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(共24张PPT)
Reading for Writing
Unit 3 The Internet
Write a blog post
01
Lead in
What problems are mentioned in the pictures
Cyber bullying (网络暴力）
What other problems will we face on the Internet
Information leakage (信息泄露)
Wire Fraud （电信诈骗）
How can we stay safe online
Lead-in
02
Pre-Writing
The blog part
The comment part
A blog post
Two parts
1. What is it
2. How many parts dose it have
Pre-writing
Blog post is an entry (article) that you write on a blog. It can include content in the form of text, photos, infographics (信息图), or videos.
Pre-writing
What is a blog
What is a blogger
What is a blog post
Blog is a place to express ideas on the Internet.
Blogger is the person who writes something on the blog.
Pre-writing
Read for content
Read the blog and gather information.
1.What’s the main idea of the blog post Try to write a title for it.
2.What guidelines does the author provide for staying safe online
3.Who are the online troublemakers the blog post mentions
While-reading
Read for content
online safety
1.What’s the main idea of the blog post Try to write a title for it.
The blog post is about how to stay safe online and avoid bad experiences on the Internet.
2.What guidelines does the author provide for staying safe online
First,leave immediately if you find something that makes you feel uncomfortable on the site.
Second,protect your privacy.
Third,be polite.
3.Who are the online troublemakers the blog post mentions
Three kinds of people:an identity thief,a troll,and a cyberbully.
Pre-writing
Read for content
Do you have any more tips for how to surf the internet safely
Don’t give your real name or personal details such as your age,address,or your school.
Use a virus pogram to protect your computer from viruses or attacks.
Pre-writing
Today I thought I'd blog about a question that has been asked many times—how do you stay safe online and avoid bad experiences on the Internet I'm not an expert, but many years as a blogger have taught me a thing or two.
Read for structure
Tick what the writer tells the reader in Paragraph 1.
○ definition of online safety
○ the writer’s knowledge
○ background information
○ the topic of the post
Pre-writing
What words and phrases does the writer use to organize the information in the second paragraph
First of all, there's the golden rule of the Internet: If you see or read something that makes you feel uncomfortable, leave the site immediately. Don't post comments or click on anything. Second, protect your privacy. Don't give out your address or phone number. Someone might use the information to steal your identity. Identity theft is a common and serious problem. Third, be polite. Being online is no excuse for being rude, and you don't want to become a target for a troll or cyberbully. A troll is a person who posts comments or questions in order to stir up trouble online. Trolls often use several false names so that they can stay on a site. A cyberbully uses the Internet to be mean to others. Like a troll, a cyberbully will also write something mean but it is usually directed at particular people. He or she may also post embarrassing photos and information about those people. However, the more polite you are, the less likely it is you will be attacked.
Read for structure
Pre-writing
First of all, there's the golden rule of the Internet: If you see or read something that makes you feel uncomfortable, leave the site immediately. Don't post comments or click on anything. Second, protect your privacy. Don't give out your address or phone number. Someone might use the information to steal your identity. Identity theft is a common and serious problem. Third, be polite. Being online is no excuse for being rude, and you don't want to become a target for a troll or cyberbully. A troll is a person who posts comments or questions in order to stir up trouble online. Trolls often use several false names so that they can stay on a site. A cyberbully uses the Internet to be mean to others. Like a troll, a cyberbully will also write something mean but it is usually directed at particular people. He or she may also post embarrassing photos and information about those people. However, the more polite you are, the less likely it is you will be attacked.
What new words are explained in the text,and how
Use simple words and an explanation sentence to define “troll”.
Define “cyberbully” by comparing it with “troll”
Read for structure
Pre-writing
Read paragraph 3 again and choose the best answer.
Have you had any bad experiences online, or do you have some good advice for staying safe Post your comments below!
How does the writer end the post
A. By asking questions.
B. By answering questions.
C. By asking and answering questions.
D. By asking readers to write comments.
Read for structure
Pre-writing
Read for structure
Title
Introduction
Body
Ending
Comments
(Tips)
(Asking for comments)
online safety
03
While-Writing
Use what you have learnt to write a blog post about online safety.
Online shopping sites
Use a website you are familiar with.
Use strong passwords.
Don’t use public computers.
Social networking apps
Don’t post personal information.
Don’t believe everything.
Be polite.
Online chat rooms
Don’t give out too much information.
Never meet someone you met online alone.
Choose one of the topics below and use the notes to draft your blog post.
While-writing
What words and phrases does the writer use to give tips
First of all, Second, Third
Can you think of other linking words to organize the tips
● To start/begin with, Above all, In the first place
● Besides, What’s more, In addition, Moreover, Afterwards
● Finally, Last but not least, In conclusion, In a word, In short, To sum up
What writing techniques does the author use to give tips
imperative sentences (Don’t do sth.)
Definition to new words (A troll is …; A cyberbully uses…)
Comparison (like a troll)
While-reading
Organise your draft.
Blog post
Title
Introduction
Body
Ending
Tell the main idea.
Tell the reader about yourself and what you know about the topic.
Tell the reader what they should do or keep in mind.
Define new words or key terms.
End by asking the readers to write comments.
04
Post-Writing
Today, I will blog about the security problems brought about by online shopping. There is no denying that online shopping brings us convenience along with disadvantages. Here are some useful tips as follows.
　　In the first place, don’t use unfamiliar websites no matter what attraction there is. Additionally, it is a good idea to use strong passwords, which are hard to crack. Lastly, we had better not use public computers to shop online,in which way personal information is easily taken advantage of by others.
　　Just as the saying goes, “Better safe than sorry.” Hope the network can serve us better and more safely.Do you have any more tips for how to surf the internet safely Let’s share!
Finish a draft
Introduction
Body
Ending
Does the writer tell the reader what he/she knows about the topic
Are the tips and suggestions well organised
Has the writer defined the new words
Does the author include examples,comparisons,or explanations
Does the writer end by asking readers to leave comments and/or suggestions
Can you find any grammar or spelling mistakes
Exchanged drafts with a partner.Use the checklist to help your partner revise his/her draft.
No. Items 15 is total 3 2 1 0
1 Does the writer tell the reader what he/she knows about the topic
2 Are the tips and suggestions well organised
3 Has the writer defined the new words？
4 Does the author include examples,comparisons,or explanations
5 Does the writer end by asking readers to leave comments and/or suggestions
6 Can you find any grammar or spelling mistakes
Total scores
Homework:
Revise and complete your blog, and read it to your classmates;
Read the blog post on Page 76 and finnish Activity 2 on Page 77.
Thank You!

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