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Unit 4 Time to celebrate 写作专项学案
写作目标
结合本单元“节日与庆祝”主题，写一篇介绍传统节日、分享特别的节日经历或描述节日里坚守岗位的人的短文，阐述节日的习俗、文化意义或奉献精神，达成以下目标：
1.能正确使用本单元“节日与庆祝”相关核心词汇（如festival、celebrate、tradition、reunion、decorate、gift、duty、break、family、culture、food、custom等）及短语（stand by、give up、make the most of、take part in、hang up、look forward to、be thankful for、play a role in等）；
2.能熟练运用频度副词（always、usually、often、sometimes、never）和一般现在时描述节日习俗，掌握“People always/often...on... ” “It’s a tradition to...”等常用句型，正确使用连词and/but/or连接句子；
3.能按“节日主题引入→核心细节（习俗/经历/奉献）→文化感悟”的逻辑完成写作，贴合“传承传统，感恩奉献”的单元主题。
题目解析
1.体裁：节日介绍类说明文、经历分享类记叙文或人物描写类短文，兼具知识性与情感性；
2.人称：第一人称（分享个人经历、表达感悟）或第三人称（介绍节日、描述他人）为主；
3.核心要求
内容：覆盖“1个核心节日/经历/人物、2-3个关键细节（习俗/过程/事迹）、1个文化意义或情感感悟”3个要点；
字数：70–90词，描述真实生动、情感真挚自然，语言符合七年级学生水平，体现对节日文化的理解与感恩之情。
思路点拨
1.开头：明确引入核心主题（如“春节是中国最重要的传统节日” “我在英国度过了一个特别的春节” “节日里总有一些人坚守岗位”），用简洁句式点明核心特点（如“以团圆和热闹著称” “充满惊喜与温暖” “他们的奉献让节日更美好”），用情感化或引导性语言引出下文具体描述；
2.中间：若介绍传统节日，按“习俗+食物”展开，描述节日的典型活动（如贴春联、赛龙舟）、特色食物（如饺子、粽子），结合频度副词说明习俗的传承性；若分享节日经历，聚焦“背景+过程+感受”，讲述节日里的特别事件（如教外国朋友过春节、绿色过圣诞），用具体动作和场景体现经历的特别；若描述坚守岗位的人，围绕“人物+事迹”，说明其工作内容、坚守的原因，用细节体现奉献精神；
3.结尾：分享文化感悟（如“节日是文化的传承，团圆是节日的核心” “不同的庆祝方式都藏着对生活的热爱” “坚守岗位的人是节日里最美的风景”），呼应单元“Time to celebrate”的核心主题，传递尊重传统、懂得感恩的积极态度。
写作模板（逐段拆解）
模板一：介绍传统节日——春节（The Spring Festival）
第一段：节日引入与核心地位
基础句式：________ (节日名称) is the most important traditional festival in China. It is a time for family reunions and happiness. People look forward to it every year.
示例：The Spring Festival is the most meaningful traditional festival for Chinese people. It usually falls in January or February, and it’s a time when families get together no matter how far they are.
第二段：节日习俗与细节
基础句式：People always ________ (习俗1，如clean their houses and put up red lanterns) before the festival. On New Year’s Eve, families usually ________ (习俗2，如have a big dinner with traditional food like dumplings). Children often ________ (习俗3，如get red envelopes from parents and relatives). Everyone is happy and excited.
示例：Before the Spring Festival, people always clean their houses and hang red decorations to bring good luck. On New Year’s Eve, we have a big family dinner. My mom cooks delicious food like lion’s head meatballs and dumplings—dumplings stand for family reunion. We often watch the Spring Festival Gala and talk about our lives.
第三段：文化意义与感悟
基础句式：The Spring Festival is not just about eating and playing. It’s a symbol of ________ (文化意义，如family love and traditional culture). It teaches us to cherish the time with family. I love this festival and hope the traditions will be passed down forever.
示例：The Spring Festival is a treasure of Chinese culture. It lets family members gather and strengthen their ties. Every tradition carries people’s wishes for a better life. I feel lucky to celebrate such a warm festival. I will always cherish these happy moments and respect our traditional culture.
模板二：分享特别的节日经历——在英国过春节
第一段：经历引入与背景
基础句式：Last ________ (节日名称), I had a special experience. I was in ________ (地点) and celebrated the festival with ________ (人物), which made it unforgettable.
示例：Last Spring Festival, I spent a special time in the UK with my British friend Emilia. It was my first Spring Festival abroad, and I wanted to let her experience Chinese culture.
第二段：经历过程与细节
基础句式：At first, I didn’t know how to cook traditional Chinese food. But my family helped me on the phone. I ________ (动作1，如learned to make dumplings and lion’s head meatballs). Emilia ________ (动作2，如helped hang lanterns and balloons). When we ate the food, she ________ (反应，如loved the taste and asked about the traditions).
示例：I had never cooked before, so I called my grandma for help. She taught me to make dumplings and cucumber flowers step by step. Emilia hung red lanterns and balloons to decorate the room. When I served the lion’s head meatballs, she was shocked at the name, but she loved the taste after trying. We laughed and talked about Chinese festival traditions.
第三段：经历感悟与收获
基础句式：This special experience taught me that ________ (感悟，如festivals are a bridge for cultural exchange). I not only shared Chinese culture but also made our friendship stronger. It was a happy and meaningful festival.
示例：This unusual Spring Festival made me feel warm even far from home. It showed that food and traditions can connect people from different countries. I was proud to share my culture, and Emilia became more interested in China. Festivals are not just about family reunion but also about cultural communication.
范文
A Special Dragon Boat Festival
The Dragon Boat Festival is an important traditional Chinese festival. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month, and it’s famous for dragon boat races and zongzi.
My family always celebrates it together. My grandma usually makes sweet zongzi with red beans, and my dad likes to watch dragon boat races on TV. This year, I joined a dragon boat team in our community. We practiced hard for a week. On the festival day, the river was crowded with people cheering for us. Though we didn’t win, we had a great time.
This festival teaches me about Qu Yuan’s story and the spirit of teamwork. It’s not just a festival for fun, but a way to pass down our culture. I love the Dragon Boat Festival and will always remember its traditions!
范文中文翻译
一个特别的端午节
端午节是中国重要的传统节日。它在农历五月初五，以龙舟比赛和粽子而闻名。
我们家总是一起庆祝这个节日。奶奶通常会做红豆甜粽子，爸爸喜欢在电视上看龙舟比赛。今年，我加入了社区的龙舟队。我们刻苦训练了一周。节日那天，河边挤满了为我们加油的人。虽然我们没有赢，但我们玩得很开心。
这个节日让我了解了屈原的故事和团队合作的精神。它不仅仅是一个娱乐的节日，更是传承文化的一种方式。我喜欢端午节，会永远记住它的传统！
素材积累
核心短语
stand by 随时待命
give up 放弃
make the most of 充分利用
take part in 参加
hang up 悬挂
look forward to 期待
be thankful for 感谢
play a role in 在……中起作用
family reunion 家庭团聚
traditional food 传统食物
dragon boat race 龙舟比赛
red envelope 红包
Spring Festival Gala 春节联欢晚会
decorate the room 装饰房间
pass down 传承
cultural exchange 文化交流
基础句型（含本单元重点）
基础句型 仿写句子
People always/often ________ on ________. People always eat zongzi on the Dragon Boat Festival.
It’s a tradition to ________ during ________. It’s a tradition to decorate houses with red things during the Spring Festival.
________ is famous for ________. The Mid-Autumn Festival is famous for mooncakes and moon-gazing.
Though ________, we ________. Though it was tiring, we felt happy to prepare for the festival.
Festivals are not just about ________, but also about ________. Festivals are not just about food, but also about family love.
好句集锦
1.Festivals are the carriers of culture, passing down traditions and love from generation to generation.
2.The warmth of festivals comes from family reunions and the sharing of happiness with others.
3.Those who stick to their posts during festivals show great responsibility, making our celebrations safer and better.
4.Different festivals have different customs, but they all express people’s wishes for a happy life.
谚语
1.Unity is strength.（团结就是力量——适用于描述龙舟比赛等集体活动）
2.Home is where the heart is.（家是心灵的港湾——强调节日团圆的意义）
3.Gratitude is the fairest flower that blooms in the soul.（感恩是灵魂中绽放的最美丽的花朵——适用于感谢节日里坚守岗位的人）
学生写作填空练习版
版本一：介绍传统节日
My favorite festival is ________ (节日名称，如the Mid-Autumn Festival). It is a traditional Chinese festival that celebrates ________ (节日意义，如family reunion).
People usually ________ (习俗1，如gather with family) on this day. We always ________ (习俗2，如eat mooncakes) and ________ (习俗3，如watch the full moon). Mooncakes taste sweet and round, which stands for ________ (象征意义，如happiness and reunion).
This festival makes me understand the importance of family. I love it because ________ (感悟，如it brings us together and passes down our culture). I hope this tradition will last forever!
版本二：分享特别的节日经历
Last ________ (节日名称，如Christmas), I had a special experience. I celebrated it with my family in a green way, which was meaningful.
We didn’t buy a real Christmas tree. Instead, we ________ (做法1，如made one with old boxes). My mom ________ (做法2，如cooked delicious food without wasting anything), and we ________ (做法3，如wrapped gifts with old newspapers). We had fun and protected the environment at the same time.
This experience taught me that ________ (感悟，如festivals can be celebrated in different ways). It’s not about how expensive the gifts are, but about ________ (核心意义，如the joy of sharing). I will always remember this special festival!

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