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Unit4 Using Language 2
Write about a rail journey across Canada
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Journey reviewing
Where did Li Daiyu and her cousin pay a visit to
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1. What’ s their next stop
Next, Li Daiyu and Liu Qian were going to visit ____________ and _____________.
Toronto
Montreal
Using Language
2. What kind of text type is this text
Travel journal.
Skim & Structure
Reading and understanding Divide the passage into three parts
Paragraphs 1~4: Li Daiyu and
Liu Qian's experience in Toronto
Paragraphs 5~9: Li Daiyu and
Liu Qian's experience in Montreal
Paragraph10:Their time spent on the train towards Halifax
Conclusion 1: The travel journal is developed in the order of ___________.
place/ time
What did the girls see or do in Toronto
the largest and wealthiest city in Canada;
went up the CN Tower;
saw misty clouds rising from the Niagara Falls;
skyscrapers of glass and steel;
old-fashioned cars;
met Lin Fei in Chinatown
Can you find what has been mentioned about Toronto
Experience & Explore
1. What did the girls see when they went up the CN Tower
2. Why was it possible to get all kinds of good Chinese food in Toronto
Answer the questions
They saw misty clouds rising from the great Niagara Falls.
Because there are a lot of Chinese people there.
What did the girls see or do in Montreal
signs and ads in French;
people speak English with an accent;
visited lovely shops;
visited artists in their workplaces along St Paul Street;
met Jean Philippe in a restaurant alongside the St Lawrence River;
unique Quebec culture and traditions
Can you find what has been mentioned about Montreal
Conclusion 2:When writing a travel journal , we can write something about where we went, what we saw, what we did and how we felt.
Make out their route and what they experienced at each place.
1.took a boat ride out into the bay;
visited an island; took a hike in a forest
2.took the train; mountains and forests looked massive; blue water took their breath away
3.took a coach through the Canadian Rockies; spectacular mountain peaks; creatures
4.center of Canada’s oil and gas drilling industry; freezing cold in winter; large shopping malls
5.amazed by the open country; went through two wheat-growing provinces; a bunch of farms
7.a land of forests and lakes; rolling hills; bushes and maple trees; the wide stretch of Lake Huron
6.an urban area
8.the largest and wealthiest city in Canada; went up the CN Tower; saw misty clouds rising from the Niagara Falls; skyscrapers of glass and steel; old-fashioned cars; met Lin Fei in Chinatown
9.signs and ads in French; people speak English with an accent;visited lovely shops and artists in their workplaces along St Paul Street;met Jean Philippe in a restaurant alongside the St Lawrence River;unique Quebec culture and traditions
Lake Louise
Jasper
Toronto
Montreal
The Prairie
Vancouver
Ontario
Winnipeg
Edmonton
What do you know about Canada from their trip
Find out the sentences that show their emotions.
The next day was clear and mild, and they were pleased to see the beautiful mountains looking out over the city. Later, they took a pleasant hike in a forest just a short distance away.
...where the blue water literally took their breath away with its exceptional beauty.
Looking at the beautiful scenery, they both agreed that it was the most awesome journey they had ever taken. In addition to seeing spectacular mountain peaks...
However, they did not anticipate seeing such an open country, and were truly amazed.
Standing in the distance, they were astonished to see misty clouds rising from the great Niagara Falls,...
They were surprised to see that all the signs and advertisements were in French and...
Overall, Montreal is a city with wonderful sights and sounds.
There are fantastic restaurants and clubs around, too.
...
Did the girls enjoy the trip
Discover & Apply
a travel journal
What type of writing is it How do you know
during their first day;
the next day;
after another day on the train;
night came again;
when they woke up the next morning;
after Li Daiyu and her cousin arrivedin Toronto...
...the blue water literally took their breath away with its exceptiona beauty.
The train thundered on, through the rolling hills.
The bushes and maple trees outside their windows were red, gold, and orange, and their was frost on the ground, confirming that autumn has arrived in Canada.
That night the train was speeding along... towards... and down to... towards...
who,when,where, what,how
in chronological and spacial order
vivid descriptions
Seeing the true north via rail:
Toronto and Montreal
title:visiting places;
transptation
Activity 5 Read for language
1. 站在远处，她们看到湖南边的尼亚加拉大瀑布升腾而起的水
雾,惊叹不已。
2. 两个女孩看到很多玻璃和钢筋建造的摩天大楼，还有老式汽
车从身边驶过。
3. 她们惊奇地发现所有的标示牌和广告都是用法文写的,而且很
多人说英语都有口音。
4. 整个下午，她们穿梭于一家家可爱的小店，拜访圣保罗街边
工作坊里的艺术家们。
5. 总的来说，蒙特利尔是一座声色俱佳的城市。
Find out the English sentences in the text and underline them in your book.
Group work
1. Standing in the distance, they were astonished to see misty clouds rising from the great Niagara Falls, which is on the south side of the lake.
2. The girls saw hundreds of skyscrapers of glass and steel , and old-fashioned cars rolling by.
3. They were surprised to see that all the signs and advertisements were in French and many people spoke English with an accent.
4. They spent the afternoon in lovely shops and visiting artists in their workplaces along St Paul Street.
5. Overall, Montreal is a city with wonderful sights and sounds.
仿写:
1.站在山顶上，我看到云烟从山谷(valley)升腾而起，惊叹不已。
2.我们看到了青翠的树木和花簇拥盛(flowers in full bloom)，还
听到很多小鸟在唱歌。
3.我惊奇地发现很多讲着不同的方言外来游客来访雾气氤氲的温泉。
4.整个下午，我们穿梭于一家家令人惊叹的商店，欣赏着一件件
精美工艺品。
5.总的来说，河源是一座有着丰富的自然风光和独特文化的
美丽城市。
Imitative writing
Group work
1.站在远处，她们看到湖南边的尼亚加拉大瀑布升腾
而起的水雾，惊叹不已。
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___________________________________________________________
Standing in the distance, they were astonished
to see misty clouds rising from the great Niagara Falls, which is on the south side of the lake.
仿写：站在山顶上，我看到云烟从山谷升腾而起，
惊叹不已。
Standing on the top of the mountain，I was astonished to see misty clouds rising from the valley.
Imitative writing
2.两个女孩看到很多玻璃和钢筋建造的摩天大楼，还有老
式汽车从身边驶过。
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__________________________________________________________________
The girls saw hundreds of skyscrapers of glass and steel , and old-fashioned cars rolling by.
仿写：我们看到了青翠的树木和花簇拥盛，还听到很多小鸟在唱歌。
We saw many green trees and flowers in
full bloom and heard many birds singing/tweeting.
flowers in full bloom
3.她们惊奇地发现所有的标示牌和广告都是用法文写的，而且很多人说英语都有口音。
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_________________________________________________________________
They were surprised to see that all the signs and advertisements were in French and many people spoke English with an accent.
仿写：我惊奇地发现很多讲着不同的方言外来游客来访雾气氤氲的温泉。
I was surprised to see that many tourists who spoke different dialects were visiting the misty hot spring.
misty
4. 整个下午，她们穿梭于一家家可爱的小店，拜访圣保罗街边工作坊
里的艺术家们。
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_________________________________________________________________
They spent the afternoon in lovely shops and visiting artists in their workplaces along St Paul Street.
仿写：整个下午，我们穿梭于一家家令人惊叹的商店，欣赏着一件件精美的工艺品。
We spent the afternoon in amazing shops and appreciating the delicate crafts.
5. 总的来说，蒙特利尔是一座声色俱佳的城市。
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Overall, Montreal is a city with wonderful sights and sounds.
仿写：总的来说，河源是一座有着丰富的自然风光和独特文化的美丽城市。
Overall, Heyuan is a beautiful place with rich natural scenery and unique culture.
Summary
Travel Journal
Introduction:
Body
Ending:
What we saw
what we did
How we felt:
final thoughts
A Clear Goal
stops / attractions
(features of each place)
Personal emotions and thoughts
Impressive activities
In the order of time/place
Descriptive language
1. I’d like to share one of the most fascinating experiences with you.
2. I’m glad to share with you a truly unforgettable travel experience that I had during my last summer holiday.
3. Last week/month/year, I paid a visit to ..., which is famous for...
4. It lies/is located/situated in ...
5. The scenery is so beautiful that it takes the tourists’ breath away.
6. Wherever you go, there are plenty of activities to choose from.
7. It has become one of the most popular tourist attractions in the world.
8. We were all tired, but our trip to ... was really unforgettable.
常用表达
Writing—Revise the draft
Dear Mum and Dad,
Thank you so much for allowing me to go on this journey! It has been a wonderful trip so far, and I am loving Canada!
We started in Vancouver, where we had two days to1. . (消磨). Later, we took a train to Lake Louise, 2. (穿过) Canadian Rockies, and then a coach to Jasper. Here, in addition to seeing a wide variety of animals, the scenery was 3.____________(壮丽的)— 4. (辽阔的) forests and mountains, beautiful blue lakes 5. (摄人心魂). From there, we took a long-distance train to Toronto. we were 6. (惊讶的) to see
kill
passing through
spectacular
massive
taking our breathe away
astonished
Writing—Revise the draft
the Canadian Prairie looks 7. (广袤无垠), stretching for 8. (眼睛所能看到的地方). But after passing Winnipeg, we were in a land of lake and 9.___________(绵延群山).
Arriving in Toronto, we 10. (登上) the CN Tower,
11.____________(眺望) the shores of Lake Ontario. Therefore, we were surprised to see12. .(从尼亚加拉大瀑布升起的云雾). Walking north, we saw hundreds of
13. __________________________(玻璃和钢筋建造的摩天大楼), and 14.__________________________(老式汽车从身边驶过). Then we had dinner with Lin Fei in Chinatown in the 15.___________(中心)of Toronto.
rolling hills
as flat as a pancake
as far as the eye could see
climbed up
overlooking
misty clouds rising from the Niagara Falls
skyscrapers of glass and steel
old-fashioned cars rolling by
dead center
Writing—Revise the draft (Student's Worksheet 4)
Dear Mum and Dad,
__________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________
(谢谢你们同意让我踏上这段旅途！到目前为止，这是一次美妙的旅行，并且我爱加拿大！)
Thank you so much for allowing me to go on this journey! It has been a wonderful trip so far, and I am loving Canada!
Subject
Opening: an appropriate greeting
Writing—Revise the draft
From there we travelled to Montreal where we visited 16.________ (可爱的)shops. Then we stopped at a 17. _________________(很棒的餐馆)where we met a cool guy. He believed that we 18.________________ (应该) to stay longer as Montreal is a city with 19. _________________________ (声色俱佳). Did you know that in contrast to Toronto, nearly everyone there speaks French Eventually, we 20.____________(向……飞驰) Halifax.
Overall, it has been a great trip filling us with so many happy memories. We plan on spending about a week here 21.________________ (休息一下) from our journey , and then we'll fly home.
Love
Daiyu
charming
fabulous restaurant
owed it to ourselves
wonderful sights and sounds
sped towards
getting rested up
Writing—Revise the draft
We started in Vancouver, where we had two days to kill. ① , we took a train to Lake Louise, passing through Canadian Rockies,②________ a coach to Jasper. ③_______, ④ seeing a wide variety of animals, the scenery was spectacular—massive forests and mountains, beautiful blue lakes taking our breathe away. From there, we took a long-distance train to Toronto. We were astonished to see that the Canadian Prairie looks as flat as a pancake, stretching for as far as the eye could see. ⑤ after passing Winnipeg, we were in a land of lakes and rolling hills.
Later
and then
Here
in addition to
But
Writing—Revise the draft (Student's Worksheet 4)
Arriving in Toronto, we climbed up the CN Tower, overlooking the shores of Lake Ontario. ⑥ , we are surprised to see misty clouds rising from the Niagara Falls across the lake. Walking north, we saw hundreds of skyscrapers of glass and steel, and old-fashioned cars rolling by. Then we had dinner with Lin Fei in Chinatown in the dead center of Toronto. From there we travelled to Montreal where we visited charming shops. Then we stopped at a fabulous restaurant where we met a cool guy. He believed that we owed it to ourselves to stay longer as Montreal is a city with wonderful sights and sounds. Did you know that ⑦ Toronto, nearly everyone there speaks French ⑧ , we sped towards Halifax.
Therefore
in contrast to
Eventually
Body
(describe your trip in detail)
Time
Route & ways of transportation
Attractions/Place of Interest
Activities – What did they do
Observations – What did they see
Emotion/Feelings
People you met
Writing—Revise the draft (Student's Worksheet 4)
______________________________________________________________(总的来说，这是一次很棒的旅行，给我们留下了很多快乐的回忆). We plan on spending about a week here getting rested up from our journey, and then we'll fly home.
In a word, it has been a great trip, filling us with so many happy memories
Closing: end the email in a natural way
Love,
Daiyu
Friendly sign-off
A possible version
Dear Mum and Dad,
Thank you so much for allowing me to go on this journey! It has been a wonderful trip so far, and I am loving Canada!
We started in Vancouver, where we had two days to kill. Later, we took a train to Lake Louise, passing through Canadian Rockies, and then a coach to Jasper. Here, in addition to seeing a wide variety of animals, the scenery was spectacular—massive forests and mountains, beautiful blue lakes taking our breathe away. From there, we took a long-distance train to Toronto. We were astonished to see that the Canadian Prairie looks as flat as a pancake, stretching for as far as the eye could see. But after passing Winnipeg, we were in a land of lakes and rolling hills. Arriving in Toronto, we climbed up the CN Tower,
A possible version
overlooking the shores of Lake Ontario. Therefore, we are surprised to see misty clouds rising from the Niagara Falls across the lake. Walking north, we saw hundreds of skyscrapers of glass and steel, and old-fashioned cars rolling by. Then we had dinner with Lin Fei in Chinatown in the dead center of Toronto. From there we travelled to Montreal where we visited charming shops. Then we stopped at a fabulous restaurant where we met a cool guy. He believed that we owed it to ourselves to stay longer as Montreal is a city with wonderful sights and sounds. Did you know that in contrast to Toronto, nearly everyone there speaks French Eventually, we sped towards Halifax.
A possible version
In a word, it has been a great trip, filling us with so many happy memories. We plan on spending about a week here getting rested up from our journey, and then we'll fly home.
Love,
Daiyu
　　假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom写信询问你的一次难忘的旅游经历。请你用英语给他回一封邮件，要点包括：
　　1. 旅游过程（成都峨眉山观日出，参观四川乐山大佛）；
　　2. 你的感受。
注意：
　　1. 词数80左右；
　　2. 开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
参考词汇：大佛 the Giant Stone Buddha
Assignment---Writing
Dear Tom，
　　I’m glad to share a truly fascinating travel experience that I had during my last summer holiday with you.
Yours，
Li Hua
审题
1.确定文体：这是一篇电子邮件，向朋友介绍一次难忘的旅游经历。
2.主体时态：以一般过去时为主。景物描写用一般现在时。
3.主体人称：人称应该以第一人称和第三人称为主。
谋篇
第一段：开门见山，介绍本次旅行的时间、地点、人员及交通方式等。
第二段：自己的游览经历，注意详略得当。
第三段：总结全文，发出邀请。
审题谋篇
THANKS FOR
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