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应用文写作万能模板便条
便条写作
What's Notes
便条是一种简单的书信，我们有事情要告诉别人或委托别人办理而不能面谈时，就可以给他们写个便条。便条内容简短，大多是临时性的询问、留言、要求等。
便条写作
便条的分类
请假条 (Notes asking for leave)
留言条 (Message notes)
借条 (Notes of I.O.U)
收条 (Receipts) 等。
语言特点
便条篇幅短，语言简单扼要，语体通俗口语化。
日期 日期写在便条的右上角
便条 称呼 称呼比书信的称呼要随意一些。一般在人名前加上dear并冠以尊称。
Mr.（Mister），用于无职衔的男子。Mrs. （ Mistress），用于已婚女子。
Miss 用于未婚女子。Ms. 用于女士通称。
Dr.（Doctor），用于博士。Prof.（Professor），用于大学教授。
正文 另起一行，可以缩进，也可以对齐。
注意使用口语化的表达方式
签名 在结束语正下方另起一行，留下姓名。
也可以加上Yours，Sincerely等词。
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Exercise：You have a ticket to the Russian National Ballet Troupe, which is visiting and you want to give it to your friend Alice. Write a note to her and say:
the time of the show,
the place where you will wait for her
You should write about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of your email.
便条写作
假设你有一张俄罗斯国家芭蕾舞团演出的门票，你想送给朋友爱丽丝。
让你给她写一张便条。
Step 1 审题
给定的情景：
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告 诉 她 ：
1)演出时间
2)集合地点
Step 1
审题
任务要求：
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列提纲
Step 2
便条内容简短，一般不需要分段，一段即可。 邀请类便条写作思路一般是：
诚挚邀请对方参加某活动
介绍活动的内容、时间、地点，相关内容
再次发出邀请或者期待对方回复
经典例句：
① May I take this opportunity to invite you to…….
② I`m writing to invite you to…
③ I am extending to you our formal invitation to...
④ It gives me the greatest pleasure to invite you to...
⑤ We would be very pleased if you could honor us with your company.
Anticipating your reply.
⑥ We hope you can come and look forward to seeing you later.
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Step 3写作
May 10th
Dear Alice,
I`m writing to invite you to watch the performance given by the Russian National Ballet Troupe. It will be performed in the National Grand Theater tomorrow evening. I am sure that you will be happy to watch it and I leave you a ticket. The performance will begin at 7 P.M. I will wait for you at the theater entrance. I hope you can come and look forward to seeing you later.
Yours sincerely,
Tom
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Step 4
检查
从以下方面进行修改：
语法：
时态是否一致，主谓语是否一致，名词的单复数形式， 被动语态等。
词汇：
连接上下文的连接词使用是否正确，单词拼写是否出 现低级错误等。
格式：
格式是否出现错误，标点符号是否使用错误等。
注意：
不要进行大篇幅的修改，更不要因为修改 破坏卷面的整洁。
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行文特点
便条是在不面谈的情况下书写的一种日常生活中常用的文体
内容要求
根据内容，可分为一般便条和请假条；便条的内容要写清楚事件的原因以及想要达到的目的
写作步骤
一般便条
首段：阐明原因
主体段：留言的内容
结尾段：落款
请假条
首段：提出请假
主体段：陈述请假理由并表示歉意
结尾段：表达希望批准
便条写作
Dear ××(收信人)，
I would like to know if I could ask for __________ (说明留言原因)．
Because ________ (详述具体原因), so I have to ask for one day leaving. I'm afraid ________ (表示遗憾/歉意)．
I am looking forward to ________ (期待批准)．
××(写信人)
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【开头常用句式】
1．I called you just now, but I couldn't get through to you. So I have to leave a note to you.
我刚才打电话给你，但是打不通。所以我留下这张便条给你。
2．To celebrate Teachers' Day, I bought you a bunch of flowers for you, but you are not at home.
为了庆祝教师节，我给您买了一束鲜花，但您不在家。
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【主体段落常用句式】
3．Tomorrow's class will be put off to 2 pm this Saturday.
明天的课将推迟到本周六下午两点。
4．This morning I received a telephone call from my dentist, urging me to come to his practice for immediate treatment of my teeth.
今天早上我接到我牙医的电话，催促我去他的诊所，立即治疗我的牙齿。
5．Concerning my workload, I think a one day leave this Wednesday may be the best solution, as Wednesday is not as busy as the other weekdays.
考虑到我的工作量，我认为周三请一天假是最好的解决办法，因为周三没有其他工作日那么忙。
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6．We are to gather at the school gate and start off at 7：00. Don't be late.
我们在学校门口集合，七点出发。别迟到了。
7．I'm going to the library, and won't be back until about 3：00 pm.
我要去图书馆，直到下午3点才回来。
8．Moreover, I left my notebook in your schoolbag by mistake the day before yesterday.
而且，我前天不小心把笔记本忘在你书包里了。
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【结尾常用句式】
9．I promise I will do my best to make up for the missed lessons.
我保证，我会尽最大的努力去补上错过的课程。
10．I shall be much obliged if I can get your permission.
如果能得到您的许可，我将不胜感激。
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假如你叫李华，你的外教William夫妇对京剧很感兴趣。你正好有两张明天晚上梅兰芳剧院的戏票，那是一场由著名演员演出的京剧，很值得观看。你打算送给他们，但是不巧他们外出。请你写个便条，顺便告诉他们：
1．你已经读了他们推荐给你的两本英文书，很有趣；
2．你因忙于准备考试，不能一起去欣赏京剧了。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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[精彩范文]
Dear Mr and Mrs William，
I learnt that you are interested in Peking Opera. I've come to give you two tickets for tomorrow evening's Peking Opera performance in Mei Lanfang Theater. It's a pity that you happened to be out. I have to leave the tickets with this note.
The opera will be put on by some famous players and it is well worth seeing. By the way, I've read the two English books you recommended to me. They are very interesting. This week, I'm busy reviewing my lessons in order to pass the exams. So I can't go to the theater together with you.
I hope you will have a good time.
Yours，
Li Hua
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