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晨背第37天
技能一　5类修辞公式，写情更细腻
公式1　明喻：A＋表“像”的词汇＋B　A像B
明喻是将具有某种共同特征的两种不同事物连接起来的一种修辞手法。明喻的标志词常用like、 as、 as if/though＋句子。
句式 演练
①Dominated by an overwhelming sense of excitement and pride at his words，I simply stood there dumbfounded， and my feet， as if I were rooted to the ground， couldn’t move a bit.（2023·新课标Ⅰ卷读后续写） 听到他的话，我被一种强烈的兴奋和自豪感所控制，我站在那里目瞪口呆，脚就像扎根在地上一样，一动也不能动。 ①So angry was I that I shook my fist at her.The moment she saw my reaction， 　she froze with fright， as if she were rooted to the ground.All of a sudden， she burst into tears. （2024·沈阳二模读后续写） 我气得对她挥拳。她一看到我的反应就吓呆了，脚就像在地上扎了根。突然，她哭了起来。
②We met at the bus station where he had dropped me off four days before， and upon our arrival， we hugged each other like long lost friends. （2024·新课标Ⅰ卷读后续写） 我们在四天前他送我下车的公交车站见面，一到车站，我们就像久违的朋友一样拥抱在一起。 ②The smile on his face 　was like the warm sunshine on that day　， making me feel a deep sense of joy and connection. （2024·邯郸模拟） 他脸上的笑容就像那一天温暖的阳光，让我感受到一种深深的喜悦和联系。
公式2　暗喻： A as＋adj./adv.＋as＋a（n）＋B
as busy as a bee 忙忙碌碌 　　　　　　　　　　as hungry as a wolf 饥肠辘辘
as proud as a peacock 骄傲如孔雀 as nervous as an ant on a hot pan 急得像热锅上的蚂蚁
句式 演练
①I felt so sorry to hear that， as restless as ants on a hot pan， and I thought I should visit him in any case. （2022·1月浙江卷读后续写） 听到这个消息我感到很难过，就像热锅上的蚂蚁一样坐立不安，我想无论如何我都应该去看看他。 ①On arriving home， she stepped out of her car and ran into the house 　as happy as a bird to get home again　. 一到家，她下了车，跑进屋里，高兴得像只归巢的小鸟。
句式 演练
②Her face was as bright as the star that shone on our Christmas tree in the corner of the small room. 她的脸像这个小房间角落里圣诞树上闪耀的星星一样明亮。 ②I found him lying on his bed； he was 　as drunk as a monkey　. 我发现他躺在他的床上，酩酊大醉。
公式3　拟人：主语（动物/自然现象/含蓄抽象的概念）＋用于人的谓语
拟人是以物拟人，赋予动物、自然现象或含蓄抽象的概念，以人类的行为特点和生命力具体形象地表达情感，使描写的事物更生动形象。
句式 演练
①With the yellow shirt dancing in the breeze， she flashed back to her happy life with Tom. 黄衬衫在微风中飞舞，她又回想起她和汤姆的幸福生活。 ①　The wind was whispering in the trees　， and birds in the trees were singing a beautiful song. 风在林间低语，小鸟在树上唱着美妙的歌曲。
②The spray ran and ran.After a while， she lowered her head with tears. 浪花跑啊跑，不一会，她含着泪低下了头。 ②Rainbow girl 　threw colourful silk in the sky　. 彩虹姑娘在天边抛出了七彩的绸缎。
公式4　夸张：数词/量词/形容词＋名词；副词＋形容词/动词
夸张是用言过其实的词汇渲染和修饰微不足道的事情，以达到夸张的效果。
句式 演练
①Tom often complained with millions of reasons. 汤姆总有千千万万个理由来抱怨。 ①The noise was 　loud enough to wake the dead　. 这声音大得足以把死人吵醒。
②It is the last straw that breaks the camel’s back. 这是压死骆驼的最后一根稻草。 ②At the news， I was 　over the moon/on the top of the world　. 听到这个消息，我乐不可支。
公式5　排比：加强句子语气
排比是把三个或三个以上意义相关或相近、结构相同或相似、语气相同的词组或句子并排在一起的修辞手法。有时候两个或两个以上的并列句也可以称为排比句。
句式 演练
①We’re still alive； we’re still young； we’re still holding on！ 我们仍然活着，我们仍然年轻，我们仍然坚持着！ ①Home is a warm harbor， 　the source of happiness　， and the sustenance of the soul. 家是温暖的港湾，是幸福的源泉，是灵魂的寄托。
②Modesty makes people progress； modesty makes people grow； modesty makes people gain more. 谦虚使人进步，谦虚使人成长，谦虚使人收获更多。 ②Adapt to new posts， stand on new platforms， 　meet new challenges and create new achievements　. 适应新岗位、站上新平台、迎接新挑战、创造新业绩。
技能二　巧用倒装句式，场景更生动
读后续写中，人物不可能一直在一个场景里，总会有时空变化，如：发生火灾冲进房间救人、放学后回家……在描写人或物空间位置变化时，应灵活使用倒装句。
句式 演练
①The experience told me that only when we step out of our comfort zone can we achieve personal growth and development. 这段经历告诉我，只有当我们走出自己的舒适区，才能实现个人的成长和发展。 ①　Only then did she realize　 the true meaning of the smile： to bring others trust and warmth. （2024·湖北黄冈中学模拟） 只有这时她才意识到微笑的真谛：带给别人信任和温暖。
②A few weeks later，when I almost forgot the contest， there came the news. 几个星期后，当我几乎忘记比赛的时候，传来了消息。 ②　Upstairs went the twins　， carrying the breakfast they had made. 双胞胎端着他们做的早餐上楼去了。
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