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Detailed Descriptions in Continuation Writing
读后续写之细节描写
She is/feels________
Her eyes are filled with sadness and fear.
emotion（情绪/表情）
action（动作）
She huddled(蜷缩) in the corner
Poor and Helpless
How do you think the little girl feels
How can we make a story vivid (生动）
hugged herself tightly.
cold//hungry
1. Add adverbs(副词）
The little girl walked ________in the street and shouted “Matches, matches” , hoping that someone would buy her matches.
slowly
Action（动作）
quickly, gently, carefully,aimlessly,
silently,joyfully, excitedly，angrily ，sadly，surprisedly...
excitedly
smoothly excitedly gently
(2023·新课标I&II卷读后续写)“I knew you’d win! I am proud of you. You made it!” he said__________ .
(2022·新课标I&II卷读后续写) I said _______, “No one can change your mind, except yourself.
gently
(2024·新课标I&II卷读后续写)I told him that thanks to his generosity and timely help, everything had gone _________.
smoothly
The little girl walked slowly in the street and shouted “Matches, matches” , hoping that someone would buy her matches.
Action（动作）
2. Use Action Chains (动作链)
walked
shouted
hoping
谓语并列（V1, V2 and V3）
一般过去时（did）
The little girl took out a match, struck it and saw a warm stove in the flame.
谓语并列+非谓语（V1 and V2, V3ing）
小女孩拿出一根火柴,划燃了它然后看到火焰中有一个
温暖的火炉。
took out
struck
saw
老师走上前，拍了拍我的肩膀，说：“有志者，事竟成。”（2023新高考卷1）（ ）
He ________ forward and_______ me on the shoulder, ________ "Where there is a will, there is a way."
stepped
patted
saying
谓语并列（V1, V2 and V3）
谓语并列+非谓语（V1 and V2, V3ing）
I ________________ dad, proudly_________________ my own money and ___________ it to him.
walked to
我走近爸爸，骄傲地拿出我自己的钱递给他。(2021·浙江卷） ( )
took out of
handed
Emotion（情绪）
她又划了一根火柴，看到了一只烤鹅。一种饥饿感涌上她的心头。她又渴望又兴奋地伸出了手。然而，令她失望的是，这美妙的景象瞬间就消失了。
She struck another match and saw a roasted goose. A feeling of hunger welled up in her. Eager and excited, she reached her hands out. However, to her disappointment, this wonderful sight disappeared in an instant.
a feeling of/a sense of+情绪名词welled up in＋sb
一种...之感涌上心头
情绪类形容词，sb did sth
To one’s +情绪名词，sb did sth
令某人...是
suprise,delight,disappointed...
shocked,amazed,annoyed,
astonished,confused,
delighted,disappointed...
2.感到坚定的和受到鼓舞的，David抬起头，感激地看着我。[2022全国1卷读后续写]
_____________and _____________,David raised his head,
looking at me with gratitude.
Determined
inspired
1.当大卫终于下定决心继续赛跑时，一阵喜悦(delight)感在我心中涌起。[2022全国1卷读后续写]
_____________________________________ when David finally became determinedto continue the race.
A sense of delight welled up in me
令大家高兴(joy)的是,他到达了终点线.[2022全国1卷读后续写]
_____________________, he reached the finish line.
To everyone's joy
dialogue（对话）
“Grandmother!” cried the little girl, “oh, take me with you! I know you will go away when the match burns out, like the warm stove, the delicious goose, and the magnificent Christmas tree.”
“奶奶！”小女孩叫起来，“啊！请把我带走吧！我知道，火柴一灭，您就会不见的，像那暖和的火炉，喷香的烤鹅，美丽的圣诞树一个样，就会不见的！”
said说;asked 问;shouted喊到; explained 解释 ;whispered耳语;blamed责备; comforted 安慰;...
a strong sense of fear.
sb felt_______(adj)
psychology（心理）
fearful
fear welled up inside her.
Add adverbs(副词）
Use Action Chains (动作链)
Action（动作）
Emotion（情绪）
a sense of...welled up in＋sb
一种...之感涌上谁的心头
情绪类形容词，sb did sth
To one’s +情绪名词，sb did sth
Rewrite a happy ending
dialogue（对话）
survival
Character（人物）
by who
saved
The next morning, the little girl was sitting in the corner, her cheeks flushed and a smile on her lips. She was dead, frozen to death on the last evening of the old year. The New Year's sun rose and shone on her tiny body. The little girl sat there, still clutching a handful of burnt - out matchsticks in her hand.
第二天清晨，这个小女孩坐在墙角里，两腮通红，嘴上带着微笑。她死了，在旧年的大年夜冻死了。新年的太阳升起来了，照在她小小的尸体上。小女孩坐在那儿，手里还捏着一把烧过了的火柴梗。
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（Use at least three detailed descriptions）
contents criterion(标准） stars(5)
Plot logical
Environment
Character action/emotion/ dialogue... (at least three)
Grammar correct
Handwriting clean
The snow was falling heavier and heavier.(environment环境) The girl sat alone, almost losing hope. A kind woman came. "Come, little one," she said. (dialogue（对话）)Surprised and excited(emotion情绪）, the little girl stood up quickly and brushed off the snow,running to her.（action动作链） A sense of warmth and gratitude rose in her heart.（ psychology（心理））"Thank you," she said softly.（dialogue（对话））
Cherish and be grateful for life；Help those in need .
1. Polish your own continuation writing content, and pay attention to the accuracy and vividness of environmental and character descriptions.(Act it out if you can)
2. Select an English classic story you like and use the description methods learned in this class to make a brief continuation writing (5 - 8 sentences).
Homework
Thank you
It was...;
be full of...
Add adverbs(副词）
Use Action Chains (动作链)
Environment（环境）
Action（动作）
Emotion（情绪）
a sense of...welled up in＋sb
一种...之感涌上谁的心头
情绪类形容词，sb did sth
To one’s +情绪名词，sb did sth
psychology（心理）
sb felt_______(adj)
...welled up inside sb
...涌上心头
Rewrite a happy ending
dialogue（对话）
survival
Character（人物）
The next morning，__________________________
_____________(weather)._________________________________________________________________（Use at least three detailed descriptions）
by who
saved
contents criterion(标准） stars(5)
Plot logical
Environment
Character action/emotion/ dialogue... (at least three)
Grammar correct
Handwriting clean
Help those in need, cherish and be grateful for life.

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