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写作专项指导
文本解读
1.文体类型:读后感。读后感是指读了一本书、一篇文章、一段话或几句名言,把自己的理解、具体感受和得到的启示写成的文章,是一种常用的应用文体。
2.要点内容:读后感的表达方式灵活多样,但它必须是在读后的基础上发表感想。如本文讲的就是一个关于情绪管理的小故事,学生需要深入思考,并写出自己的感想。
Writing a reflection
思路指引
实用表达
Of the countless famous sayings I have ever heard,...impresses me most.
在我听过的不计其数的名言中……给我留下了最深刻的印象。
What impresses me most is that...
令我印象最深刻的是……
I have a thousand words to say after reading this book/article.
看完这本书/这篇文章,我有千言万语想说。
What the author wants to tell us in the book/article is that...
作者想在书/文章中告诉我们的是……
What a wonderful and meaningful article it is!
这是一篇多么精彩和有意义的文章啊!
I will take...for example,who/which...
我将以……为例,其……
The more I am aware of the significance of the famous saying,the more benefits I’ll get in my daily study and job.
我越意识到这句名言的意义,我就会在日常学习和工作中得到更多的好处。
I can’t agree more with the view.
对此观点我深表赞同。
佳作建构
你校英文报正在征稿,要求就自己喜欢的名言谈谈自己的体会。假设你最喜欢的是“少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲(An idle youth,a needy age.)”,请根据要点写一篇英语短文,谈谈你对这句名言的感想。内容包括:
1.你对该名言的理解;
2.生活中的例子;
3.你的感悟。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
　
　
审题谋篇
Ⅰ.对接单元词汇
1.　　　　　　　　控制着;掌握着
2.　　　　　　　　 沉迷于
3.　　　　　　　　 忍不住做
4.　　　　　　　　 认输
5.　　　　　　　　 对……负责
6.　　　　　　　　 与之相反
7.　　　　　　　　 充分利用
in control of
be addicted to
can’t resist doing
throw in the towel
be responsible for
in contrast
make full use of
8.　　　　　　　　 有机会使用
9.　　　　　　　　 为……做好准备
10.　　　　　　　　 意识到
11.　　　　　　　　 v.激发,激励
have access to
be equipped for
be aware that
motivate
Ⅱ.巧用单元句式、语法
1.从古代以来,中国人一直用出自一首名诗的“少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲”来警醒人们要在年轻的时候努力,以便掌握自己的命运。
Since ancient times,Chinese have been using “An idle youth,a needy age.” which is from a well-known poem to warn people to work hard at a young age so that they can be 　　　　 　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　.
in control of their
own destiny
2.这句诗的意思是一个人年轻的时候沉迷于懒惰,等他年纪大了会后悔。
This poem means that if one 　　　　　　　　　　　　 laziness in his young age,he will regret it in his old age.
3.有些同学忍不住玩网络游戏,面对挑战轻易认输,这反映出他们对自己的不负责。
Some classmates 　　　　　　　　　　　　 online games and easily
　　　　　　　　　 when faced with challenges,which reflects they 　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　 　　　　.
is addicted to
can’t resist playing
throw in the towel
are not responsible for themselves
4.与之相反,牢记我们应当充分利用网络,这能够让我们接触到更多的知识,开阔眼界。因此,我们能够为更好的未来做好准备。
　　　　　　　　,bear in mind that we should make full use of the Internet,which enables us to 　　　　　　　　　 more knowledge and broaden our horizons.Therefore,we can 　　　　　　　　　a better future.
In contrast
have access to
be equipped for
5.这句诗帮助我意识到，只有努力，我们才能获得成功。
This poem helps me 　　　　　　　　　　　　 we can achieve success only by working hard.
6.因此,它也成为我的座右铭,给予我信心,激励我勇敢前进。
Consequently,it has become my motto,which gives me confidence and 　　　　 me to move forward bravely.
be aware that
motivates
1.请将句4 改为so that 引导的目的状语从句。
　
　
　
　
In contrast,bear in mind that we should make full use of the Internet,which enables us to have access to more knowledge and broaden our horizons so that we can be equipped for a better future.
亮点提升
2.请将句5改为倒装句。
　
　
This poem helps me be aware that only by working hard can we achieve success.
Since ancient times,Chinese have been using“An idle youth,a needy age.” which is from a well-known poem to warn people to work hard at a young age so that they can be in control of their own destiny.
范文展示
This poem means that if one is addicted to laziness in his young age,he will regret it in his old age.Some classmates can’t resist playing online games and easily throw in the towel when faced with challenges,which reflects they are not responsible for themselves.In contrast,bear in mind that we should make full use of the Internet,which enables us to have access to more knowledge and broaden our horizons so that we can be equipped for a better future.
This poem helps me be aware that only by working hard can we achieve success.Consequently,it has become my motto,which gives me confidence and motivates me to move forward bravely.
写作练习
阅读下面的故事,用英语写一篇80个词左右的读后感。
　　A peacock was very unhappy with his harsh (难听的) voice,so he spent most of his days complaining about it.
“It is true that you cannot sing,” said a fox.“But look,how beautiful you are!”
“Oh,with such an unpleasant voice,” cried the bird,“what good is all this beauty ”
“Listen,” said the fox,“each one owns something good.You have such beauty;the nightingale (夜莺) has her songs;the owl (猫头鹰) has his eyes.Even if you had a sweet voice,you would still complain about another thing.Why can’t you just be happy about what you have already got ”
　
　
写作指导
One possible version:
　　The story is about a peacock who complained about his harsh voice,
ignoring his own true beauty.A fox advised him to be content with what he owned.
If the peacock had realised this,he would not have been so upset.Many people around me make the same mistake—they only focus on what they don’t have.Take my friend Mike as an example.He does very well in all subjects but he often complains that he can’t play basketball well.Never does he know how we admire him!
In fact,nobody has advantages in all aspects.So we should stay positive and value what we have instead of complaining about what we don’t have.
Ⅲ.写作训练
阅读下面的故事,用英语写一篇80个词左右的读后感。
　　A long time ago,there was a huge apple tree.A little boy loved to come and play around it every day.They loved to play together.
As time went by,the boy had grown up and no longer played around it.One day,he came back and the tree excitedly invited him to play.But the boy said he needed money to buy toys.“Sorry, I have no money,but you can pick all my apples and sell them,”said the tree.The boy did as told and left happily but never came back.The tree was sad.
Many years passed,the boy returned and told the tree he had to make money to build a house for his family.The tree happily offered his branches for his house.With the branches,the boy left,satisfied.The tree was again lonely and sad.
Then one hot summer day, the tree was delighted to see the boy back again.“Come and play with me!” the tree said.“I am sad and getting old.I want to go sailing to relax myself.Can you give me a boat ”the boy said.“Use my trunk to build your boat.”The boy cut the tree trunk and went sailing but didn’t show up for a long time.The tree was happy,but it was not true.
Finally,the boy returned after he left for so many years.“Sorry,my boy.But I don’t have anything for you anymore.No more apples for you,” the tree said with tears.
The boy replied that he was too old and needed nothing.The tree said,“Good!An old tree root is the best place to lean on and e,sit down with me and rest.”The boy sat down and the tree was glad and smiled with tears...


[写作指导]
　　One possible version:
The fable presents a moving story to us, in which an apple tree satisfied a boy’s wishes unconditionally by sacrificing everything for him.All it desired is the boy’s company.
The tree in the fable is affectionate and unselfish.The moral of it is that parental love is so infinite that children should be grateful for that.I am deeply moved by the fable and feel an impulse to praise all the parents.It makes me realise how great my parents are and I should be grateful for what they have done for me.Love is its own reward.Therefore,if I were the boy,I would hold the tree dear.

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