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Unit 1 The secrets of happiness 写作专项学案
写作目标
结合本单元“幸福的秘密”主题，写一篇分享幸福瞬间、讲述助人获福故事或阐述幸福真谛的短文，达成以下目标：
1.能正确使用本单元“幸福与情感”相关核心词汇（如happiness、joy、love、kindness、help、support、treasure、memory、surprise、touch等）及短语（be full of、keep going over、to one’s surprise、touch sb greatly、come from、spring from、do good、help others、pass down等）；
2.能熟练运用一般过去时描述过去的幸福经历，掌握不定代词（something、anything、everything等），正确使用“It is known that...” “Happiness springs from...” “To my surprise...”等常用句型；
3.能按“主题引入→核心细节（幸福经历/助人故事）→感悟与传承”的逻辑完成写作，贴合“幸福源于爱与善意，助力成长”的单元主题。
题目解析
1.体裁：幸福纪实类记叙文或感悟类短文，兼具情感性与思想性；
2.人称：第一人称（分享个人经历、表达真实感悟）为主；
3.核心要求
内容：覆盖“1个核心主题（幸福瞬间/助人故事/幸福真谛）、2-3个关键细节（事件经过/人物互动/情感变化）、1个幸福感悟或传承意愿”3个要点；
字数：70–90词，描述真实具体、情感真挚自然，语言符合七年级学生水平，体现对幸福的理解与对善意的珍视。
思路点拨
1.开头：明确引入核心主题（如一次助人后的幸福体验、与家人共度的幸福时光、对幸福真谛的感悟），用简洁句式点明主题核心（如“帮助他人的那一刻，我懂得了幸福的真谛” “家人的陪伴是我最珍贵的幸福” “幸福不在于物质，而在于心中的爱”），用情感化语言引出下文具体描述；
2.中间：若分享幸福瞬间，按“事件背景→经过→情感变化”展开，描述事件的时间、地点、参与人物，用一般过去时详细叙述过程（如帮助同学解决难题、和家人温馨团聚），体现幸福的来源；若讲述助人故事，聚焦“助人缘由→助人过程→收获与感受”，结合具体动作和语言描写，展现善意带来的幸福；若阐述幸福真谛，围绕“观点+事例”，用身边事例或单元故事支撑“幸福源于爱与善意”的观点；
3.结尾：分享幸福感悟（如“幸福藏在平凡的小事中，只要用心感受就会发现” “帮助他人能收获最纯粹的幸福，这是金钱买不到的” “爱与陪伴是幸福的核心，值得我们永远珍惜”）或表达传承意愿（如“我会继续传递善意，让更多人感受到幸福” “我要珍惜与家人的时光，守护这份幸福”），呼应单元“The secrets of happiness”的核心主题，传递积极向上的生活态度。
写作模板（逐段拆解）
模板一：分享助人获福的经历
第一段：主题引入与事件背景
基础句式：Happiness is not far away from us. It often comes from small acts of kindness. I will never forget the day when I helped ________ (人物) and felt true happiness.
示例：Happiness has many secrets, and I found one through helping others. Last month, I met my classmate Lily who was in trouble, and that experience made me feel warm and happy.
第二段：助人过程与细节
基础句式：At that time, Lily ________ (遇到的问题，如couldn’t finish her English homework/forgot her umbrella). She looked very worried. I decided to help her. First, I ________ (具体动作1，如explained the difficult points to her/lent her my umbrella). Then, ________ (具体动作2，如stayed after class to practice with her/walked her home in the rain). To my surprise, she ________ (对方的反应，如thanked me with a big smile/shared her snacks with me later).
示例：Lily forgot her English notebook at home and was afraid of being criticized by the teacher. She stood in the classroom with a sad face. I walked up to her and said, “You can share my notebook.” During the class, we took notes together. After class, she thanked me sincerely and said I was her true friend. That simple act of kindness made her happy, and I felt a strong sense of happiness too.
第三段：幸福感悟与传承
基础句式：From this experience, I deeply understood that happiness springs from doing good and helping others. It is not something expensive, but a feeling of warmth in our hearts. I will ________ (传承行动，如keep helping others and pass down this kind of happiness) to make the world a better place.
示例：Plato once said, “Happiness springs from doing good and helping others.” This experience made me realize the meaning of these words. Helping others is not difficult, but it can bring great happiness to both others and ourselves. I will continue to help those in need, and let the secret of happiness spread around!
模板二：描述家人陪伴的幸福时光
第一段：主题引入与幸福定位
基础句式：For me, the greatest happiness is the company of my family. There is a special moment that I always keep going over in my mind—it was ________ (时间，如last Spring Festival/a weekend afternoon) when we ________ (共同事件，如gathered together/cooked dinner).
示例：Many people think happiness comes from money or gifts, but I believe the true secret of happiness is family love. I will never forget the weekend when my family spent time with me, which made me feel deeply happy.
第二段：幸福瞬间与细节
基础句式：That day, my parents ________ (父母的行为，如gave up their work to stay with me/cooked my favorite food). My grandparents ________ (祖父母的行为，如told me interesting stories/played games with me). We ________ (共同活动，如talked and laughed while eating/watched a movie together). The room was full of joy, and I forgot all my worries.
示例：Last weekend, my dad put off his business trip to take me to the park, and my mom cooked my favorite braised pork. We walked in the park, flew kites, and shared interesting things about our life. When my dad pushed me on the swing, I laughed loudly. My mom took many photos of us, and the smiles on our faces were the brightest.
第三段：幸福感悟与珍惜
基础句式：That moment made me understand that happiness is the warmth of family. It is not about how much money we have, but about being together. I will ________ (行动，如cherish the time with my family and love them more) to keep this happiness forever.
示例：Looking back on that happy day, I know the secret of happiness is simple—family love and companionship. Even the most ordinary moments become precious because of being with family. I will treasure every minute with my family and tell them how much I love them. This kind of happiness will be the most valuable treasure in my life.
范文
The Secret of My Happiness
Happiness is like a warm sun that lights up my life. I found its secret when I helped my neighbor Aunt Wang last winter.
One cold evening, Aunt Wang fell down and couldn’t stand up. Her son was not at home, so she called for help. I heard her voice and ran to her. First, I helped her sit on the chair gently. Then, I got her a cup of hot water and called her son. When Aunt Wang thanked me with tears in her eyes, I felt a strong sense of happiness.
That experience taught me a lot. As Plato said, “Happiness springs from doing good and helping others.” The secret of happiness is not in getting, but in giving. I will keep helping those in need and spread kindness. I believe that when we give love to others, we will get more happiness in return!
范文中文翻译
我的幸福密码
幸福就像一轮暖阳，照亮我的生活。去年冬天，我在帮助邻居王阿姨时，找到了它的密码。
一个寒冷的傍晚，王阿姨不小心摔倒了，站不起来。她的儿子不在家，所以她大声呼救。我听到声音后立刻跑了过去。首先，我轻轻地扶她坐在椅子上。然后，我给她倒了一杯热水，并给她儿子打了电话。当王阿姨含着眼泪感谢我时，我感受到了强烈的幸福感。
那次经历让我受益匪浅。正如柏拉图所说：“幸福源于行善和帮助他人。”幸福的密码不在于索取，而在于付出。我会继续帮助那些需要帮助的人，传递善意。我相信，当我们向他人付出爱时，也会收获更多的幸福！
素材积累
核心短语
be full of 充满
keep going over 不断回想
to one’s surprise 令某人惊讶的是
touch sb greatly 深深打动某人
come from 来自
spring from 源于
do good 行善
help others 帮助他人
pass down 传承
act of kindness 善举
in trouble 处于困境中
feel worried 感到担忧
sincerely thank 真诚感谢
sense of happiness 幸福感
family companionship 家人陪伴
precious treasure 珍贵的财富
spread kindness 传递善意
基础句型（含本单元重点）
基础句型 仿写句子
I will never forget the day when ________. I will never forget the day when I helped an old man cross the street.
Happiness springs from ________. Happiness springs from the love and care of family.
To my surprise, ________. To my surprise, a small help can bring so much joy to others.
It is known that ________. It is known that happiness is not about money but about kindness.
I deeply understood that ________ after ________. I deeply understood that friendship brings happiness after helping my friend.
好句集锦
1.Happiness is not a distant dream; it is hidden in every kind act and warm moment.
2.The secret of happiness is simple: give love, help others, and cherish the people around you.
3.Small acts of kindness can bring great happiness, just like a drop of water can moisten a flower.
4.Family love is the most precious happiness. It warms our hearts and gives us courage to go forward.
谚语
1.Kindness is the language that the deaf can hear and the blind can see.（善良是聋人能听见、盲人能看见的语言——强调善意的力量）
2.Love makes the world go round.（爱让世界运转——突出爱的重要性）
3.Happiness lies in the joy of achievement and the thrill of creative effort.（幸福在于成就的喜悦和创造努力的激动——诠释幸福的来源）
学生写作填空练习版
版本一：讲述助人获福的故事
Happiness is everywhere. I found its secret when I helped ________ (人物) last ________ (时间，如weekend/last month).
At that time, he/she ________ (遇到的问题，如lost his way/couldn’t carry the heavy books). I felt sorry for him/her and decided to help. First, I ________ (具体动作1，如asked him about his home address/helped carry the books). Then, ________ (具体动作2，如took him to his home/walked with him to school). He/she thanked me and smiled, which made me feel ________ (感受，如warm/happy).
From this experience, I learned that happiness springs from ________ (感悟，如helping others). I will ________ (行动，如keep doing good things) and let more people feel happy. The secret of happiness is so simple—just be kind!
版本二：描述家人陪伴的幸福
For me, the happiest thing is staying with my family. I will never forget ________ (时间，如last Spring Festival/a rainy evening) when we ________ (共同事件，如had dinner together/stayed at home).
That day, my ________ (家人，如parents/grandparents) ________ (具体行为，如cooked my favorite food/told me old stories). We ________ (共同活动，如talked about my school life/played games). The room was full of ________ (氛围，如laughter/warmth). I felt so happy that I didn’t want the moment to end.
I realize that the secret of happiness is ________ (感悟，如family love and companionship). I will ________ (行动，如cherish the time with my family) and love them more. I hope this happiness will last forever!

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