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十句五定的高分句式
句子1： 承接上句+ 情绪描写
adj. and/but adj. (多重情绪), sb did (谓语) sth---, (doing 非谓语sth)；
So + adj. was / were sb that sb did sth (倒装句)
Eg : ___________________(害怕且无助), I walked for a few more minutes, ______________(希望遇到) other people behind. But once again it didn’t work.
Eg. The girl stood there, _________________ (盯着食物), _________________ (又冷又饿).
Eg . ________________________ (妈妈如此惊讶) she froze with ________________________ (张大嘴巴).
Eg : ____________________ (他如此劳累) he ________________________ (一头扑倒在沙发里) and fell asleep immediately.
Eg. _________________________ (他如此尴尬) he ________________ (低着头), ___________________________ (不敢看他的父亲).
Scared and helpless
hoping to meet
staring at the food
cold and hungry
So astonished was Mother that
with her mouth wide open
So exhausted was he that
dropped his head
So embarrassed was he that
not daring to look at his father
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threw himself onto the sofa
句子2：动作描写 动作链
Without any hesitation, (sb. sprang into action.) sb. +v1-,v2- and v3-.
Having done, sb v1- and v2- / To do v1, sb v2, v3ing. (谓语/非谓语混合应用)
Eg 1. He stepped forward, ___________________________ (拍拍我的肩膀), and said softly, “___________________________ (无论发生什么事情), we can’t give up or lose our faith and hope.”
Eg 2. ____________________ (毫不犹豫), she sprang into action. She looked around cautiously, ________________ (溜下床) and __________________ (蹑手蹑脚走到门口).
Eg 3: She ________________ ，________________ and ____________________________ (冲向前，跪下来并紧紧抱住她的儿子).
Eg 4. ____________________ (屏住呼吸), he ____________________ (走上舞台), ________________ (调整了麦克风), and began his performance.
patted me on the shoulder
Whatever happens in our lives
Without any hesitation
slipped out of bed
tiptoeed to the door
dashed forward
knelt down
gathered her son into her arms
Holding his breath
stepped onto the stage
adjusted the microphone
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句子3 对话/情绪/行为的融合描写
“---”sb said in a -- voice
with复合结构/独立主格: (with) +n. +adj./adv./非谓语/介词短语;
Eg 1. Tears ______________________ (留下我的脸颊) and ________________ (模糊我的视线), I knew he would not come back again.
Eg 2. It ________________________ (似乎过去了一百年). Rescuers came into sight, my classmates ____________ (follow).
Eg 1. With my eyes _________________(噙满了泪水), I hugged him tightly and said, "Thank you for ___________________ (你及时的帮助).”
Eg 2. Jenny walked slowly to the front, with ___________________ (双腿颤抖) and __________________ (心跳很快).
Eg 3. The girl stood there, ___________________ (因寒冷而颤抖着), with dirt on her face and hair.
streaming down my cheeks
blurring my vision
seemed to be a century
following
filled with tears
your timely help
her legs trembling
her heart beating fast
shivering with cold
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句子4：故事发展 时间+动作
be about to do/be doing---when；
一--- 就---：
Upon seeing/hearing--, sb did sth;
No sooner had sb done sth than sb did sth;
Eg 1. I ____________ (正在散步) along the river when I heard someone calling for help.
Eg 2. I ____________ (刚要) say “come on” when the running began.
Eg . _______________________ (一见到她丈夫), she dashed to him, ___________________________ (扑进他怀里).
Eg 3. My mother had finished her performance when the audience broke into thunderous applause.
= No sooner __________________________________________ than the audience broke into thunderous applause.
was walking
was about to
Upon seeing her husband
throwing herself into his arms
had my mother finished her performance
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句子5：承上启下过渡句
情绪描写 With +情绪 n. giving way to +情绪n, sb. did sth
(随着情绪的改变/某种情绪被另一种情绪所取代，某人做了某事。)
英译中：
Gradually, with anxiety giving way to calmness, I was prepared to sleep to save my energy until the rescue team arrived. （所感+所做）
渐渐地，随着焦虑逐渐被平静所取代，我做好了入睡的准备，以便节省体力，等待救援队伍的到来。
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句子1：承接上句+情绪描写，万能情绪句
无灵主语+状语从句
A surge of +情绪n. overwhelm / rush through / take hold of / envelope / swallow / consume sb，the moment sb did sth. (一种情绪涌上心头。)
情绪名词：delight/excitement/sorrow/despair/surprise, astonishment/ satisfaction/ relief /anxiety /fear, horror/shame, embarrassment/regret/anger
Eg. The moment the host announced that I won the prize, ____________________________________________. （一股兴奋和喜悦涌上心头，席卷全身）。
Eg 2. 英译中：Her previous calm was swept away by terror. ____________________________________
Eg 3. A great sense of relief and pride __________________________ (涌上心头) my father.
a surge of excitement and delight overwhelmed me
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她之前的镇定瞬间被恐惧所取代。
flooded over / rushed through
句子2 动作描写 非谓语： doing/done/having done sth, sb. did sth;
Eg 1. __________________ (怒火中烧), he glared at me with his frightening eyes, yelling, “You’re an idiot.”
Eg 2: ________________________ (老师鼓励下), Lucy raised her hand, whispering, “I want to have a try.”
Eg 3: _______________________ (在排了三小时对之后), he was told that the tickets had been sold out.
Eg 4: __________ (意识到) it was no use _______________ (紧张), I decided to stay where I was.
Eg5. ____________ (用头), the dog touched our hands, ______ seemed as if it was saying “Thank you!”
Eg 6.“Help!” I ________________________ (高兴地叫喊着).
Eg 7: “________________________________ (我们所遭受的一切) will eventually make us better. Don't give up until the blessing happens,” he __________________ (坚定地说到).
Burning with anger
Encouraged by the teacher
Having queued for 3 hours
Realizing
being anxious
Using its head
which
shouted in a delighted voice
All that / Whatever we have suffered
said in a firm voice
动作描写升级训练
1. The little boy said sorry to his mother. (动作精准化)
2. She went to catch the butterfly. (动作过程化)
3. The old man’s face wrinkled. (动作修辞化)
4. He has already finished painting. (动作/情绪融合化)
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The little boy lowered / ducked his head and mumbled / whispered an apology to his mother, his fingers nervously twisting the edge of his shirt / sleeve.
She crept forward on tiptoe, eyes locked on the vibrant wings. Then, with a sudden lunge 猛扑, she cupped her hands through the air where the butterfly had been moments before.
A smile, like a pebble dropped into still water, rippled gently across his face.
He laid down the brush, a satisfied smile spreading across his face as he gazed at the completed canvas.
句子3 语言描写
“---”sb said in a -- voice
with复合结构/独立主格
句子4 结局 时间+动作+感受
upon seeing/hearing ---, sb did;
No sooner had sb done sth than sb did sth (一...就... / 倒装句)
Upon seeing her husband, she dashed to him, throwing herself into his arms.
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一见到她的丈夫，她便冲向他，扑进他的怀抱。
句子5 主题升华 (难忘经历+感悟）
Never had sb had such an unforgettable experience.
Only then did sb realize (倒装句) it is ____ that ______. (强调句)
True victory lies ____ in reaching the peak, ____ in conquering the doubts within.
Being a hero was ____ just about winning victories on the soccer field ____ about lending a hand to friends in need.
______________________ (我从未有过) such an unforgettable experience.
_______________________ (直到那时我才意识到) _____ _____bravery and determination _____ can overcome all the difficulties. (强调句)
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Speechless and happy, she held her son tightly into her arms, ____________________________ (眼中噙满泪水). ____________________ (沐浴着温暖的阳光下), we made our way home happily.
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not but
not but
Never before have I got
Only then did I realize
it was
that
with tears welling up in her eyes
Bathed in the warm sunshine

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