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学段学科：高中英语
教材版本：人教版
课件主题：必修二第一单元写作课
-- Writing a news report
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Learning objectives
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master the strategies to write a news report;
gain a deeper understanding of cultural heritage protection.
By the end of this class, you will be able to:
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critically evaluate the writing of a news report;
craft an effective news report including a headline, lead sentence, body and ending;
paraphrase
lead
sentence
body
Reading for features
headline
accurate
brief
impressive
summarized
easy-understanding
detailed
direct
objective
accurate
persuasive
No comments
passive voice
direct quote
Practice : Write a news report based on the interview notes below.
Zhou Ping, China
a deputy director of the Chinese museum
was appointed to participate in the restoration of Notre-Dame de Paris
contributed China’s expertise in cultural relic preservation
marble cleaning
research on charred wood
conservation techniques for murals, metals and related artifacts
occupation
means
purpose
supporting details
structure
headline:
lead sentence:
body:
purpose
+
means
paraphrase: occupation + means+purpose
supporting details
Zhou Ping, China
a deputy director of the Chinese museum
was appointed to participate in the restoration of Notre-Dame de Paris
contributed China’s expertise in cultural relic preservation
marble cleaning
research on charred wood
conservation techniques for murals, metals and related artifacts
purpose
means
accurate
brief
impressive
Write the headline
Headline:
Restoring Notre-Dame de Paris with China’s significant role
Zhou Ping, China
a deputy director of the Chinese museum
was appointed to participate in the restoration of Notre-Dame de Paris
contributed China’s expertise in cultural relic preservation
marble cleaning
research on charred wood
conservation techniques for murals, metals and related artifacts
Write the lead sentence
summarized
easy
-understanding
basic information
who(occupation)
what(event)
why(purpose)
Lead sentence:
Zhou Ping is a deputy director of the Chinese museum, who was appointed to participate in the restoration of Notre-Dame de Paris.
Zhou Ping, China
a deputy director of the Chinese museum
was appointed to participate in the restoration of Notre-Dame de Paris
contributed China’s expertise in cultural relic preservation
marble cleaning
research on charred wood
conservation techniques for murals, metals and related artifacts
Write the body
detailed
direct quote
no comments
passive voice
Body:
During the restoration, she contributed China’s expertise in cultural relic preservation, including marble cleaning, research on charred wood, and conservation technique for murals, metals and related artifacts.
Restoring Notre-Dame de Paris with China’s significant role
Polish the report
Zhou Ping is a deputy director of the Chinese museum, who was appointed to participate in the restoration of Notre-Dame de Paris.
During the restoration, she contributed China’s expertise in cultural relic preservation, including marble cleaning, research on charred wood, and conservation technique for murals, metals and related artifacts.
Add some reasonable details!
direct quote
numbers
ending
Zhou Ping is a deputy director of the Chinese museum, who was appointed to participate in the restoration of Notre-Dame de Paris. The five-year restoration involved more than 2,000 craftsmen and experts, with a total cost of nearly 700 million euros.
During the restoration, she contributed China’s expertise in cultural relic preservation, including marble cleaning, research on charred wood, and conservation technique for murals, metals and related artifacts. Both Notre-Dame and the Terracotta Army of Emperor Qingshihuang extensively used wooden materials, both of which has charred remains. By studying these burned wood or charcoal relics, the Chinese and French teams advanced research that connects the two cultural relics together.
Zhou Ping stated, “Cultural heritage represents a nation’s history and identity. Protecting it is not only a technical task but also a crucial part of safeguarding national security and cultural confidence.”
Restoring Notre-Dame de Paris
with China’s significant role
Sample:
Writing task:
假设你是我校英语报的记者李华。请根据以下要点写一篇新闻报道，介绍我校法语老师刘琪带领我校学生参加“第五届中外人文交流小使者全国总展示”的活动。
1.刘琪，一名法语老师，兼我校国际交流部负责人。于2024年7月18日带领我校22名学子登上清华舞台复活千年壁画，呈现敦煌盛景，展现中华传统文化之融和。
2.我校舞蹈队作品《丝路繁花》凭借良好的展示效果和优秀传统文化内涵，荣获全国三等奖。注意： 80词左右，可适当增加细节使行文连贯。
参考词汇：第五届中外人文交流小使者全国总展示5th National Showcase of Young Ambassadors for Sino-Foreign Cultural Exchange；千年壁画millennium-old murals；中华传统文化之融和the harmonious integration of traditional Chinese culture；
《丝路繁花》Silk Road Blossoms；全国三等奖the National Third Prize；文化的传承cultural inheritance；维护国家文化安全safeguard the security of our national culture
Yes No Questions
1. Is there a title
2. Does the lead sentence tell the reader about the situation
3. Has the writer included reasonable details and explanation
4. Are there quotes
5. Are there any grammar or spelling mistakes
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