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Unit7
When Tomorrow Comes
Section B 3a-3c
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1.能够基于写作需求，在阅读“Mandy的未来梦想”范文、完成“未来规划笔记填写”后，在教师引导下开展写作准备，梳理“介绍个人未来梦想”类写作的结构，列出自己写作中对应“主题引入—具体梦想—实现决心”的内容要点。
2. 能够用本单元所学与未来、规划相关的词汇、一般将来时句型及逻辑连接词，撰写“我的未来梦想”短文，确保内容贴合个人规划、结构完整。
通过本课时学习，我们能够：
Learning objectives
3. 通过自评和互评，改进写作初稿，优化语篇逻辑、充实细节内容、修正语言错误，提升“介绍未来梦想”类写作的质量。
Warming-up
Listen and think
What will you be in 20 years
If you have a time machine,
what do you want to see in your future
What will you be in 20 years
A:What will you be in 20 years
B: I’ll be a /an....
athlete
photographer
film director
fireman
designer
musician
IT engineer
Lead-in
Free talk
Job
.......
hometown
A: Where will you live in 20 years why
big city
places of interest
long history
modern international
more chances
a famous city
long history
colorful cultures
Shanghai
Beijing
London
with family
many friends
delicious food
B: I’ll live in.../ I’ll move to...
Lead-in
Free talk
Place
to
Live
A: As a / an ____, what will you do on weekends
B: I’ll ...
Lead-in
Free talk
play with robots
play basketball
take a holiday on the moon
watch
movies
Place
to
Live
A:What will you be in 20 years why
B: I’ll be a /an....
A: Where will you live when you grow up why
B: I’ll live in.../ I’ll move to...
A: As a / an ____, what will you do on weekends
B: I’ll ...
Pre-reading
Pair work
Let’ read Mandy’s future dreams. It can help you write a passage about yours.
Pre-reading
Pair work
Pre-reading
Look and predict
What may Mandy talk about in the text
what she wants to be
where she will live
how she can make dreams come true
My Dreams for the Future
Read about Mandy’s dreams for the future and find out what she wants to be.
Mandy wants to be an artist.
3a
She will live in the countryside and stay close to nature.
While-reading
Read and find out
1. What does she want to be
2. Where will she live
Para.1
Para.2
Para.3
While-reading
Match the main idea with each paragraph
B. Mandy’s dream job in the future
C. Mandy’s dream life in the future
A. Mandy’s plan to make her dreams come true
While-reading
Read for structure
Mandy’s dream job in the future
Mandy’s dream life in the future
Mandy’s plan to achieve her dreams
Which one is the right structure
1
2
3
1
2
4
1
2
3
A
C
B
How does the writer start the topic
By asking a question.
In this way, the writer introduces the topic directly and draws readers’ attention quickly.
While-reading
Read Paragraph 1 and answer
Tip 1:Use a suitable way to start your topic
Can you think of any other ways to start a topic
While-reading
Read Paragraph 1 and answer
1. Direct statement (直接陈述)
My biggest dream is to become a ______ , because I am good at/interested in ______.
In 20 years, I want to be a ...
2. Role Model Mention(提及榜样)
My hero is my uncle, a firefighter. That’s why I dream of being a fireman.
3. School subject link(学科关联)
My favorite subject is .... That’s why my dream job is....
While-reading
Read Paragraph 1 and answer
4. Famous sayings(名言引入）
Life without dreams is like a bird without wings. As for me, I ....
5. Imagination (想象引入）
I always imagine myself ____. This is my dream of being a ____
When I see a ______, I think of my future job as a ______
Tip 1:Use a suitable way to start your topic
Can you think of any other ways to start a topic
To be an artist, what will Mandy do
study art in France
visit all the famous art museums
learn a lot about different artists and their works of art
create her own works of art
She will
While-reading
Read Paragraph 1 and answer
Tip 2: Give your detailed(详细的) plans to achieve your dream job
What can we learn from Mandy to make our dreams come true
Because she can stay close to nature and she thinks life there will give her good ideas for making art.
While-reading
Read Paragraph 2 and answer
1. What are the Mandy’s plans for her future life
2. Why will Mandy live in the countryside
Tip 3: Reasons should follow a logical progression. 理由需要符合逻辑递进关系
How to make your determinations
I think little by little, dreams grow big.
Believe in yourself.
Small steps today, big dreams tomorrow.
Your effort is your superpower!
While-reading
Read Paragraph 3 and answer
How can she make dreams come true？
1. 万事皆有可能。
Nothing is impossible.
2. 把握当下，展望未来。
Seize the day, and look forward to the future.
3. 预测未来最好的方式，就是去创造它。
The best way to predict the future is to create it.
4. 未来属于那些相信自己梦想之美好的人。
The future belongs to those who believe in the
beauty of their dreams.
5.没有行动，梦想终是空谈。
Dreams remain out of reach without action.
6.树木成荫需数年，荫庇后世泽绵延。
A tree takes years to grow, but its shade rewards generations.
While-reading
Read Paragraph 3 and answer
Tip 4: Add sayings to the ending 结尾用名言警句
My Dreams for the Future
What will my life be like in 20 years It's not an easy question, but here are a few of my predictions. I love art, so I think I will become an artist. I want to study art in France, and then I will visit all the famous art museums. I will learn a lot about different artists and their works of art, and I will create my own too.
As an artist, I will live in the countryside and stay close to nature. There will be flowers and plants around my home. Life there will give me good ideas for making art. At the weekend, I will invite friends to come over and have fun together. I believe these dreams will come true as long as I study hard and keep on trying.
Item Mandy
Future job
Place to live
Free time activity
How to make dreams come true
Artist
In the countryside in France
Invite friends to come over and have fun together
Study hard and keep trying
3b
Complete the table about Mandy’s dreams and yours.
While-reading
Read again and complete
文本变视频
文本变视频 原创制作by teacherwu英语工作室
How does Mandy write her dreams for the future
Introduce the topic
Predictions for the future:
future job, place to live, free time activity
How to make dreams come true
Post-reading
Read again and find
where to study
where to visit
what to learn
what to do
why live there
free time activity
how to realize her dream
Post-reading
Read again and find
Find out how many aspects (方面) Jill writes about her future.
Item You
Future job
Where to study/What to learn
Place to live
Why live there
Free time activity
How to make dreams come true
3b
Complete the table about Mandy’s dreams and yours.
Post-reading
Complete the table about your dreams.
Post-reading(Writing)
What will your life be like in 20 years Write a short passage about
your dreams for the future. Use your notes in 3b.
审题
文本体裁
话题分析
时态
3c
人称
话题是“20年后的生活与未来梦想”，属于“个人未来规划”类的生活话题，侧重自我表达与畅想。
属于个人预测类的记叙文，以个人视角描述未来生活）
写作时需用第一人称（I/My），因为是描述“自己的”未来生活。
主体用一般将来时（will+动词原形），因为是对未来的预测与畅想。
Post-reading
Analyze the requirements
【写作任务】
1.条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确
2.书写规范，80词左右。
3.文中不得出现涉及真实的人名、地名或校名等。
【写作要求】
科技发展日新月异，未来我们的生活会发生什么变化？请以“My life in 20 years ”为题写一篇文章，要点包括：
1.简要介绍未来生活的特点
2.具体介绍20年后你从事的职业，居住环境以及业余生活
3.表达对未来的展望，呼吁大家积极应对未来
【写作任务】
审文体：
审人称：
审布局：
记叙文
第一人称I
一般将来时
审时态：
三段
Beginning
Body
Ending
开篇点题
具体活动
表达期望
具体活动描写原则：
logical progression 逻辑推进
detailed plans 计划详细
job
place to live
free time activities
Post-reading(Writing)
Pre-writing
Step1: Let’s make an outline（列提纲）
Use Sayings 使用谚语
Beginning
Body
Ending
In 20 years, my life will be quite different from now.
I think my life in 20 years will be...+saying
开篇点题
具体活动
表达期望或决心
where to study
where to visit
what to learn
what to do
Pre-writing
Step1: Let’s make an outline（列提纲）
Job
Life
Expectations
determinations
where to live
why live there
what to do for fun
Topic
My life in 20 years
Beginning
Body
Ending
开篇点题：
In 20 years, my life will be quite different from now.
具体介绍：job, places to live/ work, free time activities, ...
I think I will be... . And I will live in... . There will be more... . In my free time, I ... . I will take a holiday with... .
总结展望：
I think my life in 20 years will be...+saying
I believe these dreams will come true as long as I study harder
Post-writing
Step2: Let’s draft（拟稿）
In 20 years, I want to be ... because ...
My hero is ..., my ... teacher. That’s why I dream of....
My favorite subject is .... That’s why my dream job is....
I’m going to ...
I will / I plan to....
....
My biggest plan is to....
Believe in yourself. Small steps today, big dreams tomorrow.
The best way to predict the future is to create it.
Where there’s a will, there’s a way.
Dreams remain out of reach without action.
The future depends on what you do today.
A life without dreams is like a garden without flowers. As for me , I...
Pre-writing
Step3: Useful sentences
Beginning
Body
Ending
Let's write
Now try to write your own
articles!
Checklist Structure Does it include(包含) beginning, body and ending ☆☆
Content 1.Does it include(包含)detailed plans ☆☆
2. Does your reasons follow a logical progression ☆☆
Language 1. Does it include linking words or phrases ☆☆
2. Does it use vivid (生动的) expressions and sayings ☆☆
3. Does it use different sentence patterns(句型结构) to talk about your plans ☆☆
I think she/he can get ...stars.
Post-writing
Checklist
Sample
In 20 years, my life will be quite different from now.
I think I will be a doctor. It’s always my dream to help and save more people. There will be more pollution in the future,so I will take the subway to work. It’s also good for our environment. As for the living city, I will choose Beijing, because there are many places of interest. For me, a comfortable home is the most important. I will have a robot in my home. He can help me with housework and look after my grandparents.In my free time, I will probably keep a pet dog. After dinner, I will take the dog for a walk. When it’s possible, I will take a holiday in foreign countries with my family.
In a word, my life in the future will be easier and better. “Actions speak louder than words”, so I will work harder to make my future life come true.
add reasons
add transition过渡
add details
add sayings
Whatever you want to be, just try your best. Then your dreams will come true.
Must do
Polish your writing according to the checklist.
Choose to do
Search for more information about the jobs and the ways to make your dream come true.
Interview a friend to learn about his/her future dreams and write an English interview report.
Homework
What will my life be like in 20 years It’s not an easy question, but here are a few of my predictions. I love art, so I think I will become an artist. I want to study art in France, and then I will visit all the famous art museums. I will learn a lot about different artists and their works of art, and I will create my own too.
a few of + 可数名词复数
宾语从句
所有艺术博物馆
作品
Language points
As an artist, I will live in the countryside and stay close to nature. There will be flowers and plants around my home. Life there will give me good ideas for making art. At the weekend, I will invite friends to come over and have fun together. I believe these dreams will come true as long as I study hard and keep on trying.
invite sb to do sth. 邀请某人做某事
实现
只要
状语从句
stay close to sth. 亲近...
keep on doing sth.
Language points
拜访
You will make progress as long as you keep practicing.
You will be healthy as long as you eat well and exercise.
We will be good friends as long as we trust and help each other.
只要你坚持练习，你就会取得进步。
只要你吃得好、多运动，就会保持健康。
只要我们彼此信任、互相帮助，我们就会是好朋友。
Language points
按要求写出正确的单词、词组或句子。
有价值的 (形容词) __________ 2.公共的(形容词) ___________
3. 医药的(形容词) __________ 4. 挑战(名词) __________
5. 任务(名词) __________ 6. 依靠 (短语) __________
7. 德国人（名词）__________ 8. 接受（动词）________
9. 中国将会逐步提升公共医疗系统。
___________________________
10. 这取决于我们如何选择去提升使用人工智能去面临未来的挑战。 ________________________________________________________
valuable
public
medical
challenge
task
depend on
German
accept
China will take steps to improve the public health system.
It depends on how we choose to improve and use AI to meet future challenges.
默写 SectionB 2a-2c
按要求写出正确的单词、词组或句子。
拜访 (短语) __________ 2.只要(短语) ___________
3. 艺术作品(短语) __________ 4. 接近(短语) __________
5. 实现(短语) __________ 6. 坚持做 (短语) __________
7. 创造（动词）__________ 8. 邀请（动词）________
9. 我将邀请朋友过来拜访一起玩。
___________________________
10. 我相信这些梦想将会实现只要我努力学习并且坚持努力。 _______________________
come over
as long as
works of art
stay close to
come true
keep on doing
create
invite
I will invite friends to come over and have fun together.
I believe these dreams will come true as long as I study hard and keep on trying.
默写 SectionB 3a-3c

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