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A Letter of Apology
[道歉信】 应用文写作
Past Paper Presentation
时间 试卷 体裁 题材
2016 全国卷 书信体 道歉信（因故不能赴约，写邮件表达歉意）
2021 北京卷 书信体 因故不能赴约，写信表达歉意
2021 全国甲卷 书信体 咨询信（了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人）
2021 新课标I&II卷 书信体 投稿信（对报纸创刊10周年投稿的文章）
2022 全国甲卷 投稿 倡议信（世界海洋日）
2022 新课标I&II卷 书信体 邀请信（邀请外教Caroline到校广播站做一次访谈）
2023 全国乙卷 投稿 分享信（分享自己在假期中学到的新技能）
2023 全国甲卷 投稿 短文投稿（用英文讲中国故事"的征文活动）
2023 新课标I&II卷 书信体 建议信（对外教对学生的分组提意见）
2024 新课标I&II卷 书信体 分享信（英国朋友Chris自己在公园美术课上的经历）
Dear Paul,
I'm writing to sincerely apologize for missing the booking time for the Chinese Calligraphy Exhibition tickets I promised to get for you.
I'm terribly sorry, but I completely forgot to set an alarm and missed the deadline by accident. To make it up, I checked and found that limited tickets may be available at the venue on the day. I suggest we arrive very early to queue for thDear Paul,
I'm writing to sincerely apologize for missing the booking time for the Chinese Calligraphy Exhibition tickets I promised to get for you.
I'm terribly sorry, but I completely forgot to set an alarm and missed the deadline by accident. To make it up, I checked and found that limited tickets may be available at the venue on the day. I suggest we arrive very early to queue for them. Alternatively, I'll keep checking online in case more slots open up or the exhibition gets extended.
Yours,
Li Huaem. Alternatively, I'll keep checking online in case more slots open up or the exhibition gets extended.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Bob,
How are you doing I am writing to express my apology for not being able to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.I feel sorry about it and want you to know the reason why I can not make it.
I just received the notice from my teacher that I have been selected as a volunteer for the International Culture Forum.Therefore,I have to cancel our original plan.Do you think it is possible that we go to the bookstore next Friday I believe that we will have fun together.
Once again,I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.I sincerely hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology.
Yours,
Li Hua
Figure out its structure【2016年全国卷】
Para 1
Para 2
Para 3
Greetings 问候
Say sorry 致歉
解释原因
弥补方案
再次致歉
①I am very sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.
②I just have to attend a meeting that afternoon.
③Shall we go on Saturday morning
④If it's convenient for you, let's meet at 8：30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best.
⑤I should be free any time this weekend.
⑥The meeting is important to me. I can't miss it however.
高级词汇抓住眼
(升格①⑤⑥句中的加蓝词汇)
1．very→__________
2．free→_________
3．important→___________
terribly
available
significant
复习大书→打造亮点——增能力分
/more than
高级句式点亮篇(按要求升级句子)
1．用宾语从句(remember)
扩写句②I just have to attend a meeting that afternoon.
I have just remembered that I have to attend a meeting that afternoon.
2．用so ...that从句
合并句⑥The meeting is important to me. I can't miss it however.
The meeting is so significant to me that I can't miss it however.
Dear Paul,
I'm writing to sincerely apologize for missing the booking time for the Chinese Calligraphy Exhibition tickets I promised to get for you.
I'm terribly sorry, but I completely forgot to set an alarm and missed the deadline by accident. To make it up, I checked and found that limited tickets may be available at the venue on the day. I suggest we arrive very early to queue for thDear Paul,
I'm writing to sincerely apologize for missing the booking time for the Chinese Calligraphy Exhibition tickets I promised to get for you.
I'm terribly sorry, but I completely forgot to set an alarm and missed the deadline by accident. To make it up, I checked and found that limited tickets may be available at the venue on the day. I suggest we arrive very early to queue for them. Alternatively, I'll keep checking online in case more slots open up or the exhibition gets extended.
Yours,
Li Huaem. Alternatively, I'll keep checking online in case more slots open up or the exhibition gets extended.
Yours,
Li Hua
Figure out its structure
写不下的情况下，可以不打招呼
但如果是长辈，还是写一句
Dear Paul,
I'm writing to sincerely apologize for missing the booking time for the Chinese Calligraphy Exhibition tickets I promised to get for you.
I'm terribly sorry, but I completely forgot to set an alarm and missed the deadline by accident. To make it up, I checked and found that limited tickets may be available at the venue on the day. I suggest we arrive very early to queue for thDear Paul,
I'm writing to sincerely apologize for missing the booking time for the Chinese Calligraphy Exhibition tickets I promised to get for you.
I'm terribly sorry, but I completely forgot to set an alarm and missed the deadline by accident. To make it up, I checked and found that limited tickets may be available at the venue on the day. I suggest we arrive very early to queue for them. Alternatively, I'll keep checking online in case more slots open up or the exhibition gets extended.
Yours,
Li Huaem. Alternatively, I'll keep checking online in case more slots open up or the exhibition gets extended.
Yours,
Li Hua
How to test the apology letter
未能赴约：
① 活动不能去参加 (道歉时，活动还没有开始);
② 活动没有去参加(道歉时，活动已经结束);
③ 答应的事情(或任务)没有按时完成等。
给别人造成了损失：
如把对方东西弄丢；把车给损坏了
造成他人的不便
如果你是李华，外教Mike邀请你担任英语俱乐部下周五举办的"Drama Night"的主持人。现你因故无法出席，请写信说明情况。内容包括:
1.表示歉意;
2.说明原因。
1. 体裁： 道歉信
2. 人称： 第一人称
3. 时态： 一般现在时
4. 语言： 得体，正式
Practical application
下周五
歉意
现
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Para 1（P19）:
我写信是想向你致歉，这周六下午无法赴约与你一同听讲座。
我在此信中致以深深遗憾。
正式点
随意点
I'm writing to apologize to you for being unable to go to the lecture with you this Saturday afternoon.
I am writing to show my deep regret.
我很非常抱歉告知你，我无法出席你下周末的婚礼。
I am very sorry to tell you that I am unable to attend your wedding next week.
as scheduled/ planned
正如计划的那样
for being unable to do sth
I’d like
DOCER_WPS
I'm writing to apologize to you for being unable to 事件+ 时间.
或 I am very sorry to tell you that I am unable to 事件+ 时间.
Sample:
[Practice ]
假设你是李华。你和英国好友Jack原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 表达歉意并说明原因；
2. 提出建议并给出理由。
最近过得好吗？我想为我没能按计划陪你周末一起外出向你道歉。
I'm writing to apologize to you for being unable to
go out with you
this weekend
as scheduled.
I’d like
你给英国朋友Chris写一封信，内容包括：
1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游
2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往；
3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。
我想为我不能按计划7月份和你一起去云南旅游向你道歉。
I'm writing to apologize to you for being unable to
travel to Yunnan
in July
as scheduled.
I’d like
with you
Para 1:
如果你是李华，外教Mike邀请你担任英语俱乐部下周五举办的"Drama Night"的主持人。现你因故无法出席，请写信说明情况。
我写信是想向你致歉，时间无法赴约事件。
我在此信中致以深深遗憾。
正式点
I'm writing to apologize to you for being unable to
go to the lecture with you this Saturday afternoon.
host the Drama Night
be a host of the Drama Night
next Friday
as scheduled.
I’d like
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P 20 三 7-9
解释原因→ 进一步解释
The reason why I break the promise is that ....
Besides,/ Additionally/ And, etc.
过渡句： 我之所以违约的原因是....
Para 2（P19-20）:
弥补方案
can’t make it
Para 2:
家人或自己生病
受伤
be ill
be injured
陪....去医院
accompany sb to ..
照顾
The reason why I break the promise is that ....
[Exercise]
1. 我违背约定的原因是我妹妹突然生病了，我不得不在医院照顾她。
2.我违背约定的原因是我的腿受伤了，医生建议我休息一段时间。
my sister was ill suddenly,
The reason why I break the promise is that
look after
my legs were injured terribly,
找理由
休息一段时间
rest for ...
and I have to look after her in hospital.
The reason why I break the promise is that
and my doctor advised me to rest for a few days.
can’t make it
Para 2:
家人或自己生病
受伤
be ill
be injured
陪....去医院
accompany sb to ..
照顾
The reason why I break the promise is that ....
look after
找理由
休息一段时间
rest for ...
专心学习
focus on my study
碰巧有一个考试
happen to have an important exam
碰巧有一个为我妈妈准备的生日派对
happen to have a party for my
mom
被选中去参加....
被选中去参加....
be chosen to take part in ...
be chosen to be a volunteer in....
can’t make it
Para 2:
The reason why I break the promise is that I have been informed suddenly that I have to attend an important meeting,which I can't miss/refuse.(临时被通知去.....，我不能错过、拒绝）
找理由
上网课
take online lessons
参加一个重要的班会
attend an important class meeting
被选中去参加....
被选中去当....
be chosen to take part in ...
be chosen to be a volunteer in....
can’t make it
DOCER_WPS
I'm writing to apologize to you for being unable to 事件+ 时间.
或 I am very sorry to tell you that I am unable to 事件+ 时间.
Sample:
The reason why I break the promise/can’t make it is that ...理由
The reason why I break the promise/can’t make it is that I have been informed suddenly that I have to 理由,which I can't miss/refuse.
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P 20 三 7-9
解释原因→ 进一步解释
The reason why I break the promise/can’t make it is that ....
1.Is it convenient for you if we go next Saturday morning If not,please let me know what time suits you best.
2.To make up for it，so shall we meet...if you are available
Besides,/ Additionally/ And, etc.
过渡句： 我之所以违约的原因是....
Para 2（P19-20）:
弥补方案
3. Please let me know if there’s anything else I can do to help (with...).
DOCER_WPS
I'm writing to apologize to you for being unable to 事件+ 时间.
或 I am very sorry to tell you that I am unable to 事件+ 时间.
Sample:
The reason why I break the promise/can’t make it is that ....理由
The reason why I break the promise/can’t make it is that I have been informed suddenly that I have to 理由,which I can't miss/refuse.
Shall we meet...if you are available
Please let me know if there’s anything else I can do to help (with...).
Para 2:
如果你是李华，外教Mike邀请你担任英语俱乐部下周五举办的"Drama Night"的主持人。现你因故无法出席，请写信说明情况。
正式点
my legs were injured terribly,
The reason why I break the promise is that
and my doctor advised me to rest for a few days.
Please let me know if there’s anything else I can do to help with the event preparation.
1.I do hope you can understand me and accept my apology. (P 20 S1）
2.Once again,I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused.(P 20 S4）
Say sorry again
Please allow me to say sorry again.
Looking forward to your early reply.
I hope ....will be a great success!
Para 3:
Blessing or Reply
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I'm writing to apologize to you for being unable to 事件+ 时间.
Sample（正式）:
The reason why I break the promise is that I have been informed suddenly that I have to 理由,which I can't miss/refuse.
Shall we meet...if you are available
Please let me know if there’s anything else I
Once again,I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused.
Looking forward to your early reply.
can do to help (with...).
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I am very sorry to tell you that I am unable to 事件+ 时间.
Sample（随意）:
The reason why I break the promise is that ....理由
Shall we meet...if you are available
Please let me know if there’s anything else I can do to help (with...).
Once again,I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Para 1:
如果你是李华，外教Mike邀请你担任英语俱乐部下周五举办的"Drama Night"的主持人。现你因故无法出席，请写信说明情况。
I'd like to apologize to you for being unable to host the Drama Night next Friday as scheduled.
The reason why I break the promise is that my legs were injured terribly, and my doctor advised me to rest for a few days. Please let me know if there’s anything else I can do to help with the event preparation.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Once again, I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused.
A Letter of
Apology
Para 1
Para 2
Para 3
Greetings
Say sorry
Say sorry again
Explaination
Make up
Wish Success
Summary
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假如你是李华，你和你的外籍好友Andrew约好了本周末去图书馆，但是你因为临时要参加学校组织的“垃圾分类，全民行动”志愿活动而不能赴约。请根据以下要点给他写一份道歉信。内容要点：
1.表达歉意；
2.简要介绍活动内容和意义；
3.另约时间。
Homework:
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Dear Andrew,
I hope this message finds you well. I’m writing to sincerely apologize for not being able to meet you at the library this weekend as we planned.
The reason why I break my promise is that I have been informed to participate in a volunteering activity called “Garbage Sorting organized by school, Everyone’s Action,” which requires my attendance during the same time.
To promote environmental awareness in our campus, our school will hand out leaflets about educating residents on how to properly sort and recycle waste. I feel it’s meaningful, though I truly regret that it coincides with our arrangement.
To make up for it, shall we meet at the library next weekend if you are available
Once again, I’m very sorry for any inconvenience caused. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
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