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My beyond-busy summer
I know how it feels to be so busy that things are not going smoothly.
One day, I was talking to my mom about summer activities. "I want to do everything," I said. I want to be a junior instructor for the Little Dragons Karate(空手道)Camp. I have to be on the summer swim team. And my friend Ollie and I already have two customers for our dog-walking business.
"Everything is a lot," my mom frowned. "You might be biting off more than you can chew." "Don't worry," I grinned. "I have strong teeth!" My mom smiled back, "In this case, it's your organizational skills, not your teeth, that need to be strong." "No problem!" I claimed.
The first week really was no problem. Ollic was out of town and the karate camp hadn't started, so my swim stuff was all I needed to worry about.
The next week was great too. I swam my fastest freestyle time yet, and a Little Dragon at the karate camp told me I was his favorite teacher ever! I did learn, though, that staying organized with two activities is harder than with one. My backpack was already stuffed with a towel and swim things, so I had to find a different backpack for my karate gear(装备).Riding my bike from the karate camp to the pool with two backpacks was a little bit of a challenge. But I still had it under control until Ollie got back.
"We're late getting our business together!" he said. "We'll have to spend every spare minute preparing." "But I don't have any spare minutes!" I said. "Did you forget we agreed to walk Alfie every Saturday And Muffin on Tuesdays at 4:00 " Ollie asked. I couldn't let Ollie down, so I picked up a third backpack and filled it with dog toys, treats and plastic bags. "There!" I said. "I'm all set."
注意：
续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式作答。
However, it didn't take long for everything to turn into a mess.

I hated admitting I was wrong, but I knew I needed to change.

范文1：
However, it didn't take long for everything to turn into a mess. That Tuesday at 4:00, while walking Muffin, I was struggling with three stuffed backpacks-swim stuff on the bike seat, karate gear on my back, and dog supplies at my waist. Suddenly, a car scared Muffin, who dashed onto the road. Running cars only panicked him more, and the louder I called, the faster he ran. Burdened by the bags, I couldn't keep up and soon lost sight of him. I had no choice but to call Ollie and inform Muffin's parents. Fortunately, after two hours of searching, we found the frightened dog four blocks away. Exhausted, I hung my head while Ollie apologized repeatedly. I missed both my karate and swimming classes that day.

I hated admitting I was wrong, but I knew I needed to change. l adjusted my schedule: reducing swimming to twice a week and karate teaching to three days, freeing up Tuesday and Saturday afternoons for dog-walking. Gradually, things improved. I even found time to help Ollie attract new clients and take breaks. By summer's end, I had completed my swimming course, gained dedicated karate students, and received a heartfelt thank-you letter from Muffin's parents. Busy yet fulfilling, it was a truly meaningful summer.

However, it didn't take long for everything to turn into a mess. On Tuesday, I rushed from karate camp to the pool, only to realize I had brought the wrong backpack-my swimsuit was missing! Then, I completely forgot about Muffin's walk until Ollie called me at 4:30, upset. The next day, I wore my karate uniform to swim practice by mistake. My mom raised an eyebrow but said nothing. I was exhausted, late everywhere, and my three backpacks became a symbol of my chaos.
范文2
I hated admitting I was wrong, but I knew I needed to change. That evening, I sat down with my mom and Ollie. I decided to quit the swim team for the rest of the summer and focus on karate camp and the dog-walking business. To my surprise, Ollie offered to handle the Tuesday walks if I took Saturdays. I have learned that being busy isn't bad--but being overwhelmed helps no one. Now, with just two backpacks and a clearer schedule, I finally enjoy my summer.

范文3：
However, it didn't take long for everything to turn into a mess. One Saturday, I pedaled my bike on the way to the swimming pool with my backpacks swinging violently as usual. However, much to my surprise, there was no swimsuit but karate equipment when I opened the backpacks. Desperate and sorrowful, I stood rooted to the spot, wondering what to do next. After a while, I gathered my courage to explain to my coach with my face burned with embarrassment. What's worse, I totally forgot to walk Alfie. Eventually, I had to be faced with another embarrassing moment!
范文3：
I hated admitting I was wrong, but I knew I needed to change. Dragging my heavy feet to home, I couldn't contain my sadness any more. Tears of regret rolled down my face constantly. The minute I stepped into my room, my mom noticed my depression. "What happened ", she asked in a worried voice. After telling her everything, she helped me make a more practical schedule without any complaint. I also decided to refuse the dog-walking business, only focusing on swimming and karate teaching. At that moment, I found the pure joy again. It was not until then did I realize my mom was right: you can bite off what you can just chew.
读后续写之情绪描写技巧
the ways of describing emotions描
情绪 情绪形容词 情绪名词 开心 joyful delighted happy joy delight happiness
激动 thrilled excited thrill excitement
难过 sorrowful sad sorrow sadness grief
惊讶 amazed astonished surprised amazement astonishment surprise
紧张 anxious nervous anxiety nervousness
害怕 frightened scared panicked fright/horror scare/fear panic
尴尬 embarrassed awkward ashamed embarrassment shame
后悔 guilty regretful guilt regret
愤怒 angry annoyed anger annoyance rage
感激 grateful thankful gratitude thankfulness
失望 disappointed frustrated depressed disappointment frustration depression
情绪类必背词汇
She was shocked.
She was confused.
She was sad.
She was crying.
How to make your continuation writing vivid
题材
题材
感受情绪
喜怒形于色
Don’t tell，just
show
Seeing the man she once loved so ruthless(无情的), Zhen Huan realized that she had been deceived(欺骗). Shocked and desperate(绝望的), she expressed her confusion, wondering how to accept the truth. Suddenly, a strong wave of sadness overwhelmed Zhen Huan. She was so upset that she burst out crying. Eyes filled with regretful tears, ZhenHuan finally knew that she was wrong.
She was shocked.
She was confused.
She was sad.
She was crying.
赏析比较
万能句型1
to one’s + 情绪名词，sb did sth.
令某人…的是
1. 令我们兴奋的是，她获得了冠军。
__________________, she won the championship.
2. Much to mom’s relief, her son returned home safe and sound.
使妈妈大大松了一口气的是，他的儿子安然无恙回来了。
=To mom’s great relief
To our excitement,
万能句型2
Out of+ 情绪名词，sb did sth.
出于某种情绪，某人…
4. 出于害羞，她选择了沉默。
________________she chose to be silent.
3. 出于尴尬，他低着头，什么都不说。
_______________________, he lowered his head
without saying a single word.
Out of shyness,
Out of embarrassment
情绪名词
固定动词
seize/take hold of 抓住
well up in 涌入
sweep/flood/rush over 袭来
overwhelm 压倒, 使难以承受
surround 围绕着
tear... into pieces 把..撕碎
envelop 笼罩
choke 噎住，堵住
sb
万能句型3“ 情绪名词 + 固定动词 + sb” + as/when sb did sth
(当某人做某事时，一股...情绪涌上心头)
a burst/wave/surge/sense/flush of +情绪名词 (一阵/一种 ...)
5. 一阵强烈的恐惧传遍他的全身，他一个字也说不来。
_____________________swept over him and he couldn’t utter a single word.

6. 一听到这个好消息，我很开心。
________________________took hold of me the moment I heard the good news.
A strong wave of fear
A strong sense of delight
变形：
sb. felt a great sense of +情绪名词+ welling up in one's heart and surging through sb.
某人感到一股强烈的......感觉在内心升腾，奔涌
7.Jane感到一股强烈的恐惧，在她心中升腾，奔涌。
Jane felt a great sense of horror _______ (well) up in her heart and________(surge)through her.
welling
surging
升级1：
句首可以加上doing sth，表示这种情绪产生的原因。
8. 听到为她的表演而响起的雷鸣般的掌声，一股兴奋感和骄傲感涌上了她的心头。
____________the thunderous applause for her performance, she felt a wave of excitement and pride welling up in her heart.
Hearing
升级2：
9. 简感到一种强烈的悲痛涌了上来，她大声哭泣。
Jane felt a great sense of sorrow flooded over her, _________(weep) loudly.
句尾可以加上doing sth，表示这种情绪产生后
的结果或伴随动作。
weeping
升级3：
句首句尾可以加上with复合结构的伴随状语，表示这种情绪产生的原因、结果或状态。
10. With the race__________ (start), Jane felt a great sense of nervousness welling up in her heart and surging through her.
伴随着比赛的开始，简感到一种强烈的紧张在她心中涌出来。
11. Hearing the news that I was not chosen for the team, I felt a wave of sadness overwhelming me, with tears _______ (roll) down my cheeks.
听到我没有被选入团队的消息，一股悲伤淹没了我，泪水顺着我的脸颊滚落下来。
starting
rolling
万能句型4
情绪形容词①+情绪形容词②, sb. did sth.
怀着...和...的感情，某人做...
Nervous and slightly scared, I stepped onto the stage, took a deep breath and started to deliver my speech. （动作链）
有点紧张和害怕，我走上台，深呼吸，开始了我的演讲。
常用搭配
1.既开心又激动
2.既难过又沮丧
3.既紧张又焦虑
4.既担心又害怕
5.既坚定又自信
6.既惊讶又感动
7.既生气又失望
8.既疲倦又饥饿
delighted and excited
sad and frustrated
nervous and anxious
worried and scared
determined and confident
surprised and touched
annoyed and disappointed
exhausted and hungry
情绪形容词①+情绪形容词②, sb did sth, doing sth.
(感到)...和...,某人做某事1,并做某事2
自信而坚定，我走上舞台，开始发表演讲。
Confident and determined, I stepped on the stage, starting to deliver my speech.
升级句式
12. (感到)开心和兴奋的,他给我打电话，分享了这个好消息。
13.(感到)沮丧和无助的, Eric泪流满面，不知道下一步该怎么办。
__________________, Eric burst into tears, wondering what to do next.
___________________, he called me, sharing the good news.
情绪形容词①+情绪形容词②, sb did sth, doing sth. \
(感到)...和...,某人做某事1,并做某事2
Delighted and excited
Depressed and helpless
14._________________________(感到放松的和快乐的) , David waved at me immediately after crossing the finish line(终点线) , conveying his happiness and gratitude. （2022全国1卷）
15.________________________(既惊讶又感动), Mr. Alder believed what I said, giving me a second chance. (2023广东一模)
Relieved and delighted
Surprised and touched
情绪形容词①+情绪形容词②, sb did sth, doing sth. \
(感到)...和...,某人做某事1,并做某事2
sb was so+ 情绪形容词 +that 从句 某人如此......以至于......
16.她太伤心了，突然哭了起来。
17.我很羞愧，感觉自己的脸在燃烧。
She was __________that she burst into tears.
I was __________ that I could feel my face burning.
万能句型5
so sad
so ashamed
So+表情感的adj.+ was/were +主语 + that 从句
某人是如此的...以至于...
18. So nervous ______ that I heard my heart pounding /beating wildly.
我非常紧张，能听到我的心剧烈地跳动。
19. On hearing the unexpected news, so surprised ____ _____feel that
he froze with his mouth wide open.
听到这个意外的消息，他如此地惊讶以至于张大嘴巴僵住了。
升级句式
did he
was I
万能句型6
表情绪的adj + as +sb was/were, sb did sth.
尽管某人......,某人做了某事
20. ________ as he was, he tried to hold back his tears.
尽管他很难过，他还是努力忍住眼泪。
21.____________ as he was about losing the competition, John was determined to train harder .
尽管John 对输掉比赛感到沮丧，但他决心攻击能力的训练.
Sad
Frustrated
Tom was lost. He was so ______that his face________ .(他吓得脸都变白了) _______________________, he______________________________, (沮丧和无助,他泪如泉涌)wondering what to do next. Fortunately, with the help of a kind person, he found his parents. After a day’s play, _______ was Tom that ____________________.（汤姆太累了，很快就睡着了）
Writing
scared
turned pale
Depressed and helpless
he was in floods of tears
so tired
he fell asleep quickly.
万能句型7
身体部位+非谓语动词, sb did sth.
某人做某事，感觉怎样
Eyes filled with regretful tears, sb did sth...
眼里满含着后悔 的泪水,...
Eyes glittering with joy, sb did sth... 眼里闪着喜悦,...
Face gleaming with delight, sb did sth... 脸上洋溢着快乐,...
Heart beating with nervousness, sb did sth...
心因紧张怦怦直跳,...
Hands/legs shaking, sb did sth 手/腿发抖,...
身体部位+非谓语动词, sb did sth. 某人做某事，感觉怎样
22. 他感到开心和兴奋，终于拿到了他理想大学通知书(admission letter)，眼里闪烁着喜悦的光芒。
23. 出乎意料，大卫顺利越过终点线(finish line)，脸上洋溢着满足的喜悦。
22. ___________________, he finally got the admission letter from his ideal university, eyes __________(glitter)with joy.
23. To my surprise, David crossed the finish line smoothly , his face ________ （gleam）with satisfied delight .
glittering
gleaming
Delighted and excited
举一反三：翻译这个句子。
24. 他吓得脸都变白了。
Tom was so frightened that his face turned pale.
Frightened,Tom’s face turned pale.
Tom was frightened, his face turning pale.
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