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掉入冰窟，转危为安
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What would you do if your friend fell into an ice hole
About a half-mile behind our Minnesota farm lay a pond. In summer, my brother Harry and I would run through a stand of oak trees to skip stones there. The pond wore a collar of black mud. It was not a place for swimming.
In late summer, the pond would be covered by a green and bubbly scum (起泡的浮渣). Sometimes a strong, unpleasant smell rose from it. We stayed away.
When winter came, the pond was once again an inviting place. One day when ice covered it, Harry said to me, "Try walking across."
The ice looked solid. No water showed through it, but I hesitated. "Go ahead." Harry urged. "Try it. You’re lighter than I am. If the ice holds, we can run and slide carefully on it. It’ll be fun." I wanted to please Harry, and I thought about the fun of a long slide on the ice. I began to slide across the pond.
In the middle of the pond, the ice gave way with a sudden crack (裂缝)! I stretched out (伸展) my arms. The next thing I knew I was hanging on to the edge of a hole in the ice by arms outstretched on the ice. From my shoulders down I hung in icy water. I thought of the bottom of the pond. I knew it would be black and awful down there, full of mud and maybe rotting creatures.
I tried to climb out of the hole, but when I got a knee on the ice, it broke like window glass. Again and again I tried to get out. Again and again the ice broke into pieces. The hole widened. I was wearing a coat of heavy material. As it became completely wet, it dragged me down. I was tired of the struggle and rested with my arms stretched out on the ice.
I looked at Harry on shore. He seemed rooted to the spot. "I can’t get out!" I screamed when I caught some breath.
Harry turned and ran from the pond__________________________________________________________________
The moment I crashed through the kitchen door, sobbing, mum rushed over.___________________________________
A story
when
where
who
what
how
why
Reading for basic informantion
Reading for basic informantion
I
Harry
a pond
lay behind
our farm
sometime smelly有臭味的
an inviting place
brothers
In summer
In winter
contrast
Setting
Development
Rising action
Climax
Events
A. The pond was so inviting in winter that I decided to slide across it to please my brother.
B. I was hanging on to the edge on the ice.
C. With the ice cracking, I fell into a hole in the ice.
The pond behind our farm was not suitable for swimming in the summer.
Harry turned and ran from the pond…
D
A
C,B
Reading for plot
E
Falling action
Resolution解决
Ending
Reading for plot
Changes of feelings
Time Events feelings
1. Before I slid across the pond Harry _____ me to go first because of my lighter weight. In order to ______him and have fun, I ______. I felt _________
but_______.
2. When I was in the middle of the pond With ice ________ suddenly, I fell into a hole. Arms ___________ on the ice and body ________in the icy water, I was ___________ in the hole.
I got _________
and ________.
3. When I tried to save by myself I attempted to climb out of the icy hole several times but ______. The heavy coat, _____________________________________worsened the terrible situation.
I was __________
and _________.
4. When I looked at Harry Harry was ________________. I _________ at him for ________. I was ________
but __________.
urged
hesitant
cracking
shocked
hanging
in vain
exhausted
becoming wet completely and dragging me down
willing
agreed
outstretched
trapped
/caught
rooted to the spot
screamed his help
scared
anxious, helpless
please
取悦
What did Harry do
hopeful
frightened
urged
cracking
agreed
please
取悦
Predicting the development
Paragraph 1:
Harry turned and ran from the pond.
I was rescued.
Raise questions about the development
1. What was my response to his leaving
2. Did he really leave me alone
3. How was I rescued
grabbed sth.
dashed towards...
knelt down
hunted for
outstretched my arms
struggle to hang in icy water
be dragged out of the ice hole
抓住某物
冲向……
跪下
寻找
伸展双臂
挣扎着悬在冰冷的水里
被拖出冰窟
动作描写（多用连动/分词结构）
翻译
1. 中文翻译：看着Harry离开，我被一阵恐慌和不安笼罩着，心想：“他是去求救还是留下我一个人独自承受。”
英文：
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2. 中文翻译：突然，Harry拿着一根又大又黑呈 V 字形的橡树枝朝我冲了过来，他把树枝朝我推过来，试图把我拖出去。英文：
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1.At the sight of Harry’s leave, I was overwhelmed by a strong sense of panic and uneaseness, thinking to myself, "Is he asking for help or leaving me alone to bear this all by myself "
2.Suddenly, Harry dashed towards me with an oak branch,which was large, black, and v-shaped. He pushed the branch toward me, in an attempt to drag me out.
翻译
1. 中文翻译： 看着我冻僵的身体在颤抖，Harry因为他幼稚的行为而感到无比愧疚，悔恨的泪水夺眶而出。
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2. 中文翻译：在Harry的搀扶下，我们踉踉跄跄的回家了，心里想着该如何面对妈妈。
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1.When seeing my frozen body shivering, Harry felt tremendously guilty for his childish behaviour，regretful tears welling up in his eyes.
2. With the assistance of Harry, we stumbled our way home, thinking about how to be faced with Mom.
Paragraph 2:
The moment I crashed through the kitchen door, sobbing, mum rushed over.
Predicting the development
What will happened
Think about some questions.
Discussion
take off my wet and heavy coat
take a quick shower
pass me a cup of warm milk
speak up what had happened frankly
no blame, only compassion/mercy
脱下我又湿又重的外套
快速洗澡
给我递来一杯热牛奶
坦率说出所发生的事情
没有责备，只有心疼
动作描写（多用连动/分词结构）
翻译
1. 中文翻译：既惊讶又心疼，妈妈立即脱下我的外套，让我去洗个热水澡。
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2. 中文翻译：Harry 向妈妈坦白了所发生的一切，并诚恳地向我道歉。
英文：
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1.Astonished and compassionate, mom instantly took off my wet and heavy coat and asked me to take a hot shower.
2.Harry confessed to mom what had happened and sincerely apologized to me “My younger brother, I am terribly sorry for putting you in great danger.”
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主题升华
1. 中文翻译：通过这次经历，我突然意识到在面对危险时，要保持冷静，尽量想办法解决。
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2. 中文翻译：经过这次经历我意识到安全意识湿多么重要，任何时候都不要拿生命开玩笑。
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1.From the experience, it dawned on me that in face of dangerous and even deadly situation, remain calm and try everything to work it out.
2.After this experience, I was aware that how significant the safety awareness is. We should never think little of our lives at any time.
Harry turned and ran from the pond. Staring at his familiar figure out of sight, I wondered:“Is he running for help, or is he running away and leaving me sliding to the bottom ” After what seemed to be centuries of waiting, I was on the edge of collapse. Suddenly, Harry came back with a branch,which was large, black, and v-shaped. He pushed the branch toward me. I grabbed it immediately and was eventually dragged out of the icy water by Harry. What a narrow escape! We stumbled home, with my clothes dripping water.
The moment I crashed through the kitchen door, sobbing, mum rushed over. She helped me take off my coat, and gave me a quick bath, then passed me a cup of milk to warm me up. I tearfully complained to her about all that had happened and Harry was blamed for getting me sibling into such a trouble. His head drooping, Harry murdered an apology to me. I was comforted and relieved, but in fact, the pond was still attractive to young Harry and me, especially when winter came again.
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