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Memory Remains
用定语从句升级句式：I have a pen-friend who is from Canada and speaks Chinese very well, and we often study together on line.
写作水平有限的同学可能会这样写作文：I have a pen-friend. She is from Canada. She speaks Chinese very well. We often study together on line.
（句式过于简单，缺乏句式变化，表达不够地道，语言不够高级）
思考：写作中，使用定语从句有什么好处？
定语从句───写作表达力的“放大器”
听歌学英语
（歌词填空、句式升级）
I'm reaching out but you are far away
The echoes haunt [h nt](不快的事情)萦绕于脑际，难以忘却 the words I try to say
My heart still burns although the 5.________ is gone
I sing your name but know I stand alone
The 6.________ keep falling rivers through my hands
A dream of love I cannot 7.________
Yet in the dark your memory remains
A fragile flame that nothing can 8.________ ...
The night is quiet, heavy with regret
I 1.________ the roads where all our hearts had met
The shadow falls across the empty floor
A 2.________ that lingers [ l ɡ (r)]徘徊 knocking at my door
The silence 3.________ secrets I can't hide
A fragile [ fr d a l] 易碎的;脆弱的 truth that 4.________ me up inside
And still I walk beneath this endless rain
歌词填空1 (Memory Remains)
I'm reaching out but you are far away
The echoes haunt [h nt](不快的事情)萦绕于脑际，难以忘却 the words I try to say
My heart still burns although the 5.flame is gone
I sing your name but know I stand alone
The 6.tears keep falling rivers through my hands
A dream of love I cannot 7.understand
Yet in the dark your memory remains
A fragile flame that nothing can 8.contain ...
The night is quiet, heavy with regret
I 1.trace the roads where all our hearts had met
The shadow falls across the empty floor
A 2.ghost that lingers [ l ɡ (r)]徘徊 knocking at my door
The silence 3.whispers secrets I can't hide
A fragile [ fr d a l] 易碎的;脆弱的 truth that 4.tears me up inside
And still I walk beneath this endless rain
歌词填空1 (答案)，寻找定语从句？
找“先行词”
定位被修饰的名词或代词
看“关系词”
找到连接词（who, which, that, when, where, why, whose等）
验“从句完整性”
关系词后的部分必须是一个结构完整的句子（不缺核心成分）
识别定语从句“三步判定法”
句式升级技巧一：合并简单句
案例1：
原句：My English teacher is very patient. She has taught for 20 years.
升级：My English teacher, who has taught for 20 years, is very patient.
案例2：
原句：I visited the museum last week. It displays ancient artifacts.
升级：I visited the museum last week which displays ancient artifacts.
技巧总结：找出两句话中重复的名词，用关系词连接
2025.11.26 周测7 高三（13）班 曾思婷 应用文
可以升级为：We always face many problems in other aspects of life, for which we need to learn life skills.（说明：用“for which”引导定语从句，修饰“problems”，明确“学习生活技能”是为了应对“这些问题”。）
歌词填空2（Echoes of You）
You're the flame I can't let go
The sound 1.__________ the afterglow (日落后的)余晖
Every tear still 2.__________ you
Like a rain that falls but won't 3.__________ through
Your voice remains, it drifts[dr ft]漂流;漂移 so 4.__________
A 5.__________ I'll never undo [ n du ]取消，撤销
No matter how the rivers 6.__________
I'm always finding back to you ...
歌词填空2（答案），寻找定语从句？
You're the flame I can't let go
The sound 1.beneath the afterglow (日落后的)余晖
Every tear still 2.carries you
Like a rain that falls but won't 3.break through
Your voice remains, it drifts[dr ft]漂流;漂移 so 4.low
A 5.memory I'll never undo [ n du ]取消，撤销
No matter how the rivers 6.flow
I'm always finding back to you ...
句式升级技巧二：增加细节信息，让句子“有血有肉”
普通表达：
Technology has changed our lives.（句式太简单）
增加细节：
Technology, which develops at an amazing speed, has changed our lives in almost every aspect.
再升级：
Technology, which develops at an amazing speed, has changed our lives in almost every aspect, a fact that we can hardly ignore.
效果分析：通过定语从句，我们添加了“发展速度惊人”和“难以忽视的事实”两层信息，使句子内容更丰富。
2025.10月联考 高三（13）班 周上 应用文
升级为定语从句：Secondly, when we walk on the way to school, we can pick up some bottles or used papers that are littered on the ground.（说明：用限制性定语从句“that are littered on the ground”修饰“bottles or used papers”，具体说明这些物品的状态，使行动目标更明确，语言更生动。）
Ha ha ha, here we go again. Relative 1.__________ come after a noun. Who, 2.__________, whom, which, that. They 3.__________ a relative clause that tells you about the noun. The man who lives next door is a 4.__________. The relative pronoun is who. The relative clause is who lives next door. It tells us about the man. Relative 5.__________ come after a noun. Where, when, why. They introduce a relative clause that tells you about the noun. This is the 6.__________ where I bought my bike. The relative adverb is 7.__________. The relative clause is where I 8.__________ my bike. It tells us about the store. Relative adverbs come after a noun.
歌词填空3
Ha ha ha, here we go again. Relative 1.pronouns come after a noun. Who, 2.whose, whom, which, that. They 3.introduce a relative clause that tells you about the noun. The man who lives next door is a 4.dentist. The relative pronoun is who. The relative clause is who lives next door. It tells us about the man. Relative 5.adverbs come after a noun. Where, when, why. They introduce a relative clause that tells you about the noun. This is the 6.store where I bought my bike. The relative adverb is 7.where. The relative clause is where I 8.bought my bike. It tells us about the store. Relative adverbs come after a noun.
歌词填空3(答案)
问题段落：
I like the novel. The novel was written by Hemingway. The novel tells the story of an old fisherman.
修改后：
I like the novel which was written by Hemingway and tells the story of an old fisherman.
进一步优化：
I like the novel written by Hemingway, which tells the story of an old fisherman.
技巧：用定语从句避免反复提到同一个名词，使语言更简洁
句式升级技巧三：避免重复用词，让表达更多样
湖北省高中名校联盟2026届高三第一次联合测评 高三(13)班 金牌
这几个动作，其实都是在描写Mia对项链的反应。可以把“broken necklace”作为先行词，然后用定语从句来描述Mia对它的动作和反应。这样合并后，句子会更加紧凑，也能避免重复描述项链。用which引导非限定定语从句，把Mia捡起项链、盯着看这些动作都包含进去：She rushed into the bedroom, picking up the broken necklace, which she then stared at silently.
应用场景：高考写作常见话题（定语从句）
个人经历类
The most unforgettable experience __________ I have ever had was ...
观点论述类
Social media, __________ has become an indispensable part of our lives, brings both advantages and disadvantages.
问题解决类
Pollution, __________ is becoming increasingly serious, requires immediate action from both the government and individuals.
图表描述类
__________ can be seen from the chart, there was a sharp increase in 2020, which was mainly due to ...
that
which
which
As
练一练：关系词填空
(2023年6月新课标1卷应用文）This, however, may cause problems such as language barriers, mismatched learning goals, and lack of motivation, __________ may reduce the effectiveness of the program.
(2022全国甲卷应用文）It was set up to raise awareness of protecting the oceans, __________ play a crucial part in global ecosystem.
(2022全国甲卷应用文）First, try every means to fight against global warming, __________ has become a great threat to sea creatures.
(2022 年 1 月浙江)I gained a better understanding of Irish culture during the festival, __________ has great significance for the cultural exchanges between China and Ireland.
(2021 新高考 I&II 卷）These sayings reflect their wisdom of life, __________ encourages me to become a better person.
(2020 新高考 I 卷）Last Sunday, our school held a 5km cross-country running race, __________ attracted many enthusiastic participants, including both students and teachers.
(2023新课标 I 卷）A better way might be to have students practice with partners __________ have similar English proficiency and learning needs.
(2020 全国Ⅲ卷）It tells a story about a girl named Daisy, __________ talks with some wild animals and makes up her mind to help protect the environment.
(2023新高考全国Ⅰ卷读后续写)So, why did he suddenly force me to do something at __________ I was sure to fail
(2022新高考全国1卷读后续写)David had a brain disease __________ prevented him from walking or running like other children.
练一练：关系词填空 （答案）
(2023年6月新课标1卷应用文）This, however, may cause problems such as language barriers, mismatched learning goals, and lack of motivation, which may reduce the effectiveness of the program.
(2022全国甲卷应用文）It was set up to raise awareness of protecting the oceans, which play a crucial part in global ecosystem.
(2022全国甲卷应用文）First, try every means to fight against global warming, which has become a great threat to sea creatures.
(2022 年 1 月浙江)I gained a better understanding of Irish culture during the festival, which has great significance for the cultural exchanges between China and Ireland.
(2021 新高考 I&II 卷）These sayings reflect their wisdom of life, which encourages me to become a better person.
(2020 新高考 I 卷）Last Sunday, our school held a 5km cross-country running race, which attracted many enthusiastic participants, including both students and teachers.
(2023新课标 I 卷）A better way might be to have students practice with partners who / that have similar English proficiency and learning needs.
(2020 全国Ⅲ卷）It tells a story about a girl named Daisy, who talks with some wild animals and makes up her mind to help protect the environment.
(2023新高考全国Ⅰ卷读后续写)So, why did he suddenly force me to do something at which I was sure to fail
(2022新高考全国1卷读后续写)David had a brain disease that / which prevented him from walking or running like other children.
总结：定语从句───写作表达力的“放大器”
一、丰富表达，提升层次
将简单句升级为复合句，增强句子节奏感。避免重复使用简单词汇，使语言更富变化。
原句：Leo broke the necklace. The necklace was precious.
优化：Leo broke the necklace, which was precious to Mia.
二、整合信息，增强逻辑
将相关细节自然地附着于核心名词之后，使逻辑更紧密。有效连接两个相关概念，避免信息碎片化。
例：Mia stared at the necklace that lay broken in her hands.
三、突出重点，优化衔接
通过从句将背景或次要信息后置，使句子主干更清晰。非限制性定语从句可补充说明，起到类似“旁白”的衔接作用。
例：Her voice shook with sobbing, which revealed her deep disappointment.
写作启示：善用定语从句，能使文章从“正确”走向“地道”，从“清晰”迈向“流畅”。
音乐欣赏：定语从句歌词串烧
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