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人教英语八下Unit3 写作专项
Growing Up（成长）
写作目标
结合本单元“成长”主题，针对成长中遇到的问题给出建议，达成以下目标：
能正确使用本单元“成长问题”相关核心词汇（如lonely、trouble、habit等）及短语；
能熟练运用“should/You’d better+动词原形”（提建议）、“In this way, you can...”（说明建议的作用）等本单元重点句型；
能按“回应问题→分析问题→给出建议→表达祝愿”的逻辑完成书信体写作，贴合“成长问题与解决”的单元主题。
题目解析
体裁：书信体建议文，需以校报编辑身份给新生Ben写回信，回应其成长问题并提建议；
人称：第二人称（针对Ben）+第一人称（表达建议）；
核心要求
内容：覆盖“Ben的两个问题（朋友少/英语单词难记）、对应建议及理由”2个要点；
字数：80词左右，用连词（besides、in addition）区分不同建议，提升行文连贯性。
思路点拨
书信开头：回应Ben的来信，点明他遇到的成长问题；
展开建议：针对“朋友少”和“英语单词难记”两个问题，分别用should/You’d better提建议，并说明理由；
结尾祝愿：表达对建议有用的期待，送上祝福，符合书信的交际功能。
写作模板（逐段拆解）
第一段：回应来信+点明问题（约25词）
写作目的：回应Ben的困扰，说明他遇到的两个成长问题
基础句式：I am sorry to hear that you... In your letter you said that you... because of... and you found it difficult to...
示例：I am sorry to hear that you’re having trouble getting used to middle school. In your letter you said that you felt lonely because of few friends and found it difficult to remember English words.
第二段：给出对应建议及理由（约40词）
写作目的：针对两个问题分别提建议，说明理由
基础句式：For..., I think you should... In this way, you can... Besides, you’d better... For..., you can... In addition, if you..., it will...
示例：For the first problem, I think you should join school clubs. In this way, you can make friends with the same interest. Besides, you’d better be friendly to others. For English words, you can read more stories. In addition, keeping an English diary will help you remember words.
第三段：结尾祝愿（约15词）
写作目的：表达期待与祝福，完成书信收尾
基础句式：I hope you will find these suggestions useful. Good luck with everything!
示例：I hope you will find these suggestions useful. Good luck with everything!
范文
英文
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school. In your letter you said that you always felt lonely because of having few friends, and you found it difficult to remember English words.
For the loneliness, I think you should join some school clubs. In this way, you can make more friends who share the same hobbies. Besides, you’d better be active to talk with classmates—smiles always make people closer. For English words, you can read more English stories and news to learn words in use. In addition, keeping an English diary every day will make it easier for you to remember words.
I hope you will find these suggestions useful. Good luck with everything!
Yours,
Li Hua
中文翻译
亲爱的Ben：
听说你在适应初中生活方面遇到了困难，我很抱歉。在信里你说因为朋友少总是感到孤独，而且觉得记英语单词很难。
针对孤独的问题，我认为你应该参加一些学校社团。这样你就能交到更多有相同爱好的朋友。另外，你最好主动和同学交流——微笑总能拉近人与人的距离。对于英语单词，你可以多读英语故事和新闻，在运用中学习单词。此外，每天写英语日记会让你更容易记住单词。
希望这些建议对你有用。祝你一切顺利！
你的，
李华
素材积累
核心短语
have trouble doing sth. — 做某事有困难
get used to — 适应
feel lonely — 感到孤独
join school clubs — 参加学校社团
share the same hobbies — 有相同的爱好
keep an English diary — 写英语日记
learn words in use — 在运用中学习单词
基础句型（含本单元重点）
基础句型 仿写句子
I am sorry to hear that... I am sorry to hear that you have trouble with math.
You should... In this way, you can... You should take notes in class. In this way, you can review better.
You’d better... You’d better finish your homework on time.
If you..., it will... If you read every day, it will improve your writing.
好句集锦
Growing up means facing problems and finding ways to solve them.（成长意味着面对问题并找到解决方法。）
Small changes in daily life can make a big difference to our growth.（日常生活中的小改变，能给成长带来大不同。）
Being active and friendly helps us build more connections in growth.（主动和友善能帮我们在成长中建立更多联结。）
谚语
A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.（千里之行，始于足下。）
Rome was not built in a day.（罗马不是一天建成的；成长是循序渐进的过程。）
No cross, no crown.（不经历风雨，怎么见彩虹。）
学生写作填空练习版
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school. In your letter you said that you _______(如always felt lonely because of having few friends) and you found it difficult to _______(如remember English words).
For the loneliness, I think you should _______(如join some school clubs). In this way, you can _______(如make more friends who share the same hobbies). Besides, you’d better _______(如be active to talk with classmates). For English words, you can _______(如read more English stories and news) to _______(如learn words in use). In addition, _______(如keeping an English diary every day) will make it easier for you to remember words.
I hope you will find these suggestions useful. Good luck with everything!
Yours,
Li Hua

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