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假定你是李华，你加入学校英语辩论社一年来，英语进步很大。请你写一篇发言稿，在班级英语学习经验交流会上分享，内容包括：
你的经历
你的收获和启发
Dear classmates,
I’m glad to share my English learning journey with all of you.

Thank you!
框架搭建 首段 已给出+经历简单描述
正文
收获和启发

尾段
总结和感谢
Step 1 审题
构思的核心是构建一个由“起点”到“收获”的完整的逻辑链。
构思“经历”：从何处入手？
平铺直述的起点：
一年前我加入了英语辩论社，当时我的口语很犹豫。
●过程的提炼（Action/Process）：
如何从“犹豫”到“进步”？
○思考点：辩论社让我不得不做的事。
○核心行为： 被迫输出 (forced to speak) + 深度研究 (extensive research)。
Step 2 构思
Step 2 构思
构思“收获与启发”：分层升华！
技能层面
流利度、发音、词汇量显著提升。
精神/素养层面
自信心（敢于发声）+ 全球素养（批判性思维/知识面）
方法启发
普适性建议：走出舒适区
Step 3 语料准备
情境 语料
为了参加辩论赛付出的行动 immerse oneself in (沉浸于)
be compelled to (被迫做)
extensive research（深度研究）
最初的感受 be hesitant about... 对...感到犹豫
feel confused 感到迷茫
at a loss what to do 对要做...不知所措
衔接词 Initially (最初) / henceforth (从此以后)
Step 3 语料准备
情境 语料
收获 significantly enhance...显著提升
cultivate one’s ability to...培养某人...的能力
be enriched/flourished 被丰富/蓬勃发展
expand one’s vocabulary 扩大词汇量
refine one’s speaking skill 精炼某人的演讲技能
build up one’s confidence 增强某人的自信心
strengthen one’s critical thinking 增强批判性思维
play a significant/indispensable/critical role in..在...中扮演重要的角色
描述态度 be bold enough to 足够勇敢...
voice one's opinions 表达观点)
Step 3 语料准备
I joined the English Debate Club one year ago, initially feeling quite hesitant about public speaking. It was not until I immersed myself in frequent debates and extensive research that my ability started to flourish.
描述你一开始遇到的困难，然后通过强调句型引出取得进步的关键转折点。
我刚开始面对大量阅读材料感到非常迷茫，直到我开始制作阅读笔记后，才真正提高了我的阅读速度。
I faced difficulties with extensive reading material, initially feeling quite confused. It was not until I started taking reading notes that I truly increased my reading speed.
提取句型：I...,initially feeling quite....It was not until...that...
Step 3 语料准备
This process compelled me to utilize advanced vocabulary, which significantly enhanced my fluency. Not only was my speaking skill refined, but the experience also helped me cultivate my indispensable confidence and critical thinking.
这个过程迫使我每天阅读1小时，这有效地提升了我的词汇量。不仅我的书面表达能力得到了提升，而且还培养了独立思考的习惯。
This process compelled me to read an hour everyday, which effectively enhanced my vocabulary. Not only was my written expression refined, but the experience also helped me cultivate the habit of independent thinking.
提取句型：This process compelled me to...,which..(好处).Not only...,but also...
Step 3 语料准备
回首往事，我意识到真正重要的是要有勇气走出舒适区。
Looking back,I realized that what matters is to be bold enough to step out of your comfort zone.
I hope my story can give you some useful inspiration, and I wish you great fun in your English learning!
结尾互动：
Step 4 作文重写
假定你是李华，你加入学校英语辩论社一年来，英语进步很大。请你写一篇发言稿，在班级英语学习经验交流会上分享，内容包括：
你的经历
你的收获和启发
Dear classmates,
I’m glad to share my English learning journey with all of you.

Thank you!

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