teacher
I will be an English teacher in a middle school. I will try my best to make my classes interesting and help my students fall in love with English.
travel to different countries
I will travel to countries like the UK and the US to learn about different cultures and bring back new teaching ideas.
spend time with family
I will spend more time with my family. We will have dinner together every day and go on trips during holidays.
4. 连 Connect-恰当运用连接词,使文章层次清晰,各部分衔接自然。
My life in ten years will be full of hope and challenges.
First of all, I think I’ll be an English teacher in a middle school. I will try my best to make my classes interesting and help my students fall in love with English. Besides, I will travel to countries like the UK and the US to learn about different cultures and bring back new teaching ideas. What’s more, I will spend more time with my family. We will have dinner together every day and go on trips during holidays. Although I will be busy with my work, I will never stop learning.
I will study hard now and improve my communication and teaching skills. I believe my dream will come true one day.
5. 查 Check-通读全文,检查复核
My life in ten years will be full of hope and challenges.
First of all, I think I’ll be an English teacher in a middle school. I will try my best to make my classes interesting and help my students fall in love with English. Besides, I will travel to countries like the UK and the US to learn about different cultures and bring back new teaching ideas. What’s more, I will spend more time with my family. We will have dinner together every day and go on trips during holidays. Although I will be busy with my work, I will never stop learning.
I will study hard now and improve my communication and teaching skills. I believe my dream will come true one day.
6. 誉 Copy
将检查后的作文整洁地抄写在横线上。
三、作文如何检查
查单词拼写
检查单词拼写是否正确,是否存在笔误现象?
查动词形式
检查动词形式:通过人称时态判断;
查语法错误
检查是否有语法错误,句子是否符合语法
查衔接词
检查衔接词是否使用合适,文章是否通顺?
查要点齐全
检查文章要点是否齐全;有无漏写忘写;
查句子结构
检查句子结构是否正确;
查标点符号
检查标点符号是否符合规范;
查固定搭配
检查短语句型等固定搭配是否正确。
四、写作高分技巧
技巧一:话题词汇积累
U4词汇节日活动
时间
take place 发生,举行;last from...to... 从……持续到……;fall on the first day of the first lunar month 在农历正月初一
活动
celebrate 庆祝;family reunions 家庭团聚;get together 聚在一起;have a big dinner 吃一顿大餐;enjoy the fireworks 欣赏烟花;stand for 代表;象征;receive red envelopes 收红包
感受/意义
important 重要的;meaningful 有意义的;traditional 传统的;have a good time/enjoy oneself 玩得开心;bring joy to our lives 给我们的生活带来欢乐;strengthen family bonds 加强家庭纽带
U5词汇动物
老虎外貌
strong and fierce 强壮凶猛;orange fur with black stripes 橙黄色带黑色条纹的皮毛;sharp teeth and claws 锋利的牙齿和爪子;long tail 长尾巴
老虎特点
powerful 强大的;fast runner 跑得快;hunt other animals 捕猎其他动物;live alone 独居;good at swimming 擅长游泳
老虎濒危的原因
illegal hunting 非法捕猎;loss of habitat 栖息地丧失;pollution 污染;in danger 处在危险中
保护老虎的措施
make laws to protect them 制定法律保护它们;set up nature reserves 建立自然保护区;stop buying products made from tiger parts 停止购买虎制品;raise public awareness 提高公众意识
U6词汇植物
水稻的外形特征
long and thin stems 细长的茎;narrow leaves 狭窄的叶片;golden grains 金黄色的稻粒;grow in water 生长在水中
水稻的生长条件
warm climate 温暖气候;plenty of water 充足的水分;fertile soil 肥沃土壤;enough sunlight 充足阳光
水稻的用途
make rice 制作大米;produce rice wine 酿造米酒;feed people 养活人类;used in traditional medicine 用于传统医学
技巧二:用短语代替单词
like → be fond of... 喜欢……
happy → be in high spirits 情绪高涨
help → give sb. a hand 帮助某人
learn → pick up... 学会……
want → feel like doing sth. 想要做某事
use → take advantage of sth. 利用某事物
say → express oneself 表达自己
think → come up with an idea 想出一个主意
go → head for... 前往……
eat → have a meal 吃饭
技巧三:加入所学重点句型
邀请某人做某事 → invite sb. to do sth.
对做某事感到兴奋 → be excited to do sth.
希望做某事 → hope to do sth.
计划做某事 → plan to do sth.
同意做某事 → agree to do sth.
拒绝做某事 → refuse to do sth.
建议做某事 → suggest doing sth.
期待做某事 → look forward to doing sth.
尽力做某事 → try one’s best to do sth.
需要做某事 → need to do sth.
技巧四:加入高级句型
(1)通过举例子扩写(for example/like/such as......):
例如,蜜蜂帮助花朵授粉。
For example, bees help flowers pollinate.
端午节期间人们做很多事,例如赛龙舟和吃粽子。
During the Dragon Boat Festival, people do many things, such as dragon boat racing and eating zongzi.
(2)使用动名词做主语(谓语动词要三单)
阅读是获取知识的重要途径。
Reading is an important way to gain knowledge.
种植树木有助于改善环境。
Planting trees helps improve the environment.
(3)加入not only...but also...不仅......而且......:
她不仅英语说得好,还会说法语。
She not only speaks English well, but also can speak French.
运动不仅能增强体质,还能缓解压力。
Exercise not only builds up our bodies, but also relieves stress.
(4)加入表语从句(放在系动词后)
最让我开心的是我在学校交到了很多朋友。
The happiest thing for me is that I have made many friends at school.
重要的是我们要学会独立。
What is important is that we should learn to be independent.
(5)加入最高级句型(one of +the +最高级+名词复数):
春节是中国最重要的传统节日之一。
The Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China.
老虎是世界上最危险的动物之一。
The tiger is one of the most dangerous animals in the world.
(6)加入原因状语从句(because...)
我喜欢春节,因为我可以收到红包和吃美食。
I like the Spring Festival because I can receive red envelopes and eat delicious food.
老虎濒临灭绝,因为它们的栖息地被破坏了。
Tigers are endangered because their habitats are destroyed.
(7)加入宾语从句(位于动词、介词后)
我相信我们的努力会得到回报。
I believe that our efforts will pay off.
他不知道该如何解决这个问题。
He doesn’t know how he can solve this problem.
(8)加入主语从句(充当主语成分)
众所周知,水是生命之源。
It is well-known that water is the source of life.
显而易见,保护环境对我们至关重要。
It is obvious that protecting the environment is crucial for us.
(9)加入感叹句(what/how)
多么美丽的花园啊!
What a beautiful garden!
他跑得真快啊!
How fast he runs!
技巧五:加入衔接词
类别 单词/短语
并列 and 和;又;而;either...or... 要么……要么……;neither...nor... 既不……也不……
转折 but 但是;however 然而;though/although 虽然;even if/even though 即使
因果 so 所以;because 因为;since 既然;as a result 结果是;thanks to 多亏了
顺序 first(ly) 首先;second(ly) 其次;then 然后;after that 在那之后;finally 最后
递进 also 也;too 也;in addition 此外;what’s more 更重要的是;furthermore 而且
观点 personally 在我看来;as far as I’m concerned 就我而言;it seems to me that 在我看来
总结 in conclusion 总之;to sum up 总而言之;in short 简而言之;all in all 总的来说
其他 for example 例如;in other words 换句话说;on the contrary 相反
技巧六:加入名言名句
A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step. 千里之行,始于足下。
Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。
The early bird catches the worm. 早起的鸟儿有虫吃。
Actions speak louder than words. 行动胜于言语。
Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。
It’s never too old to learn. 活到老,学到老。
Love me, love my dog. 爱屋及乌。
No pain, no gain. 不劳无获。
五、作文评分标准
给分范围 档次要求
13-15分 ①书写工整,要点齐全 ②语句通顺,逻辑合理 ③语法、拼写无误 ④高级句式。
10-12分 能写出大部分要点,语句较通顺、完整,有个别语法、拼写错误,但不影响句意,书写工整。
7-9分 能写出部分要点,语句基本通顺、完整,有少量语法、拼写错误,但尚能达意,书写较工整。
4-6分 能写出个别要点,语句不够通顺、完整,语法、拼写错误较多,只有个别句子可读,书写不够工整。
0-3分 未能写出基本要点,语法、拼写错误多,不知所云,书写潦草。
评分核心:结构+要点+逻辑+语法+亮点
结构:三段式:“观点——要点——总结”
要点:要点齐全,紧扣主题,围绕中心
逻辑:逻辑通顺,使用适当的衔接词
语法:语法正确,确保句子结构,语法正确
亮点:加入亮点,高级的词汇、词组、句型
六、考试范围+话题
Unit 4 Time to celebrate
主题:节假日
角度1:向外国朋友介绍中国的传统节日-端午节
角度2:介绍你最喜欢的外国节日以及原因-圣诞节
角度3:向外国朋友介绍你家乡的特色节日-泼水节
角度4:介绍节日期间的志愿者活动经历
Unit 5 Fantastic friends
主题:神奇的动物
角度1:根据所给信息介绍老虎并呼吁保护老虎
角度2:写一篇关于保护海洋动物的文章
角度3:介绍我最喜欢的动物和原因-海豚
角度4:介绍城市中流浪动物的生存现状并呼吁大家关爱它们
Unit 6 The power of plants
主题:植物的力量
角度1:介绍中国的水稻文化
角度2:根据所给信息介绍某种植物-竹子
角度3:介绍某种植物的用途和保护措施-银杏树
角度4:介绍植物对气候变化的影响并呼吁大家保护植物
七、单元话题作文解析
U4范文1:向外国朋友介绍中国的传统节日-端午节
你的英国朋友Michael想了解中国的传统节日。请你根据以下要点和要求,以“The Dragon Boat Festival”为题,写一篇英语短文向他介绍该节日。
要点:
When is the festival celebrated
What activities do people do during the festival
How do you like it
要求:
文章应包含以上所有要点,可适当发挥;
词数不少于90。
审题:
人称:第一人称
时态:一般现在时
范文:
The Dragon Boat Festival
The Dragon Boat Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month every year. It is celebrated to honor the great poet Qu Yuan.
During the festival, people have many interesting activities. The most famous one is the dragon boat race. Teams of rowers paddle their dragon-shaped boats as fast as they can to the beat of drums. It’s exciting to watch! People also eat zongzi, a kind of sticky rice dumpling wrapped in bamboo leaves. Zongzi has different fillings like meat, beans, and egg yolks.
I really love the Dragon Boat Festival. It not only reminds us of our history and culture but also brings families together. The dragon boat races are full of energy, and eating zongzi with my family makes me feel warm and happy. It’s a festival that combines fun, tradition, and delicious food.
U4范文2:介绍你最喜欢的外国节日以及原因-圣诞节
世界上有很多节日,如圣诞节、感恩节和万圣节等。请参考以下思维导图,以“My Favourite Foreign Festival”为题,写一篇英语短文。
审题:
人称:第一人称
时态:一般现在时
范文:
My Favourite Foreign Festival
There are many interesting foreign festivals in the world. Of all the festivals, I like Christmas best. It is celebrated on December 25th every year to remember the birth of Jesus Christ.
Christmas is a time of joy and giving. People decorate their homes with Christmas trees, colorful lights, and beautiful ornaments. They exchange gifts with family and friends, and children look forward to receiving presents from Santa Claus. Many families go to church to attend special services, and they also have big dinners with delicious food like turkey and Christmas pudding.
I like Christmas because it’s a time when people are kind and generous. The whole world seems to be filled with happiness and love. It also gives me a chance to learn about different cultures and traditions. I hope one day I can celebrate Christmas in a foreign country and experience the festive atmosphere firsthand.
U4范文3:向外国朋友介绍你家乡的特色节日-泼水节
假设你叫张伟,你的美国笔友汤姆想了解中国的特色节日。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件,向他介绍你家乡的泼水节。
审题:
人称:第一人称
时态:一般现在时
范文:
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear from you. Let me tell you about a special festival in my hometown—the Water-Splashing Festival.
The Water-Splashing Festival is the most important festival for the Dai people in Yunnan, China. It usually takes place in April, marking the start of the Dai New Year. During the festival, people dress up in traditional clothes and gather in the streets. They carry buckets and water guns, and splash water on each other. Splashing water is a way to send good wishes— the more water you get, the more luck you will have in the new year.
There are also other activities like dragon boat races, peacock dances, and fireworks shows. Everyone is happy and full of energy. I hope you can come to my hometown to celebrate the Water-Splashing Festival with me. I’m sure you will have a wonderful time!
Best wishes,
Zhang Wei
U4范文4:介绍节日期间的志愿者活动经历
有这样一群人,他们在节日期间放弃休息,投身于志愿者活动,帮助那些需要帮助的人。假如你是李华,你们学校正在组织英语作文比赛,请以“My Volunteer Experience During the Festival”为题,根据以下思维导图内容提示写一篇英文短文参赛。
审题:
人称:第一人称
时态:一般过去时
范文:
My Volunteer Experience During the Festival
During the Spring Festival this year, I had a meaningful volunteer experience. I joined a volunteer team to help the elderly in a nursing home.
On the morning of the festival, we brought fruits, snacks, and New Year’s gifts to the elderly. We helped them clean their rooms, cut their hair, and chat with them. Some of us performed programs like singing and dancing to make them happy. I talked with an old grandma who told me stories about her life when she was young. She was very happy to have someone to listen to her.
This volunteer experience taught me the importance of caring for others. It made me realize that giving is more rewarding than receiving. Even though I didn’t spend the festival with my family, I felt warm and happy. I hope more people can join volunteer activities and spread love and kindness during festivals.
U5范文1:介绍我最喜欢的动物和原因-海豚
假设你是约翰,本周英语角的话题是 “My Favourite Animal”。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇短文,分享你最喜欢的动物。
审题:
人称:第一人称
时态:一般现在时
范文:
My Favourite Animal
By John
My favourite animal is the dolphin. Dolphins are one of the most intelligent animals in the world.
Dolphins live in the ocean. They have smooth, grey skin and a long, curved dorsal fin. They are very fast swimmers and can jump high out of the water. Dolphins are social animals and live in groups called pods. They communicate with each other using sounds and body language. They are also known for their friendly behavior towards humans.
I like dolphins because they are smart and playful. I once saw a dolphin show at an aquarium, and I was amazed by their ability to follow commands and perform tricks. Dolphins also help humans in many ways, like rescuing people who are lost at sea. They are truly amazing creatures, and I hope we can protect them and their habitat.
U5范文2:写一篇关于保护海洋动物的文章
2025年6月8日是第17个世界海洋日,我国的主题为“保护海洋生物多样性,人与自然和谐共生”。假设你是李明,你所在学校的英语报“人与自然”栏目正在以保护海洋动物为话题征文,请你根据以下思维导图内容提示,用英文写一篇短文给该专栏投稿。
审题:
人称:第一人称
时态:一般现在时
范文:
Protecting Marine Animals
Marine animals are an important part of our planet’s ecosystem. However, many of them are in danger now.
Pollution is one of the biggest threats to marine animals. Plastic waste, oil spills, and chemical pollution are harming their health and destroying their habitats. Overfishing is also a problem. Many fish species are being caught faster than they can reproduce, which affects the whole food chain. Climate change is causing the ocean to warm and become more acidic, which is bad for coral reefs and the animals that live there.
We must take action to protect marine animals. We can reduce our use of plastic, support sustainable fishing practices, and learn more about ocean conservation. Governments should make stricter laws to prevent pollution and overfishing. Everyone has a role to play in protecting our oceans and the amazing animals that live in them. Let’s work together to ensure a better future for marine life.
U5范文3:根据所给信息介绍老虎并呼吁保护老虎
假如你是李华,来自哈尔滨。你校正在进行“动物周”活动,请你根据下表提示,写一篇英语演讲稿,向同学们介绍老虎,让更多的人了解老虎、保护老虎。
外貌 橙黄色带黑色条纹的皮毛,锋利的牙齿和爪子 特点 强壮凶猛,跑得快,擅长捕猎
栖息地 亚洲的森林和草原 濒危原因 非法捕猎,栖息地丧失,污染
保护措施 制定法律保护,建立自然保护区,提高公众意识 现状 野生老虎数量不足4000只
审题:
人称:第一人称
时态:一般现在时
范文:
Tigers
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua, a student from Harbin. Today, I want to talk about one of the most amazing animals—the tiger.
Tigers are the largest cats in the world. They have beautiful orange fur with black stripes, sharp teeth, and strong claws. They are powerful hunters and can run very fast. Tigers live alone in forests and grasslands in Asia. They hunt animals like deer and wild boar.
Sadly, tigers are in great danger now. There are less than 4000 wild tigers left in the world. Illegal hunting for their fur and body parts is a major threat. Their habitats are also being destroyed by deforestation and human development.
We must protect tigers. Governments have made laws to stop illegal hunting and set up nature reserves to protect their habitats. We can also help by raising public awareness and supporting conservation organizations. Tigers are an important part of our planet, and we can’t let them disappear. Let’s work together to save these magnificent animals.
Thank you for listening.
U5范文4:介绍城市中流浪动物的生存现状并呼吁大家关爱它们
上周日,你和Sandy去了动物收容所,了解到很多城市流浪动物的生存现状,你想在 School Newsletter 上发文呼吁同学们关爱流浪动物。请你就下面表格中的提示内容写一篇80词左右的短文。
现状 无家可归,食物短缺,容易生病 原因 被主人遗弃,迷路,繁殖过快
应对措施 建立收容所,开展领养活动,进行绝育手术 建议 作为学生,我们可以……
审题:
人称:第一人称
时态:一般过去时和一般现在时
范文:
Care for Stray Animals
Last Sunday, Sandy and I visited an animal shelter and learned about the difficult lives of stray animals in our city.
Stray animals are homeless and often don’t have enough food to eat. They are also more likely to get sick because they don’t have proper medical care. Many of them were abandoned by their owners, some got lost, and others are the offspring of stray animals that reproduce too quickly.
There are things we can do to help. Animal shelters provide a safe place for them, but they need more support. We can adopt a stray animal instead of buying one, donate food and supplies to shelters, or volunteer our time. As students, we can also educate others about the importance of caring for stray animals. Let’s show kindness to these helpless creatures and make our city a better place for them.
U6范文1:介绍中国的水稻文化
作为中学生,我们应该了解水稻并传播水稻文化。国际友好交流学校线上论坛拟于下周五举行,本期论坛的主题为“水稻文化”。假设你是论坛特邀嘉宾,请你根据以下思维导图内容提示,用英文写一篇短文,向国际友好交流学校介绍中国水稻文化。
审题:
人称:第一人称
时态:一般现在时
范文:
Chinese Rice Culture
Rice is one of the most important foods in China, and it has a long history and rich culture.
Rice has been grown in China for over 7000 years. It is a staple food for most Chinese people, especially in the southern part of the country. Rice is not just a food; it is also an important part of Chinese culture. There are many traditional festivals and customs related to rice. For example, during the Dragon Boat Festival, people eat zongzi made of glutinous rice. In some areas, there are rice-planting festivals where people celebrate the start of the growing season.
Rice is also used in traditional Chinese medicine and is believed to have health benefits. Chinese people have developed many ways to cook rice, such as fried rice, congee, and rice noodles. Rice culture reflects the hard work and wisdom of Chinese farmers. I hope more people can learn about Chinese rice culture and appreciate the importance of this amazing crop.
U6范文2:根据所给信息介绍某种植物-竹子
你所在的自然社团打算发布保护植物的相关海报,你负责有关竹子这一植物的介绍,请根据所给的竹子资料卡,向同学们科普这一植物。
名称 竹子 外形 细长的茎,绿色的叶片,中空的内部
质地 坚硬有韧性 生长条件 温暖湿润的气候,排水良好的土壤
历史 几千年 用途 制作家具,造纸,食用,观赏
审题:
人称:第一人称
时态:一般现在时
范文:
Bamboo
Hi, everyone. Today, I want to introduce you to a very useful and interesting plant—bamboo.
Bamboo is a type of grass that grows in many parts of the world, especially in Asia. It has long, thin stems that are green and hollow inside. Bamboo grows very fast—some species can grow up to 1 meter in a single day! It is strong and flexible, which makes it a great material for many things.
Bamboo has been used by humans for thousands of years. In China, it is used to make furniture, baskets, and paper. Young bamboo shoots are also a popular food in many Asian countries. Bamboo is also important for the environment. It helps prevent soil erosion and provides shelter for many animals.
Bamboo is a truly amazing plant. It is not only useful but also beautiful. Let’s learn more about bamboo and do our part to protect this valuable resource.
U6范文3:介绍某种植物的用途和保护措施-银杏树
《中国日报》收到外国读者的来信,信中说他们对中国的银杏树很感兴趣,因此现在该报社在征求一篇介绍银杏树的文章,请你写一篇英语短文投稿。
内容包括:
银杏树在中国很常见;
用途(美化城市,木材用于制作家具,叶子和果实可入药等);
保护措施(保护古树,种植新树,加强研究……)。
注意:1. 词数为60左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名;4. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
审题:
人称:第一人称
时态:一般现在时
范文:
Ginkgo Trees
Welcome to Green China! I’m glad to hear that many people are interested in ginkgo trees.
Ginkgo trees are common in China, especially in cities. They are known for their beautiful fan-shaped leaves that turn golden in autumn. Ginkgo trees have many uses. Their wood is used to make furniture, and their leaves and fruits are used in traditional medicine. They also help purify the air and make our cities more beautiful.
However, some old ginkgo trees are in danger. We should protect these ancient trees, plant more young ginkgoes, and study how to help them grow better. Let’s work together to ensure that ginkgo trees continue to thrive in China for many years to come.
U6范文4:介绍植物对气候变化的影响并呼吁大家保护植物
以“Plants and Climate Change”为题写一篇英语短文,从三个方面谈论植物对气候变化的影响,并呼吁大家要爱护花草树木。
吸收二氧化碳:help reduce greenhouse gases
调节气温:cool the air and reduce heat islands
保护土壤和水资源:prevent soil erosion and conserve water
审题:
人称:第一人称
时态:一般现在时
范文:
Plants and Climate Change
Plants play a crucial role in fighting climate change. They are our natural allies in protecting the planet.
First, plants absorb carbon dioxide from the air through photosynthesis. Carbon dioxide is a major greenhouse gas that causes global warming. By absorbing it, plants help reduce the amount of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere and slow down climate change.
Second, plants help regulate temperatures. They release water vapor into the air through transpiration, which cools the surrounding environment. Trees and other plants also provide shade, which helps reduce the heat island effect in cities.
Third, plants protect soil and water resources. Their roots hold the soil together, preventing erosion caused by wind and rain. They also help conserve water by reducing runoff and increasing infiltration into the ground.
In conclusion, plants are essential for combating climate change. We should plant more trees and protect existing forests and grasslands. Every plant counts in our fight against global warming. Let’s take action now to protect our planet and its amazing plants.
八、期末综合作文解析
期末综合范文1
你身边应该有对你来说具有特殊意义的人吧。请以“My_______”为题用英语写一篇短文,描述某个对你来说很重要的人(包括性别、年龄、外貌、性格特征等),如你的家人、朋友、老师、同学等。
审题:
人称:第一人称
时态:一般现在时
范文:
My English Teacher
There are many special people in my life, but the most important one is my English teacher, Miss Wang.
Miss Wang is in her thirties. She has long black hair and a warm smile. She is kind and patient, and she always makes her classes interesting. She uses games, songs, and stories to help us learn English. When we make mistakes, she never gets angry. Instead, she helps us correct them and encourages us to try again.
Miss Wang is not just a teacher—she is also our friend. She listens to our problems and gives us good advice. She cares about each of us and wants us to succeed. Thanks to her, I have fallen in love with English and made great progress. I am very lucky to have such a wonderful teacher. I will always remember her and the lessons she taught me.
期末综合范文2
假如你是李华,你想参加学校正在举行的英语征文活动,活动主题为“我的校园生活”。征文内容要求积极向上,展示丰富多彩的校园活动。请根据以下提示,完成一篇征文。
What subjects do you study
What sports do you like to play
What are your teachers and classmates like
What club activities do you take part in
审题:
人称:第一人称
时态:一般现在时
范文:
My School Life
My name is Li Hua, and I am a student in Class 2, Grade 7. My school life is busy but exciting.
We study many subjects, including Chinese, Maths, English, Science, and History. My favourite subject is English because I love learning about different cultures and making friends with people from other countries. I also enjoy Science classes because we do interesting experiments.
I love sports. I play basketball with my classmates every afternoon after school. It’s a great way to stay healthy and make friends. I am also a member of the school’s science club. We meet every Wednesday to do projects and learn about new technologies.
My teachers are very knowledgeable and kind. They always help us when we have problems. My classmates are friendly and supportive. We work together and have fun. I am very happy with my school life and I look forward to every day at school.
期末综合范文3
假如你是李华,请你给美国笔友 David写一封信,讲述你周六一天的生活,并谈谈感受。
周六早上,和家人一起去爬山,欣赏风景,锻炼身体。
下午,去图书馆看书,完成作业。
晚上,和朋友一起看电影,吃晚饭。
你觉得…
要求:
词数:80左右。
开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数。
要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
审题:
人称:第一人称
时态:一般过去时
范文:
Dear David,
How are you I had a great day last Saturday, and I want to share it with you.
In the morning, I went mountain climbing with my family. The weather was perfect, and the view from the top was amazing. We took many photos and had a picnic. Climbing the mountain was a good workout and made me feel strong and healthy.
In the afternoon, I went to the library. I read some interesting books and finished my homework. It was quiet and peaceful, and I got a lot done.
In the evening, I went to the movies with my friends. We watched a funny comedy and then had dinner at a pizza restaurant. We laughed a lot and had a wonderful time.
Overall, it was a perfect day. I felt happy and relaxed. I hope you also have a great weekend!
Yours,
Li Hua
期末综合范文4
现如今,世界上有很多珍稀植物濒临灭绝,比如银杏树、珙桐等。我们应该拯救这些珍稀植物,创造一个人与自然和谐共处的美好未来。假设你是李华,现在请你根据以下思维导图内容提示发一封电子邮件给你的朋友詹妮(Jenny),介绍一下你最想保护的植物。
审题:
人称:第一人称
时态:一般现在时
范文:
Dear Jenny,
I’m glad to hear from you. My favourite plant is the ginkgo tree. Ginkgo trees are one of the oldest living tree species in the world. They have beautiful fan-shaped leaves that turn golden in autumn.
However, ginkgo trees are in danger now. Many old ginkgo trees are being cut down for their wood or to make space for buildings. Pollution is also harming their health. Climate change is making it harder for them to grow and reproduce.
Protecting ginkgo trees is important. We should make laws to protect old ginkgo trees, plant more young ginkgoes, and study how to help them adapt to climate change. Everyone can do their part by learning about ginkgo trees and supporting conservation efforts.
I hope you can learn more about ginkgo trees and join me in protecting these amazing plants.
Yours,
Li Hua
期末综合范文5
假如你是Chris,一名来自英国的交换生,目前正在中国学习和生活。请阅读下面这封来自你妈妈的电子邮件,并予以回复。
Dear Chris,
How is everything going I’m really interested in your life in China. I know Chinese people usually drink tea. Do you like it What do you usually drink What’s your favourite drink there What’s your favourite sport at school Do you have any plans for the summer holiday By the way, you said you had a new friend there. What does your friend like doing
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
MUM
注意:(1) 针对邮件中的问题作出回答,可适当发挥;(2) 邮件中不得出现真实的人名;(3) 词数不少于60,开头和结尾已给出不计人总词数。
审题:
人称:第一人称
时态:一般现在时
范文:
Dear Mum,
I’m having a great time in China as an exchange student. Life here is full of new experiences.
Chinese people love drinking tea, and I have grown to like it too. My favourite tea is green tea because it’s light and refreshing. I also like drinking soy milk for breakfast—it’s healthy and delicious.
At school, my favourite sport is table tennis. It’s very popular in China, and I play it with my classmates every day. I’m getting better and better! For the summer holiday, I plan to travel to Xi’an to see the Terracotta Army. I’m really excited about it.
I have made many new friends here. My best friend is Lin Tao. He likes playing basketball and watching movies. He often helps me with my Chinese, and I help him with his English. We have a lot of fun together.
I miss you, but I’m really enjoying my time in China. I will tell you more when I come home.
Yours,
Chris

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