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2025年新高考Ⅱ卷英语应用文深度评析
Ⅰ深度审题，理清文本特征
假定你是李华，你的外教答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 询问进度；
2. 提醒他的交稿日期。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
体裁：询问+提醒+体育运动
人称：第一人称
时态：一般现在时
要点：
表达对外教答应写文章的感谢或期待外教的文章；
礼貌询问进度；
提醒交稿日期
Ⅱ写作思路
开篇句：问候语+询问进度(写信目的)
询问进度是文章的写作目的，语气是委婉的、探询的，通过询问来了解情况、表达关心，而不是直接催促。
中间段：表达感谢/期待+提醒交稿日期+提出帮助意愿
表达对外教答应写文章的感谢或者期待他的文章，不仅体现了尊重，也让外教感受到自己的工作是被重视的，为后续的提醒奠定了积极的情感基础。
提醒日期要懂得沟通的艺术和策略，这个目的要“藏”在询问中，自然而然地带出。
主动提出“如果您需要任何帮助或有疑问，请随时告诉我”，这表明了不仅催稿，还愿意提供支持，非常体贴和周到。
结尾段：感谢+期待回复
尾段是致谢式结尾。
Ⅲ高分句式
开篇句：
I hope this message finds you well.（希望您一切安好。）
I’m writing to follow up on the progress of your article... I was wondering how...is coming along.（我写这封邮件是想了解一下……的进展情况。我想知道……是如何进展的。）
I am writing to know/ask for/inquire information about ...（我写信想询问有关……的信息。）
I would like to inquire some information on ... （我想得知一些有关……的信息。）
I wonder if you could tell me the following information. （我想你是否能告诉我以下信息。）
I am really grateful if you supply/provide me with the following information.（如果你能提供给我以下信息，我将不胜感激。）
中间段：
Thank you again for agreeing to write an article about...(再次感谢你答应写一篇关于……的文章。)
Our readers are really looking forward to learning about the rich sports culture in Canada through your vivid writing.（我们的读者真的期待通过你栩栩如生的写作了解加拿大丰富的运动文化。）
Given its significance in bridging cultural understanding, we eagerly anticipate your professional insights.(鉴于它在弥补文化理解上的重要性，我们非常期待您的专业洞察力。)
Just as a kind reminder, the final draft is due... to ensure ...（温馨提醒一下，终稿需在……前提交，以确保……）
Just a friendly reminder that the submission deadline is...（温馨提醒一下，交稿截止日期是……）
Considering the tight schedule, I would like to remind you that the submission deadline is ...（考虑到紧张的日程表，我想提醒你交稿截止日期是……）
To ensure editorial preparation, please note that the submission deadline is...（为了确保编辑准备，让注意交稿截止日期是……）
Please don’t hesitate to let me know if you need any additional resources or have questions. （如果你需要任何额外资源或有问题的话，请不要犹豫让我知道。）
If you need any assistance or have questions, please don’t hesitate to let me know.（如果您有任何疑问或需要帮助，欢迎随时联系我。）
结尾段：
We're all buzzing with anticipation and can't wait to see your work light up our school newspaper.（我们都满怀期待，迫不及待地想看到您的作品为我们的校报增光添彩。）
I would really appreciate it if... （如果……我将非常感激。）
Thank you again for your support. （再次感谢你的支持。）
Ⅲ实用词块
enhance our concentration and overall health增强我们的注意力和整体健康
keep us energized让我们保持精力充沛
stay fit 保持健康 reduce stress减轻压力
a simple yet effective activity一项简单却有效的活动
benefit both our physical health and mental well-being对我们的身心健康都有益
improve our physical health改善我们的身体健康
have a positive impact on our mental well-being 对我们的心理健康产生积极影响 cultural significance文化意义
deepen our understanding of the vital role health plays in our lives 加深我们对健康在我们生活中重要性的理解
deepen our mutual understanding of each other’s cultural heritage and traditional sports加深我们对彼此文化遗产和传统体育的相互理解
immerse yourself in the vibrant sports沉浸在充满活力的体育活动中
showcase our athletic abilities展示我们的运动能力
promote teamwork促进团队合作
enjoy witnessing this vibrant event firsthand亲身享受这一充满活力的活动
Ⅳ下水作文
第1篇
Dear Mr. Smith,
I hope this email finds you well.（问候语） I’m writing to kindly inquire about the progress of the article about Canadian sports, which you've generously agreed to write for our school’s English newsletter. (询问进度)
Many students have expressed curiosity about the sports culture in your country and we are really excited to share it with our readers! （表达期待）Therefore, just a friendly reminder that the submission deadline is June 15th, as we need time for editing and layout.(提醒截止日期） Please let me know if you need any assistance or an extension—we’d be glad to help! （表达帮助意愿）
Thank you again for contributing your expertise. （感谢） Looking forward to hearing from you soon.（期待回复）
Yours,
Li Hua
第2篇
Dear Mr. / Ms. ...,
I hope this email finds you in good spirits.（问候语） I’m writing to inquire/ask about the article you kindly agreed to write on Canadian sports. （写作目的：询问）
Our readers are really looking forward to learning about the rich sports culture in Canada through your vivid writing.（表达期待） We are convinced that it can deepen our understanding of the vital role health plays in our lives.（体育） I was wondering how the article is progressing.（询问进度） If you’ve completed some parts and would like to share them, I’d be more than happy to take a look and offer any help needed. Also, I’d like to gently remind you that the submission deadline is next Monday, June 16th.（提醒日期）This allows sufficient time for proofreading and layout adjustments.
Once again, thank you for your support. （感谢）Please feel free to let me know if you need any further information or assistance.（表达帮助意愿） I’m eagerly anticipating your wonderful work!
Best regards,
Li Hua
第3篇
Dear Mr. Smith,
I hope this email finds you well.（问候语） I am writing to kindly check on the progress of your article introducing sports in Canada, which is scheduled to be featured in our school magazine’s next edition.（询问进度） Given that the editing process is time-consuming, we would appreciate it if you could provide an update on your writing. Should you require any reference materials or assistance, please do not hesitate to let me know. （表达帮助意愿）
Considering the tight schedule, I would like to remind you that the submission deadline is June 15th. （提醒日期）Only if we receive your article on time can we proceed with the layout and proofreading without delay. Your contribution is highly valued, because it can deepen our mutual understanding of each other’s cultural heritage and Canadian sports culture. (体育)
Thank you for your cooperation and effort. （感谢）I look forward to your prompt reply. （期待回复）
Best regards,
Li Hua
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