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Unit 6 Hitting the road 写作专项学案
写作目标
结合本单元“旅行的意义”主题，写一篇分享旅行经历、介绍伟大旅行者或制定旅行计划的短文，达成以下目标：
1.能正确使用本单元“旅行与探索”相关核心词汇（如travel、journey、trip、explore、discover、experience、culture、scenery、destination、adventure等）及短语（look forward to、set out、walk through、come true、be famous for、in ancient times、learn about、be curious about等）；
2.能熟练运用“as...as...”结构描述旅行体验，掌握“When in Rome, do as the Romans do”等核心句型，正确使用“To my surprise...” “It’s amazing that...”等表达；
3.能按“主题引入→核心细节（旅行经历/旅行者事迹/旅行计划）→感悟与收获”的逻辑完成写作，贴合“探索未知，收获成长”的单元主题。
题目解析
1.体裁：旅行经历类记叙文、旅行者介绍类说明文或旅行计划类应用文，兼具趣味性与知识性；
2.人称：第一人称（分享旅行经历、制定计划）或第三人称（介绍旅行者）为主；
3.核心要求
内容：覆盖“1个核心主题（旅行经历/伟大旅行者/旅行计划）、2-3个关键细节（行程亮点/人物成就/计划安排）、1个旅行感悟或成长收获”3个要点；
字数：70–90词，描述生动具体、逻辑清晰连贯，语言符合七年级学生水平，体现对旅行意义的理解与探索精神。
思路点拨
1.开头：明确引入核心主题（如“我的四川之旅充满惊喜” “徐霞客是中国历史上伟大的旅行者” “我为外国朋友制定了一份北京一日游计划”），用简洁句式点明主题核心（如“我体验了特色美食，还感受了深厚文化” “他用一生探索中国的名山大川” “这份计划能让朋友感受北京的魅力”），用引导性或情感化语言引出下文具体描述；
2.中间：若分享旅行经历，按“行程脉络→核心体验→感受变化”展开，描述旅行中的特色活动（如品尝美食、参观景点），结合“as...as...”结构体现体验感受（如“煮火锅和吃火锅一样有趣”），展现旅行中的惊喜与收获；若介绍伟大旅行者，聚焦“人物生平→核心成就→精神品质”，讲述旅行者的探索历程（如徐霞客的地理发现）、克服的困难及留下的宝贵财富（如《徐霞客游记》）；若制定旅行计划，围绕“时间安排→行程内容→选择理由”，合理规划一日行程，涵盖美食、景点等元素，说明行程设计的意义（如感受文化、体验生活）；
3.结尾：分享旅行感悟（如“旅行让我开阔眼界，感受不同文化的魅力” “伟大旅行者的探索精神值得我们学习” “希望这份计划能让朋友爱上中国”）或表达行动意愿（如“我想继续探索更多未知的地方” “我要以他们为榜样，勇敢追求梦想” “我会带着朋友按计划开启愉快的旅程”），呼应单元“Hitting the road”的核心主题，传递热爱探索、拥抱世界的积极态度。
写作模板（逐段拆解）
模板一：分享旅行经历——四川之旅（A Trip to Sichuan）
第一段：主题引入与旅行背景
基础句式：Travelling can bring us new experiences. Last ________ (时间，如summer holiday), I went to ________ (目的地，如Sichuan) with my friends. It was a wonderful trip full of surprises.
示例：Travelling refreshes the mind, and my trip to Sichuan was truly unforgettable. During the last National Day holiday, I visited Chengdu with my family. I had been looking forward to this trip for a long time.
第二段：核心体验与细节
基础句式：On the first day, we tried Sichuan hot pot. It was much hotter than I expected, but surprisingly, I enjoyed it a lot. Cooking hot pot was just as fun as eating it! The next day, we visited ________ (景点，如Sanxingdui Museum). I was curious about the ancient masks—their eyes and ears were much bigger than normal ones.
示例：On our first day, my friend Haoyu took us to try Sichuan hot pot. The first bite made my mouth burn, but I replied, “When in China, do as the Chinese do!” Later, I found the taste amazing. Cooking hot pot was just as fun as eating it! The next day, we went to Sanxingdui Museum. The fantastic masks made me wonder a lot about ancient Shu culture.
第三段：旅行感悟与收获
基础句式：This trip taught me a lot. I not only tasted delicious food and saw amazing scenery but also learned about different cultures. Travelling helps us understand the world better. I’m looking forward to my next trip!
示例：This trip made me realize the true meaning of travel—it’s not just about visiting places, but about experiencing new things and broadening horizons. I experienced different cultures and made wonderful memories. I can’t wait to hit the road again and explore more amazing places!
模板二：介绍伟大旅行者——徐霞客（Xu Xiake）
第一段：主题引入与人物定位
基础句式：There are many great travellers in history who inspire us. ________ (人物姓名), the greatest traveller in Chinese history, is one of them. He spent his whole life exploring the world.
示例：Exploring the unexplored is a valuable spirit, and Xu Xiake is a perfect example of it. He was the greatest traveller in Chinese history, devoting his life to exploring China’s seas and mountains.
第二段：核心成就与经历
基础句式：From an early age, he dreamed of visiting China’s natural wonders. At 22, he set out on his life’s journey. During his travels, he ________ (成就1，如made many geographical discoveries) and ________ (成就2，如recorded his experiences in his diary). He climbed mountains, walked through forests, and never gave up even when facing difficulties.
示例：Xu Xiake dreamed of exploring nature since childhood. At 22, he started his lifelong journey and travelled for about 30 years. He made many geographical discoveries—for example, he proved that Lianhua Peak is higher than Tiandu Peak. He recorded all his experiences in Xu Xiake’s Travel Notes, which helps us learn about China nearly 400 years ago.
第三段：精神品质与启示
基础句式：Xu Xiake’s spirit of exploration and persistence teaches us that ________ (感悟，如nothing is impossible with determination). He is as great as other famous travellers. We should learn from him and bravely pursue our dreams.
示例：Xu Xiake’s spirit of never stopping exploring is truly inspiring. He once said he had no regrets about his life on the road. He is as great as Zhang Qian and Xuanzang. We should learn from his courage and persistence, and dare to explore the unknown in our own lives.
范文
My Unforgettable Trip to Chengdu
Travelling allows us to experience new cultures, and my trip to Chengdu was one of the most memorable journeys I’ve ever had. I went there with my classmates last month.
On the first day, we tried Sichuan hot pot. It was much hotter than we expected, but we all loved it. Cooking hot pot was just as fun as eating it! The next day, we visited Sanxingdui Museum. The ancient masks were fantastic—their special shapes made us curious about ancient Shu civilization. We asked the guide many questions and learned a lot.
This trip not only made me taste delicious food but also broadened my horizons. I realized that every place has its own unique culture. Travelling is a great way to learn about the world. I’m already looking forward to my next trip to explore more wonderful places!
范文中文翻译
我难忘的成都之旅
旅行能让我们体验不同的文化，而我的成都之旅是我经历过的最难忘的旅程之一。上个月，我和同学们一起去了那里。
第一天，我们尝试了四川火锅。它比我们想象的要辣得多，但我们都很喜欢。煮火锅和吃火锅一样有趣！第二天，我们参观了三星堆博物馆。古老的面具太棒了——它们奇特的造型让我们对古蜀文明充满好奇。我们向导游问了很多问题，学到了不少知识。
这次旅行不仅让我品尝到了美味的食物，还开阔了我的眼界。我意识到每个地方都有自己独特的文化。旅行是了解世界的好方式。我已经在期待下一次旅行，去探索更多精彩的地方！
素材积累
核心短语
look forward to 期待
set out 出发
walk through 穿行；走过
come true 实现
be famous for 以……闻名
in ancient times 在古代
learn about 了解
be curious about 对……好奇
broaden one’s horizons 开阔眼界
natural wonders 自然奇观
geographical discoveries 地理发现
ancient civilization 古代文明
unique culture 独特文化
hit the road 启程；出发
基础句型（含本单元重点）
基础句型 仿写句子
________ is just as fun as ________. Visiting museums is just as fun as trying local food.
I was curious about ________ because ________. I was curious about the ancient buildings because they looked so different from modern ones.
Travelling helps us ________ and ________. Travelling helps us understand different cultures and make new friends.
________ devoted his / her life to ________. He devoted his life to exploring the unknown places.
I’m looking forward to ________. I’m looking forward to visiting the Great Wall next year.
好句集锦
1.Travelling is not just about seeing new places, but about seeing the world in a new way.
2.Great travellers teach us that courage and persistence can lead us to amazing discoveries.
3.Every trip is a journey of growth—we meet new people, experience new things, and become better versions of ourselves.
4.The world is full of wonders, and hitting the road is the best way to explore them.
谚语
1.Travel broadens the mind.（旅行开阔眼界——强调旅行的意义）
2.He who travels far knows much.（行万里路，知天下事——体现旅行的价值）
3.To travel is to discover that everyone is wrong about other countries.（旅行就是发现每个人对其他国家的看法都是错误的——说明旅行能增进了解）
学生写作填空练习版
版本一：分享旅行经历
Travelling brings us new joys. Last ________ (时间，如winter holiday), I went to ________ (目的地，如Beijing) with my family. It was a fantastic trip.
On the first day, we visited ________ (景点，如the Forbidden City). It was much bigger than I imagined. We took many photos there. The next day, we tried ________ (美食，如Peking duck). It tasted delicious, and sharing food with family was just as happy as eating it!
This trip made me ________ (感受，如love different cultures). I learned that travelling can ________ (收获，如broaden our horizons). I’m looking forward to my next trip!
版本二：介绍伟大旅行者
My favorite great traveller is ________ (人物姓名，如Zhang Qian). He was a famous traveller in ________ (朝代，如Han Dynasty) and made great contributions to exploration.
From an early age, he dreamed of ________ (梦想，如exploring the Western Regions). He set out on a long journey and faced many difficulties. During his travels, he ________ (成就1，如opened the Silk Road) and ________ (成就2，如helped people know more about foreign countries).
His spirit of ________ (精神品质，如bravery and persistence) inspires me a lot. I think we should learn from him and ________ (行动，如dare to pursue our dreams). Great travellers like him make the world more connected!
版本三：制定旅行计划
I want to make a one-day travel plan for my foreign friend Tom. He is interested in Chinese culture, so this plan will help him experience it.
In the morning, we will have breakfast at a local restaurant to try ________ (美食，如soybean milk and fried dough sticks). Then we will visit ________ (景点，如the Palace Museum) to learn about ancient Chinese history. In the afternoon, we will walk around ________ (地点，如Houhai) to feel the daily life of Beijing.
This plan is not too busy, and Tom can ________ (收获，如experience both culture and life). I hope he will enjoy this trip and fall in love with Beijing!

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