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Make preparations for the class !
I promise I will
Hold on to my dream!
Race against time!
Try my best to achieve it!
Believe I'm bound to succeed!
I believe! I try! I can!
Fighting!!! Fighting!!! Fighting!!!
Unit 5 POEMS
Reading for Writing :
Write a poem
Type: New lesson
Lecturer: Winner
Class /, Senior 2
【课标要求】
1.能够读懂诗歌并分析其主题、意象、押韵词及修辞手法。
2.掌握诗歌赏析类短文的写作结构和句式，恰当运用衔接词与高级句式。
【考情分析】
1.考点提示：以应用文（书信、短文）形式考查诗歌赏析写作，要求解释诗歌含义、阐述主题及个人启示，是高考书面表达的拓展题型。
2.得分点：结构清晰、意象与情感结合紧密、高级句式的灵活运用。
【Learning objectives】
1. Analyse a sample short essay to further know how to understand a poem.
2. Learn to write an essay about your understanding of a poem.
【Key and difficult point】
Write a short essay about your understanding of a poem.
Step I: Leading in
Learn how to write a short essay about a poem
basic information author, length, rhyme, tone,etc.
images
& feelings
New vocabulary
inspiration & encouragement
v
Beginning
Body
Ending
A brief introduction
A detailed introduction to
the understanding of the poem
A general evaluation,
especially the significance and influence of the poem
Brainstorm: how to write a poetry appreciation
Step 1:
decide on a poem
Step 2:
Structure the essay
Introduction:
the general information
(author,length,
rhytms, and tone
Body:
(images, feelings and emotions, rhetorical devices)
Conclusion:
(the theme)
Step 3:
polish the language
Writing Task
假设你是李华, 你的英国笔友Peter 对唐诗很感兴趣，发来一首唐朝诗人李绅的名作《悯农》(Sympathy for the Farmers) 向你请教，请你用英语给他写一封回信，内容包括：
1. 简要介绍诗歌以及诗中所蕴含的作者的思想感情。 2. 阐述你的个人感受。
Sympathy for the Farmers
At noon, farmers are weeding，
Down the field, sweat is dropping.
Who knows rice on a dish，
Every grain is full of moiling（v.辛勤）
第一段：简要介绍诗歌的作者
及内容。
第二段：详细论述诗歌的主题。
第三段：启迪与感想。
译文：
农民在中午的时候在田地里除草，一滴滴的汗掉在了土地里。可又有谁能知道这盘中饭菜的来历，每一粒都是那么的辛苦。
简析：这首诗是写劳动的艰辛，农民的劳动果实来之不易。第一、二句“锄禾日当午，汗滴禾下土”描绘出在烈日当空的正午，农民仍然在田里劳动，这两句诗选择特定的场景，形象生动地写出劳动的艰辛。有了这两句具体的描写，就使得第三、四句“谁知盘中餐，粒粒皆辛苦”的感叹和告诫免于空洞抽象的说教，而成为有血有肉、意蕴深远的格言。
这首诗没有从具体人、事落笔，它所反映的不是个别人的遭遇，而是整个农民的生活和命运。诗人选择比较典型的生活细节和人们熟知的事实，深刻揭露了不合理的社会制度。告诉人们应该节约食物，不浪费。
审题
写作要求是用英语解释一首中国诗歌的含义，也就是改写诗歌。
写作时应注意下面几点：
1.确定体裁：诗歌赏析类说明文（可结合书信格式）
2. 确定人称：第一人称（表达个人感受与理解）/第三人称（诗歌赏析）
3. 确定时态：一般现在时（分析诗歌的永恒主题与特点）
谋篇
1. 开头(引入) ：介绍诗歌的作者、标题、篇幅、基本风格
2. 中间(分析)：描述诗歌意象、押韵特点、修辞手法，表达阅读感受
3. 结尾(总结)：阐述诗歌主题、启示与意义
1. Read the learning material from step 3 to step 4.
2. Think about more useful expressions in each paragraph.
Step II: Thinking
Step III&V: Dicussing&Presenting
1. Discuss in your group for useful expression in each
paragraph.
2. Show the answers on the blackboard.
Step VI: While-writing
【精彩好句积累】
1. A great poem is a fountain forever overflowing with the waters of wisdom and delight.—Shelley
一首伟大的诗犹如一座喷泉，不断地喷出智慧和快乐的泉水。—— 雪莱
2. People have always believed that poetry has a magical power, because it can lift people's spirits.—Bacon
人们历来认为，诗歌有一种神奇的力量，因为它能振奋人们的精神。——培根
3. Poetry shows us a strong power and makes us feel subtle emotion.
诗歌给我们展示了一种强大的力量，使我们感到微妙的情感。
4. I am delighted to know you are enthusiastic about Tang poems.
我很高兴知道你对唐诗感兴趣。
5. Not only do some classic works offer us joy and excitement, but also they encourage us to think critically.
一些经典作品不仅能让我们喜悦和兴奋，而且还鼓励我们批判性地思考。
6.Tang poetry is a symbol of traditional Chinese literature and plays a crucial part in Chinese culture, so it’s a must for you to have a good knowledge of it.
唐诗是中国传统文学的象征，在中国文化中起着重要的作用。因此对你来说掌握唐诗是很有必要的。（symbol/ play a ...part in.../ a must）
造句
完成句子
1. 下面这首是唐朝诗人李绅所写的名为《悯农》的诗。(title)
_________________________________________________ “Sympathy on the Farmers”.
2. 李绅很受中国读者欢迎。(popular)
________________________________________
3. 夏日正午时刻，外面天气炎热；农民依然在地里除草。(weed)
It is so hot outside at this summer noon time.The farmers ________________
___________.
Here is a poem by Li Shen and it is titled
Li Shen is popular with Chinese readers.
are still weeding
in the fields
Writing
造句
完成句子
4. 他们全身湿透，汗水频繁地掉在庄稼生长的土地上。
_____________________ and their sweat is frequently _____________________.The crops grow there.
5. 我认为对今天的年轻一代来说, 理解这首诗歌并珍惜每粒粮食是很重要的。
I think _________________________________________________________
the poem and treasure every grain.
Writing
They are wet all over
falling into the soil
it’s very significant for the young generation today to
understand
Writing
句式升级
1．用过去分词作后置定语改写句1，并与句2合成一个带有定语从句的句子。
Here is a poem titled “Sympathy on the Farmers” by Li Shen, who is popular with Chinese readers.
2．用as引导的倒装句改写句3。
Hot as it is outside at this summer noon time, the farmers are still weeding in the fields.
Writing
3．用“it is of＋抽象名词＋主语从句”结构改写句5。
I think it’s of great significance that the young generation today should understand the poem and treasure every grain.
Here is a poem titled “Sympathy for the Farmers” by Li Shen who is popular with Chinese readers.
It goes like this: Hot as it is outside at this summer noon time, the farmers are still weeding in the fields. They are wet all over with their sweat frequently falling into the soil, where the crops grow. But who knows exactly all our foods, the delicious dishes on our table, come from the hard work of the farmers
The reason why Li Shen wrote this poem is to remind people of the importance of the farmers’ hard work. I think it’s of great significance that the young generation today should understand the poem and treasure every grain.
Sample
Writing—A short essay about a poem
假设你是李华, 你的加拿大笔友Peter 正在学习唐诗,发来一首《游子吟》向你请教, 请你用英语给他写一封回信, 内容包括:
1. 解释该诗的含义;
2. 阐述诗歌对你的启示。
注意:
1. 请不要逐句翻译;
2. 词数80左右。
Song of the Parting Son
by Meng Jiao
From the threads a mother’s hand weaves,
A gown for parting son is made.
Sewn stitch by stitch before he leaves,
For fear his return be delayed.
Such kindness as young grass receives,
From the warm sun can’t be repaid.
Dear Peter,
I am very glad to know that you show such a great interest in Chinese Tang poetry. Now I will try my best to help you understand the poem Song of the Parting Son written by Mengjiao.
Here is the meaning of the poem. A son will be on a long journey. Before leaving, his mother sews and mends clothes for the boy carefully by the candlelight, afraid that he will come back home late. Mothers are the warm spring sun while we are new green grass bathing in their golden rays. How can we repay such a great love
Reading the poem, I feel deeply moved. Mother’s love is the greatest in the world. I’ll try my best to make sure my mother has a happy life in the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
Revise the writing until it is clear and logical in structure, correct in grammar, and appealing in contents.
Homework

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