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(共14张PPT)
Sports and fitness
Period 5
( Writing)
1.To learn some useful words and phrases
2.To learn to write an exposition about health
3.To pay more attention to your health
Learning aims
Lead in
Do you have these bad habits
What health problems will they cause
1.join a club
2.work out/play sports/take exercise
3.build up your strength
4.keep a balanced diet
5.make a difference
6.however/but instead
Some useful expressions
Pre-writing
参加俱乐部
锻炼
强健体魄
保持平衡饮食
有作用/影响
但是
相反
7.be worried/anxious/concerned about... 担心...
8.try one’s best/make every effort to do sth. 尽力去...
9.instead of/rather than 而不是
10.be able to do sth. 能够做...
11.for one thing...for another...一方面...另一方面...
12.both...and...既...又... not only...but also...不仅...而且...
Some sentences to describe your health problems
1.I used to have some pain on my back/in my neck.
2.I was always worried about my weight/appearance in the past.
3.I looked very skinny two years ago, which annoyed me a lot.
4.I always fell ill in my childhood, which was really annoying.
5.Previously,keeping fit was really a big challenge.
Some actions you can take to improve your health
1.First, I joined some sports clubs and take exercise 3 times a week.
2.Besides,I paid more attention to my diet and ate more healthy
food like fruit and vegetables.
3.Most importantly, I tried my best to keep a good state of mind.
4.Instead, I added more healthy food to my meals.
5.I went to the gym regularly and cut out junk food.
Some sentences to describe your present health status
1.Working out really made a great difference to my life.
2.For one thing, I became healthier physically. For another, I felt
happier than before.
3.Not only am I able to build up my strength, but also I can enjoy
my colorful school life better.
4.It was since then that I have become healthier both physically
and mentally.
One model version
In the past, I was always worried about my....Keeping fit was really a big challenge. But I tried the following things to make some change.
First of all, I joined some sports clubs like...and.... Besides, I paid more attention to ... and ....Most importantly, I tried my best to ....
What I did really made a great difference to me.Not only am I able to ..., but also I can ....
While writing
假设你是李华,过去你一直因为身体瘦弱、爱生病而苦恼。后来你去俱乐部参加锻炼。通过坚持适量的锻炼，你现在不仅身体健康了,而且更加自信了。请你写一篇短文,介绍自己的健康状况。
注意:80词左右。
【审题谋篇】
体裁 介绍健康状况说明文
人称 第一人称
时态 一般过去时为主一般现在时为辅
话题 健康
框架 第一段:过去身体存在问题
第二段:采取的行动和变化;
第三段:现在的身体状况。
I am Li Hua. I used to be very slim and weak and often fell ill, which made me annoyed. But I tried the following things to make some change.
Firstly, I joined a fitness club where I kept working out every day. What's more, compared with the past, I have a more balanced diet. My efforts made a great difference. Rather than go to the hospital, I would go to the gym regularly now. Working out regularly has built up my strength greatly.
Now not only am I healthier but I am also more confident.
One possible version
Homework
假定你是李华，因为学习压力大，焦虑，经常熬夜，健康出现了状况（如易感冒等），后来经过采取一些措施，你现在比以前身心更加健康。请你写一篇短文,介绍自己健康状况的改变。
注意：80词左右
Thank you!

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