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(共13张PPT)
Continuation Writing
——Action chain & Action scene
Example
Step I. Independent learning
Feeling very funny , he laughed , asking his coworker, “Do you know why camels have three humps ”
动作
动作链
情绪
Step I. Independent learning
语言
He laughed.
Opening his mouth wide, he laughed, tapping the table.
点
面
情绪-动作-语言链
Feeling very funny , he laughed , asking his coworker, “Do you know why camels have three humps ”
Step I. Independent learning
情绪-动作-语言链
Action scene
动作面
情绪描写
动作描写
语言描写
emotion
action
conversation
emotion
action
conversation
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结构：
非谓语，主语＋谓语，非谓语
Doing/done, 主语＋did, doing
被老师的话所鼓舞， Lucy举起了手，小声说，“我来。”
emotion
Step II. Specific explanation
action
conversation
Encouraged by the teacher’s words,
Lucy raised her hand,
whispering, “I’ll
do it.”
感到害怕， Mary逃走了，大声喊，“救命！”
emotion
HELP!
feeling scared
escaped
Step II. Specific explanation
action
conversation
screaming
Feeling scared,
Mary escaped,
screaming, “ Help !”
Step II. Specific explanation
Describe: What would a man do when he got lost in the forest and saw a rescue helicopter
emotion
action
conversation
feeling excited
flagged his yellow coat
Feeling excited,
he flagged his yellow coat,
screaming, “I am here！”
screaming
action
emotion
came to the store
Step II. Specific explanation
a sense of happiness
conversation
shouting
Feeling a sense of happiness,
Hua came to the store,
shouting, “Are the watermelons ripe ”
action
emotion
stare at him
Step II. Specific explanation
angry
conversation
asking
Feeling angry,
he stared at him,
asking, “Are you
looking for trouble ”
What would the mother's reaction be if the twins made breakfast for her
action
emotion
conversation
saying, “ it was the best breakfast in my heart.”
hugged
moved
Step III. Cooperative learning
saying
Feeling deeply moved,
mother hugged the twins ,
Step Ⅳ.Practice
情绪-动作-语言链
Action scene
动作面
语言描写: 各种“说”
① 轻声说：whisper; murmur ② 大声说：scream; exclaim
③ 问：ask; inquire ④ 答：answer; reply
⑤ 建议说：suggest; advise ⑥ 权威说：annouce(宣布)
⑦ 其他说：add(继续说) explain(解释道) sob(抽泣道)
insist(坚持说) promise (承诺道)
1. _______________, my mother __________ my gift, _________, “Thank you for your gift. I miss you so much!”
感到开心，妈妈接收到了我的礼物，抽泣道，“谢谢你的礼物，我很想你。”
2. _______________ about her exam results, Tom _________the phone again and again, ____________, "Would my efforts pay off "
对考试成绩感到担心，汤姆不停地查看手机，喃喃自语道：“我的努力会有回报吗？”
checked
murmuring
Step Ⅳ.Practice
Feeling happy
received
sobbing
Feeling worried
3. _____________at his rude behavior, Mary ______________, ___________, "Would you please keep the voice down "
对他的粗鲁行为感到愤怒，玛丽转过身，小声说道：“请你小声点好吗？”
Feeling angry
turned around
whispering

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