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Unit 9 Power of Nature 写作专项学案
写作目标
结合本单元“自然之力”主题，写一篇描述自然灾难经历、介绍自然灾害防护知识或阐述人与自然关系的短文，阐述灾害特点、防护措施及对自然的思考，达成以下目标：
1.能正确使用本单元“自然与灾害”相关核心词汇（如disaster、earthquake、typhoon、flood、snowstorm、heatwave、safety、protect、survive、damage、warning、first-aid kit等）及短语（keep safe、stay away from、hold back、put out、take action、run away from、hang on to、prepare for、in danger、aftershock等）；
2.能熟练运用复合词（如snowstorm、thunderstorm、earthquake、flashlight等），掌握副词比较级和最高级（如faster、more carefully、the safest等），正确使用“If there is a..., we should...” “When the disaster happens, it’s important to...”等常用句型；
3.能按“灾害/主题引入→核心细节（经历/防护措施）→感悟与启示”的逻辑完成写作，贴合“敬畏自然，学会自保”的单元主题。
题目解析
1.体裁：灾害经历类记叙文或防护知识类说明文，兼具纪实性与实用性；
2.人称：第一人称（描述个人经历、分享感悟）或第二人称（提出防护建议）为主；
3.核心要求
内容：覆盖“1个核心自然灾害（如地震、暴雨、台风等）、2-3个关键细节（灾害表现、防护方法、应对过程）、1个感悟或行动启示”3个要点；
字数：70–90词，描述真实生动、建议具体可行，语言符合八年级学生水平，体现对自然的敬畏与自我保护意识。
思路点拨
1.开头：明确引入核心自然灾害（如一次亲身经历的暴雨、需要警惕的地震等），用简洁句式点明灾害的特点或影响（如“去年的暴雨让我真切感受到自然的威力” “地震是突发且危险的自然灾害，学会防护很重要”），用情感化或警示性语言引出下文具体描述；
2.中间：若描述灾害经历，按“灾害发生→应对过程→安全结果”展开，描述灾害发生时的场景（如天色、风声、周围反应）、自己采取的防护行动（如躲到安全处、使用应急物品），结合复合词和副词比较级补充细节；若介绍防护知识，聚焦“灾害特点→具体防护措施”，列举不同场景下的自保方法（如室内躲护、室外避险、应急物品准备），用逻辑清晰的句式呈现；
3.结尾：分享感悟（如“自然既强大又无情，我们要敬畏自然、做好准备” “掌握防护知识能在灾害中保护自己和他人”）或发出行动呼吁（如“让我们学习灾害防护知识，共同应对自然挑战”），呼应单元“Power of Nature”的核心主题，传递敬畏自然、科学自保的积极态度。
写作模板（逐段拆解）
模板一：描述一次自然灾难经历（暴雨）
第一段：灾害引入与背景
基础句式：Last ________ (时间，如summer holiday/last month), a terrible ________ (灾害名称) hit my hometown. At that moment, I was ________ (当时正在做的事，如walking home from school/watching TV at home) and didn’t expect it to be so serious.
示例：Last July, a heavy rainstorm attacked my city suddenly. I was on my way home from the library when dark clouds gathered quickly and strong winds started to blow.
第二段：灾害过程与应对
基础句式：The ________ (灾害) became ________ (比较级，如worse/stronger) soon. The rain poured down, and ________ (灾害带来的影响，如the streets were flooded/trees were blown down). I remembered the safety tips from school: I ________ (应对行动1，如ran to the nearest store to hide/stayed away from windows) and ________ (应对行动2，如held on to a strong pole/took out my phone to call my parents).
示例：The rainstorm got much heavier in ten minutes. The rain poured like a waterfall, and the road turned into a small river. I didn’t panic—instead, I ran to a nearby supermarket to take shelter. I stayed away from the glass doors and windows, and called my mom to tell her I was safe.
第三段：经历感悟与收获
基础句式：After about ________ (时间，如an hour/three hours), the storm stopped. This experience taught me that ________ (感悟1，如we should stay calm in disasters). I also learned that ________ (感悟2，如remembering safety tips can save lives). We should always respect the power of nature.
示例：After two hours of heavy rain, the sky finally cleared up. This experience made me realize how powerful nature is. It also taught me to stay calm when facing disasters and remember safety knowledge. From then on, I always keep a flashlight and some water at home in case of emergencies.
模板二：介绍自然灾害防护知识（地震）
第一段：灾害引入与重要性
基础句式：________ (灾害名称) is a sudden and dangerous natural disaster. It can cause great damage to houses and even threaten people’s lives. So, learning how to protect ourselves during ________ (灾害) is very important.
示例：Earthquake is one of the most terrible natural disasters. It happens suddenly and can destroy buildings, roads and bridges in a short time. Therefore, mastering self-protection skills in earthquakes is essential for everyone.
第二段：具体防护措施
基础句式：If you are indoors when an earthquake happens, you should ________ (措施1，如hide under a strong desk and hang on to its legs) and stay away from windows and heavy furniture. If you are outdoors, you must ________ (措施2，如run to an open area) and keep away from trees, power lines and tall buildings. Besides, preparing a first-aid kit with food, water and a flashlight is necessary.
示例：When an earthquake occurs, the most important thing is to stay calm. If you are at home, hide under a solid desk quickly and hold its legs tightly. Never jump out of the window or use the elevator. If you are outside, go to an empty square at once and stay away from trees and power lines. What’s more, we should prepare a first-aid kit at home with enough food, water and a flashlight.
第三段：感悟与呼吁
基础句式：We can’t stop natural disasters, but we can reduce the harm by ________ (行动，如learning safety skills/preparing well). Respecting nature and being prepared can help us stay safe. Let’s learn more about disaster protection and face nature’s power wisely!
示例：We can’t control the power of nature, but we can protect ourselves through proper preparation and correct actions. Earthquakes are scary, but as long as we remember the safety tips and stay calm, we can increase our chance of survival. Let’s learn more about disaster protection and respect the power of nature!
范文
My Experience in a Snowstorm
Last winter, a fierce snowstorm hit my town. I was at school when the snow started to fall heavily. Soon, the whole world turned white, and the wind blew so strongly that the windows shook.
Our teacher told us to stay in the classroom and not to go out. She taught us to close the windows tightly and gather in the center of the room. After school, my dad came to pick me up. We walked slowly on the thick snow, and he told me to hold his arm tightly to avoid falling. The snowstorm made the road very slippery, so we moved much more carefully than usual.
When we got home safely, I felt relieved. This experience taught me that we should obey teachers’ instructions in disasters. It also made me understand the power of nature. We must respect nature and learn how to protect ourselves when facing its challenges!
范文中文翻译
我在暴风雪中的经历
去年冬天，一场猛烈的暴风雪袭击了我的小镇。我正在学校上课，雪突然下得很大。很快，整个世界都变成了白色，风刮得非常猛烈，窗户都在摇晃。
老师告诉我们待在教室里不要出去。她教我们把窗户关紧，聚集在教室中央。放学后，爸爸来接我。我们在厚厚的雪地上慢慢行走，他让我紧紧抓住他的胳膊以防摔倒。暴风雪让路面非常滑，所以我们走得比平时小心得多。
当我们安全到家时，我松了一口气。这次经历让我明白，在灾害中我们应该听从老师的指示。它也让我感受到了自然的威力。我们必须敬畏自然，并学会在面对它的挑战时保护自己！
素材积累
核心短语
keep safe 保持安全
stay away from 远离
hold back 阻挡；抑制
put out 扑灭
take action 采取行动
run away from 逃离
hang on to 紧紧抓住
prepare for 为……做准备
in danger 处于危险中
aftershock 余震
first-aid kit 急救包
power lines 电线
heavy rainfalls 暴雨
flooded streets 被淹没的街道
blow down 吹倒
take shelter 躲避
clear up 放晴
stay calm 保持冷静
avoid falling 避免摔倒
solid desk 坚固的桌子
基础句型（含本单元重点）
基础句型 仿写句子
If there is a ________, we should ________. If there is a typhoon, we should stay at home and close the windows.
When the ________ happens, it’s important to ________. When the flood happens, it’s important to move to high places.
The ________ became ________ (比较级) soon. The wildfire spread faster soon because of the strong wind.
We should stay away from ________ to keep safe. We should stay away from broken buildings to keep safe.
This experience taught me that ________. This experience taught me that preparation is key to safety.
好句集锦
1.Nature’s power is endless—we should respect it rather than fight against it blindly.
2.Disaster protection knowledge is a lifesaver; remembering it can help us survive in danger.
3.Staying calm and following safety tips are the most important things when facing natural disasters.
4.We can’t prevent natural disasters, but we can reduce harm through careful preparation and correct actions.
谚语
1.Prepare for a rainy day.（未雨绸缪——强调灾害预防的重要性）
2.Calmness is the best protection in danger.（冷静是危险中最好的防护）
3.Respect nature, and nature will respect you.（敬畏自然，自然也会善待你）
学生写作填空练习版
版本一：描述一次自然灾难经历
Last ________ (时间), a ________ (灾害名称，如heavy rain/flood) happened in my area. I was ________ (当时正在做的事，如playing in the park/doing homework) when it started.
The ________ (灾害) got ________ (比较级，如worse/stronger) quickly. ________ (灾害场景，如The rain poured down/The water rose fast). I remembered the safety tips and ________ (应对行动1，如ran to a high place/hid under a desk). My ________ (家人/朋友) also ________ (应对行动2，如came to find me/helped me).
After the disaster, I felt ________ (情绪，如relieved/lucky). This experience taught me that ________ (感悟). We should always be careful and respect the power of nature!
版本二：介绍自然灾害防护知识
________ (灾害名称，如Typhoon/Snowstorm) is a common natural disaster in some areas. It can ________ (灾害危害，如destroy houses/make roads dangerous), so we need to know how to protect ourselves.
First, before the disaster comes, we should ________ (预防措施1，如prepare food and water/close windows tightly). Second, during the disaster, if we are indoors, we must ________ (措施2，如stay away from windows/gather in a safe room). If we are outdoors, we should ________ (措施3，如find a safe shelter/avoid tall objects).
We can’t stop natural disasters, but we can ________ (行动，如learn safety skills/stay calm). Let’s ________ (行动呼吁，如remember these tips/prepare well) to stay safe when facing nature’s power!

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