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人教版2019必修第二册
Unit 5　Music
Reading for Writing
Learning objectives:
At the end of this lesson, students are able to:
1. Summarize the general outline of a speech.
2. Identify the language features of a speech by learning the passage of Sarah’s experience.
3. Write a speech about how music can change a person’s life and focus on the positive feelings and influence of music.
Lead-in：
Discuss the following questions with the key words in the box below.
Key words: independent; hopeful; optimistic; understanding; strong in mind, ...
Key words: bring happiness and power; give hope and a sense of satislaction heal/touch our soul; help relieve our stress; ease emotional and physical pain, ...
How can music help us and change our life
How can music affect us
Can we become better with music
[设计意图]通过欣赏与音乐相关的名言,讨论音乐给我们生活带来的改变,引导学生积吸思考，为理解演讲稿的内容做铺垫。
Lead-in：
Have you ever heard a speech
Have you ever made a speech
Reading：
Sarah Williams’s speech.
Sarah William
Where is she
What is she doing
Predict
She is in the hospital.
She is listening to music and showing victory gesture.
How is she different from you
She is suffering a serious illness and has to receive treatments in hospital.
Reading：
It is about how music has had an impact on Sarah's life.
What-type of text is it
What's the text talking about
It is a speech.
Predict
Reading：
E: Introduce herself and the topic.
B: The impacts of music
C: Sarah’s personal experience.
A: Sarah’s advice and hope.
D: Thank the audience.
Beginning (Para.1)
Body (Para.2-3)
Ending (Para.4-5)
Writing tip 1: Appropriate structure makes the speech smooth, logical and coherent.
Reading：
Welcome the audience
Introduce oneself
Propose the topic
Sarah's personal anecdote（story/experience）about the topic(music)
Sarah's personal feeling about the topic(music)
Sarah's advice to the audience
Thank the audience at the end
Appropriate structure makes the speech smooth, logical and coherent.
Reading：
Read Para.1 and find the key information.
Good morning. My name is Sarah Williams. It’s an honour to be here and to share with you the story of how music has had an impact on my life.
Greet the audience
Introduce herself
Present the topic
Beginning (para 1)
(A) Have you ever faced a time when things looked dark and you had no hope at all Two years ago, I was told I had a serious disease which was difficult to cure. My body ached all the time and thus I thought I didn't have much longer to live. I was very afraid and I felt so alone and discouraged. Then one day, I had to go through a two-hour medical treatment. The doctor wanted me to relax, so he had me listen to some music, and one of the songs was “Happy”. The song made me feel so much better that from then on I began to listen to music all the time. (B)John A. Logan said, “Music is the medicine of the mind.” And it's true. Music helped me recover.
1.What was Sarah's problem
2.How did music help her during her difficult time
She had a serious disease which was difficult to cure.
The song made her feel so much better because it is the medicine of the mind
While describing your personal story, pay attention to the time order, and the vivid description of your problem.
Read Para.2 and answer the questions.
Para.2 Sarah’s personal experience
Reading：
Read Para. 2 and fill in the chart.
When
What
How
two years ago
then one day
from then on
had a serious disease which was difficult to cure
listen to some music before medical treatment
Music helped her recover
afraid, alone, discouraged
feel so much better
happy
grateful
Time order
Writing tip 2: Suitable personal experience with problem-solving pattern makes the speech vivid.
difficulties
Solution
Problem- solving pattern
feelings
result
Music
(C) Music gave me happiness. When I listened to music, (D)it made my spirits fly like a kite in the wind. (C) Music gave me strength and brought me relief. (E) It was the rock I leant on to become strong and to get through those hard times. Moreover, (C) music gave me hope and a sense of satisfaction. (F) It became my best friend. It spoke words of encouragement to the deepest part of my being.
Music gave her happiness, strength and relief. It was the rock she leant on to become strong. music also gave her hope and a sense of satisfaction.
音乐给了我快乐。当我听音乐时，它让我的精神像风筝一样在风中飞翔。音乐给了我力量，给了我解脱。(E)它是我依靠的岩石，让我变得坚强，度过那些艰难的时光。此外，音乐给了我希望和满足感。它成了我最好的朋友。它使我从内心深处受到鼓舞
3.What was Sarah’s feeling towards music
Para. 3 The impact of music on Sarah's life
Read Para. 3 and answer the questions.
Read Para. 4-5 and answer the question.
当然，我希望你们都不要经历和我一样的痛苦。同时，当我们感到悲伤或孤独时，我们都会经历各种时期。在那些时候，音乐可以帮助你，就像它帮助我一样。我希望你们都能开始珍惜音乐，并让它成为你生活的一部分。
Of course, I hope none of you have to go through the same kind of suffering that I did. At the same time,we all go through various periods when we feel sad or alone. During those times, music can help you in the same way that it helped me. I hope all of you will somehow begin to treasure music and make it a part of your life.
Thank you!
Use music to help when you have problems. Treasure music and make it a part of one's life.
4.What is Sarah's advice to others
Express hope and advice
Thank the audience’s listening
Suitable personal experience/anecdote makes the speech sincere, touching and impressive (the audience can relate to your experience).
Read for the structure.
Sarah’s speech
Topic
Experience
I had a serious disease which was
difficult to .
Music gave me hope and a sense of .
I felt alone and discouraged and myself with music.
Music made me feel better and helped me .
How music my life.
Advice
music and make it a part of your life.
influenced
cure
relaxed
recover
satisfaction
Treasure
Reading：
What rhetorical devices do you know
personification
rhetorical question
metaphor
repetition
quote
simile
rhetorical devices
Rhetorical device（修辞手法）
simile(明喻)
metaphor(暗喻)
A simile compares two things by using words such as "like"or "as".
It is a way of describing something by referring to it assomething different and suggesting that it has similar qualities to that thing. Unlike simile, we don't use "like" or "as"in the comparison.
rhetorical question(设问)
It is a question that isn't meant to get an answer, but is asked to make a point.
Personification
(拟人)
It is when a thing, an idea or an animal is given human features.
quote(引用)
To quote is to repeat a short passage, word, phrase, or sentence that came from somewhere or someone else.
repetition(重复)
It refers to the use of the same word or phrase in a poem, a speech, etc.
Appreciate the language features
Language Features
Metaphor:
Personification:
Quote:
Repetition:
Rhetorical question:
Simile:
E
F
B
C
A
D
Writing tip : Proper rhetorical devices make the speech vivid and impressive.
What expressions does Sarah use to talk about how music can make us feel
circle the phrases in the speech.
[设计意图]定位语篇中有关谈论音乐给人带来不同感受的词语或句子，从具体例子中进步让学生体会它们的独到之处,为增强演讲稿表现力与演讲者情感起到借鉴的作用。
Retell the structure of the speech with the help of the mind map
Write a speech：pair work
Think of ways that people experience music
ways that people experience music
listen to a piece of music or a song
play a musical instrument
compose
...
Write a speech：pair work
How music can help people
provide joy
express emotions
share similar feelings
Bring about happiness
make listeners strong in mind
imagine a dream world
have fun
How to write a speech
Language
features
Structure
(rhetorical question）
(quote)
(repetition)
(simile)
(metaphor）
(personification)
Wite a speech
Write a speech：
Writing：
Write a speech about music
Useful expressions in the “Start” part of the speech
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. I’m... Today I'm greatly honored to have a chance to make a speech on the subject ...
... Thank you for giving me the opportunity to make a speech about...
... My name is ... It’s my great honor to have the opportunity to share with you my opinion on ...
…Today I’d like to deliver a lecture on ...
...It’s my great honor to stand here on behalf of all the students, and share with you my point of view on...
Useful expressions in the “Body” part of the speech
Have you ever experienced the ups and downs of life and felt frustrated or discouraged
It’s like I had been taken out of my natural environment, and put somewhere new. And slowly I began to lose myself, like a fish out of water.
There’s a beautiful connection between music and life. It can bind us to reality at the same time it allows us to escape it.
Music is something that lives inside of you. You create it and you’re created by it. Our lives are not only conducted by music, they’re also composed of it.
The philosopher Plato once said, “Music gives a soul to the universe, wings to the mind, flight to the imagination and life to everything.”
Henry Wadsworth Longfellow once said, “Music is the universal language of mankind.”
Useful expressions in the “Ending” part of the speech
No one can deny the fact that music can .../It can be said with certainty that music can... Undoubtedly, music is supposed to be a strong support to you.
If you are faced with difficulties, you can turn to music for help. It will surely help you out.
But music is always there, supporting us, connecting us to each other and showing us the beauty of the universe. So if you ever feel lost, stop and listen to music.
Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this chance to speak to you today.
Finally, I hope I have made myself understood about music. Thank you so much.
Metaphor: Music is the best medicine to cure my sadness.
Personification: Music is the best doctor.
Quote: As Longfellow said: Music is the universal language of human beings.
Task 1 Imitate and Write
Repetition: Music helps me remember how much I miss her! Music helps me remember the good times we had! Music helped me learn to appreciate the time we spent together!
Rhetorical question: Have you ever heard a song that has a great influence on you ？
Simile (verb+ like): Music is like a warm sunshine.
Task 1 Imitate and Write
Task 2 Talking and Writing
Work in pairs to talk about your experience with music and how it has changed your life.Then write it down.
Personal terrible experience
1Five years ago, I was diagnosed to develop a serious disease which was hard to cure.
2.When I was a child,I broke my leg,which made depressed. music..
3.Last year ,I lost my left leg in an accident and I was in low spiritis...
experience with music how it has changed my life
listen to a piece of music or a song provide joy
Bring about happiness
play a musical instrument share similar feelings
make listeners strong in mind
compose express emotions
Post- Writing
Five years ago, I was diagnosed to develop a serious disease which was hard to cure. It seemed as if the world was at an end.
1. You may have ever encountered a time when everything went wrong and you were discouraged.
(rhetorical question)
Have you ever encountered a time when everything went wrong and you were discouraged
2. Five years ago, I was diagnosed to develop a serious disease which was hard to cure. I am hopeless.
(metaphor)
Just as Walter Haddon once said, "Music is the medicine of a troubled mind."
3. Then one day, I accidentally heard a piece of classic music by Eric Satie
called “Gymnopédie No 1, which is very gentle.
(quote)
4. Music made me encouraged and helped me find my hope.
Music gave me encouragement; music gave me strength and music gave me confidence.
(repetition)
Hello, my name is Jane, and I'm here to talk about how music influenced my life.
Welcome
self-introduce
topic
Start
Have you ever encountered a time when everything went wrong and you were discouraged Five years ago, I was diagnosed to develop a serious disease which was hard to cure. It seemed as if the world was at an end. The doctor suggested that I should keep calm and fight with the disease bravely. He also advised me to listen to music often. Just as Walter Haddon once said, "Music is the medicine of a troubled mind." I followed the doctor's advice and listened to soft music from time to time. Music gave me encouragement; music gave me strength and music gave me confidence. Music became my best friend, helping me get through the hardest time.
personal anecdote
personal feeling
rhetorical devices
Body
advice
Thank
Ending
I do hope none of you have to meet with tough time in your life. In case youcome across the same situation, I advise you to turn to music, for it does help. Thank you for listening.
素材积累:what can music bring for us (音乐的作用)
一分钟背诵三条
1.calm us down .让我们冷静下来
2.make us relaxed and peaceful. 让我们放松和平静
3.give us courage, hope and power. 给我们勇气,希望和力量
4.make us strong in mind. 让我们心灵强大
5.relax and refresh ourselves. 放松身心，恢复精神
6.offer us comfort and company. 给我们安慰和陪伴
7.release our stress/pressure. 释放压力
8.inspire us to be positive and optimistic. 激励我们积极乐观
9.help us overcome all the difficulties. 帮助我们克服一切困难
10.bring us happiness/joy/relief. 给我们带来幸福/快乐/宽慰
Thank You !
Reading for Writing
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