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Comic Writing
漫画写作
你校英文报在举办征文比赛。请你根据下面的漫画，以“Memories”为题，写一篇短文进行投稿。
内容包括： （1）漫画内容；（2）你的看法。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80词左右。（2）请按照如下格式作答。
参考词汇：美洲驼（llama）
审题
Tense （时态）：
Person（人称）：
漫画内容：
漫画寓意：
simple present tense（一般现在时）
in the third/ first person
Don't be troubled by negative things. Pay more attention to the positive aspects. Both happy and unhappy memories are part of life
Structure：
para 1: describe the content
para 2: analyze the issues revealed in the comic
para 3: express your opinion
Sentence Patterns
Beginning:
In this touching/ vivid comic, ......
The first drawing vividly depicts a scene where......
Presented in a humorous yet profound manner, the two pictures present ......
第一幅画生动地描绘了这样一个场景：美洲驼捧着一摞记忆，问道：“大脑，你能帮我把这些悲伤的记忆删掉吗？”
The first drawing vividly depicts a scene where a llama, holding a pile of memories, asks, “Brain, can you erase these sad memories for me ”
这两幅画作以一种既幽默又深刻的方式描绘了一只美洲驼与自己的大脑进行对话。
Presented in a humorous yet profound manner, the two pictures present a llama’ s conversation with its own brain.
Interpretation:
The comic conveys a significant message that......
This simple but thought-provoking comic reveals/ exposes that......
Beyond the surface humor lies a deeper reflection on.......
Sentence Patterns
这幅简单却发人深省的漫画揭示了这样一个现象：当人们面对悲伤的回忆或负面情绪时，往往会本能地选择抹去或逃避这些情绪，而不是去理解和接受它们，或者以更积极的方式重新解读它们。
This simple but thought-provoking comic exposes that when confronted with sad memories or negative emotions, people often instinctively choose to erase or escape from them rather than to understand, accept, or reinterpret in a more positive light.
隐藏在表面的幽默之下是对人类那种想要抹去或逃避痛苦记忆的本能冲动（impulse）的更深层次思考。
Beyond the surface humor lies a deeper reflection on the human impulse to delete or flee from painful memories.
Opinion:
From my viewpoint, rather than......, we should......
Sentence Patterns
在我看来，我们不应试图抹去那些所谓的“悲伤”记忆，而应以感恩和智慧的态度去重新解读它们。
From my viewpoint, rather than attempting to erase so-called “sad” memories, we should learn to reinterpret them with gratitude and wisdom.
Presented in a humorous yet profound manner, the two pictures present ......(总述）分述具体内容
This simple but thought-provoking comic reveals/ exposes that....../ Beyond the surface humor lies a deeper reflection on.......
From my viewpoint, rather than......, we should...... By doing so, we can......
Sample
Presented in a humorous yet profound manner, the two pictures present a llama’ s conversation with its own brain. A llama asks the brain to erase these sad memories, while the brain presents a large pile of happy memories, saying, “These are your happy memories though.”
Beyond the surface humor lies a deeper reflection on the human impulse to delete or flee from painful memories. But actually, we can choose to focus on the happy moments or to understand, accept, or reinterpret in a more positive light. The brain’s response is a reminder that our happy memories far outweigh our sad memories.
From my viewpoint, rather than attempting to erase so-called “sad” memories, we should learn to reinterpret them with gratitude and wisdom. By embracing all aspects of our past, we can cultivate resilience and a deeper appreciation for life’s journey， which makes our life truly meaningful.
Exercise
你校英文报正在举办主题为“Emotions and Growth”的征文比赛。请根据以下漫画，以“The Mask We Wear”为题，写一篇短文投稿。
要求：
描述漫画内容，并解读其寓意；
结合现实，谈谈你对“隐藏情感”的看法；
词数80左右，结构清晰，语言流畅。
可用词汇：pretense（伪装）、authenticity（真实性）、emotional suppression（情感压抑）。
Sample
Presented in an ironic yet profound manner, the comic presents a person putting on a smiling mask. A man forces a faint smile and says to himself, “Now I look happy.”, while the mirror reflects the person’s tearful face, replying, “But I see your tears.”
Beyond the surface simplicity lies a deeper reflection on the widespread pretense in modern society. It reveals how often we hide our true emotions behind social masks, leading to emotional suppression and a loss of authenticity.
From my viewpoint, rather than wearing masks to appear strong, we should embrace and express our true feelings appropriately. By doing so, not only can we foster genuine connections but we can also achieve healthier emotional growth, which makes us more resilient and healthy.

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