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人教英语八下Unit5 写作专项
Nature’s Temper（自然灾害）
写作目标
结合本单元“自然灾害”主题，描述一次暴雨经历，达成以下目标：
能正确使用本单元“自然灾害”相关核心词汇（如storm、mess、fallen等）及短语；
能熟练运用“过去进行时”（描述灾害发生时的动作）、“hit+地点+时间”（说明灾害发生）等本单元重点句型；
能按“灾害发生时的情景→灾害造成的影响→灾后行动及感受”的逻辑完成写作，贴合“描述自然灾害经历”的单元主题。
题目解析
体裁：记叙文，以第一人称描述暴雨经历；
人称：第一人称（I）+第三人称（家人/他人）；
核心要求
内容：覆盖“暴雨发生时的家人活动、灾害影响、灾后行动及感受”4个要点；
字数：80–120词，用一般过去时+过去进行时描述事件，用连词（but、when）提升连贯性。
思路点拨
开头：用“hit+地点+时间”点明暴雨发生的时间，用过去进行时描述家人当时的活动；
中间：说明暴雨造成的破坏，再描述灾后人们的互助行动；
结尾：表达对此次经历的感受，升华主题。
写作模板（逐段拆解）
第一段：暴雨发生时的情景（约30词）
基础句式：A heavy storm hit... at... last... At that time, my family were at home: I was..., Dad was..., Mom was... We were all scared.
示例：A heavy storm hit my city at 11:00 a.m. last Sunday. At that time, my family were at home: I was doing homework, Dad was working on his computer, Mom was cooking. We were all scared.
第二段：灾害影响及灾后行动（约40词）
基础句式：The storm left... in a mess: ... But people soon helped each other: we... and...
示例：The storm left our neighborhood in a mess: fallen branches blocked roads, and some windows broke. But people soon helped each other: we checked on neighbors and cleared streets.
第三段：感受（约20词）
基础句式：The storm was scary, but it... We felt warm...
示例：The storm was scary, but it brought everyone closer. We felt warm working together through the trouble.
范文
A heavy storm hit my city at 11:00 a.m. last Sunday. At that time, my family were at home: I was doing homework, Dad was working on his computer, and Mom was cooking. The sudden wind and rain scared us all.
The storm left our neighborhood in a mess—fallen branches blocked roads, and some windows broke. But people soon helped each other: we checked on neighbors, cleared streets, and fixed small things.
The storm was scary, but it brought everyone closer. We felt warm working together through the trouble.
范文中文翻译
上周日上午11点，一场暴雨袭击了我的城市。那时我们全家都在家，我在写作业，爸爸在电脑前工作，妈妈在做饭。突如其来的狂风暴雨，把我们都吓坏了。
暴雨过后，小区一片狼藉，掉落的树枝堵塞了道路，还有些窗户被砸坏了。不过大家很快就互相帮忙，我们一起看望邻居、清理街道，还修理了一些小损坏。
这场暴雨很吓人，但它让大家的心贴得更近了。患难与共的时光里，我们都倍感温暖。
素材积累
核心短语
hit the city — 袭击城市
in a mess — 一片狼藉
fallen branches — 掉落的树枝
block roads — 堵塞道路
check on neighbors — 查看邻居安危
bring... closer — 让……更亲近
基础句型（含本单元重点）
基础句型 仿写句子
A... hit... at... A typhoon hit the coast at 8 p.m. yesterday.
At that time, ... was/were doing... At that time, we were walking home when the rain started.
The storm left... in a mess The storm left the park in a mess.
好句集锦
The sudden storm scared us, but we stayed calm and helped each other.
Even a bad storm can bring people closer together.
After the storm, people’s kindness made the neighborhood warm again.
谚语
After a storm comes a calm.（雨过天晴）
Unity is strength.（团结就是力量）
学生写作填空练习版
A heavy storm hit my city at 11:00 a.m. last Sunday. At that time, my family were at home: I was _______, Dad was _______, and Mom was _______. The sudden strong wind and heavy rain _______.
The storm left our neighborhood _______: fallen branches blocked the roads, and some windows _______. But people soon helped each other: we _______ carefully, cleared the messy streets together, and _______ small broken things.
The storm was really scary, but it also _______. We felt warm and happy when we _______ through the hard time.

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