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读后续写·心理细节：让故事“活”起来
以Maria & Chips的故事为例
句型结构+英文直译+中文释义
目录
心理细节的作用
核心句型1：疑虑的悄然滋生
核心句型2：灵感的突然闪现
核心句型3：印象的深刻定格
实战小练：用句型写片段
心理细节的作用
关键价值：
让角色更真实（Maria的孤独→期待→担忧）
推动情节转折（从“怕投诉”到“遇善意”）
核心句型1：Doubt crept into sb’s mind + whether + 从句（某人心中产生疑虑，是否... ）
Maria心里泛起疑虑：邻居会不会因为Chips的叫声投诉自己？。
Doubt crept into Maria’s mind whether the neighbor would file a complaint about Chips’ barks
核心句型1：Doubt crept into sb’s mind + whether + 从句（某人心中产生疑虑，是否... ）翻译练习：
1. Maria心里泛起疑虑：要是邻居真的讨厌叫声，自己还能不能继续养Chips？
2. Chips心里有点不安：自己独自在家呜咽时，Maria会不会早点回来？
Doubt crept into Maria’s mind whether she could keep Chips if the neighbor really hated the barks.
Doubt crept into Chips’ mind whether Maria would come back early when it whimpered alone at home.
核心句型1：Doubt crept into sb’s mind + whether + 从句（某人心中产生疑虑，是否... ）翻译练习：
3. Angelia心里闪过犹豫：新邻居会不会收下Corote给Chips准备的“玩具礼物”？
4. Corote心里有点忐忑：隔壁那只小黑幼犬会不会愿意和自己玩？
Doubt crept into Angelia’s mind whether the new neighbor would accept Corote’s “toy gift” for Chips.
Doubt crept into Corote’s mind whether the small black puppy next door would like to play with it.
核心句型2：It suddenly occurred to sb that...
（某人突然想到…）
Chips突然想到：这个新朋友（Corote）是来陪自己玩，不是来欺负自己的。
It suddenly occurred to Chips that the new friend (Corote) would play with it instead of bullying it.
核心句型2：It suddenly occurred to sb that...
（某人突然想到…）翻译练习：
1.Maria突然想到：自己可以邀请Angelia和Corote来公寓小聚。
2.Chips突然想到：隔壁传来的“奇怪声音”其实是另一只狗的问候。
It suddenly occurred to Maria that she could invite Angelia and Corote to her apartment for a small gathering.
It suddenly occurred to Chips that the “strange sound” from next door was actually another dog’s greeting.
核心句型2：It suddenly occurred to sb that...
（某人突然想到…）翻译练习：
3.Angelia突然想到：Maria上班时，自己可以让Corote去陪Chips。
4.Corote突然想到：自己可以把最爱的咬胶棒分享给隔壁孤独的小狗。
It suddenly occurred to Angelia that she could let Corote accompany Chips when Maria was at work.
It suddenly occurred to Corote that it could share its favorite chew stick with the lonely puppy next door.
核心句型3：What impressed sb most was + 内容
（给某人印象最深的是…）
Chips印象最深的，是Corote送的新玩具那软软的触感。
What impressed Chips most was the soft texture of the new toy from Corote.
核心句型3：What impressed sb most was + 内容
（给某人印象最深的是…）翻译练习：
1.Maria印象最深的，是Angelia提到Corote喜欢Chips时那温柔的笑容。
2.Chips印象最深的，是Corote把玩具推给自己而非抢走的样子。
What impressed Maria most was Angelia’s soft smile when she mentioned Corote’s fondness for Chips.
What impressed Chips most was the way Corote nudged the toy toward it instead of snatching it.
核心句型3：What impressed sb most was + 内容
（给某人印象最深的是…）翻译练习：
3.Angelia印象最深的，是Maria看到礼物包裹时紧紧抱住Chips的模样。
4. Corote印象最深的，是Chips哪怕还有点害羞，尾巴也轻轻摇晃的样子。
What impressed Angelia most was Maria’s tight hug with Chips when she saw the gift package.
What impressed Corote most was the way Chips wagged its tail even when it was still a little shy.
实战小练
任务：用今天的句型，补全片段：
Curious, Maria opened the note and started reading it. Maria打开纸条，心里又慌又乱。（用句型1）。可当她看到爪印落款时，（用句型2）。放下纸条，（用句型3）。
With Chips following her, Maria knocked at Angelia’s door. （用句型1）。可当门打开、Corote摇着尾巴扑向Chips时，（用句型2）。看着两只小狗滚作一团，（用句型3）。
实战小练
补全示例：
Curious, Maria opened the note and started reading it. Maria打开纸条，心里又慌又乱。Doubt crept into her mind whether this was a complaint letter about Chips。可当她看到爪印落款时，it suddenly occurred to her that this was a “gift letter” from a neighbor’s dog。放下纸条，what impressed her most was the warm tone hidden in the funny “dog words”。
Curious, Maria opened the note and started reading it. Maria打开纸条，心里又慌又乱。（用句型1）。可当她看到爪印落款时，（用句型2）。放下纸条，（用句型3）。
实战小练
补全示例：
With Chips following her, Maria knocked at Angelia’s door. Doubt crept into her mind whether Angelia would feel bothered by her sudden visit。可当门打开、Corote摇着尾巴扑向Chips时，it suddenly occurred to her that the neighbor had long noticed Chips’ loneliness。看着两只小狗滚作一团，what impressed her most was the bright smile spreading across Angelia’s face。
With Chips following her, Maria knocked at Angelia’s door. （用句型1）。可当门打开、Corote摇着尾巴扑向Chips时，（用句型2）。看着两只小狗滚作一团，（用句型3）。
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