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读后续写入门指导
十句五定法
读后续写解题步骤
十句五定法
Para 1
（1）定1：承上衔接续写第一段第一句
（2）
（3）
（4）
（5）定2：启下衔接第二段第一句
Para 2
（1）定3：承上衔接续写第二段第一句
（2）
（3）
（4）定4：故事的结果。
（5）定2：升华主旨
（亲情类，成长类，帮助类，遇险类）
反应
情绪
过程动作
反应
情绪
过程动作
2021新高考Ⅰ卷 A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.

2021新高考Ⅰ卷
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para 1: As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.
Para2: The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.

Para 1
(1)定1：承上第一段第一句
(2)
(3)
(4)
(5)定2：启下第二段第一句
十句五定法
They finished making the breakfast with the help of their father.
Their father was surprised and asked what happened.
The twin explained their plan.
The father decided to help them.
做饭的具体过程和其中的情绪
Para 2
(1)定3：承上第二段第一句
(2)
(3)
(4)定4：故事的结尾
(5)定5：升华主旨
十句五定法
The love between family members was important.
Seeing the breakfast, their mother was amazed.
The twin told her it was a surprise.
主人公的情绪和动作
Their mother finished eating and hugged them together.
高级句型学习与练习
1.多动作表达方式： At the sight of..., sb. did sth. ,v-ing短语
2. 得知情况后，人的反应：Learning that..., sb. did sth.
3. A 拥抱B。: A embraced B tightly.
4. ,which 引导非限制性定语从句，修饰前面整个句子。
eg. He give me a warm smile, which moved me a lot.
翻译作业
5. “对不起，我不能取现金。”我不好意思地说，脸上火辣辣的。（with 复合结构）
“Sorry, I can’t take casah out.”I said embarrassedly, with my face burning.
He expressed his heartfelt gratitude，with tears welling up in his eyes. (表达感谢)
6. 万能衔接：Hearing one’s words, sb did sth.
Hearing my words, Gunter answerd with the familiar smile on his face “That’s Ok. You can pay at your convenience.”
高级句型学习与练习（以2024全国一高考续写为例）
7. So 倒装结构：So+ adj./adv.+系动词+主语+that+句子...
So surprised and shocked was I that words failed me. (万能惊讶句)
8. 三连动：did sth, did sth, and did sth.
I took notebook out , asked Gunter’s number and wrote it down hurriedly, promising I would call him back.
9. 续写必须要写连接词位于句首（至少两处）：Then，At that moment， Without thinking，Without hesitation 等
Then, I made a mad run for the bus and left.
11. As 引导时间状语从句（当...时）
10. The moment 时间状语从句：The moment+句子，句子.
The moment Gunter picked up the phone, he seemed to know I was going to call and said softly“I know it was you.”
As we met the following day at the departure place, I expressed my heartfelt gratitude to him.
13. 无灵主语句型
12. 表示转折关系当副词：However，句子.
I paid him back and offered him an extra tip. However, Gunter refused the tip and he said it was not a big deal.
Suddenly, a warm current washed over me. (感动凑字句)
14. 强调句型：It was +被强调部分+that +句子剩余部分。
It was at that moment that I realized that A small act of kindness could make a big difference to the world. (万能升华：助人类)
句子翻译练习
1. 听到这是一个母亲节惊喜，母亲非常感动，眼中涌出泪水。
Hearing that it was a Mother's Day surprise, the mother was moved, with tears welling up in her eyes.
2. 母亲既惊讶又感动，一句话都说不出来。
So surprised and touched was the mother that words failed her.
3. 父亲帮助孩子们清理好炉灶，把面包放在平底锅中，并且不时地搅拌鸡肉粥。
The father helped kids clean up the stove, put the bread on the pan and stirred the porridge from time to time.
4. 母亲毫不犹豫，在看到孩子们地那一刻，她紧紧地拥抱他们。
Without hesitation, the moment she saw her kids, she embraced them tightly.
句子翻译练习
1、当我匆忙走到办公室时，老师带着熟悉的微笑给了我一本书。
（The moment）
2. （强调句型）正是从这次经历中，我明白了只有勇敢地面对挑战，才能不断进步。
3. 在那一刻，我感到十分惊讶，瞪大了双眼。（with结构）
句子翻译练习
1、当我匆忙走到办公室时，老师带着熟悉的微笑给了我一本书。
（The moment）
2. （强调句型）正是从这次经历中，我明白了只有勇敢地面对挑战，才能不断进步。
3. 在那一刻，我感到十分惊讶，瞪大了双眼。（with结构）
1. The moment I walked into the office hurriedly, I saw the teacher with the familiar smile, handing me a book.
2. It was from this experience that I realized that by facing challenges bravely we can make continuously progress.
3. At that moment, I felt very shocked, with my eyes widely open.

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