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2026春冀教版八下 Unit 1-4 单元主题作文
01:自然文化 (Unit 1 Spring is coming!)
【题目】 假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom对中国的传统文化很感兴趣。春天到了,请你给他写一封电子邮件,介绍中国的“二十四节气”(The 24 Solar Terms)中的一个春季节气(如惊蛰 Jingzhe、清明 Qingming等),并分享春天里你喜欢的活动。
要点:
介绍春天的一个节气及其含义;
描述春天里人们的活动(如植树、放风筝、踏青等);
表达你对春天的喜爱。
注意:词数80-100词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
Spring is coming! It's my favourite season. Let me tell you something about it.
【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
Spring is coming! It's my favourite season. Let me tell you something about it. Spring is a season full of life. In China, we have "The 24 Solar Terms" to guide farming and daily life.
One of the most interesting terms is "Jingzhe", or the Awakening of Insects. It usually falls in early March. It means that the spring thunder wakes up the sleeping insects and the earth comes back to life.
When the weather gets warmer, people enjoy going outdoors. My friends and I often go on a field trip to plant trees. It is meaningful because it makes our city greener. We also like flying kites in the park to relax ourselves.
I love spring not only for its beauty but also for the traditional culture behind it.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
[总体分析]
① 题材: 电子邮件(介绍文化与生活)。
② 时态: 全文以“一般现在时”为主。
③ 提示: 结合Unit 1关于“Spring”和“Solar Terms”的课文内容,将文化介绍与个人活动相结合。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开篇点题。承接开头,用概括性语言描述春天生机勃勃的特点。
第二步:文化介绍。选取课本中提到的“惊蛰”(Jingzhe)进行介绍,解释其时间及“春雷唤醒昆虫”的含义。
第三步:活动描述。列举植树(plant trees)和放风筝(fly kites)等活动,并说明意义。
第四步:升华总结。表达对春天美景及传统文化的热爱。
[亮点词汇]
full of life 充满生机
come back to life 复苏(Unit 1 重点短语)
go on a field trip 去野外考察/郊游
wake up 唤醒
not only... but also... 不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
It means that the spring thunder wakes up the sleeping insects. (that引导宾语从句,解释节气含义)
It is meaningful because it makes our city greener. (because引导原因状语从句 + make sb./sth. + adj. 结构)
[结构亮点]
文章采用了“总-分-总”的结构。中间段落采用“文化+活动”的双层描写,既有知识性又有生活气息,符合新课标对跨文化交际能力的要求。
02:校园安全 (Unit 2 Safety)
【题目】 “安全第一,生命至上”。为了增强学生的安全意识,你校英语报正在举办以“How to Keep Safe at School”为题的征文比赛。请你根据以下提示写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括:
上下楼梯靠右行,不推挤;
在实验室(lab)里听从老师指挥,小心使用工具;
运动时注意保护自己,不在这走廊里奔跑;
遇到危险或意外(accident)及时求助。
注意:词数80-100词左右;文中不得出现真实校名和人名。
【参考范文】
How to Keep Safe at School
Safety is important to everyone. As students, we spend most of our time at school, so it is necessary to learn how to protect ourselves.
First, we should be careful on the stairs. Remember to walk on the right and never push others. Second, follow the teachers' instructions strictly when we are in the lab. Be careful with the tools and fire. Third, we shouldn't run in the hallways. When we play sports, we must warm up to avoid getting hurt. Finally, if an accident happens, ask teachers or call for help calmly.
In a word, safety comes first. Let’s take action to make our campus a safe place.
【详解】
[总体分析]
① 题材: 议论文/倡议书。
② 时态: 全文使用“一般现在时”,辅以祈使句。
③ 提示: 紧扣Unit 2“Safety”主题,覆盖课文中提到的楼梯、走廊及急救求助等场景。
[写作步骤]
第一步:引出话题。强调安全对于学生的重要性。
第二步:分点阐述。使用 First, Second, Third 等连接词,从楼梯安全、实验室规则、运动安全等方面提出具体建议。
第三步:总结呼吁。重申“安全第一”,号召大家共同行动。
[亮点词汇]
be careful with 小心……
instructions 指示/说明
in the hallway 在走廊里
avoid getting hurt 避免受伤
calmly 镇静地
[高分句型]
...so it is necessary to learn how to protect ourselves. (so引导结果状语从句 + it is adj. to do 句型 + 疑问词+不定式)
Finally, if an accident happens, ask teachers or call for help calmly. (if引导的条件状语从句 + 祈使句)
[结构亮点]
文章运用了清晰的逻辑连接词 (First, Second, Third, Finally, In a word),条理分明,使得建议具有很强的可读性和操作性,是典型的“观点+论据”结构。
03:体育精神 (Unit 3 Amazing sports)
【题目】 某英文网站正在开展以“My Favourite Sport”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿,介绍一项你喜欢的运动(如篮球、足球、排球等)。
内容包括:
你最喜欢的运动是什么;
你从事这项运动多久了(使用现在完成时);
这项运动如何让你受益(如:强身健体、团队合作等)。
注意:词数80-100词左右。
【参考范文】
My Favourite Sport
Sports play an important role in our daily life. My favourite sport is basketball. It is exciting and popular.
I have played basketball for three years since I entered junior high school. I joined the school basketball club last year. I practice it with my friends twice a week. Basketball brings me a lot.
First, it helps me build up my body and keep healthy. Second, I have learned the spirit of teamwork. My teammates and I always encourage each other, whether we win or lose. Basketball teaches me to never give up.
I hope more people can enjoy the fun of sports.
【详解】
[总体分析]
① 题材: 记叙文/说明文。
② 时态: 结合“一般现在时”(描述现状/益处)和“现在完成时”(描述持续时间,Unit 3 重点语法)。
③ 提示: 结合Unit 3关于奥林匹克精神及团队合作(teamwork)的内容进行升华。
[写作步骤]
第一步:点明主题。直接说明最喜欢的运动是篮球。
第二步:经历描述。运用现在完成时(have played... for...)交代从事这项运动的时间和频率。
第三步:阐述益处。从身体健康(physical)和精神品质(teamwork, never give up)两个层面展开。
第四步:结语。表达希望更多人参与运动的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
play an important role in 在……中起重要作用
build up my body 强健体魄
teamwork 团队合作(Unit 3 核心词汇)
encourage each other 互相鼓励
never give up 永不放弃
[高分句型]
I have played basketball for three years since I entered junior high school. (考点语法:现在完成时 + since时间状语从句)
My teammates and I always encourage each other, whether we win or lose. (whether...or... 引导让步状语从句)
[结构亮点]
文章不仅关注运动本身,还将重点放在了“运动精神”(如团队合作、坚持不懈)的挖掘上,使得文章立意更高,符合中考作文对情感态度价值观的考察要求。
04:规则文明 (Unit 4 Rules make for a better life!)
【题目】 “没有规矩,不成方圆”。为了创建文明校园,学校学生会向全校学生发出倡议。请你写一份倡议书(Proposal),号召大家遵守规则。
内容包括:
在图书馆:保持安静,爱护书籍;
在走廊(hallway):不跑闹,靠右行;
你的看法:规则让校园更美好。
注意:文中尽可能使用被动语态(Passive Voice);词数80词左右。
【参考范文】
Dear students,
Rules help make our school life orderly and happy. As students, we are expected to follow the school rules. Here are some suggestions.
First, silence should be kept in the library. Books must be taken good care of. We are not allowed to eat or drink there. Second, when we are in the hallway, we shouldn't run or shout. We should walk on the right side.
I believe that if everyone follows the rules, our school will be made a better place. Let's take action now!
Students' Union
【详解】
[总体分析]
① 题材: 倡议书。
② 时态: 一般现在时为主。
③ 语态: 重点考察 **被动语态**(Passive Voice),这是Unit 4的核心语法。
[写作步骤]
第一步:发出倡议。说明规则对校园生活的重要性。
第二步:具体规则。分场景(Library, Hallway)列举规则,刻意使用被动语态体现客观要求。
第三步:总结号召。展望遵守规则后的美好校园,呼吁行动。
[亮点词汇]
be expected to 被期望做……
be allowed to 被允许做……
in the hallway 在走廊里(Unit 4 词汇)
take action 采取行动
[高分句型]
Silence should be kept in the library. (情态动词的被动语态)
Books must be taken good care of. (注意短语动词被动语态中介词of不能丢)
Our school will be made a better place. (一般将来时的被动语态)
[结构亮点]
文章结构紧凑,使用了倡议书的标准格式。在列举规则时,灵活运用了主动语态与被动语态的交替(如 "We shouldn't run" vs "Silence should be kept"),展示了扎实的语法功底。

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