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Unit 5 主题写作专项
1. 话题概述
本单元的主题是“自然灾害” (Natural Disasters), 要求学生以第一人称叙事，结合过去进行时，生动展现一天中因天气或灾害引发的系列事件。
主要写作维度 1. 以时间为线索，描述从清晨到晚上的具体经历
2. 运用 “while + 过去进行时” 或 “when + 一般过去时” 结构衔接事件
3. 融入环境描写和个人感受
2. 审题与写作指导
体裁 时态 人称
记叙文 一般过去时 / 过去进行时 第一人称 (I) / 第三人称
必备高分词句 (Key Phrases & Sentences)
hit one's hometown: 侵袭某人的家乡
turn everything upside down: 把一切弄得乱七八糟
pour down: (雨)倾盆而下
struggle to do sth.: 努力做某事
in an instant: 立即，马上
"This day taught me nature's power and the importance of being prepared." (这一天让我见识到大自然的力量以及做好准备的重要性。)
3. 谋篇布局 (Structure Planning)
以 "A Rainstorm Experience" 为例：
段落 写作思路与句型支撑
第一段
Introduction 开篇点题，引出下文：
In my memory, countless days have passed by, but there's one day ______________.
When I was ______________, dark clouds covered the sky like ______________.
Heavy rain poured down. The raindrops were ______________.
第二段
Body 介绍具体的经历 (重点运用过去进行时)：
While I was struggling to walk to school, strong winds (like angry beasts) ______________.
Classes were canceled because of ______________.
I felt so scared that I ______________ hoping ______________.
第三段
Conclusion 结尾扣题，谈论收获：
This day taught me ______________.
It's truly a day to remember, one that left a deep mark on my heart.
4. 佳作剖析 (Model Essay Analysis)
优秀范文: A Day to Remember 亮点评析
In my memory, countless days have passed by, but there's one day I'll never forget① — the day a huge rainstorm unexpectedly hit my hometown, turning everything upside down. It started early in the morning. When I was cheerfully getting ready for school②, dark clouds suddenly covered the sky like a giant black blanket③. Thunder rumbled in the distance. Soon, heavy rain poured down. The raindrops were as big as coins. While I was struggling to walk to school with an umbrella②, strong winds, as if they were angry beasts③, blew it away in an instant. I got completely wet. Classes were canceled because of the rising flood. I felt so scared that I held my mom's hand tightly, hoping the rainstorm would stop soon. This day taught me nature's power and the importance of being prepared. It's truly a day to remember, one that left a deep mark on my heart. ① 对比式开头:
"countless days" vs "one day"
形成鲜明对比，突出事件特殊性。 ② 时态运用:
"When I was getting ready...", "While I was struggling..."
用 when/while + 过去进行时，生动串联时间线索。 ③ 比喻修辞:
"like a giant black blanket", "like angry beasts"
增强画面感与紧张氛围。
5. 以读促写 (Reading for Writing)
(以下内容摘自本单元所选题目)
词汇积累
(Expressions) ① go out ② stay out of danger ③ look out for... ④ walk or drive through flooded areas ⑤ release a red alert for storms ⑥ die down
佳句赏析
(Sentences) Although the storm broke many things apart, it brought families and neighbors closer together. As dark clouds gathered over the city, the heavy rain was beating against the windows.
6. 写作实战 (Writing Practice)
题目：2025年5月30日，李华的家乡河北唐山发生了一场地震，幸运的是李华一家安然无恙。请以 Li Hua 的身份描述地震发生时家人的活动及地震后社区的情况。
提示信息：
What were your family doing (地震时家人在做什么 )
What was the community like after the earthquake (震后社区情况如何 )
*注意：词数不少于80 (开头已给出)；不得出现真实姓名。
My name is Li Hua. There was an earthquake at about 5:00 p.m. on May 30th.

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