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Unit 10 Lending a Helping Hand 写作专项学案
写作目标
结合本单元“伸出援手，关爱社区”主题，写一篇描述社区志愿服务经历的短文或介绍社区互助故事的短文，阐述助人场景、过程及收获，达成以下目标：
1.能正确使用本单元“社区与互助”相关核心词汇（如community、volunteer、help、neighbor、service、kind、care、support、friendship、activity等）及短语（lend a helping hand、clean up、look after、take care of、care for、offer help、work together、make a difference、chat with等）；
2.能熟练运用名词性物主代词（mine/yours/his/hers/ours/theirs）和一般过去时叙述过往经历，正确使用“offer to do sth.” “It’s kind of sb. to do sth.”等常用句型；
3.能按“主题引入→核心细节（助人过程/故事经过）→感悟与启示”的逻辑完成写作，贴合“邻里互助，温暖社区”的单元主题。
题目解析
1.体裁：志愿服务经历类记叙文或社区故事类记叙文，兼具纪实性与情感性；
2.人称：第一人称（描述个人经历）或第三人称（讲述他人故事）为主；
3.核心要求
内容：覆盖“1个核心事件（志愿服务/互助故事）、2-3个关键细节（时间地点、具体行动、他人反馈）、1个助人感悟或社区意义”3个要点；
字数：60–80词，描述真实具体、情感真挚自然，语言符合七年级学生水平，体现对社区的关爱与责任意识。
思路点拨
1.开头：明确引入核心事件（一次社区志愿服务或一段邻里互助故事），用简洁句式点明事件背景（如“上周我参加了社区清洁活动” “邻居李奶奶的故事让我懂得互助的意义”），用情感化语言引出下文具体描述；
2.中间：按“事件发展顺序”展开，描述志愿服务的具体内容（如打扫公园、照顾老人、整理图书）或互助故事的起因经过（如邻居生病时的照料、搬家时的帮忙），结合单元核心短语补充动作细节与场景互动，用名词性物主代词指代相关事物，让表达更简洁；
3.结尾：分享助人后的感悟（如“助人让我收获快乐，也让社区更温暖” “邻里互助是社区最美的风景”）或对社区的期许，呼应单元“Lending a Helping Hand”的核心主题，传递关爱他人、共建美好社区的积极态度。
写作模板（逐段拆解）
模板一：描述社区志愿服务经历
第一段：活动引入与背景
基础句式：Last ________ (时间，如weekend/Sunday), I took part in a volunteer activity in my community. We wanted to ________ (活动目的，如clean up the park/help the old people). It was a meaningful experience.
示例：Last Saturday morning, I joined a volunteer activity with my classmates in our community. We decided to help clean up the community park and look after the elderly who live alone. I was excited to lend a helping hand.
第二段：志愿服务过程
基础句式：First, we ________ (行动1，如swept the floor and picked up litter in the park). Then, I went to visit an old lady. I ________ (行动2，如helped her clean the room、chat with her about her daily life). She told me many interesting stories and gave me a small gift. Other volunteers also ________ (行动3，如helped water the flowers、carry heavy things for neighbors).
示例：First, we swept the paths in the park and picked up the litter around the benches. Then, I went to Ms. Zhang’s home—she is an 80-year-old lady living alone. I helped her tidy up the living room and wash the dishes. We chatted about her childhood, and she shared some delicious cookies with me. My classmates helped other elderly people take medicine and water their plants.
第三段：活动感悟与收获
基础句式：This volunteer activity made me understand that ________ (感悟1，如helping others is helping ourselves). It’s kind of everyone to ________ (行动总结，如offer their time to care for the community). I felt happy because I could ________ (收获，如make a difference to others’ lives). I hope to take part in more such activities.
示例：This volunteer activity was really meaningful. It made me realize that small acts of kindness can bring great warmth to others. Ms. Zhang thanked me many times, and I felt proud of myself. Helping others not only makes them happy but also enriches my own life. I will continue to lend a helping hand in the community and make it a better place.
模板二：讲述社区互助故事
第一段：故事引入与人物
基础句式：There are many kind people in my community. My neighbor ________ (人物，如Ms. Li/Uncle Wang) is one of them. He/She always ________ (人物特点，如offers help to others、cares about neighbors). I once witnessed a warm story about him/her.
示例：My community is full of love, and my neighbor Aunt Liu is a very kind person. She often helps others without asking for anything in return. Last month, I saw a touching moment that made me deeply moved.
第二段：故事经过与细节
基础句式：One day, ________ (事件起因，如our new neighbor Mr. Zhao moved in、Grandma Chen fell ill). Aunt Liu noticed it and ________ (行动1，如offered to help carry boxes、went to look after her). She also ________ (行动2，如shared her home-cooked food、helped buy medicine). With her help, ________ (事件结果，如Mr. Zhao settled in quickly、Grandma Chen felt better soon).
示例：One day, our new neighbor Mr. Zhao moved to our building with many big boxes. He looked tired and worried because he had no one to help. Aunt Liu saw him when she went downstairs. She immediately offered to help carry the boxes and showed him around the community. She also told him where the supermarket and hospital are. Later, she invited Mr. Zhao to her home for dinner. With her help, Mr. Zhao settled in quickly.
第三段：故事感悟与启示
基础句式：This story taught me that ________ (感悟1，如neighbors should help each other). A small act of kindness can ________ (意义，如make the community warmer、bring hope to others). We should all learn from ________ (人物) and lend a helping hand to those in need.
示例：This story made me understand that邻里互助 is the most precious thing in a community. Aunt Liu’s kindness not only helped Mr. Zhao but also made our neighborhood closer. We should all be ready to offer help to others. When everyone works together and cares for each other, our community will become a warmer and better place to live.
范文
My Community Volunteer Experience
Last Sunday, I took part in a volunteer activity organized by our community. We aimed to clean up the community garden and care for the plants there.
First, my teammates and I swept the leaves and picked up the rubbish in the garden. Then, we watered the flowers and trimmed the overgrown grass. An old man passing by praised us for our hard work. He told us that the garden used to be messy, and our efforts made it much more beautiful. We also chatted with him about how to take care of the plants.
This experience made me feel proud and happy. I learned that even small efforts can make a big difference to the community. Helping others and improving our living environment is a meaningful thing. I hope to join more volunteer activities and contribute my part to the community.
范文中文翻译
我的社区志愿服务经历
上周日，我参加了社区组织的志愿服务活动。我们的目标是清理社区花园并照料那里的植物。
首先，我和队友们清扫了花园里的落叶，捡起了垃圾。然后，我们给花浇了水，修剪了长势过旺的草。一位路过的老爷爷称赞我们工作努力。他告诉我们，这个花园以前很乱，我们的努力让它变得漂亮多了。我们还和他聊了如何照料植物。
这次经历让我感到自豪又快乐。我明白了，即使是小小的努力，也能给社区带来很大的改变。帮助他人、改善我们的生活环境是一件很有意义的事。我希望能参加更多志愿服务活动，为社区贡献自己的一份力量。
素材积累
核心短语
lend a helping hand 伸出援手
clean up 打扫；清理
look after 照顾；照料
take care of 照顾；照料
care for 关心；照料
offer help 提供帮助
work together 一起努力
make a difference 产生影响；带来改变
chat with 与……聊天
take part in 参加
organize an activity 组织活动
tidy up 整理；收拾
water the flowers 浇花
pick up litter 捡垃圾
trim the grass 修剪草坪
live alone 独自居住
settle in 安顿下来
home-cooked food 家常菜
share stories 分享故事
contribute one’s part 贡献自己的一份力量
基础句型（含本单元重点）
基础句型 仿写句子
I took part in ________ in my community last ________. I took part in a book donation activity in my community last Friday.
We wanted to ________, so we ________. We wanted to help the old people, so we visited the nursing home.
It’s kind of sb. to ________. It’s kind of Aunt Wang to help us carry the boxes.
With sb.’s help, ________. With Tom’s help, I finished cleaning the room quickly.
Helping others makes me ________. Helping others makes me feel happy and satisfied.
We should ________ to make our community better. We should care for each other to make our community better.
好句集锦
1.A kind heart and a helping hand can make the community a warmer place.
2.Volunteer work is not only about helping others but also about growing ourselves.
3.Neighbors are like family—mutual help makes life more beautiful.
4.Small acts of kindness add up to a big love for the community.
谚语
1.Roses given, fragrance in hand.（赠人玫瑰，手有余香）
2.Love is the most beautiful language in the world.（爱是世界上最美的语言）
3.Unity is strength, and mutual help is warmth.（团结就是力量，互助就是温暖）
学生写作填空练习版
版本一：描述社区志愿服务经历
Last ________ (时间), I took part in a volunteer activity in my community. We wanted to ________ (活动目的，如clean the park/help old people).
First, we ________ (行动1，如swept the floor/picked up litter). Then, I ________ (行动2，如chatted with the elderly/helped water flowers). Other volunteers ________ (行动3，如carried heavy things/cleaned windows). People around us ________ (他人反应，如praised us/thanked us).
This activity made me understand that ________ (感悟). Helping others is meaningful. I hope to ________ (愿望，如join more activities/help more people) in the future.
版本二：讲述社区互助故事
My community is full of love. My neighbor ________ (人物，如Uncle Li/Aunt Zhang) is a kind person. He/She always helps others.
One day, ________ (事件起因，如my family moved house/Mrs. Wang was ill). He/She noticed it and ________ (行动1，如offered to help/came to look after her). He/She also ________ (行动2，如carried boxes/bought medicine). With his/her help, ________ (事件结果，如we settled in soon/Mrs. Wang felt better).
This story taught me that ________ (感悟). We should learn to ________ (行动，如lend a helping hand/care for neighbors). Let’s make our community warmer together!

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