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Dialogue in Continuation Writing
读后续写微技能--对话描写
写作文
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Lead in Enjoy a video and think:
What are the emotions of different people in this video
Lead in What are the emotions of different people in this video
sad
angry
scared
nervous
worried
How
对话(dialogue)是故事角色在整个故事中对彼此或对自己说的话。对话可揭示人物的性格和个性，也可推动情节发展。
What roles do dialogues play in a story？
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对话描写存在的问题 ？？？
标点符号使用 不够规范
xxx said
对话标签 用词单一
复杂冗长 堆砌成段
“I don’t think my classmates like me,” said Tom.
Speech
Dialogue tag(对话标签)
Location: before, during and after the speech
Task1: Use dialogue structure correctly
verb & speaker
1. She said, “I would like to go with you, but I haven’t finished my homework.”
2. “I would like to go with you, but I haven’t finished my homework, ” she said.
3. “I would like to go with you, ”she said, “but I haven’t finished my homework.”
Task1:Use dialogue structure correctly
【Observing and thinking 】
“Xxxxx, ！？” sb said.
Sb said, “Xxxxx. ！？ ”
“Xxxxx,” sb said, “xxxxx. ！？”
①before the speech
②after the speech
③during the speech
规规矩矩
Task1. Use dialogue structure correctly
1. “I will never do that again:” He answered firmly.
2. I ran to him and said: “get up and run!”
3. “Thank you so much,” He said with a choking voice, “ But I don't know how to pay for your kindness.”
he
,
Get
Correct the errors:
he
but
注意 标点&大小写
Task1. Use dialogue structure correctly
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Task2: Express vividly
How to express "say" more vividly
How many expressions of “say” are there in the video
asked
sighed
scowled(怒视)
mumbled (嘟囔)
forced a laugh
bit his lip
说________ 问 _____ 回答 ___________
补充说 ______ 解释 _______ 叹气地说 _____
哭___________ 笑 ________________
尖叫 __________ 大喊 ________________
承诺 ________ 抱怨 ________ 宣布 ________
安慰 ________ 道歉 ________ 建议 ________
小声说/嘟囔 ___________________ 责备 _____
shout/yell/roar
smile/laugh
say
answer/reply
ask
add
explain
sigh
cry/sob/weep
scream
complain
comfort
blame
promise
whisper/mumble
suggest
apologize
announce,declare
Tip 1: Use different verbs
Task2 : Express vividly
1. “Shall we leave now ” he ___________ to us and we left the room very quietly.
2. “Help! Help! I can’t swim,” _________ the frightened boy.
3. “I will never do that again,” I ___________.
4. “ I didn’t like that meal at all,”___________the customer.
whispered
screamed
scream whisper promise complain
Fill in the blanks with the right verb forms.
promised
complained
特朗普是如此生气，以致于他在办公室大声吼道，“这下完蛋了！”
So annoyed was John Trump that he roared loudly in the office, “It's over”!
Task2 : Express vividly
Tip2: V.+
adv. 加副词
大声地 难过地
温柔地 不情愿地
不耐烦地 生气地
礼貌地 绝望地
真诚地 坚定地
loudly
politely
sincerely
gently
firmly
impatiently
sadly
unwillingly
angrily
desperately
V. + adv.
Eg: “Who broke the glass ” the mother __________________. (生气地问道)
asked angrily
Tip 3: V.+
in/with+ n.
介词短语
Task2: Express vividly
1. Tom ran to me and cried with excitement, “You did it! I am so proud of you!”
2. At the sight of the meal, the father asked in surprise, “Where did you get this breakfast ”
V.+ in/with+ n.
(1) in: in surprise/shock/sorrow(悲伤)/horror(恐惧)
(2) with: with delight /excitement /embarrassment (尴尬)/pride/patience
Eg: “I...I.. don’t think I’m suitable for the
character,” I replied _______ embarrassment.
with
在直播节目中，李发出一声惊人的喊叫，“天哪，答应我，买它！”
In a live streaming, Li shouted in a surprising tone, “Oh, my God! Promise me to buy it”!
Tip 4: (1) V.+
in a/an adj. tone
加语气
Task2: Express vividly
V.+ in a/an adj. tone( 语气)
in a tone 以一种温柔的语气
in a tone 以一种愉悦的语气
in a tone 以一种坚定的语气
in a tone 以一种疑惑的语气
in a tone 以一种好奇的语气
in an tone 以一种不耐烦的语气
soft/gentle
pleasant/happy
firm
confused
impatient
curious
“Who broke the glass ” the mother ___生气地问道_____.
asked in an angry tone
“I didn't mean to,” she said in a low voice.
“我不是故意的，”她低声说。
Tip4: (2) V.+
in a/an adj. voice加声音
Task2: Express vividly
in a voice 用一个高的声音
in a voice 用一个低的声音
in a voice 用一个响亮的声音
in an voice 用一个恼火的声音
in a voice用一个颤抖的声音
V.+ in a/an adj. voice( 声音)
trembling
high
low
loud
annoyed
“I... I didn’t do it,”___________________.
(男孩用颤抖的声音小声说)
the boy whispered in a trembling voice.
动作+对话
02
1.Sb did A, did B, and said.
【例1】对话情境: He said, “Where there is a will, there is a way.”
他说: “有志者事竟成。”
思考他说这句话的时候有哪些动作, 拆解动作链。
生动对话: He stepped forward, patted me on the shoulder, and said gently, “Where there is a will, there is a way.”
and said
他走向前, 拍着我的肩膀, 温柔地说: “有志者事竟成。”
A
B
and said
2. Doing..., sb. said, “......”
Sb. said , “...” doing...
【例 2】 对话情境: He smiled, “It is your efforts that count most.”
他笑着说：“你的努力才是最重要的。”
思考他说这句话的时候, 正在做什么动作。
生动对话: Patting my shoulder, he smiled, “It is your efforts that count most.”
他拍着我的肩膀, 笑着说：“你的努力才是最重要的”。
非谓语
对话
1.老师走向夏洛，摇了摇头，叹气说: “就你那成绩还有下降空间吗？”
The teacher walked to Xialuo，shook his head, and sighed , “Disturbs what Your score couldn't get any lower.”
就你那学习还用影响吗？
还有下降空间吗？
2.老人手上拿着烟，盯着夏洛看，疑惑地说,“马冬什么？”
Holding a cigarette in his fingers and staring at Xia Luo, the old man asked in a confused tone, “Madong what ”
3.夏洛说(宣布）:“我会对你负责的,”快乐地边跳边笑。
Xia Luo declared，“I'll make it up to you,” dancing and smiling merrily.
“Turn that music off!” Mom （生气的喊道）, slamming（砰地关上） the kitchen door. I （大声地叹气）, pausing the song. “But it’s my favorite band!” “Favorite band or not,” she （用严厉地语气说道）, pointing to the clock, “it’s midnight. Your sister needs to study for her exam.”
I （小声说道）, ”Fine, but you never let me have fun.”
Mom’s expression softened. She sat beside me and （轻柔地解释道）, “I know you’re upset.” Her voice was calm now, almost apologetic. “But think about Lisa—she’s been stressed all week.“ I sighed heavily, （feel）guilty. ”Okay, I get it.”
She （温暖地微笑）and (拍我的肩膀）. "Thanks for understanding." As she left, the house grew quiet, but the tension had faded. Maybe compromise(妥协） wasn’t so hard after all.
shouted angrily
sighed loudly
said in a strict voice
whispered/said in a low voice
explained gently/softly
feeling
smiled warmly
场景：深夜，“我”正放着喜欢的乐队音乐，被妈妈生气地制止了。在妈妈的劝说下，“我”理解了她是为了备考的妹妹，最终达成了和解。
patted me on the shoulder
Homework
根据短文和所给段落开头续写两段，150词左右，要求包含动作+对话描写
Paragraph 1: Just as I was about to turn off the desk lamp, there came a soft knock at the door.
Paragraph 2: A few days later, when Lisa finished her exam, she came to my room actively.

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