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读后续写通用模板+主题分类例句
第一句
--Facing this situation, She felt a great sense of happiness welling up in her heart and surging through her.面对这种处境，她感到一股强烈的愉快感在她心中升腾，奔涌。
【情绪名词归纳整理】
高兴happiness ；伤心sadness； 惊讶surprise；害怕scare；失望disappointment；忧虑worry；感激appreciation；感激embarrassment；
第二句
情绪形容词+as sb+be动词，sb (still) do sth.
--Sad as he was , he tried hard to hold back his tears. （表现坚强）
尽管很伤心，他还是竭力忍住眼泪。
--Nervous as he was, David became determined to finish the race.（表现坚持）
尽管很紧张， David 决心完成赛跑。
怎样说
动词+with+情感名词(delight/pleasure/excitement/satisfaction/anger)
--She said with anger “why are you late”
她生气地说，“你为啥迟到了”。
怎么做
主语+动作A+动作B and 动作C (三个并列谓语,动作依次发生)
--The singer glanced at the audience, took a deep breath and began to sing.
歌手瞥一眼观众，深呼吸一下，就开始唱起来。
结尾句
帮助类
--It was probably then that she realized that a small act of kindness could be a huge light in someone's dark world, brightening their whole life.
(或许就在那时，她意识到一个小小的善举可能是某人黑暗世界中的巨大光亮，照亮他们的一生。）
成长类
--It was probably then that he recognized that it's never too late to go for your dream. As long as you grasp every opportunity and take full advantage of it, you will stand a chance to realize/fulfil your dreams.
或许就在那时，他认识到追逐梦想永远都不晚。只要你抓住每一个机会并充分利用它，你就有机会实现自己的梦想。
脱险类
--It was probably then that she knew that courage and calmness were the best weapons in the face of danger, lighting the way to safety.
(或许就在那时，她知道勇气和冷静是面对危险时最好的武器，照亮通往安全的道路。
人与自然
--It was probably then that we realized that only when we live in harmony with animals/nature can we have a brighter future.
我们终于意识到了只有我们和动物/自然和谐相处我们才有更美好的未来。
亲情类
--It was probably then that I realized that that family matters the most in the world.
我意识到家庭是世界上最重要的。
拿全国Ⅱ卷举个栗子：帮助类（下划线部分是通用模板）
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.
"I'm so sorry," I said with embarrassment. "What should I do I still have to rush to attend a meeting." "It's okay," he said generously. "Here's some spare change for you to take the bus." Hearing that, a great sense of sadness welling up in my heart and surging through me. Grateful as I was , I have to catch the bus.Without hesitation, I took off my watch, handed it to him, and said with anxiety" I'll come back to pay you in four days." Gunter rejected my watch. He wrote down his phone number and gave it to me. “Roses given, fragrance in hand. Just keep your promise, Sir.” With grateful tears hanging in my eyes, I kept expressing her gratitude: “Thank you so much!” Then I set off quickly and managed to catch the meeting.
Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised.
He picked me up at the bus station where he had dropped me off four days before. Beaming a warm smile at him, I gave him a big hug the moment I saw him. We chatted happily on the way to the airport. I told him that thanks to his generosity and timely help, everything had gone smoothly. I gave him an attractive souvenir I had bought at Prague, which he accepted with delight. We became good friends and kept in touch with each other regularly. It was probably then that I realized that a small act of kindness could be a huge light in someone's dark world, brightening their whole life.
常用主题模板
主题 01-个人成长类
Step1:成长前的苦恼(负面情绪塑造)
Step2:成长中(蜕变塑造)
Step3:成长后的升华(喜悦+感激+升华)
--Those words warmed Maya’s heart, a wave of relief washed over her.
这些话温暖了玛雅的心，让她如释重负。
--It was then that a spark of hope was lit up deep inside Maya
就在那时，希望的种子在 Maya 的内心被点燃。
主题 02-脱困类故事事(火灾、洪水、迷路等)
--Heart beating wildly, he was at a loss what to do next. As a few seconds passed, an idea came to her mind.
心在狂跳, 某人不知道该怎么办，几秒钟之后，脑海里出现了一个想法。
--Without hesitation, sb did sth. 几乎想都没想，某人做了某事
--With the aid of Tom. , he approached the problem finally.在... 的帮助在，我们最终解决了这个问题。
--A wave of relief washed over sb .我们所有人都如释重负。
主题 03-善举助人型
Step1:困难描写 (消极情绪+ 困难处境)
Step2:助人过程呈现 (想到办法+动作链)
Step3:皆大欢喜结局 (感激+感动+升华)
--Sometimes, a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference.
有时候小小的善行，可能足以带来巨大的改变。
--It is love that makes the world go around, which she felt deep in her heart.
正是爱让世界转动，她在心里深深地感受到了这一点。
--From then on, I made up my mind to pass on “love” to others. Just as a saying goes : “Roses given, --fragrance in hand. "从那以后，我下定决心向别人传递“ 爱” 。俗话说:“玫瑰予人，手留 余香。"
主题 04 人与自然/动物
--The bright sun shone, the light breeze blew and the green trees waved. 阳光灿烂，微风吹拂， 绿树摇曳。
--This magical kitten was changing our lives and this was just the beginning.
这只神奇的小猫正改变我们的生活，而这仅仅是开始。
--When dealing with them, it's not only we who take care of them, most of the time, it's they that heal us.
在和他们相处的时候，不仅仅是我们要照顾他们，大多数时候，治愈我们的是他们。
主题五 亲情、友情类
第一步： 冲突构造(误会、犯错等)
第二步：冲突化解(解释、道歉、弥补、回忆等)
第三步：亲情升华(诚实、珍惜等)
--Every time I faced challenges, a thought of giving up flashed in my mind, but the support of my family gave me the strength to keep going.
每次面对挑战，我都想放弃，但是家人的支持给了我继续前进的力量。
--From my father's words, I have realized that family matters the most in the world.
从父亲的话中，我意识到家庭是世界上最重要的。
--Without friends, the world would become wilderness.没有朋友，世界将变得荒芜。

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