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Unit 1 Teenage life
Period 4
Reading for Writing
Lead-in
Ask the teachers for help
Talk with your partners/friends
Have a conversation with your parents
Post them on the media …
1.When you meet some problems in your life, what will you do
10 September 2018
Dear Worried Friend,
But spending too much time online is
unhealthy and makes it very difficult
to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on
school and family life. I think you
should encourage your friend to try
new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together I am sure he will
listen to you, since you are his good friends.
I recommend that you talk to your
friend about his behavior. It is not unusual for teenagers of your
generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world.
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend, Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
All the best,
Susan Luo
A Letter of Advice
Reading
Activity1:Read her reply and answer the following questions on P18.
1. What is Worried Friend's problem
2. What kind of advice did Susan Luo gave to this Worried Friend What other kinds of advice would you give
Her friend, ChenLei plays computer games too often and spends too much time online. (line 1, para1, line 3, para1)
3 advice：①talk to her friend; ②encourage her friend to try new hobbies; ③discuss the problem together. (para 3)
I will encourage him to spend more time on study.
Activity1:Read her reply and answer the following questions on P18.
3. What do you think of Susan Luo
I think she is friendly, considerate, helpful and responsible because she gives useful and practical advice.
10 September 2018
Dear Worried Friend,
But spending too much time online is
unhealthy and makes it very difficult
to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on
school and family life. I think you
should encourage your friend to try
new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together I am sure he will
listen to you, since you are his good friends.
I recommend that you talk to your
friend about his behavior. It is not unusual for teenagers of your
generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world.
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend, Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
All the best,
Susan Luo
Date
Greeting
Body
Close
Signature
A Letter of Advice
Reading
But spending too much time online is
unhealthy and makes it very difficult
to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on
school and family life. I think you
should encourage your friend to try
new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together I am sure he will
listen to you, since you are his good friends.
I recommend that you talk to your
friend about his behavior. It is not unusual for teenagers of your
generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world.
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend, Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
All the best,
Susan Luo
date and greeting
you understand
how he/she feels.
suggestion(s) &
reason(s)
the problem
what you think
will happen
Close and
signature.
10 September 2018
Dear Worried Friend,
A Letter of Advice
Activity2:Mark the parts of the letter that match the following points.
A. I know what the problem is.
B. I understand how you feel.
C. This is my advice and reason(s).
D. I think my advice will help.
建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告，一定要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力，并注意要礼貌当先。
Writing
Basic structure of a letter of advice
首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由,简单介绍自己,注意语气。
1.建议信常用开头(照应材料,表明写作意图)：
I am very glad/sad to hear that you ...
I know you have trouble/difficulty in ...
I am writing to express my views/opinions concerning...
I am writing to share some advice with you.
Here are some suggestions/tips to help you.
Writing
I know you are now having trouble/difficulty in ...
I’m glad to receive your letter for asking me how to ...
You asked me for my advice on ... and I will try to make some
suggestions.
Here are some tips to help you./Here are a few suggestions.
I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.
I am writing to share some advice with you.
首段
主体段落：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后指出需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体的建议或忠告。注意千万不要让对方认为是投诉，而不是建议。
2.表达建议常用语：
Writing
First/Firstly/First of all, I recommend/suggest you should do ...
Second/Secondly/Meanwhile, it is a good idea/choice to do...
Third/Thirdly/What’s more/Moreover, you can also do...
Last but not least, it is beneficial to you if you
could do….......
主体
First/Firstly/First of all, I recommend/suggest you should do ...
Second/Secondly/Meanwhile, it is a good idea to...
Third/Thirdly/What’s more/Moreover, you can also ...
Last but not least, .......
As far as I’m concerned, you should/can….. …
It’s very important/wise /advisable to do…
I think it would be more beneficial to you if you
could do…
结尾段：对提出的建议进行总结。注意要有礼貌，使对方容易接受。
3.结尾段常用语：
I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.
I hope you will find my suggestions helpful.
I believe you will take my advice into consideration.
I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions.
.
Writing
in the end; all in all;at last;
in conclusion;in a word
I hope you will find these ideas useful.
I believe that if you follow my advice, you will ...
I believe, with your trying, you can manage to …
I do hope you will take my advice into account/ consideration.
In the end, I do hope you will find these proposals/ suggestions/ recommendations practical/useful/helpful.
I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions.
结尾
Ways to express suggestions
用于首段
1. First/Firstly/First of all, I recommend/suggest you should do ...
2. Second/Secondly/Meanwhile, it is a good idea/choice to do...
3. Third/Thirdly/What’s more, you can also do...
4. Last but not least, it is beneficial to you if you could do….......
I have learned that you have some trouble in …… and I would like to give you the following suggestions.
When it comes to……, the following are my suggestions.
I am very glad/sad to hear that ...Here are some suggestions/tips to help you.
I will be glad if you will take my advice/suggestions into consideration.
I hope you will find my suggestions helpful/ useful/ practical/ beneficial.
用于中段
用于尾段
假设你是某中学学生李华，在你班级留学的美国学生Bill无法适应这里的学习与生活，感到苦闷，他写信向你求助。请你用英文给他写一封回信。内容要点如下：
1.深表同情，表示安慰；
2.提出建议并给出理由；
3.希望建议能有所帮助，表达祝愿。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Writing
Dear xxx，
(1)I have learned that you have some trouble in …… and I would like to give you the following suggestions./ (2)I am very glad/sad to hear that ...Here are some suggestions/tips to help you.
First/Firstly/First of all, I recommend/suggest you should do ...
Second/Secondly/Meanwhile, you can also do ...
Third/Thirdly/What’s more, it is a good idea to do ...
Last but not least, it is important for you to do ....
I hope that you will find these suggestions helpful. Looking forward to your reply .
Yours,
xxx
Writing
Draft your letter according to the outline below
假设你是Ms Wang,你的学生李华给你写了封信，诉说他交友的烦恼，请你用英文给他写一封回信。内容要点如下：
1.积极参加班级讨论；
2.了解同学们的兴趣爱好；
3.乐于助人；
4.希望建议能有所帮助，表达祝愿。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Writing
Dear Li Hua，
I have learned that you have some trouble in making friends.And I would like to give you the following suggestions.
First/Firstly/First of all, I recommend/suggest you should take an active part in class discussion,which can help your classmates get to know you better. Second/Secondly/Meanwhile, you should learn about your classmates’ hobbies and interests ,so that you can find common topic to talk with them. Third/Thirdly/What’s more, it is a good idea to be ready to help others.That way your classmates will like making friends with you and you will enjoy your school life together.
I hope that you will find these suggestions helpful. Looking forward to your reply .
Yours,
Ms Wang
Sample Writing
Evaluation scores 1. Are all the parts of a letter included and organized in good order？ 1 2 3
2. Does the writer give reasons for the advice？ 1 2 3
3. Does the writer use proper expressions to give suggestions？ 1 2 3
4. Does the writer use commas and stops correctly 1 2 3
5. Is the handwriting easy to read？ 1 2 3

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