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Unit 5 China and the World 写作专项学案
写作目标
结合本单元“中国与世界”主题，写一篇介绍中国名胜古迹、阐述文化名人影响或介绍世界著名景观的短文，阐述文化特色、历史背景及文化意义，达成以下目标：
1.能正确使用本单元“文化与景观”相关核心词汇（如culture、tradition、monument、scenery、emperor、philosopher、explorer、symbol、civilization、heritage等）及短语（a place of interest、be famous for、play an important role in、pass down、be regarded as、in detail、stretch from...to...、be proud of等）；
2.能熟练运用定语从句（that/which/who/whose引导），掌握并列连词（both...and.../not only...but also...等），正确使用“It is known that...” “...is a symbol of...” “The reason why...is that...”等常用句型；
3.能按“文化/景观主题引入→核心细节（特色/历史/影响）→感悟与传承”的逻辑完成写作，贴合“融通中外文化，增强文化自信”的单元主题。
题目解析
1.体裁：文化介绍类说明文或人物影响类短文，兼具知识性与情感性；
2.人称：第一人称（分享感悟、表达自豪）或第三人称（客观介绍景观/人物）为主；
3.核心要求
内容：覆盖“1个核心主题（中国名胜/文化名人/世界景观）、2-3个关键细节（地理位置、历史背景、文化价值）、1个文化感悟或传承意愿”3个要点；
字数：80–100词，描述准确生动、逻辑清晰，语言符合九年级学生水平，体现对中外文化的理解与文化自信。
思路点拨
1.开头：明确引入核心主题（如中国的长城、文化名人孔子、世界景观埃菲尔铁塔等），用简洁句式点明主题的文化地位（如“长城是中国古代文明的瑰宝” “孔子是影响深远的思想家” “埃菲尔铁塔是法国的标志性建筑”），用概括性或情感化语言引出下文具体描述；
2.中间：若介绍名胜古迹，按“地理位置→历史背景→核心特色”展开，描述景观的具体位置、建造年代、建筑特点及文化寓意，结合定语从句补充细节；若阐述文化名人，聚焦“生平经历→核心思想→世界影响”，说明名人的主要成就、思想精髓及对中外文化的贡献；若介绍世界景观，围绕“建筑背景→独特魅力→文化象征”，描述景观的建造目的、设计特色及代表的国家文化；
3.结尾：分享文化感悟（如“名胜古迹是历史的见证，值得我们珍视与保护” “文化名人的智慧跨越时空，影响世代” “世界景观展现多元文化，促进文明交流”）或表达传承意愿（如“我要向外国朋友介绍中国文化，让世界了解中国”），呼应单元“China and the World”的核心主题，传递文化自信与文明互鉴的积极态度。
写作模板（逐段拆解）
模板一：介绍中国名胜——长城（The Great Wall）
第一段：主题引入与文化地位
基础句式：________ (名胜名称) is one of the greatest wonders of the world and a symbol of Chinese civilization. It has a long history and attracts millions of tourists from all over the world every year.
示例：The Great Wall is one of the most famous cultural heritages in China and a pride of the Chinese nation. With a history of over 2,500 years, it stands as a powerful symbol of ancient Chinese people’s wisdom and perseverance.
第二段：核心细节与特色
基础句式：It stretches from ________ (起点) in the east to ________ (终点) in the west, with a total length of about ________ (长度). Most of the Great Wall we see today was built during the Ming Dynasty, which was made of stone and brick. It was first built to ________ (建造目的，如protect people from enemies), but now it has become a popular tourist attraction.
示例：The Great Wall stretches from Shanhaiguan in Hebei Province to Jiayuguan in Gansu Province, covering about 8,800 kilometers. Unlike the early walls made of packed earth, the Ming Dynasty sections are built with solid stone and brick, which makes them more durable. It was originally constructed to defend against foreign invasions, and every brick and stone carries the memory of ancient Chinese history.
第三段：文化感悟与传承
基础句式：Visiting the Great Wall, I deeply feel the hardship and wisdom of ancient Chinese people. It is not just a wall, but a treasure of human civilization. We should ________ (传承行动，如protect it well and pass down its story) to let the world know more about Chinese culture.
示例：As the saying goes, “He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man.” Climbing the Great Wall, I am proud of my country’s splendid history. It is a bridge connecting China with the world, letting foreign friends understand Chinese civilization. We must protect this precious heritage and pass down its spirit to future generations.
模板二：阐述文化名人——孔子（Confucius）
第一段：人物引入与核心地位
基础句式：________ (名人名称) is a great ________ (身份，如thinker/philosopher/educator) in Chinese history. His ideas have not only influenced Chinese culture for thousands of years but also spread to the whole world.
示例：Confucius, born in 551 B.C., is a pioneering educator and great philosopher in China. He is regarded as the founder of Confucianism, and his wisdom has shaped the values of generations of Chinese people.
第二段：核心思想与影响
基础句式：Confucius had many wise ideas about ________ (思想领域，如human nature and behavior). His famous sayings, such as “________ (名言，如Learn the new while reviewing the old)”, teach us valuable lessons. He also emphasized ________ (核心思想，如kindness and good manners), which are still important today. His teachings have been translated into many languages and are studied by people around the world.
示例：Confucius put forward many important ideas, such as “Do not do to others what you would not have them do to you” and “When I walk along with two others, I may be able to learn from them”. He believed in kindness and respect, and his ideas about education have inspired countless teachers and students. His works have been spread globally, making him one of the most influential figures in world culture.
第三段：感悟与传承
基础句式：Confucius’s wisdom is a precious cultural treasure. We should ________ (行动，如learn from his teachings and carry forward his spirit). It helps us build cultural confidence and promote communication between Chinese culture and other cultures.
示例：Confucius’s thoughts are not outdated but still guide us in modern life. He teaches us to be humble, kind and diligent. As Chinese students, we should learn more about his ideas and share them with the world. In this way, we can let more people understand the beauty of Chinese culture and strengthen cultural exchanges between China and the world.
范文
The Great Wall: A Treasure of Chinese Civilization
The Great Wall is one of the most amazing wonders of the world and a symbol of China. It has a long history dating back to the Warring States Period, over 2,500 years ago.
Stretching from Shanhaiguan to Jiayuguan, it is about 8,800 kilometers long. Most of the existing sections were built during the Ming Dynasty, made of stone and brick. It was originally built to protect people from enemies, but now it attracts millions of tourists every year. Standing on the Great Wall, you can feel the grandeur of ancient Chinese architecture and the wisdom of the working people.
The Great Wall is not just a military project but a precious heritage of human civilization. It shows the perseverance and creativity of the Chinese nation. I am proud of this great wonder and will tell foreign friends about its story. Let’s protect it well and pass down this cultural treasure to future generations!
范文中文翻译
长城：中华文明的瑰宝
长城是世界上最令人惊叹的奇迹之一，也是中国的象征。它有着悠久的历史，可追溯到2500多年前的战国时期。
长城从山海关延伸至嘉峪关，全长约8800公里。现存的大部分段落建于明代，由砖石砌成。它最初是为了抵御敌人而建造的，但如今每年吸引着数百万游客前来参观。站在长城上，你能感受到中国古代建筑的宏伟和劳动人民的智慧。
长城不仅仅是一项军事工程，更是人类文明的宝贵遗产。它展现了中华民族的坚韧与创造力。我为这一伟大奇迹感到自豪，并会向外国朋友讲述它的故事。让我们好好保护它，将这一文化瑰宝传承给后代！
素材积累
核心短语
a place of interest 名胜古迹
be famous for 以……闻名
play an important role in 在……中扮演重要角色
pass down 传承
be regarded as 被视为
in detail 详细地
stretch from...to... 从……延伸到……
be proud of 为……感到骄傲
cultural heritage 文化遗产
ancient civilization 古代文明
foreign invasion 外来入侵
military project 军事工程
core idea 核心思想
spread globally 全球传播
shape values 塑造价值观
promote cultural exchanges 促进文化交流
基础句型（含本单元重点）
基础句型 仿写句子
________ is a symbol of ________. The Palace Museum is a symbol of ancient Chinese imperial culture.
It is known that ________ has a history of over ________ years. It is known that Confucius has a history of over 2,500 years.
________, which ________, attracts many tourists every year. West Lake, which is famous for its beautiful scenery, attracts many tourists every year.
Not only did ________, but also he/she ________. Not only did Zheng He lead seven ocean journeys, but also he promoted cultural exchanges.
We should ________ to protect our cultural heritage. We should follow the rules to protect our cultural heritage.
好句集锦
1.Cultural heritage is the link between the past and the present, carrying the memory of a nation.
2.The wisdom of ancient Chinese people is embodied in every corner of these famous scenic spots.
3.Famous people like Confucius and Zheng He have built bridges for cultural exchanges between China and the world.
4.Protecting cultural heritage is not only protecting history but also safeguarding the root of national culture.
谚语
1.Respect the past, embrace the future.（尊重过去，拥抱未来——适用于文化传承感悟）
2.A nation without culture is like a tree without roots.（没有文化的民族就像没有根的树）
3.Beauty lies in diversity.（美在于多样性——适用于多元文化交流）
学生写作填空练习版
版本一：介绍中国名胜古迹
________ (名胜名称，如The Palace Museum) is one of the most famous places of interest in China. It is located in ________ (地理位置，如Beijing) and has a history of over ________ (时间) years.
It was built during the ________ (朝代) and was used for ________ (用途，如imperial residence). The most amazing part of it is ________ (特色，如its ancient buildings and exquisite decorations), which show the wisdom of ancient Chinese people. Every year, thousands of tourists from all over the world visit it to experience Chinese culture.
I am proud of this precious cultural heritage. I will ________ (行动，如learn more about its history and introduce it to foreigners). Let’s protect it well and pass down Chinese culture to future generations!
版本二：阐述文化名人影响
My favorite cultural figure is ________ (名人名称，如Zheng He), a great ________ (身份，如explorer) in Chinese history. He was born in ________ (时间) and made great contributions to ________ (领域，如cultural exchanges).
He ________ (主要成就，如led seven ocean journeys) and visited many countries. His journeys not only ________ (影响1，如promoted trade) but also ________ (影响2，如spread Chinese culture). His spirit of courage and exploration has inspired many people.
This cultural figure teaches me that ________ (感悟，如persistence leads to success). I will ________ (行动，如learn from his spirit and contribute to cultural exchanges). Let’s remember these great figures and carry forward their spirits!

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