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(共15张PPT)
To read two letters and complete a table
To analyse the organization of the letters
To learn to write a letter about one aspect of your own lifestyle that you would like to change
Teaching Objectives
At the end of this lesson, you will be able to:
Key Point: Analyze the structure of problem-solution letters
Difficulties: imitate the structure and language of the two letters
Unit 2 Healthy Lifestyle
Using Language in Writing
Write A Letter To The Editor About Your Lifestyle
Watch and Think
How can we them into good ones
Facing the terrible lifestyle, what should we do
change
stay up late
overeat junk food
lack exercise
overuse phones
sleepy/dizzy
fat/overweight
lack passion
fall ill
Raise questions
attended the summer camp organised by the magazine Healthy Life and wrote to the editor.
What would they write in their letters
Wang Lu & George Fielding
Read for details
Pay attention to the expressions about problem & decision & action& result.
Wang Lu
Problem ●did not feel _______
●felt _______________, lacked _______
●got _________, experienced ______________
Decision ●to ________________
●to ________________
Action ●stopped __________________________________
●exercises every day for ______________
Result ●more ____________________ in_______________
●sleeps _______,no longer _____________________
●feels like________________________
well
sleepy and dizzy
passion
flu easily
many toothaches
eat no sugar
exercise regularly
buying sweets, biscuits, and sugary drinks
at least 30 minutes
dynamic and stronger
both body and mind
soundly
suffers from flu or toothaches
in control of her own life
made up my mind to change...
Letter 1
What motivate Wang Lu to change Why
“Change the world by changing yourself.”
Most worrying, ...
fantastic
did
felt
got
lacked
experienced
sleeps
feels
Use the past tense to describe the problem
Use the present tense to describe the result
George Fielding
Problem ●felt___________
●felt even more _________ after _____________
____________________
Decision ●to_____________________________________ ___________
Action ●goes_____________________________
Result ●feels much more_________________
●feels he can________________________
stressed out
worn out
playing
computer games
take control of his life and find other ways to relax
rock climbing monthly with his dad
energetic
change himself for the better
realised... decided to...
Letter 2
enhance...improve...increase
get freshed
It was a big struggle...
hardly felt well, either physically or mentally
felt stressed out; worn out
feel more dynamic
stronger in both body and mind
more energetic
What impress/inspire you most
Changes
physically and mentally healthy
Discuss
To make choices about myself is within my power.
I CAN change myself.
I just need to try.
I can change myself for the better.
I can change the world for the better.
Be the change you want to see in the world.
Reflect and think
Organize and write
The magazine Healthy Life is organising this year's summer camp. They invite interested students to write to the editor about how they plan to change their bad habits.
how
change bad habits
Write to the editor about how you plan to change your bad habits. The first and last paragraphs have been given to you.
Dear Editor,
Having read two letters about their successful experiences in your summer camp, I am writing to share something with you about my lifestyle.
Last few months, I felt so stressed that I got into a habit of overeating a lot of junk food and snacks. Besides, I did little exercise. As a result, I put on so much weight that I found I couldn’t put on my previous jeans and got flu easily. I felt so depressed that I made up my mind to change myself. Because I want to be able to feel happy with how I look and become healthy. So I decided to change the unhealthy lifestyle. Not only will I begin to have a balanced diet, but I will also take an active part in various sports activities such as swimming and jogging. I have great confidence in myself that I can lose my weight and become as fit as before.
I eagerly want to attend your summer camp to change myself for better.
Yours,
Jennifer
problem
decision
action
expected result
Content (tick√ if yes)
1. Does the letter say what the problem is
2. Does the letter explain the decisions the writer made to solve the problem
3. Does the letter show the ways to change
4. Are the expected results included in the letter
5. Does the writer use the correct tense
Evaluate
Checklist
The greatest wealth is health.
The greatest enemy of life is oneself.
As long as you want to change, the world will make way for you.
Assignment
1. Revise your writing.
2. Read the passage in P71 about the Internet Addict and make a leaflet entitled Say NO to Internet Addict.
Thank you !

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