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(共17张PPT)
Unit 1 Helping those in need
Writing
Writing
Writing an email to ask for permission for a voluntary activity
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1 Wang Yaohas written an email to her headteacher to ask for permission for a
voluntary activity. Read the email and tick(√) the points that are included.
Writing
Writing an email to ask for permission for a voluntary activity
Read the sample email and see how it is organized.
Introduction
Body
Conclusion
Body
How
What
Why
Who
How does Wang Yao’s group plan to help children in need
Why is Wang Yao asking for permission for a voluntary activity
What does Wang Yao’s group plan to do at the children’s home
Who has offered to help
Language
Use polite expressions
(e.g. Could you please … )
Use complete sentences
Dear Ms Yan,
I am writing to you about my group’s plans to __________________________(Purpose of the email).
In order to _________________________(Purpose of activities), we plan to organize a visit to the children’s home next week. Five students from our class have offered to help.
We plan to teach the children there to do fun activities like _______________ (Activity 1) and _______________ (Activity 2). Some local shops have donated craft materials for us to use. We are also thinking about helping the children ______________________ (Activity 3).
We would like to visit the children’s home on ___________________ (Time). Could you please ___________________________________________ (Request for approval) Thank you for your support!
We look forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Yao
Writing
Complete the sample email.
start a voluntary activity
help children in need
flower arranging
paper-cutting
tidy up their rooms
Saturday, 23 March
give us permission to organize the activity
Purpose of the email:
Purpose of activities:
Activity: 1
2
3
People involved:
Time & Place:
Request for approval:
Writing
Discuss in groups and list the key points of the email.
To ask for permission to organize a voluntary activity.
(Activity name:______________)
To help ____________
Could you please give us permission to organize the activity
__________________________
__________________________
__________________________
Our class volunteers, __________
_____________________________
Writing an email to ask for permission for a voluntary activity
Write an email to ask for permission. Use the sentences in the sentence bank below to help you.
Key points Sentences
Purpose of the email We would like to organize a voluntary activity, and I am writing to ask for your support.
Time & place We plan to go to the Children’s Home on Saturday, 23 March.
Aim Our main goal is to bring these children joy.
Activities We will play some fun games together.
We will help the children clean their rooms and do their homework.
We will teach the children how to make paper-cuts.
Ending the email We hope you will approve this plan.
Writing an email to ask for permission for a voluntary activity
Writing an email to ask for permission for a voluntary activity
Check and revise. Check your writing and complete the chart, and then revise it.
评价内容 评分（1—5）
1. 我能理解并说出申请信的基本结构和内容要点。
2. 我能模仿范文，列出清晰的写作提纲。
3. 我能运用正式、礼貌的语言，完成一封格式规范的申请信。
4. 我能使用本单元所学词汇和句型（如动词不定式）来组织内容。
5. 我能根据评价量表和同伴反馈修改我的作文。
Dear Ms Li,
I am writing to you about our class’s plans to start a voluntary activity.
In order to raise money for children in need, we would like to organize a book fair at our school. Seven students from our class have volunteered to help with the event. The school librarian has also promised to help us.
We plan to collect used books from students and teachers. A local bookshop has also donated some new books we can sell.
We would like to hold the event on Saturday, 25 September. Could you please give us permission to organize this activity
We believe it will be a meaningful and educational experience for everyone involved.
We look forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Yan
Sample writing
Homework
基础作业
根据课堂上的评价与同伴反馈，修改并完善申请信。
熟记“句库”中用于表达写作目的、提出请求等的核心句式。
拓展作业
假设你的申请已获批准，请为这项志愿服务活动设计一张英文宣传海报，内容须包含：活动名称、时间、地点、目的、参与方式等。
（拓展层）进一步完善“校园二手书回收”志愿者服务活动的方案细节，并思考如何组织同学实施。
permission /pR9mISn/ n. 准许；许可
You must ask for your teacher’s permission before leaving the classroom.
arrange /R9reIndZ/ v. 排列；布置
She helped arrange the books on the shelf.
flower arranging 插花
Emily loves flower arranging and she makes a beautiful bunch of flowers every week.
donate /dRW9neIt/ v. 捐赠；赠送
Many people donate clothes and food to those in need during winter.
in order to 目的是；为了
He studies hard in order to get good grades.
tidy up 收拾；整理
Please tidy up your desk before you leave.
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