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写作主题三　活动报道
——确定写作要点
　　（2023 1月浙江卷）上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：
　　1.活动的过程；
　　2.收获与感想。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
　　
　　
　　
　　
　　
——探究失分原因
1.对活动过程的介绍不够具体或违背事实
有些学生在写作时，思维往往聚焦于词汇或句式的表达，忽略了写作内容与真实生活的密切联系，违背了写作的初衷。
In the activity，we were exposed to thousands of plants， some of which we were unfamiliar with ...
结合标题可知，thousands of表述不切实际，应改为 varieties of。
事实上，“认识我们身边的植物”这一活动应该是组织有序、有目的、有意义的教育教学活动。学生应该从科学的角度去描述这次活动。
In the morning， an expert delivered a lecture， introducing ...After that， we ...The highlight of this activity was ... which ...
2.结尾随意性强
很多学生在写活动介绍类作文时，往往对结尾部分关注不够，出现草草收尾的现象。其实，结尾部分语言虽然需要简短，但一定要对全文进行总结，并凸显此次活动的意义。
本文结尾可使用 ...a valuable and rewarding experience来总结这项活动，用 ...think/speak highly of ...来说明参加者对这次活动的高度评价。
——规范答题架构
新闻报道是记叙文的一种，其特点是以事实为依据，对人物的经历或某项活动进行实事求是的报道。写作过程中要保持事件的真实性、准确性，语言要简洁明了、通俗易懂，不必过分追求花哨的词汇和复杂的句型。具体写作架构为：
——储备靓点表达
1.吸引阅卷人的开头句——简要概括，提纲挈领
①（2025 盐城考前指导）Last Friday， the Campus Recycling Fair took place on the central square， which turned out to be a great success.
②（2025 齐鲁名校第五次联考）Last Sunday， a wonderful Chinese martial arts competition was held in the playground of our school in order to enrich students’ school lives and build up body.
③（2025 辽宁省名校联盟联考）Last week， a lecture on career planning was held in our school hall， which aimed to guide students to plan for future development.
2.吸引阅卷人的篇中句——详细叙述，娓娓道来
①（2025 盐城考前指导）Aimed at cultivating our awareness of a low－carbon lifestyle， the fair attracted dynamic participation.Students exchanged used textbooks and electronics， while interactive stands displayed up－cycled artworks.The most impressive part was that there were even DIY workshops that taught creative ways to repurpose old items.
②（2025 齐鲁名校第五次联考）Participants from different classes showed their skills in various forms of martial arts， such as kick boxing， Tai Chi and Shaolin Kung Fu.
③（2025 辽宁省名校联盟联考）Finally， the event concluded with students actively participating in discussions and Q & A sessions.
3.吸引阅卷人的结尾句——总结评论，主旨升华
①（2025 盐城考前指导）The fair not only gave belongings a second life， but also strengthened us students’ commitment to sustainability.Small actions， when united， can create real changes for our planet.
②（2025 齐鲁名校第五次联考）In short， not only did the event enhance students’ physical fitness but also deepened their understanding of Chinese martial arts.
——研读满分佳作
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
　　Last Sunday witnessed an activity on the theme of “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us”，which involved all students in Senior One.【介绍活动和参加人员】
　　The activity began with a lecture where we learned how to identify various plants depending on their characteristics.Following that，we set out to explore the environment and were fascinated by the incredible varieties of plants.Finally，we collected some maple leaves as a reminder of the discovery journey to the plant world.【活动过程】
　　Undoubtedly， we gained much knowledge of plants and have become interested in them through this meaningful activity.【收获与感想】
——冲击满分作文
　　（2025 德州三模）你班周末到社区康养中心（Care Home）开展了“教老人使用一个新APP”的活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
　　（1）活动目的；
　　（2）过程及效果；
　　（3）你的感悟。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Tech Fun for Seniors
　　
　　
　　
　　
　　
　　
写作主题三　活动报道
勤演练
Tech Fun for Seniors
　　Last weekend， our class visited the local Care Home to teach the elderly how to use a new APP.
　　We were divided into groups and patiently showed them how to download， install， and use the APP’s features， like video calls and health monitoring.The seniors were eager to learn， and many quickly mastered the basics.
　　This activity not only helped the seniors embrace new technology but also strengthened our bond with the community.It was a rewarding experience for everyone involved， and we felt proud to make a difference in their lives.
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写作主题三　活动报道
——确定写作要点
　　（2023·1月浙江卷）上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我
们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：
　　1. 活动的过程；
　　2. 收获与感想。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
　　　 　　　　　　 　　　　　　 　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　 　
　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　 　
——探究失分原因
1. 对活动过程的介绍不够具体或违背事实
有些学生在写作时，思维往往聚焦于词汇或句式的表达，忽略了写作
内容与真实生活的密切联系，违背了写作的初衷。
In the activity，we were exposed to thousands of plants， some of which
we were unfamiliar with ...
结合标题可知，thousands of表述不切实际，应改为 varieties of。
事实上，“认识我们身边的植物”这一活动应该是组织有序、有
目的、有意义的教育教学活动。学生应该从科学的角度去描述这
次活动。
In the morning， an expert delivered a lecture， introducing ...After
that， we ...The highlight of this activity was ... which ...
2. 结尾随意性强
很多学生在写活动介绍类作文时，往往对结尾部分关注不够，出现草
草收尾的现象。其实，结尾部分语言虽然需要简短，但一定要对全文
进行总结，并凸显此次活动的意义。
本文结尾可使用 ...a valuable and rewarding experience来总结这
项活动，用 ...think/speak highly of ...来说明参加者对这次活动
的高度评价。
——规范答题架构
新闻报道是记叙文的一种，其特点是以事实为依据，对人物的经历或
某项活动进行实事求是的报道。写作过程中要保持事件的真实性、准
确性，语言要简洁明了、通俗易懂，不必过分追求花哨的词汇和复杂
的句型。具体写作架构为：
——储备靓点表达
1. 吸引阅卷人的开头句——简要概括，提纲挈领
①（2025·盐城考前指导）Last Friday， the Campus Recycling Fair
took place on the central square， which turned out to be a great
success.
②（2025·齐鲁名校第五次联考）Last Sunday， a wonderful Chinese
martial arts competition was held in the playground of our school in order
to enrich students’ school lives and build up body.
③（2025·辽宁省名校联盟联考）Last week， a lecture on career
planning was held in our school hall， which aimed to guide students to
plan for future development.
2. 吸引阅卷人的篇中句——详细叙述，娓娓道来
①（2025·盐城考前指导）Aimed at cultivating our awareness of a low-
carbon lifestyle， the fair attracted dynamic participation.Students
exchanged used textbooks and electronics， while interactive stands
displayed up-cycled artworks.The most impressive part was that there
were even DIY workshops that taught creative ways to repurpose old
items.
②（2025·齐鲁名校第五次联考）Participants from different classes
showed their skills in various forms of martial arts， such as kick
boxing， Tai Chi and Shaolin Kung Fu.
③（2025·辽宁省名校联盟联考）Finally， the event concluded with
students actively participating in discussions and Q & A sessions.
3. 吸引阅卷人的结尾句——总结评论，主旨升华
①（2025·盐城考前指导）The fair not only gave belongings a second
life， but also strengthened us students’ commitment to
sustainability.Small actions， when united， can create real changes
for our planet.
②（2025·齐鲁名校第五次联考）In short， not only did the event
enhance students’ physical fitness but also deepened their
understanding of Chinese martial arts.
——研读满分佳作
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
　　Last Sunday witnessed an activity on the theme of “Getting to Know
the Plants Around Us”，which involved all students in Senior One.【介
绍活动和参加人员】
　　The activity began with a lecture where we learned how to identify
various plants depending on their characteristics.Following that，we set
out to explore the environment and were fascinated by the incredible
varieties of plants.Finally，we collected some maple leaves as a reminder
of the discovery journey to the plant world.【活动过程】
Undoubtedly， we gained much knowledge of plants and have
become interested in them through this meaningful activity.【收获
与感想】
——冲击满分作文
　　（2025·德州三模）你班周末到社区康养中心（Care Home）开
展了“教老人使用一个新APP”的活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报
道，内容包括：
　　（1）活动目的；
　　（2）过程及效果；
　　（3）你的感悟。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Tech Fun for Seniors
　　　 　　　　　　 　　　　　　 　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　 　
　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　 　
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Tech Fun for Seniors
　　Last weekend， our class visited the local Care Home to teach the
elderly how to use a new APP.
　　We were divided into groups and patiently showed them how to
download， install， and use the APP’s features， like video calls and
health monitoring.The seniors were eager to learn， and many quickly
mastered the basics.
　　This activity not only helped the seniors embrace new technology but
also strengthened our bond with the community.It was a rewarding
experience for everyone involved， and we felt proud to make a difference
in their lives.
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