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40分写作规范增分练（二）
（建议用时40分钟）
第一节（满分15分）
　　（2025 昆明“三诊一模”质量检测）你校上周五开展了一项主题为“Growing Together： Tree Tagging Campaign”的活动，为校园树木挂牌做介绍。请你向校英文报投稿报道此次活动，内容包括：
　　（1）活动介绍；（2）你的感受。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；（2）请按如下格式作答。
A Special Tree Tagging Campaign
　 　
　 　
　 　
　 　
第二节（满分25分）
　　阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
　　（2025 湖北省“新八校”协作体模拟）It was an unusually quiet morning in the emergency room on 25 December.Quiet， that is， except for the nurses standing around the nurses’ station complaining about having to work on Christmas Day.
　　I was triage nurse （分诊护士） that day， and was having a cup of hot drink in the nurses’ station when an admitting clerk came to tell me I had five patients waiting to be evaluated.
　　I whined （哭嚷着）， “Five， how did I get five!”
　　So I went straight out and called the first name.Five bodies showed up at my triage desk， a pale skinny woman and four small children in somewhat messy clothing.
　　“Are you all sick？” I asked suspiciously.
　　“Yes，” she said weakly， lowering her head.
　　“Okay，” I replied， unconvinced， “who’s first？” One by one they sat down， and I asked the usual questions.When it came to descriptions of their presenting problems， things got a little strange.Two of the children had headaches， but the headaches weren’t accompanied by the normal body language of holding the head or trying to keep it still painfully.Two children had earaches， but only one could tell me which ear was affected.The mother complained of a cough， but seemed to work to produce it.
　　Something was wrong.When I explained to the mother that it might be a little while before a doctor saw her because， even though the waiting room was empty， ambulances had brought in several more critical patients in the back， she responded， “Take your time! It’s warm in here.” She turned and， with a smile， guided her children into the waiting room.
　　I checked the chart after the admitting clerk had finished registering the family.No address — they were homeless.The waiting room was warm.
　　I went back to the nurses station and mentioned the homeless family in the waiting room.The nurses， complaining about working on Christmas， turned to showing sympathy for a family just trying to get warm on Christmas.
注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右；（2）请按如下格式作答。
The nurses went into action.　 　
　 　
　 　
　 　
　 　
The “party” lasted into the late afternoon. 　
　 　
　 　
　 　
　 　
40分写作规范增分练（二）
第一节
A Special Tree Tagging Campaign
　　Last Friday witnessed an amazing and meaningful activity themed “Growing Together： Tree Tagging Campaign” in our campus.
　　The event was held to raise students’ awareness of the importance of trees and encourage them to take responsibility for their campus greenery.In this activity， students placed informational signs on various trees around the campus， providing details about their species， age， and ecological significance.They were all excited through the whole process， expecting to grow together with these trees.
　　Not only is this campaign an eye－opening experience to learn more about the trees， but it is also a way to make a contribution to environment protection.
第二节
　　The nurses went into action.Some claimed meals from the hospital cafeteria and prepared a banquet for our Christmas guests.Some prepared presents like candies and baskets of fruits.We took turns joining the “Christmas party” in the waiting room.Each nurse took his or her lunch break with the family， choosing to spend their “off duty” time with these people whose laughter and delightful chatter became quite contagious.
　　The “party” lasted into the late afternoon.Enveloped by the cozy atmosphere， the family enjoyed our company， contentment etched on their faces.At the same time， we were able to locate a shelter that would take the family in that night.When it was time for them to depart， the youngest came running towards me， hugged me tightly and whispered in my ear， “Thanks for being our angels today.” As she ran back to join her family， they all waved one more time before the door closed.I turned around slowly to get back to work， a little embarrassed for the tears in my eyes.What a memorable working Christmas!
语篇解读：本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个无家可归的家庭为了取暖来到急诊室，护士们最初对在圣诞节工作抱怨不已，但了解到这个家庭的困境后，他们决定采取行动，为这个家庭创造一个温暖的圣诞节。这个故事展现了人性的善良和同情心。
【写作思路】　
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句（护士们开始行动起来）可知，第一段可描写护士们如何帮助这个家庭，包括为他们准备食物、礼物等，以及护士们如何与这个家庭互动。
②由第二段首句（“聚会”一直持续到傍晚）可知，第二段可描写这个家庭和护士们在一起的氛围，以及护士们为他们找到住所的过程，最后这个家庭离开时的情景。
2.续写线索： 护士们行动——准备食物和礼物——与家庭互动——营造温暖氛围——找到住所——家庭离开——感悟。
2 / 2(共16张PPT)
40分写作规范增分练（二）
（建议用时40分钟）
第一节（满分15分）
　　（2025·昆明“三诊一模”质量检测）你校上周五开展了一项主
题为“Growing Together： Tree Tagging Campaign”的活动，为校园树
木挂牌做介绍。请你向校英文报投稿报道此次活动，内容包括：
　　（1）活动介绍；
　　（2）你的感受。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
A Special Tree Tagging Campaign
　　　 　　　　　　 　　　　　　 　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　 　
　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　 　
参考范文：
A Special Tree Tagging Campaign
　　Last Friday witnessed an amazing and meaningful activity themed
“Growing Together： Tree Tagging Campaign” in our campus.
　　The event was held to raise students’ awareness of the importance of
trees and encourage them to take responsibility for their campus
greenery.In this activity， students placed informational signs on various
trees around the campus， providing details about their species， age，
and ecological significance.They were all excited through the whole
process， expecting to grow together with these trees.
　　Not only is this campaign an eye-opening experience to learn more
about the trees， but it is also a way to make a contribution to environment
protection.
第二节（满分25分）
　　阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构
成一篇完整的短文。
　　（2025·湖北省“新八校”协作体模拟）It was an unusually quiet
morning in the emergency room on 25 December.Quiet， that is， except
for the nurses standing around the nurses’ station complaining about
having to work on Christmas Day.
　　I was triage nurse （分诊护士） that day， and was having a cup of
hot drink in the nurses’ station when an admitting clerk came to tell me I
had five patients waiting to be evaluated.
　　I whined （哭嚷着）， “Five， how did I get five！”
　　So I went straight out and called the first name.Five bodies showed
up at my triage desk， a pale skinny woman and four small children in
somewhat messy clothing.
　　“Are you all sick？” I asked suspiciously.
　　“Yes，” she said weakly， lowering her head.
　　“Okay，” I replied， unconvinced， “who’s first？” One by
one they sat down， and I asked the usual questions.When it came to
descriptions of their presenting problems， things got a little strange.Two
of the children had headaches， but the headaches weren’t accompanied
by the normal body language of holding the head or trying to keep it still
painfully.Two children had earaches， but only one could tell me which
ear was affected.The mother complained of a cough， but seemed to work
to produce it.
　　Something was wrong.When I explained to the mother that it might
be a little while before a doctor saw her because， even though the waiting
room was empty， ambulances had brought in several more critical
patients in the back， she responded， “Take your time！ It’s warm in
here.” She turned and， with a smile， guided her children into the
waiting room.
　　I checked the chart after the admitting clerk had finished registering
the family.No address — they were homeless.The waiting room was
warm.
　　I went back to the nurses station and mentioned the homeless family
in the waiting room.The nurses， complaining about working on
Christmas， turned to showing sympathy for a family just trying to get
warm on Christmas.
注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
　　The nurses went into action. 　
　　　 　　　　　　 　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　 　
　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　 　
　The “party” lasted into the late afternoon. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　
　　 　　　　 　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　 　
　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　 　
参考范文：
　　The nurses went into action.Some claimed meals from the hospital
cafeteria and prepared a banquet for our Christmas guests.Some prepared
presents like candies and baskets of fruits.We took turns joining the
“Christmas party” in the waiting room.Each nurse took his or her lunch
break with the family， choosing to spend their “off duty” time with
these people whose laughter and delightful chatter became quite
contagious.
　　The “party” lasted into the late afternoon.Enveloped by the cozy
atmosphere， the family enjoyed our company， contentment etched on
their faces.At the same time， we were able to locate a shelter that would
take the family in that night.When it was time for them to depart， the
youngest came running towards me， hugged me tightly and whispered in
my ear， “Thanks for being our angels today.” As she ran back to join
her family， they all waved one more time before the door closed.I turned around slowly to get back to work， a little embarrassed for the tears in
my eyes.What a memorable working Christmas！
语篇解读：本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个无家可归的家庭为
了取暖来到急诊室，护士们最初对在圣诞节工作抱怨不已，但了解
到这个家庭的困境后，他们决定采取行动，为这个家庭创造一个温
暖的圣诞节。这个故事展现了人性的善良和同情心。
【写作思路】
1. 段落续写： 　
①由第一段首句（护士们开始行动起来）可知，第一段可描写护士们
如何帮助这个家庭，包括为他们准备食物、礼物等，以及护士们如何
与这个家庭互动。
②由第二段首句（“聚会”一直持续到傍晚）可知，第二段可描写这
个家庭和护士们在一起的氛围，以及护士们为他们找到住所的过程，
最后这个家庭离开时的情景。
2. 续写线索： 护士们行动——准备食物和礼物——与家庭互动——
营造温暖氛围——找到住所——家庭离开——感悟。
THANKS
演示完毕 感谢观看40分写作规范增分练（六）
（建议用时40分钟）
第一节（满分15分）
　　（2025 合肥教学质量检测）假定你是李华，上周你参加了学校举办的以“绿色能源与未来生活”为主题的科学大讲堂活动。请你给外教Ryan写一封电子邮件，分享这次经历，内容包括：
　　（1）活动介绍；（2）你的收获。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear Mr Ryan，
　 　
　 　
　 　
　 　
Yours，
Li Hua
第二节（满分25分）
　　阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
　　（2025 四川绵阳三模）The piano looked like a giant black beast under the bright lights.My hands shook as I waited backstage.This was the biggest competition of my life， but all I could think about was Mom’s pale face when I left her hospital room this morning.
　　Four weeks ago， everything changed.Mom had a car accident and needed to stay in hospital.My piano teacher， Mr Harris， said， “You’re messing up the fast parts， Jake.You need to practice every day.” But how could I tell him I’d been practicing on an old， even broken piano in the hospital？ Some of the keys didn’t even work.
　　The week before the competition， snow coated the streets.A nurse texted me： Mom’s fever wouldn’t go down.I had determined to quit the competition but Mom insisted that she was OK and made me promise to compete， even with her sunken eyes and cracked （干裂的） lips.I was so anxious.When Mr Harris saw me staring at the piano， dull and hopeless， he said， “Maybe you should skip this one.No one will blame you.” “I’m doing it.” I interrupted， determined to keep up.
　　Then came the big day.Backstage， some kids were practicing like crazy.My stomach ached.The broken C key on the hospital piano kept coming to my mind — that note was important for my piece.I’d practiced keeping the beat of music on Mom’s table bedside， air－typing the missing note on my jeans.
　　Now it was my turn.The piano seat felt colder than the hospital chair.Bright lights made my eyes water.For a second， I forgot the first note， but my fingers remembered — the sad， slow opening tune poured out like Mom’s smile.I pretended I was back at the hospital piano.When the missing note came， I pressed the D key instead， turning mistakes into something brave.In the end， my shirt stuck to my back.The last note hung in the air over the silent hall.With the crowd exploding suddenly， I rose to my feet slowly and walked to the center of the stage， smiling as I bowed to the audience in gratitude.Then I headed backstage.
注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右；（2）请按如下格式作答。
Mr Harris was waiting for me there， his eyes red.　 　
　 　
　 　
　 　
I rushed to the hospital and handed my silver medal to Mom. 　
　 　
　 　
　 　
40分写作规范增分练（六）
第一节
Dear Mr Ryan，
　　Hope this letter finds you well.Last week， I attended a science lecture themed “Green Energy and Future Life” at our school.It was fascinating!
　　The speaker explained various types of green energy like solar and wind power.I learned how these energies can reduce pollution and save resources.I also got to see some cool models of green energy devices.It made me realize the importance of protecting our environment and inspired me to learn more about green technology.
Yours，
Li Hua
第二节
　　Mr Harris was waiting for me there， his eyes red.“Well done! But how did you make it？” he asked in excitement.I told him about my practice on the broken piano in the hospital and Mom’s illness.Mr Harris’s mouth fell open and then apologized for his previous words.He hugged me tightly， saying everything would be OK.Finally， I was announced to receive a silver medal.
　　I rushed to the hospital and handed my silver medal to Mom.With trembling hands， she held it， her eyes shining with joy and pride.After hearing the whole story， Mom praised me for my efforts， but deep down in my heart， I knew it was her words that helped me make the most courageous decision so far in my life.The medal still hangs above my piano， a glittering－proof that real courage is not about perfect keys but playing with whatever you have.
语篇解读：本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Jake在母亲生病住院期间，坚持参加钢琴比赛并最终获得银牌的故事。文章详细描述了Jake在比赛前的焦虑、比赛中的紧张以及比赛后的喜悦和感慨，同时还穿插了主人公对母亲的深厚感情和母亲对他的鼓励。
【写作思路】　
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句（Harris先生在那里等着我，他的眼睛红红的）以及第二段首句（我飞奔到医院，把我的银牌递给了妈妈）可知，第一段可描写Harris先生得知了真相，安慰作者一切都会好起来。结果公布了，作者获得了一枚银牌。
②由第二段首句（我飞奔到医院，把我银牌递给了妈妈）可知，第二段可描写妈妈非常感动，为作者感到自豪。
2.续写线索：Harris先生在那里等着作者，眼睛红红的——他对作者的表现感到很惊诧——在得知真相后，Harris先生非常惊讶，并向作者道了歉——这时，结果公布了，作者获得了银牌——作者飞奔到医院，把银牌给了妈妈——妈妈接过银牌，眼中满是喜悦和自豪——作者至今保存着那枚银牌，时刻提醒着自己真正的勇气是用自己所拥有的一起去演奏。
2 / 2(共15张PPT)
40分写作规范增分练（六）
（建议用时40分钟）
第一节（满分15分）
　　（2025·合肥教学质量检测）假定你是李华，上周你参加了学校
举办的以“绿色能源与未来生活”为主题的科学大讲堂活动。请你给
外教Ryan写一封电子邮件，分享这次经历，内容包括：
　　（1）活动介绍；
　　（2）你的收获。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear Mr Ryan，
Yours，
Li Hua
　　　 　　　　　　 　　　　　　 　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　 　
　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　 　
参考范文：
Dear Mr Ryan，
　　Hope this letter finds you well.Last week， I attended a science
lecture themed “Green Energy and Future Life” at our school.It was
fascinating！
　　The speaker explained various types of green energy like solar and
wind power.I learned how these energies can reduce pollution and save
resources.I also got to see some cool models of green energy devices.It
made me realize the importance of protecting our environment and inspired
me to learn more about green technology.
Yours，
Li Hua
第二节（满分25分）
　　阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构
成一篇完整的短文。
　　（2025·四川绵阳三模）The piano looked like a giant black beast
under the bright lights.My hands shook as I waited backstage.This was
the biggest competition of my life， but all I could think about was
Mom’s pale face when I left her hospital room this morning.
　　Four weeks ago， everything changed.Mom had a car accident and
needed to stay in hospital.My piano teacher， Mr Harris， said，
“You’re messing up the fast parts， Jake.You need to practice every
day.” But how could I tell him I’d been practicing on an old， even
broken piano in the hospital？ Some of the keys didn’t even work.
　　The week before the competition， snow coated the streets.A nurse
texted me： Mom’s fever wouldn’t go down.I had determined to quit
the competition but Mom insisted that she was OK and made me promise
to compete， even with her sunken eyes and cracked （干裂的） lips.I
was so anxious.When Mr Harris saw me staring at the piano， dull and
hopeless， he said， “Maybe you should skip this one.No one will
blame you.” “I’m doing it.” I interrupted， determined to keep up.
　　Then came the big day.Backstage， some kids were practicing like
crazy.My stomach ached.The broken C key on the hospital piano kept
coming to my mind — that note was important for my piece.I’d
practiced keeping the beat of music on Mom’s table bedside， air-typing
the missing note on my jeans.
　　Now it was my turn.The piano seat felt colder than the hospital
chair.Bright lights made my eyes water.For a second， I forgot the first
note， but my fingers remembered — the sad， slow opening tune poured
out like Mom’s smile.I pretended I was back at the hospital piano.When
the missing note came， I pressed the D key instead， turning mistakes into something brave.In the end， my shirt stuck to my back.The last note
hung in the air over the silent hall.With the crowd exploding suddenly， I
rose to my feet slowly and walked to the center of the stage， smiling as I
bowed to the audience in gratitude.Then I headed backstage.
注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
　　Mr Harris was waiting for me there， his eyes red. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　 　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　
　　I rushed to the hospital and handed my silver medal to Mom.
　　　 　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　 　
　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　 　
　 　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　 　
　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　 　
参考范文：
　　Mr Harris was waiting for me there， his eyes red.“Well done！
But how did you make it？” he asked in excitement.I told him about my
practice on the broken piano in the hospital and Mom’s illness.Mr
Harris’s mouth fell open and then apologized for his previous words.He
hugged me tightly， saying everything would be OK. Finally， I was
announced to receive a silver medal.
　　I rushed to the hospital and handed my silver medal to Mom.With
trembling hands， she held it， her eyes shining with joy and pride.After
hearing the whole story， Mom praised me for my efforts， but deep
down in my heart， I knew it was her words that helped me make the most
courageous decision so far in my life.The medal still hangs above my
piano， a glittering-proof that real courage is not about perfect keys but
playing with whatever you have.
语篇解读：本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Jake在母亲生病住院期
间，坚持参加钢琴比赛并最终获得银牌的故事。文章详细描述了Jake
在比赛前的焦虑、比赛中的紧张以及比赛后的喜悦和感慨，同时还
穿插了主人公对母亲的深厚感情和母亲对他的鼓励。
【写作思路】　
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句（Harris先生在那里等着我，他的眼睛红红的）以及
第二段首句（我飞奔到医院，把我的银牌递给了妈妈）可知，第一段
可描写Harris先生得知了真相，安慰作者一切都会好起来。结果公布
了，作者获得了一枚银牌。
②由第二段首句（我飞奔到医院，把我银牌递给了妈妈）可知，第二
段可描写妈妈非常感动，为作者感到自豪。
2. 续写线索：Harris先生在那里等着作者，眼睛红红的——他对作者
的表现感到很惊诧——在得知真相后，Harris先生非常惊讶，并向作
者道了歉——这时，结果公布了，作者获得了银牌——作者飞奔到医
院，把银牌给了妈妈——妈妈接过银牌，眼中满是喜悦和自豪——作
者至今保存着那枚银牌，时刻提醒着自己真正的勇气是用自己所拥有
的一起去演奏。
THANKS
演示完毕 感谢观看40分写作规范增分练（三）
（建议用时40分钟）
第一节（满分15分）
　　（2025 绵阳三诊）假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友Tom在学生生活技能大赛中（Students’ Life Skills Competition）获奖。请你用英语写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
　　（1）表示祝贺并肯定其努力；（2）分享你的一项生活技能。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear Tom，
　 　
　 　
　 　
　 　
　 　
Yours，
Li Hua
第二节（满分25分）
　　阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
　　（2025 金华十三校模拟）In the neighbourhood， my dad， Mr Duane， is always referred to as “Collector Duane”. He is an enthusiastic collector， who is always on the hunt for old items to repurpose， believing that with a bit of creativity， these forgotten objects can be transformed into something useful and new. Recently， he came across an old bicycle wheel， an old－fashioned metal milk box， an antique lamp， a dirty vase and some old clothes at a flea market， imagining all the possibilities they held.
　　My parents have a neighbor： Helen Fox. She is a 91－year－old widow （寡妇）. My parents， along with several other neighbors， look after Helen， ensuring she feels loved and supported.
　　Helen had long suffered from a problem： her mailbox. For some reason， the mailbox was placed insecurely down a somewhat steep （陡峭的） driveway off a busy highway， making it a daily danger for her to fetch her mail. Besides， it was old and rusty， as if it had suffered multiple violent impacts. Its once－bright red paint had faded to a dull pink. The door hung loosely， creaking （嘎吱作响） with every gust of wind. The letters on it had faded over the years. The “F” was no longer clear， the “O” had lost its shape， and the “X” was almost gone. Helen wanted to replace it with a new one and move it to a new location， but she had no idea where to start.
　　The minute my dad heard about it， he made it his mission to settle the problem. He began by contacting the local rural mail service， arranging to relocate Helen’s mailbox. He also talked with Yancey， their shared rural postman， explaining the upcoming change. A relatively safe place was easy to find. But the real challenge was finding a perfect mailbox.
注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右；（2）请按如下格式作答。
　　 Then he remembered the old objects he had recently collected.　 　
　 　
　 　
　 　
　 　
　　 The next day， he showed up at Helen’s house with a shiny new mailbox.　 　
　 　
　 　
　 　
40分写作规范增分练（三）
第一节
Dear Tom，
　　I’m extremely thrilled to know that you have won an award in the Students’ Life Skills Competition， so I’m writing to extend my heartfelt congratulations to you.
　　Your success comes as no surprise to me.It’s your great efforts that contribute to your remarkable progress.I am so proud of you!
　　As for me， I’m somewhat skilled in cooking various dishes， among which， fish is my favorite.I often make the most of my free time to cook tasty fish for my family on weekends.
　　Congratulations again! Wish you all the best!
Yours，
Li Hua
第二节
　　Then he remembered the old objects he had recently collected. Among them was an old－fashioned metal milk box， which showed scratches but was still sturdy. He thought it could be repurposed into a perfect new mailbox. With a burst of inspiration， he got to work immediately. He cleaned the milk box thoroughly， removing years of dirt and rust. He also added a new coat of bright red paint， making it look brand－new and cheerful， as if getting a second life. To personalize it， he painted the letters “FOX” clearly on the side in white. For the finishing touch， he attached a small， decorative metal handle he had salvaged from an old drawer.
　　The next day， he showed up at Helen’s house with a shiny new mailbox. Helen was amazed when she saw it. “Mr Duane， this is wonderful! You are so creative and kind，” she exclaimed， her eyes lighting up with joy. My dad installed the mailbox in a new， safer location. Yancey， the postman， was also impressed when he delivered the first batch of mail to the new mailbox. From then on， Helen no longer had to worry about fetching her mail. The new mailbox not only served its purpose but also became a symbol of the warm and caring community they lived in. Every time Helen saw it， she was reminded of the kindness of her neighbors， especially “Collector Duane”.
语篇解读：本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的父亲如何帮助邻居Helen解决邮箱问题，展现了一个温馨、互助的社区故事。
【写作思路】　
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句（这时，他想起了自己最近收集的那些旧物件）以及第二段首句（第二天，父亲带着一个锃亮的新邮箱出现在Helen家）可知，第一段可描写作者的父亲将一个牛奶箱改造成了一个新邮箱。
②由第二段首句（第二天，父亲带着一个锃亮的新邮箱出现在Helen家）可知，第二段可描写作者的父亲为Helen装好了邮箱，Helen非常感激作者的父亲。
2.续写线索：父亲想起了自己最近收集的旧物件中有个老式的牛奶箱——于是，作者的父亲清洗了牛奶箱，并改造成一个漂亮的邮箱——并且，他还给邮箱装上了一个把手——次日，作者的父亲来到了Helen家门口——Helen非常感激作者的父亲，从此她再也不需要担心取邮件的问题了——每当看到这个邮箱，Helen都会想起这个温暖的社区和作者的父亲。
1 / 2(共16张PPT)
40分写作规范增分练（三）
（建议用时40分钟）
第一节（满分15分）
　　（2025·绵阳三诊）假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友Tom在学生
生活技能大赛中（Students’ Life Skills Competition）获奖。请你用英
语写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
　　（1）表示祝贺并肯定其努力；
　　（2）分享你的一项生活技能。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear Tom，
Yours，
Li Hua
　　　 　　　　　　 　　　　　　 　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　 　
　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　 　
参考范文：
Dear Tom，
　　I’m extremely thrilled to know that you have won an award in the
Students’ Life Skills Competition， so I’m writing to extend my
heartfelt congratulations to you.
　　Your success comes as no surprise to me.It’s your great efforts that
contribute to your remarkable progress.I am so proud of you！
　　As for me， I’m somewhat skilled in cooking various dishes，
among which， fish is my favorite.I often make the most of my free time
to cook tasty fish for my family on weekends.
　　Congratulations again！ Wish you all the best！
Yours，
Li Hua
第二节（满分25分）
　　阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构
成一篇完整的短文。
　　（2025·金华十三校模拟）In the neighbourhood， my dad， Mr
Duane， is always referred to as “Collector Duane”. He is an
enthusiastic collector， who is always on the hunt for old items to
repurpose， believing that with a bit of creativity， these forgotten objects can be transformed into something useful and new. Recently， he came
across an old bicycle wheel， an old-fashioned metal milk box， an
antique lamp， a dirty vase and some old clothes at a flea market，
imagining all the possibilities they held.
　　My parents have a neighbor： Helen Fox. She is a 91-year-old
widow （寡妇）. My parents， along with several other neighbors，
look after Helen， ensuring she feels loved and supported.
　　Helen had long suffered from a problem： her mailbox. For some
reason， the mailbox was placed insecurely down a somewhat steep （陡
峭的） driveway off a busy highway， making it a daily danger for her to
fetch her mail. Besides， it was old and rusty， as if it had suffered
multiple violent impacts. Its once-bright red paint had faded to a dull
pink. The door hung loosely， creaking （嘎吱作响） with every gust of
wind. The letters on it had faded over the years. The “F” was no longer
clear， the “O” had lost its shape， and the “X” was almost gone.
Helen wanted to replace it with a new one and move it to a new location，
but she had no idea where to start.
　　The minute my dad heard about it， he made it his mission to settle
the problem. He began by contacting the local rural mail service，
arranging to relocate Helen’s mailbox. He also talked with Yancey，
their shared rural postman， explaining the upcoming change. A relatively
safe place was easy to find. But the real challenge was finding a perfect
mailbox.
注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
　　 Then he remembered the old objects he had recently collected. 　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　 The next day， he showed up at Helen’s house with a shiny new
mailbox. 　　　
　 　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　 　
　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　 　
　　 　　　　 　　　　　　 　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　 　
　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　 　
参考范文：
　　Then he remembered the old objects he had recently collected.
Among them was an old-fashioned metal milk box， which showed
scratches but was still sturdy. He thought it could be repurposed into a
perfect new mailbox. With a burst of inspiration， he got to work
immediately. He cleaned the milk box thoroughly， removing years of
dirt and rust. He also added a new coat of bright red paint， making it
look brand-new and cheerful， as if getting a second life. To personalize
it， he painted the letters “FOX” clearly on the side in white. For the
finishing touch， he attached a small， decorative metal handle he had
salvaged from an old drawer.
　　The next day， he showed up at Helen’s house with a shiny new
mailbox. Helen was amazed when she saw it. “Mr Duane， this is
wonderful！ You are so creative and kind，” she exclaimed， her eyes
lighting up with joy. My dad installed the mailbox in a new， safer
location. Yancey， the postman， was also impressed when he delivered
the first batch of mail to the new mailbox. From then on， Helen no
longer had to worry about fetching her mail. The new mailbox not only
served its purpose but also became a symbol of the warm and caring
community they lived in. Every time Helen saw it， she was reminded of
the kindness of her neighbors， especially “Collector Duane”.
语篇解读：本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的父亲如何帮助邻
居Helen解决邮箱问题，展现了一个温馨、互助的社区故事。
【写作思路】　
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句（这时，他想起了自己最近收集的那些旧物件）以及
第二段首句（第二天，父亲带着一个锃亮的新邮箱出现在Helen家）
可知，第一段可描写作者的父亲将一个牛奶箱改造成了一个新邮箱。
②由第二段首句（第二天，父亲带着一个锃亮的新邮箱出现在Helen
家）可知，第二段可描写作者的父亲为Helen装好了邮箱，Helen非常
感激作者的父亲。
2. 续写线索：父亲想起了自己最近收集的旧物件中有个老式的牛奶
箱——于是，作者的父亲清洗了牛奶箱，并改造成一个漂亮的邮箱—
—并且，他还给邮箱装上了一个把手——次日，作者的父亲来到了
Helen家门口——Helen非常感激作者的父亲，从此她再也不需要担心
取邮件的问题了——每当看到这个邮箱，Helen都会想起这个温暖的
社区和作者的父亲。
THANKS
演示完毕 感谢观看40分写作规范增分练（四）
（建议用时40分钟）
第一节（满分15分）
　　（2025 太原模拟）假定你是李华，你想要拍摄一段主题为“The Charm of Chinese Culture”的英文短视频发到你的社交媒体上，向外国网友介绍中国文化。请你发一篇英文帖子，内容包括：
　　（1）介绍拍摄计划；（2）询问网友的兴趣；（3）诚邀来华体验中国文化。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；（2）请按如下格式作答。
　　Hey， everyone! I’m Li Hua from China.
　 　
　 　
　 　
　 　
　 　
　 　
第二节（满分25分）
　　阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
　　（2025 潍坊三模）Joel Boyers is an experienced pilot in an air service company.One day he and his wife Melody Among were heading home from the Nashville airport after she earned her helicopter pilot license when he received an emergency call from a stranger in Pennsylvania.The caller told Boyers that her daughter was trapped on a roof near a gas station in Waverly，60 miles from Nashville.She was surrounded by rising floodwaters caused by August’s record－shattering rains and didn’t think she would survive.
　　Desperate， the caller had Googled “Nashville helicopters”， and Boyers’ company， Helistar Aviation， was the first to appear.She begged， “Could Boyers please， please rescue her beloved daughter？” She added that her daughter Lily was only nine! She wore a red sweater.
　　Boyers， 41， looked west toward Waverly and saw the storm clouds.“Madam，” he said， “no one will fly in this weather， and for good reason.”
　　But even before he finished the sentence， Boyers knew he would go back up.“I’ve got a daughter myself，” Boyers comforted the desperate mother.“I will try my best.” He put the girl’s address into his phone， then he and Among drove back to the airport.Soon， they were in the air， unprepared for what they were about to see in Waverly.
　　As soon as Boyers suddenly emerged over the hilltop， it was nothing but angry water below.There were two houses on fire.Cars in trees.Tons of debris （碎片）.People were clinging to anything that didn’t move — roofs， trees， poles.
　　The flooding， also took out cell phone service， meaning Boyers couldn’t use his phone to pinpoint （精准定位） the house he was looking for.He flew on anyway.Maybe he’d get lucky.
　　Outside， the rain beat the windscreen as he flew， making everything unclear.Below， streets had turned into fast－moving water， swallowing cars and trees.For twenty painful minutes， he circled the flooded town， the searchlight cutting through the darkness.Suddenly， on the roof near a half－flooded gas station， a girl in red came into his eyes.It must be Lily.
注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右；（2）请按如下格式作答。
　　Boyers began to fly as close as possible to Lily.　 　
　 　
　 　
　 　
　 　
　　Finally Lily was safely delivered to her mother.　 　
　 　
　 　
　 　
　 　
　 　
40分写作规范增分练（四）
第一节
　　Hey， everyone! I’m Li Hua from China.
　　I’m planning to shoot a short video titled “The Charm of Chinese Culture” and share it on social media.In this video， I’ll introduce various aspects of Chinese culture like traditional festivals and ancient arts.I believe this video will be a vivid window to showcase the long－standing and profound Chinese civilization.
　　I’m curious about what parts of Chinese culture you’re most interested in.Is it the delicious food or the beautiful calligraphy？
　　If you have a chance， come to China and experience the real charm of Chinese culture by yourself!
第二节
　　Boyers began to fly as close as possible to Lily.Fighting against the roaring wind， he steadied the helicopter above the roof.Down swung the rescue rope ladder， which Lily desperately grabbed with frozen hands.Just as she hooked herself to the ladder， Among lowered herself and reached for Lily， then she seized her hand and helped her up inside the helicopter.Once Lily was out of danger， the couple let out a sigh of relief.Inside， Lily， sitting on the floor shaking， couldn’t believe that she was safe now.She hugged the couple tightly， tears of gratitude rolling down her face.
　　Finally Lily was safely delivered to her mother.At the sight of her daughter， the mother rushed forward and tightly embraced her.“Thank you， you are heroes!” the mother exclaimed to the couple， tears streaming down her cheeks.Boyers murmured， “What truly matters is that we’re all standing here， safe and sound.” The setting sun broke through the dark clouds， painting golden light on their wet clothes.Though disasters brought destruction， human kindness always shone most brightly in darkness， connecting hearts and rebuilding hope.
语篇解读：本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一位经验丰富的飞行员Joel Boyers和他的妻子Melody Among在恶劣天气中成功救援一名被困在屋顶上的小女孩Lily的故事。
【写作思路】　
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句（Boyers开始尽可能靠近Lily飞行）可知，第一段应描写Boyers如何在恶劣天气中进行救援，包括直升机的操控、Lily如何被救上直升机等细节。
②由第二段首句（最终，Lily被安全送回了她的母亲身边）可知，第二段应描写Lily与母亲团聚的场景，以及Boyers和Among的感受和感悟。
2.续写线索：飞行靠近——操控直升机——救援Lily——Lily获救——送回母亲身边——母亲的感激——感悟。
2 / 2(共14张PPT)
40分写作规范增分练（四）
（建议用时40分钟）
第一节（满分15分）
　　（2025·太原模拟）假定你是李华，你想要拍摄一段主题为
“The Charm of Chinese Culture”的英文短视频发到你的社交媒体
上，向外国网友介绍中国文化。请你发一篇英文帖子，内容包括：
　　（1）介绍拍摄计划；
　　（2）询问网友的兴趣；
　　（3）诚邀来华体验中国文化。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
　　Hey， everyone！ I’m Li Hua from China.
　　　　　 　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　 　
　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　 　
参考范文：
　　Hey， everyone！ I’m Li Hua from China.
　　I’m planning to shoot a short video titled “The Charm of Chinese
Culture” and share it on social media.In this video， I’ll introduce
various aspects of Chinese culture like traditional festivals and ancient
arts.I believe this video will be a vivid window to showcase the long-
standing and profound Chinese civilization.
　　I’m curious about what parts of Chinese culture you’re most
interested in.Is it the delicious food or the beautiful calligraphy？
　　If you have a chance， come to China and experience the real charm
of Chinese culture by yourself！
第二节（满分25分）
　　阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构
成一篇完整的短文。
　　（2025·潍坊三模）Joel Boyers is an experienced pilot in an air
service company.One day he and his wife Melody Among were heading
home from the Nashville airport after she earned her helicopter pilot
license when he received an emergency call from a stranger in
Pennsylvania.The caller told Boyers that her daughter was trapped on a
roof near a gas station in Waverly，60 miles from Nashville.She was
surrounded by rising floodwaters caused by August’s record-shattering
rains and didn’t think she would survive.
　　Desperate， the caller had Googled “Nashville helicopters”， and
Boyers’ company， Helistar Aviation， was the first to appear.She
begged， “Could Boyers please， please rescue her beloved
daughter？” She added that her daughter Lily was only nine！ She wore
a red sweater.
　　Boyers， 41， looked west toward Waverly and saw the storm
clouds.“Madam，” he said， “no one will fly in this weather， and
for good reason.”
　　But even before he finished the sentence， Boyers knew he would go
back up.“I’ve got a daughter myself，” Boyers comforted the
desperate mother.“I will try my best.” He put the girl’s address into
his phone， then he and Among drove back to the airport.Soon， they
were in the air， unprepared for what they were about to see in Waverly.
　　As soon as Boyers suddenly emerged over the hilltop， it was nothing but angry water below.There were two houses on fire.Cars in trees.Tons of debris （碎片）.People were clinging to anything that didn’t
move — roofs， trees， poles.
　　The flooding， also took out cell phone service， meaning Boyers
couldn’t use his phone to pinpoint （精准定位） the house he was
looking for.He flew on anyway.Maybe he’d get lucky.
　　Outside， the rain beat the windscreen as he flew， making
everything unclear.Below， streets had turned into fast-moving water，
swallowing cars and trees.For twenty painful minutes， he circled the
flooded town， the searchlight cutting through the darkness.Suddenly，
on the roof near a half-flooded gas station， a girl in red came into his
eyes.It must be Lily.
注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
　　Boyers began to fly as close as possible to Lily.
　　　　 　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　 　
　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　 　
　　Finally Lily was safely delivered to her mother.
　　　　 　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　 　
　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　 　
参考范文：
　　Boyers began to fly as close as possible to Lily.Fighting against the
roaring wind， he steadied the helicopter above the roof.Down swung the
rescue rope ladder， which Lily desperately grabbed with frozen
hands.Just as she hooked herself to the ladder， Among lowered herself
and reached for Lily， then she seized her hand and helped her up inside
the helicopter.Once Lily was out of danger， the couple let out a sigh of
relief.Inside， Lily， sitting on the floor shaking， couldn’t believe that
she was safe now.She hugged the couple tightly， tears of gratitude
rolling down her face.
　　Finally Lily was safely delivered to her mother.At the sight of her
daughter， the mother rushed forward and tightly embraced her.“Thank
you， you are heroes！” the mother exclaimed to the couple， tears
streaming down her cheeks.Boyers murmured， “What truly matters is
that we’re all standing here， safe and sound.” The setting sun broke
through the dark clouds， painting golden light on their wet
clothes.Though disasters brought destruction， human kindness always
shone most brightly in darkness， connecting hearts and rebuilding hope.
语篇解读：本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一位经验丰富的飞行员
Joel Boyers和他的妻子Melody Among在恶劣天气中成功救援一名被
困在屋顶上的小女孩Lily的故事。
①由第一段首句（Boyers开始尽可能靠近Lily飞行）可知，第一段应
描写Boyers如何在恶劣天气中进行救援，包括直升机的操控、Lily如
何被救上直升机等细节。
②由第二段首句（最终，Lily被安全送回了她的母亲身边）可知，
第二段应描写Lily与母亲团聚的场景，以及Boyers和Among的感
受和感悟。
2. 续写线索：飞行靠近——操控直升机——救援Lily——Lily获救—
—送回母亲身边——母亲的感激——感悟。
【写作思路】
1. 段落续写： 　
THANKS
演示完毕 感谢观看40分写作规范增分练（五）
（建议用时40分钟）
第一节（满分15分）
　　（2025 东北三省四市教研联合体模拟）假定你是李华，你将代表学校向来访的国际交流生介绍新建的智能校园图书馆。请你写一篇英文发言稿，内容包括：
　　（1）基本情况（位置、面积等）；（2）创新方面；（3）欢迎体验。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear boys and girls，
　 　
　 　
　 　
　 　
第二节（满分25分）
　　阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
　　（2025 郑州质量预测）When Rosa was still a young girl， her parents decided to send her from their home in Tehran， Iran， to live with her aunt in London， England.
　　The journey was long， and as she flew to England， Rosa spent much of the time imagining what her new life would be like.She was determined to do well at school and make her parents proud.
　　However， when she arrived at the airport in London， it was not quite as she had imagined at all.Worst of all was the feeling that everybody was looking at her with strange eyes.Rosa noticed with surprise that she was the only one wearing a scarf.
　　London proved to be a very strange and unfamiliar place.It rained constantly every day during the first week， and Rosa was unimpressed with what she had thought was British summertime.Despite being told that her English was good， she struggled to understand people’s accents and slang （俚语）.The young girl felt disappointed with her new surroundings and she missed her family and friends dearly.
　　When the day came for Rosa to go to her new school， she was extremely nervous.Her aunt tried to comfort her， saying， “I’m sure you’ll make lots of friends today.You just wait and see.” But things didn’t go as smoothly as her aunt had hoped， at least not initially.Some girls in her class pointed and laughed at her， showing no interest in befriending the new girl.Feeling so different from everyone else， Rosa wished she could be back home with her family.
　　During a lunch break， as Rosa sat alone in the corner of the playground， thinking how to escape back to Tehran， a young girl named Emily approached her.She introduced herself， shared her milkshake with Rosa， and said， “I think your scarf looks cool.” In return for her kindness， Rosa took out four biscuits from her pocket and shared them with Emily.Soon the two were lost in games， running about in the corner of the playground.They exchanged stories — Rosa told Emily all about life in Tehran， and Emily told Rosa about all of the cool things she could do in London.
注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右；（2）请按如下格式作答。
As the days went by， Rosa and Emily became good friends.　 　
　 　
　 　
　 　
　 　
　　One day， Emily invited Rosa to a picnic in the park.　 　
　 　
　 　
　 　
40分写作规范增分练（五）
第一节
Dear boys and girls，
　　I am delighted to introduce our school’s amazing smart library， which has transformed the way we study and access knowledge， bringing great convenience to us.
　　Standing proudly at the heart of our campus is the newly－built library， covering 5，000 square metres with five floors.What makes it exceptional lies in its innovation.Equipped with AI－powered labs and smart classrooms， it allows instant global academic access.Imagine studying in a VR zone where historical events come alive — this is learning redefined!
　　In short， our smart library is a treasure of learning resources.I sincerely hope all of you can frequently visit and make the most of it to fuel your academic growth.
第二节
　　As the days went by， Rosa and Emily became good friends.They spent their lunch breaks together， exploring different corners of the playground and sharing more stories about their lives.Emily introduced Rosa to her friends.With Emily’s support， Rosa began to feel more confident and comfortable in her new school.She even started to enjoy the rainy days， seeing them as a unique part of her new home.Her English improved， and she found herself understanding people better.Most importantly， she realized that having a friend like Emily made all the difference.
　　One day， Emily invited Rosa to a picnic in the park.It was a sunny day， and the park was full of people enjoying the weather.Rosa was nervous at first， but Emily’s encouragement helped her relax.They spread out a blanket under a big tree， and shared food.Rosa felt a sense of belonging she hadn’t felt since leaving Tehran.Watching the kites flying in the sky， Rosa realized that London wasn’t so strange after all.She had found a new family among her friends， and she was finally starting to feel at home.
语篇解读：本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了罗莎从伊朗搬到伦敦，遇到了文化适应的问题，尤其是因为戴头巾而感到被排斥，后来遇到了艾米丽，两人成为朋友。
【写作思路】　
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句（日子一天天过去，罗莎和艾米丽成了好朋友）可知，第一段可描写罗莎在艾米丽的帮助下适应了新生活以及对友谊的感受。
②由第二段首句（一天，艾米丽邀请罗莎去公园野餐）可知，第二段可描写罗莎起初很紧张，但艾米丽的鼓励使她放松下来以及罗莎的感悟。
2.续写线索：分享彼此的故事——在艾米丽的支持下，罗莎在新学校开始感到更加自信和舒适——对友谊的感受——紧张——放松——感悟。
2 / 2(共14张PPT)
40分写作规范增分练（五）
（建议用时40分钟）
第一节（满分15分）
　　（2025·东北三省四市教研联合体模拟）假定你是李华，你将代
表学校向来访的国际交流生介绍新建的智能校园图书馆。请你写一篇
英文发言稿，内容包括：
　　（1）基本情况（位置、面积等）；
　　（2）创新方面；
　　（3）欢迎体验。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear boys and girls，
　　　 　　　　　　 　　　　　　 　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　 　
　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　 　
参考范文：
Dear boys and girls，
　　I am delighted to introduce our school’s amazing smart library，
which has transformed the way we study and access knowledge， bringing
great convenience to us.
　　Standing proudly at the heart of our campus is the newly-built
library， covering 5，000 square metres with five floors.What makes it
exceptional lies in its innovation.Equipped with AI-powered labs and
smart classrooms， it allows instant global academic access.Imagine
studying in a VR zone where historical events come alive — this is
learning redefined！
　　In short， our smart library is a treasure of learning resources.I
sincerely hope all of you can frequently visit and make the most of it to
fuel your academic growth.
第二节（满分25分）
　　阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构
成一篇完整的短文。
　　（2025·郑州质量预测）When Rosa was still a young girl， her
parents decided to send her from their home in Tehran， Iran， to live
with her aunt in London， England.
　　The journey was long， and as she flew to England， Rosa spent
much of the time imagining what her new life would be like.She was
determined to do well at school and make her parents proud.
　　However， when she arrived at the airport in London， it was not
quite as she had imagined at all.Worst of all was the feeling that
everybody was looking at her with strange eyes.Rosa noticed with surprise
that she was the only one wearing a scarf.
　　London proved to be a very strange and unfamiliar place.It rained
constantly every day during the first week， and Rosa was unimpressed
with what she had thought was British summertime.Despite being told that
her English was good， she struggled to understand people’s accents and
slang （俚语）.The young girl felt disappointed with her new
surroundings and she missed her family and friends dearly.
　　When the day came for Rosa to go to her new school， she was
extremely nervous.Her aunt tried to comfort her， saying， “I’m sure
you’ll make lots of friends today.You just wait and see.” But things
didn’t go as smoothly as her aunt had hoped， at least not initially.Some
girls in her class pointed and laughed at her， showing no interest in
befriending the new girl.Feeling so different from everyone else， Rosa
wished she could be back home with her family.
　　During a lunch break， as Rosa sat alone in the corner of the
playground， thinking how to escape back to Tehran， a young girl named
Emily approached her.She introduced herself， shared her milkshake with
Rosa， and said， “I think your scarf looks cool.” In return for her
kindness， Rosa took out four biscuits from her pocket and shared them
with Emily.Soon the two were lost in games， running about in the corner
of the playground.They exchanged stories — Rosa told Emily all about
life in Tehran， and Emily told Rosa about all of the cool things she could
do in London.
注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
　　As the days went by， Rosa and Emily became good friends. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　
　　One day， Emily invited Rosa to a picnic in the park.
　 　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　 　
　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　 　
　　 　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　 　
　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　 　
参考范文：
　　As the days went by， Rosa and Emily became good friends.They
spent their lunch breaks together， exploring different corners of the
playground and sharing more stories about their lives.Emily introduced
Rosa to her friends.With Emily’s support， Rosa began to feel more
confident and comfortable in her new school.She even started to enjoy the
rainy days， seeing them as a unique part of her new home.Her English
improved， and she found herself understanding people better.Most
importantly， she realized that having a friend like Emily made all the
difference.
　　One day， Emily invited Rosa to a picnic in the park.It was a sunny
day， and the park was full of people enjoying the weather.Rosa was
nervous at first， but Emily’s encouragement helped her relax.They
spread out a blanket under a big tree， and shared food.Rosa felt a sense
of belonging she hadn’t felt since leaving Tehran.Watching the kites
flying in the sky， Rosa realized that London wasn’t so strange after
all.She had found a new family among her friends， and she was finally
starting to feel at home.
语篇解读：本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了罗莎从伊朗搬到伦敦，
遇到了文化适应的问题，尤其是因为戴头巾而感到被排斥，后来遇
到了艾米丽，两人成为朋友。
【写作思路】
1. 段落续写：　
①由第一段首句（日子一天天过去，罗莎和艾米丽成了好朋友）可
知，第一段可描写罗莎在艾米丽的帮助下适应了新生活以及对友谊的
感受。
②由第二段首句（一天，艾米丽邀请罗莎去公园野餐）可知，第
二段可描写罗莎起初很紧张，但艾米丽的鼓励使她放松下来以及
罗莎的感悟。
2. 续写线索：分享彼此的故事——在艾米丽的支持下，罗莎在新
学校开始感到更加自信和舒适——对友谊的感受——紧张——放
松——感悟。
THANKS
演示完毕 感谢观看40分写作规范增分练（一）
（建议用时40分钟）
第一节（满分15分）
　　（2025 沈阳教学质量监测）假定你是李华，你校学生会为响应国家号召启动了“体重管理年”活动，旨在提高全校师生健康水平。请你代表学生会给校英语报写一份倡议书，呼吁全校师生加入此活动，内容包括：
　　（1）体重管理的重要性；（2）如何进行体重管理；（3）发出体重管理倡议。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear fellow students，
　　Our school has launched the “Year of Weight Management” activity.　 　
　　
　　
　　
　 　
The Students’ Union
第二节（满分25分）
　　阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
　　（2025 河南省部分学校三模）Lewis wiped sweat from his eyes， and his old trainers hit the road as he ran.Six years ago， even running a kilometre， he struggled to catch his breath.It started as a joke.During an outdoor reunion， after he fell， his colleagues asked him to run a kilometre.“You can’t finish a race!” they laughed.That night， Lewis made a silent promise that he would start running.
　　The first weeks were really hard.Each morning at 6：30 am， his alarm would wake him up.He forced himself out of bed.He breathed heavily after just five minutes.But Lewis stuck to his running routine， meeting his daily goals without fail.Day after day， his determination built an unshakable habit of pushing through.
　　But progress slowed when winter arrived.Icy winds cut through his coat， and dark mornings tested his will.One day in December， after slipping on the ice， Lewis sat on the side of the road crying.His hands were raw and his nose was bleeding.For two weeks， Lewis pushed himself to run every day， but a voice in his head kept whispering doubts.It told him that he wasn’t meant for running， saying， “You’re not built for this.”
　　The turning point came on New Year’s Day.Lewis found an old photo of himself as a boy， smiling beside a bike he had learnt to ride after falling off it 19 times.That afternoon， he put on his trainers again.This time， he ran more slowly， focusing on breathing evenly instead of running fast.As time passed， his running skills got better and better and he was even able to run 20 kilometres， which was about a half marathon distance.
　　Three years later， a half marathon would be held in Lewis’ city.That was good news for Lewis， as it would be a stage to show the result of his training.But it was also a great challenge， because he had not participated in an official marathon race before.Lewis felt a little hesitant， but became ambitious at the thought that he could overcome the difficulties he had experienced during his training.So he made the registration.
注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右；（2）请按如下格式作答。
　　On the day of the race， it was cloudy.　 　
　　
　　
　　
　　
　　The final kilometre felt endless.　 　
　　
　　
　　
　　
　　
40分写作规范增分练（一）
第一节
Dear fellow students，
　　Our school has launched the “Year of Weight Management” activity.This activity aims to improve the health of all teachers and students.Managing weight is crucial as it helps prevent various diseases and boosts our overall wellbeing.
　　To manage weight effectively， we should have a balanced diet， reducing junk food intake and increasing fruits， vegetables， and whole grains.Also， regular exercise like jogging， swimming， or cycling is necessary.
　　Let’s all join this meaningful activity.By managing our weight， we can embrace a healthier and more energetic life.
　　The Students’ Union
第二节
　　On the day of the race， it was cloudy.At the start of the half marathon， Lewis felt nervous.The first 10 kilometres went well， and his training paid off.But then it started raining at the 15－kilometre mark.His shoes were soaked and rubbed his skin raw.He remembered how he had had to keep going even though it was raining in his training.Thinking that he had already run more than half of the distance， he said to himself， “You can finish this race.” Then he requested medical assistance.After receiving simple treatment for his pain， he continued the race.
　　The final kilometre felt endless.Lewis’ legs moved slowly， and his wet shirt was rubbing against his skin.His mind went back to the icy December morning when his nose was bleeding and he insisted on running.“One more step，” he said to himself and made his way to the finish line.He ran the last 200 metres， the crowd cheering noisily in the background.When he finished， he lay on the wet asphalt road and laughed.No medal mattered more to him than this： He had outlasted every version of himself that had ever doubted him.
语篇解读：本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Lewis从一个跑步困难者成长为半马拉松选手的励志故事。
【写作思路】　
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容（比赛那天，天气多云）可知，第一段可描写Lewis比赛中遇到困难，但是他坚持了下来。
②由第二段首句内容（最后一公里感觉没完没了）可知，第二段可描写Lewis克服疲惫，坚持跑完了全程。
2.续写线索：刚开始顺利——下雨——磨破脚——自我鼓励——治疗——继续比赛——坚持跑完全程——感悟。
1 / 2(共14张PPT)
40分写作规范增分练（一）
（建议用时40分钟）
第一节（满分15分）
　　（2025·沈阳教学质量监测）假定你是李华，你校学生会为响应
国家号召启动了“体重管理年”活动，旨在提高全校师生健康水平。
请你代表学生会给校英语报写一份倡议书，呼吁全校师生加入此活
动，内容包括：
　　（1）体重管理的重要性；
　　（2）如何进行体重管理；
　　（3）发出体重管理倡议。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear fellow students，
　　Our school has launched the “Year of Weight Management”
activity. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
The Students’ Union
　　　　　　 　　　　　　 　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　 　
　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　 　
参考范文：
Dear fellow students，
　　Our school has launched the “Year of Weight Management”
activity.This activity aims to improve the health of all teachers and
students.Managing weight is crucial as it helps prevent various diseases
and boosts our overall wellbeing.
　　To manage weight effectively， we should have a balanced diet，
reducing junk food intake and increasing fruits， vegetables， and whole
grains.Also， regular exercise like jogging， swimming， or cycling is
necessary.
　　Let’s all join this meaningful activity.By managing our weight，
we can embrace a healthier and more energetic life.
　　 The Students’ Union
第二节（满分25分）
　　阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构
成一篇完整的短文。
　　（2025·河南省部分学校三模）Lewis wiped sweat from his
eyes， and his old trainers hit the road as he ran.Six years ago， even
running a kilometre， he struggled to catch his breath.It started as a
joke.During an outdoor reunion， after he fell， his colleagues asked him
to run a kilometre.“You can’t finish a race！” they laughed.That
night， Lewis made a silent promise that he would start running.
　　The first weeks were really hard.Each morning at 6：30 am， his
alarm would wake him up.He forced himself out of bed.He breathed
heavily after just five minutes.But Lewis stuck to his running routine，
meeting his daily goals without fail.Day after day， his determination
built an unshakable habit of pushing through.
　　But progress slowed when winter arrived.Icy winds cut through his
coat， and dark mornings tested his will.One day in December， after
slipping on the ice， Lewis sat on the side of the road crying.His hands
were raw and his nose was bleeding.For two weeks， Lewis pushed
himself to run every day， but a voice in his head kept whispering
doubts.It told him that he wasn’t meant for running， saying，
“You’re not built for this.”
　　The turning point came on New Year’s Day.Lewis found an old
photo of himself as a boy， smiling beside a bike he had learnt to ride after
falling off it 19 times.That afternoon， he put on his trainers again.This
time， he ran more slowly， focusing on breathing evenly instead of
running fast.As time passed， his running skills got better and better and
he was even able to run 20 kilometres， which was about a half marathon
distance.
　　Three years later， a half marathon would be held in Lewis’
city.That was good news for Lewis， as it would be a stage to show the
result of his training.But it was also a great challenge， because he had
not participated in an official marathon race before.Lewis felt a little
hesitant， but became ambitious at the thought that he could overcome the
difficulties he had experienced during his training.So he made the
registration.
注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
　　On the day of the race， it was cloudy. 　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　
　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　
　
　　The final kilometre felt endless.
　　 　　　　 　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　 　
　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　 　
　　 　　　　　　 　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　 　
　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　 　
参考范文：
　　On the day of the race， it was cloudy.At the start of the half
marathon， Lewis felt nervous.The first 10 kilometres went well， and
his training paid off.But then it started raining at the 15-kilometre
mark.His shoes were soaked and rubbed his skin raw.He remembered
how he had had to keep going even though it was raining in his
training.Thinking that he had already run more than half of the distance，
he said to himself， “You can finish this race.” Then he requested
medical assistance.After receiving simple treatment for his pain， he
continued the race.
　　The final kilometre felt endless.Lewis’ legs moved slowly， and
his wet shirt was rubbing against his skin.His mind went back to the icy
December morning when his nose was bleeding and he insisted on
running.“One more step，” he said to himself and made his way to the
finish line.He ran the last 200 metres， the crowd cheering noisily in the
background.When he finished， he lay on the wet asphalt road and
laughed.No medal mattered more to him than this： He had outlasted
every version of himself that had ever doubted him.
语篇解读：本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Lewis从一个跑步困难者
成长为半马拉松选手的励志故事。
【写作思路】　
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容（比赛那天，天气多云）可知，第一段可描写
Lewis比赛中遇到困难，但是他坚持了下来。
②由第二段首句内容（最后一公里感觉没完没了）可知，第二段可描
写Lewis克服疲惫，坚持跑完了全程。
2. 续写线索：刚开始顺利——下雨——磨破脚——自我鼓励——治
疗——继续比赛——坚持跑完全程——感悟。
THANKS
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