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写作主题四　介绍推荐
——确定写作要点
　　（2025 八省联考）假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友Beth想学打乒乓球，发邮件向你求教。请给她回封邮件，内容包括：
　　（1）表示支持；
　　（2）推荐教练。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear Beth，
　　Glad to know that you want to learn to play table tennis.　　
　　
　　
　　
　　
　　
Yours，
Li Hua
——探究失分原因
1.推荐内容表述过少
有些学生在写作时，就“推荐内容”这一要点常常一句话带过，使主要要点变成了次要要点，如只用“I recommend Mr Zhang.He is good.” ，未说明教练的专业背景、教学特点或适合留学生的优势，无法体现 “推荐” 的合理性，属于关键信息遗漏，可能被扣分至 “内容不完整” 档次。
2.推荐语言不够委婉
还有些学生在写作时很容易忽略推荐信的委婉表达。因此，推荐语言应更符合英语交际习惯，避免因 “语气生硬” 失分，同时展现对跨文化沟通细节的把握。
——规范答题架构
推荐信既可以推荐人也可以推荐事物。具体写作架构为：
——储备靓点表达
1.吸引阅卷人的开头句——开篇表意
①（2025 威海模拟）For the upcoming English Festival， I’d like to propose an English Debate Competition with the theme “Voice Your Opinion!”
②（2025 江西省部分校联考）Knowing that you’re planning to visit China this summer， I’d like to recommend a wonderful tourist destination to you.
③（2025 成都第三次诊断）I’m writing to recommend two topics for the “Safety” column of our school English newspaper.
2.吸引阅卷人的篇中句——推荐理由
①（2025 成都第三次诊断）Firstly， food safety matters because what we eat directly affects our health.With food safety issues emerging frequently， students need to learn how to identify safe food and keep a healthy diet.
②（2025 成都第三次诊断）Moreover， as for information safety， in the digital age， where personal information is easily leaked， it is crucial for us to understand how to protect our data， such as passwords and private messages， from being misused.
③Last but not least， by discussing these books， we students can engage in lively debates， exchange ideas， and broaden our perspectives， all enhancing our critical thinking skills.
3.吸引阅卷人的结尾句——表达希望
①（2025 威海模拟）I firmly believe that this event will help students build confidence， improve their critical thinking， and make the festival even more exciting and unforgettable.
②（2025 成都第三次诊断）I hope these suggestions can be helpful.Looking forward to reading the column.
③Hope my recommendation（s） will be of great help to you.Wish you a pleasant journey!
——研读满分佳作
Dear Beth，
　　I’m more than delighted to know that you want to learn to play table tennis.It’s a great sport that’s both fun and good for you.I highly support your decision， as it will not only improve your skills but also help you make new friends.【表示支持学乒乓球】
　　As for the coach， I highly recommend Coach Zhang， who has rich experience in teaching table tennis and is very patient with beginners.He can teach you various skills and techniques step by step.Many of his students have made great progress under his guidance.I’m convinced that you’ll benefit a lot from his lessons.【推荐对象及陈述推荐理由】
　　Let me know if you need more information.Enjoy your training!【表达期待】
Yours，
Li Hua
——冲击满分作文
　　（2025 山西省高三押题考试）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 John打算来中国进行研学游（study tour），请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
　　（1）推荐一个目的地；
　　（2）说明推荐理由。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear John，
　　I’m thrilled to hear about your upcoming study tour to China!　　
　　
　　
　　
　　
　　
Yours，
Li Hua
写作主题四　介绍推荐
勤演练
Dear John，
　　I’m thrilled to hear about your upcoming study tour to China! I highly recommend Beijing as your destination.As the capital city， Beijing offers a perfect combination of history， culture， and modern education.
　　Firstly， Beijing is home to world－famous historical sites like the Great Wall and the Forbidden City， which provide firsthand insights into China’s rich heritage.Secondly， it hosts top universities such as Peking University， where you can attend lectures or workshops.Additionally， the city’s efficient public transport makes traveling convenient.Don’t forget to try local delicacies like Peking duck， which make your trip unforgettable!
　　I do hope that you can find my recommendation beneficial.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
3 / 3(共17张PPT)
写作主题四　介绍推荐
——确定写作要点
　　（2025·八省联考）假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友Beth想学打
乒乓球，发邮件向你求教。请给她回封邮件，内容包括：
　　（1）表示支持；
　　（2）推荐教练。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear Beth，
　　Glad to know that you want to learn to play table tennis. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　
Yours，
Li Hua
　 　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　 　
　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　 　
——探究失分原因
1. 推荐内容表述过少
有些学生在写作时，就“推荐内容”这一要点常常一句话带过，使主
要要点变成了次要要点，如只用“I recommend Mr Zhang.He is
good.” ，未说明教练的专业背景、教学特点或适合留学生的优势，
无法体现 “推荐” 的合理性，属于关键信息遗漏，可能被扣分至
“内容不完整” 档次。
2. 推荐语言不够委婉
还有些学生在写作时很容易忽略推荐信的委婉表达。因此，推荐语言
应更符合英语交际习惯，避免因 “语气生硬” 失分，同时展现对跨
文化沟通细节的把握。
——规范答题架构
推荐信既可以推荐人也可以推荐事物。具体写作架构为：
——储备靓点表达
1. 吸引阅卷人的开头句——开篇表意
①（2025·威海模拟）For the upcoming English Festival， I’d like to
propose an English Debate Competition with the theme “Voice Your
Opinion！”
②（2025·江西省部分校联考）Knowing that you’re planning to visit
China this summer， I’d like to recommend a wonderful tourist
destination to you.
③（2025·成都第三次诊断）I’m writing to recommend two topics
for the “Safety” column of our school English newspaper.
2. 吸引阅卷人的篇中句——推荐理由
①（2025·成都第三次诊断）Firstly， food safety matters because
what we eat directly affects our health.With food safety issues emerging
frequently， students need to learn how to identify safe food and keep a
healthy diet.
②（2025·成都第三次诊断）Moreover， as for information safety，
in the digital age， where personal information is easily leaked， it is
crucial for us to understand how to protect our data， such as passwords
and private messages， from being misused.
③Last but not least， by discussing these books， we students can
engage in lively debates， exchange ideas， and broaden our
perspectives， all enhancing our critical thinking skills.
3. 吸引阅卷人的结尾句——表达希望
①（2025·威海模拟）I firmly believe that this event will help students
build confidence， improve their critical thinking， and make the festival
even more exciting and unforgettable.
②（2025·成都第三次诊断）I hope these suggestions can be helpful.
Looking forward to reading the column.
③Hope my recommendation（s） will be of great help to you.Wish you
a pleasant journey！
——研读满分佳作
Dear Beth，
　　I’m more than delighted to know that you want to learn to play table
tennis.It’s a great sport that’s both fun and good for you.I highly
support your decision， as it will not only improve your skills but also
help you make new friends.【表示支持学乒乓球】
　　As for the coach， I highly recommend Coach Zhang， who has rich
experience in teaching table tennis and is very patient with beginners.He
can teach you various skills and techniques step by step.Many of his
students have made great progress under his guidance.I’m convinced that
you’ll benefit a lot from his lessons.【推荐对象及陈述推荐理由】
　　Let me know if you need more information.Enjoy your training！
【表达期待】
Yours，
Li Hua
——冲击满分作文
　　（2025·山西省高三押题考试）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友
John打算来中国进行研学游（study tour），请你用英语给他写一封电
子邮件，内容包括：
　　（1）推荐一个目的地；
　　（2）说明推荐理由。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear John，
　　I’m thrilled to hear about your upcoming study tour to China！ 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Yours，
Li Hua
　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　 　
　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　 　
参考范文：
Dear John，
　　I’m thrilled to hear about your upcoming study tour to China！ I
highly recommend Beijing as your destination.As the capital city，
Beijing offers a perfect combination of history， culture， and modern
education.
　　Firstly， Beijing is home to world-famous historical sites like the
Great Wall and the Forbidden City， which provide firsthand insights into
China’s rich heritage.Secondly， it hosts top universities such as Peking
University， where you can attend lectures or workshops.Additionally，
the city’s efficient public transport makes traveling convenient.Don’t
forget to try local delicacies like Peking duck， which make your trip
unforgettable！
　　I do hope that you can find my recommendation beneficial.Looking
forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
THANKS
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