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Unit 3 What makes a great team 写作专项学案
写作目标
结合本单元“团队协作”主题，写一篇讲述团队故事、阐述优秀团队特质或分享团队合作经历的短文，达成以下目标：
1.能正确使用本单元“团队与协作”相关核心词汇（如teamwork、leader、role、strength、weakness、cooperation、effort、responsibility、suggestion、vote等）及短语（make every effort、take responsibility、put oneself in others shoes、carry on、shoulder ones team、fall back、give out等）；
2.能熟练运用情态动词should/shouldnt、have to/dont have to给出团队建议，掌握“not only...but also...”结构表达团队双重价值，正确使用“Whats more...” “However...”等衔接表达；
3.能按“团队困境/主题引入→协作过程→成果/感悟”的逻辑完成写作，贴合“无团队不成长，协作铸就伟大”的单元主题。
题目解析
1.体裁：团队故事类记叙文、观点类短文或经历分享类记叙文，兼具故事性与指导性；
2.人称：第一人称（分享团队经历、表达感悟）或第三人称（讲述团队故事、阐述特质）为主；
3.核心要求
内容：覆盖“1个核心团队场景（团队冲突/协作任务/优秀团队案例）、2-3个关键细节（困境原因/协作过程/团队特质）、1个团队感悟或行动启示”3个要点；
字数：80–100词，描述真实具体、观点明确或感悟深刻，语言符合八年级学生水平，体现对团队协作价值的理解。
思路点拨
1.开头：明确引入核心主题（如“1960年中国登山队登顶珠峰的故事，诠释了伟大团队的真谛” “作为戏剧导演，我曾因角色分配陷入困境，最终靠团队协作化解” “优秀团队的核心，藏在责任与包容里”），用简洁句式点明主题核心（如“他们用牺牲与信任，创造了登山史上的奇迹” “团队不是个人秀，而是众人拾柴火焰高” “信任、责任与协作，是团队的灵魂”），用引导性语言引出下文；
2.中间：若讲述团队故事，按“困境出现→分工协作→突破难关”展开，用情态动词描述团队决策（如“他们应该优先保障队友安全” “队长必须承担协调责任”），结合具体事例体现协作力量；若阐述优秀团队特质，聚焦“特质+事例”，用“分工明确” “互相信任” “包容短板”等特质，搭配登山队、班级项目等事例支撑；若分享个人团队经历，围绕“任务挑战→矛盾化解→协作成果”，描述团队从分歧到默契的过程；
3.结尾：分享感悟（如“伟大团队不是没有短板，而是能互补短板、凝聚力量” “协作让平凡的个体成就不凡的事业” “团队的意义，在于1+1＞2的合力”）或发出倡议（如“我会在团队中主动担当，换位思考” “让我们以责任为基、协作为翼，共建优秀团队”），呼应单元“What makes a great team ”的核心主题，传递“重视协作、勇于担当”的积极态度。
写作模板（逐段拆解）
模板一：讲述伟大团队故事——中国珠峰登山队（The Chinese Mountaineering Team）
第一段：主题引入与团队困境
基础句式：Some teams are remembered for their great achievements, and the 1960 Chinese mountaineering team is one of them. They faced unimaginable challenges when climbing Mount Qomolangma’s North Ridge.
示例：In 1960, four Chinese climbers set out to reach the top of Mount Qomolangma via the dangerous North Ridge. Near the “Second Step”, a 30-metre-high rock wall stopped them—no one had ever climbed it before.
第二段：协作过程与细节
基础句式：Liu Lianman, the team leader, tried four times but fell back each time. The thin air took his strength away, but he decided to be a “human ladder” for his teammates. He let Qu Yinhua and Gong Bu stand on his shoulders to climb up. The team gave Liu all their oxygen and carried on without it. They made every effort to overcome the cold and dark.
示例：Liu Lianman, the strongest climber, tried four times but failed. Instead of giving up, he lowered his body and became a “human ladder”. Every second was painful, but he stood still while his teammates climbed on his shoulders. The team then gave Liu all their oxygen—they knew he needed it more. Without oxygen, they kept climbing through the night, supporting each other.
第三段：成果与感悟
基础句式：At 4:20 am on 25 May, they reached the top. They were the first Chinese to do so, and the first to climb the North Ridge without oxygen. This story teaches us that a great team needs courage, sacrifice and teamwork. Everyone should take responsibility and support each other.
示例：After hours of struggle, they reached the top at dawn. They proved that teamwork can overcome any difficulty. Liu didn’t reach the top, but he shouldered his team into history. A great team isn’t about individual glory—it’s about putting the team first. Trust and sacrifice make a team unbeatable.
模板二：分享团队协作经历——戏剧演出的逆袭（The Drama Team’s Comeback）
第一段：主题引入与团队困境
基础句式：Being a team leader isn’t easy. I once faced a big problem when I was the director of our class drama Snow White—Lisa and Mary both wanted to play the princess, and the team was divided.
示例：When our class decided to put on Snow White, I was chosen as the director. But the first task—giving out roles—turned into a disaster. Lisa and Mary both dreamed of playing the princess, and the team split into two sides. I froze, afraid to hurt anyone’s feelings.
第二段：协作化解与细节
基础句式：I asked Ms White for advice. She told me I should talk to Lisa first to understand her strengths, and that I didn’t have to make the decision alone. So I gathered the team: we let Lisa and Mary try both the princess and the queen roles, then voted for the most suitable one. Everyone felt heard, and the conflict was solved.
示例：I turned to Ms White for help. She said, “A leader should take responsibility and listen to the team.” I talked to Lisa—she loved the princess’s kindness. Then we had a team discussion: why not let both girls try two roles We watched their performances and voted together. Lisa played the queen brilliantly, and Mary was the perfect princess. The team worked hard to practice, supporting each other’s weaknesses.
第三段：成果与感悟
基础句式：Our drama was a big success! This experience taught me that a great team needs good communication and respect. Leaders shouldn’t make decisions alone, and team members should put oneself in others shoes. Teamwork makes everything possible.
示例：Our drama won the first prize in the school competition! I realized that a great team isn’t about “my way or the highway”—it’s about listening and compromising. As a leader, I shouldn’t be afraid to ask for help, and every team member’s voice matters. Cooperation turns conflicts into success.
模板三：阐述优秀团队特质（What Makes a Great Team ）
第一段：主题引入与观点提出
基础句式：What makes a great team It’s not about having the best individuals, but about how people work together. Trust, responsibility and cooperation are the three key factors.
示例：Many people wonder what makes a team great. After learning about the Chinese mountaineering team and our class drama experience, I found the answer: it’s the combination of responsibility, trust and mutual support.
第二段：特质阐述与细节
基础句式：First, a great team needs responsible members. Everyone should do their part—just like the climbers who gave their oxygen to Liu. Second, trust is important. Team members should believe in each other’s strengths. What’s more, cooperation helps solve problems. When we face difficulties, we should share ideas instead of arguing.
示例：First, great teams have responsible leaders who take charge in disagreements. Second, members put the team above themselves—Liu’s “human ladder” is the best example. What’s more, they listen to each other. In our drama team, we didn’t force a decision but voted together. These traits make a team strong and united.
第三段：观点总结与启示
基础句式：In short, a great team is built on small acts of kindness and responsibility. We should learn to support each other, respect differences and make every effort. With these, any team can achieve great things.
示例：A great team isn’t born—it’s made through everyone’s effort. Whether climbing a mountain or putting on a drama, responsibility, trust and cooperation are essential. Let’s carry these traits in our teams, and we’ll overcome any challenge!
范文
The Power of Teamwork
The 1960 Chinese mountaineering team’s story deeply touches me. They showed what a great team can achieve with courage and cooperation.
When climbing Mount Qomolangma’s North Ridge, they were stuck at the “Second Step”. Liu Lianman became a “human ladder” for his teammates, enduring great pain. The team gave him all their oxygen and climbed on without it, supporting each other through the cold night. They made every effort, never giving up.
Finally, they reached the top, making history. This story teaches me that teamwork isn’t about individual glory. A great team needs sacrifice, trust and responsibility. We should learn from them—support our teammates, take responsibility and work together. After all, “Together Everyone Achieves More”!
范文中文翻译
团队协作的力量
1960年中国登山队的故事深深打动了我。他们用勇气和协作，展现了伟大团队所能达成的成就。
在攀登珠峰北坡时，他们被困在了“第二台阶”。刘连满成为队友的“人梯”，承受着巨大的痛苦。团队把所有氧气都给了他，自己则在没有氧气的情况下继续攀登，在寒夜中相互扶持。他们拼尽全力，从未放弃。
最终，他们成功登顶，创造了历史。这个故事让我明白，团队协作无关个人荣耀。伟大的团队需要牺牲、信任和责任。我们应该向他们学习——支持队友、承担责任、共同努力。毕竟，“团结就是力量”！
素材积累
核心短语
make every effort 尽一切努力
take responsibility 承担责任
put oneself in others shoes 换位思考
carry on 继续前进
shoulder ones team 支撑团队
fall back 后退；失败
give out 分配；分发
split into 分成
vote for 投票支持
work together 协作
support each other 相互支持
individual glory 个人荣耀
mutual support 相互支持
solve conflicts 化解冲突
do ones part 尽自己的职责
基础句型（含本单元重点）
基础句型 仿写句子
A great team should ________, not ________. A great team should cooperate, not argue.
We dont have to ________; instead, we can ________. We dont have to follow one persons idea; instead, we can vote together.
________ did not ________, but he/she ________ (转折关系). She did not play the lead role, but she supported the team brilliantly.
Thanks to ________, the team finally ________. Thanks to mutual trust, the team finally completed the task.
A great team is built on ________, ________ and ________. A great team is built on trust, responsibility and cooperation.
好句集锦
1.A great team isnt about having perfect members, but about turning weaknesses into strengths through cooperation.
2.Teamwork is the fuel that allows common people to achieve uncommon results.
3.Responsibility makes a team reliable, trust makes it united, and cooperation makes it unbeatable.
4.The best teams dont win because of individual stars, but because everyone shines together.
谚语
1.Unity is strength.（团结就是力量——凸显团队协作的核心价值）
2.Many hands make light work.（众人拾柴火焰高——体现分工协作的效率）
3.Teamwork divides the task and multiplies the success.（团队协作分解任务，倍增成功——诠释团队的双重作用）
学生写作填空练习版
版本一：讲述伟大团队故事
________ (团队名称，如The Chinese Mountaineering Team) is a great example of teamwork. They faced ________ (困境，如terrible cold and thin air) when trying to ________ (目标，如climb Mount Qomolangma).
________ (核心人物) did something amazing—he ________ (行动，如became a "human ladder" for his teammates). The team ________ (协作行为，如gave him all their oxygen and supported each other). They made every effort and never gave up.
Finally, they ________ (成果，如reached the top). This story teaches me that ________ (感悟，如teamwork needs sacrifice and trust). I will ________ (行动，如support my teammates in future team tasks).
版本二：分享团队协作经历
Our class team once faced a problem when ________ (任务，如preparing for a school play). ________ (困境，如two classmates both wanted the same role) and the team was divided.
I ________ (行动1，如asked our teacher for advice) and we decided to ________ (行动2，如let them try different roles and vote). Everyone worked hard and supported each other. We practiced together and solved problems as a team.
In the end, we ________ (成果，如won the competition). I realized that a great team needs ________ (特质，如communication and respect). I will ________ (行动，如listen to others ideas in future team work).
版本三：阐述优秀团队特质
What makes a great team I think it has three key traits: responsibility, trust and cooperation.
First, every member should ________ (行为1，如take their own responsibility). Second, team members must ________ (行为2，如trust each others strengths). Whats more, they should ________ (行为3，如cooperate to solve problems). For example, the Chinese mountaineering team ________ (事例，如supported each other through difficulties) and achieved their goal.
A great team isnt born but made. We should ________ (行动，如learn these traits) and apply them in our daily team tasks. With these, we can overcome any challenge!

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